1819Unit3SectionⅦWriting建議信

1、Section W Writing建議信寫作技法指導(dǎo)文體指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是建議信。建議信是英語中常見的一種應(yīng)用文體，就是在你所寫的信中發(fā)表你的建議與看法。建議信除了遵循書信的格式之外，還要求在信中針對對方的問題，給出你的觀點及解決辦法。、基本結(jié)構(gòu)建議信一般采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)” 0首段：表明意圖，陳述事由。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。通常以 firstly, secondly, thirdly 或 to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陳述建議。結(jié)尾段：禮貌地

2、總結(jié)或表示期盼回復(fù)。二、注意事項1 注意結(jié)構(gòu)。通常以“三段式”結(jié)構(gòu)行文。2 客觀地提出建議，針對對方的問題，給出你的觀點。3 語言要委婉、精煉，同時要簡潔，表達(dá)清楚。亮點句式1.首段（表明寫作意圖，陳述事由）常用句型It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on I am writi ng to express my views concernin gYou have asked for my advice on .a nd I will try to make some suggest! ons.2.主體（提出建議并闡述理由）常用句型I would

3、 like to suggest/recommend that.If I were you, I would .It seems to me that you could .In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.I think it would be more beneficial if you could.第1頁When it comes to such a situation I would like to suggest that you can .I won der if you have con si

4、dered the follow ing.As to .I suggest that you should .3.結(jié)尾（鼓勵收信人接受建議）常用句型In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Thanks for reading my letter.I hope you will consider my suggestions.I believe you will take my advice into acco unt/con siderati on.I hope you will find these

5、proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful, Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.滿分佳作構(gòu)建寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華，你的朋友張柯發(fā)e-mail給你，就買什么樣的英語詞典想聽聽你的建議。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語給他回一封100詞左右的e-mail,建議他買電子詞典。1 方便、快捷;2.內(nèi)置多部詞典、能發(fā)音;3 能儲存資料。參考詞匯：電子詞典electronic dictionary；內(nèi)存RAM 審題謀篇體裁建議信時態(tài)般將來時；般現(xiàn)在時主題建議買電子詞典人稱第二人稱結(jié)構(gòu)

6、首段：提出建議一一買電子詞典； 中間段：給出建議的理由：方便、 料；末段：希望米納該建議。快捷、冃匕發(fā)曰、冃匕存儲資遣詞造句對接單元詞匯1.put forward提出2.electronic電子的3.lead to導(dǎo)致，促成4.con venient方便的5.come across偶遇，發(fā)現(xiàn)第#頁6. advantagen巧用單元句式、語法優(yōu)點，長處（一）完成句子1.對你來說，買一本電子詞典是一個明智的選擇。（ltis+ n.for sb.to dosth.)It is a wise choice for you to buy an electr onic diet ion ary.2,有幾個

7、因素促成了我的建議。（there be； which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）There are several factors which lead to my suggestio n.3.在電子詞典中，你會非?？斓氐玫侥闼胍?。（what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）You can get what you want in the electr onic dicti onary as soon as possible.4.查閱這種詞典很容易。（動名詞短語作主語；習(xí)語apiece of cake）【導(dǎo)學(xué)號.52352025Con suit ing this kind of dicti onary is reall

8、y a piece of cake.5.當(dāng)遇到有用的材料時，你可以盡可能多地儲存下來。（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）When yon meet with the useful materia you can store it as much as possible.能夠給你生動、清晰和正確的發(fā)音，就像一位老師站在你的旁邊。（主語+謂語+賓語；like）It can give you a vivid, clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.7.這讓它從眾多的其他詞典中脫穎而出。(make it ou

9、t sta nding)That makes it outsta nding from a variety of others.優(yōu)點，長處6. advantage（二）句式升級&用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語改寫句2There are several factors leadi ng to my suggesti on.9 .用for合并句3、4You can get what you want in the electronic dictionarv as soon as possible：for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a p

10、iece of cake.10用狀語從句的省略形式改寫句5When meeting with the useful materia, you can store it as much as possible.妙筆成篇【參考范文】Dear Zhang Ke,As for the problem you put forward in you門ast letter，I think it is a wise choicefor you to buy an electronic dictionary.There are several factors leading to my suggest!on.T

11、o begin with , with theelectr onic dicti onary being much smaller tha n the comm on one, it is conve nient for you to carry it wherever goin g.Additi on ally，you can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible, for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a p iece of cake.Whe n comi ng across the useful materiaU you can store it as much as possible because there is much RAM in it.What makes it outstanding from a variety of others, I think , is that it can give you a vivi