高考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)ppt課件

1、How to improve writingDo you want to score high in the writing part ?15？20？25!Nothing is impossible!Todays taskWrite an application to an organization Task1：假定你是假定你是 。湖南省博物館現(xiàn)。湖南省博物館現(xiàn)在正在招募在正在招募 , 你希望成為其中你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫寫 。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:個(gè)人情況：個(gè)人情況：個(gè)人條件：個(gè)人條件：承諾：承諾：留意：留意： 1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)120左右，開(kāi)

2、頭語(yǔ)已為你寫左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。好。 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。貫。 一封申請(qǐng)信一封申請(qǐng)信 英語(yǔ)好、愛(ài)好歷史、善于溝通、樂(lè)于英語(yǔ)好、愛(ài)好歷史、善于溝通、樂(lè)于 奉獻(xiàn)、住所離博物館近奉獻(xiàn)、住所離博物館近提供最佳服務(wù)提供最佳服務(wù)李華李華, 長(zhǎng)沙人長(zhǎng)沙人英語(yǔ)解說(shuō)員英語(yǔ)解說(shuō)員年齡、性別、學(xué)歷年齡、性別、學(xué)歷Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and Im 17. I was born in Ch

3、angsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my b

4、est to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Huawhats more,I. Use correct sentence (使用正確完整的使用正確完整的單句或復(fù)合句單句或復(fù)合句)1. Sentence structure: (使用結(jié)構(gòu)正確完整的單句，使用結(jié)構(gòu)正確完整的單句，切忌參雜中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字對(duì)字翻切忌參雜中文的句子模式，切忌中文式字對(duì)

5、字翻譯譯)A. 單句結(jié)構(gòu)單句結(jié)構(gòu) 1） 主主+謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)主：名主：名/代代/Doing 或或 To do/主語(yǔ)從句主語(yǔ)從句 (注意主謂人稱數(shù)一致注意主謂人稱數(shù)一致)謂語(yǔ)：謂語(yǔ)：vt/vi+prep注意時(shí)態(tài)以及數(shù)的變形）注意時(shí)態(tài)以及數(shù)的變形）賓語(yǔ)：名賓語(yǔ)：名/代代/doing/to do/賓語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句2主主+謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)+表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ):be/類系動(dòng)詞類系動(dòng)詞(seem,look,sound,taste,feel,touch)表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ):名名/代代/adj/doing/to do/表語(yǔ)從句表語(yǔ)從句I. Use correct sentences (使用正確句型）使用正確句型）3) 主主+

6、謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)+狀語(yǔ)狀語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)：謂語(yǔ)：vi ; 狀語(yǔ)：狀語(yǔ)：adv/介詞短語(yǔ)介詞短語(yǔ)/狀語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句Examples :I forgot to tell you my phone number.The manager often asks him for some suggestion.Seeing is believing. (To see is to believe) He used to live in shanghai, he has lived here since last year.This idea sounds good ,he looked happy after he knew

7、 that.2. 使用并列句使用并列句(用用and,moreover,but,however等連接的兩等連接的兩個(gè)或多個(gè)句子）個(gè)或多個(gè)句子）3.使用復(fù)合句主句使用復(fù)合句主句+從句；狀語(yǔ)從句，從句；狀語(yǔ)從句，+主句）主句）1)定語(yǔ)從句：放在主句中某個(gè)先行名詞之后的句子定語(yǔ)從句：放在主句中某個(gè)先行名詞之后的句子; 2)賓語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)(vt/vi+prep)之后的句子之后的句子;3)表語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)表語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)be/類系動(dòng)詞之后的句子類系動(dòng)詞之后的句子;4)主語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)前主語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)前(即主句主語(yǔ)位置即主句主語(yǔ)位置)的句子的句子5)

8、狀語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)狀語(yǔ)從句：位于主句謂語(yǔ)vi 之后的句子，狀語(yǔ)從句之后的句子，狀語(yǔ)從句也可以放在主句之前，但必須要帶逗號(hào)。也可以放在主句之前，但必須要帶逗號(hào)。I. Use different sentences (使用多樣句型）使用多樣句型）Examples:I hope to help him, but he refuse my help. He sits next to the woman who is wearing a red coat.3. I am eager to know what he told you.4. My question is what I should do

9、 next.5.When well go outing depends on the weather.6.Because he was ill yesterday,he didnt go to school.7.It is believed that success comes from hard work.8. Its unknown who broke the window.Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as an English guide in your museum. Im a boy and I

10、m 17. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student. I want to do something for the museum. First, Im good at English. Second, I like history. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like volunteering. Last, I live near the museum. It is convenient for me to do the work. If you g

11、ive me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I wont disappoint you! Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua18.Choose advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯選取高級(jí)詞匯)be of great conveniencebe ready to / be willing to Word Phrase I like volunteering

12、. 2. I like history. 3. This is convenient for the work.be fond of / be interested in / have a great interest in/be crazy aboutdevoting myself to serving others.Choose advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯選取高級(jí)詞匯)Simple phrase Advanced phrase Im good at English. 2. I want to do something for the museum. 3. Ill tr

13、y my best to offer the best service.have a good knowledge of /have a gift / talent formake a contribution to/ contribute to/ devote tospare no effort /make every effort toIII. Use suitable sentences (使用合適句型）使用合適句型）1. I live near the museum . Its convenient for the work. I live near the museum, _. (定

14、語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句)2. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Changsha. Im a middle school student._.(分詞作狀語(yǔ)分詞作狀語(yǔ)/定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句) which is convenient for the workBorn in Changsha, Im an 18-year-old boy,who is studying in a middle school Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the

15、key points. Put the key points into sentences.（列提綱）（列提綱）（明審題）（明審題） （選句型）（選句型）（妙聯(lián)句）（妙聯(lián)句）( (細(xì)復(fù)查細(xì)復(fù)查) )Develop the sentences into a passage. Check your work.北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的“和和平、友誼夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一平、友誼夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一封申請(qǐng)信。封申請(qǐng)信。留意：留意：1、詞數(shù)不少于、詞數(shù)不少于120。 2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增

16、加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 Task2： 姓名姓名: 李華李華 性別性別: 男男年齡年齡: 17歲歲 學(xué)校學(xué)校: 長(zhǎng)沙市一中長(zhǎng)沙市一中其它其它: 愛(ài)好音樂(lè)愛(ài)好音樂(lè),攝影攝影;善于與人交流善于與人交流, 樂(lè)于助人樂(lè)于助人;熱愛(ài)自然熱愛(ài)自然,熱愛(ài)和平熱愛(ài)和平參加夏令營(yíng)的目的參加夏令營(yíng)的目的: 結(jié)交朋友結(jié)交朋友,了解外國(guó)文化了解外國(guó)文化Task2： The outline of the passage：Para1: Introduce yourself.Para2: Reasons why you want to join the Peace and Friend

17、ship Summer Camp . Successs on the way ! Lets come to it !Please complete it in 10 minutes !北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的北京國(guó)際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國(guó)學(xué)生參加的“和和平、友誼夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一平、友誼夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息寫一封申請(qǐng)書。封申請(qǐng)書。 留意：留意：1、詞數(shù)不少于、詞數(shù)不少于120字。字。 2、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 Task2： 姓名姓名:李華李華 性別性別: 男男

18、年齡年齡:17歲歲 學(xué)校學(xué)校:長(zhǎng)沙市一中長(zhǎng)沙市一中其它其它:愛(ài)好音樂(lè)愛(ài)好音樂(lè),攝影攝影;善于與人交流善于與人交流, 樂(lè)于助人樂(lè)于助人;熱愛(ài)自然熱愛(ài)自然,熱愛(ài)和平熱愛(ài)和平參加夏令營(yíng)的目的參加夏令營(yíng)的目的:結(jié)交朋友結(jié)交朋友,了解外國(guó)文化了解外國(guó)文化A sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old boy （1）（分詞）（分詞或定語(yǔ)從句）或定語(yǔ)從句） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2我愛(ài)我愛(ài)好廣泛好廣泛 （S+V+O）. First of all,（3我熱愛(ài)音樂(lè)

19、我熱愛(ài)音樂(lè)V-ing作作主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)）. （4連接過(guò)渡連接過(guò)渡, Im interested in photography because （5） . （6善于與人交流善于與人交流V-ing 作原因狀語(yǔ)）作原因狀語(yǔ)）, I make many friends.（7連接過(guò)渡連接過(guò)渡, Im always ready to help others. I would like to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp for many reasons. The first reason （8是我熱愛(ài)生活，是我熱愛(ài)生活，熱愛(ài)自然、和平熱愛(ài)自然、和平. Bu

20、t9最重要的原因是，這為我提供了一個(gè)結(jié)最重要的原因是，這為我提供了一個(gè)結(jié)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化的機(jī)會(huì)交朋友，了解外國(guó)文化的機(jī)會(huì).If （10） （省略（省略&非謂語(yǔ)非謂語(yǔ)the chance, I will make full use of it to broaden my horizon and learn from others.Look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li HuaA sample of writingDear Sir / Madam My name is Li Hua, and Im a 17-year-old b

21、oy （1） in Changsha No. 1 Middle School. （2） . First of all,（3） . （4） , Im interested in photography because （5） （6） I make many friends.（7） , Im always ready to help others. 分詞或定語(yǔ)從句分詞或定語(yǔ)從句(who is) studying我愛(ài)好廣泛我愛(ài)好廣泛 (S+V+O)I have varieties of interests 我熱愛(ài)音樂(lè)我熱愛(ài)音樂(lè)V-ing作主語(yǔ)）作主語(yǔ)）enjoying music is my favorite連接過(guò)渡連接過(guò)渡In addition to that it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. 善于與善于與人交流人交流V-ing 作原因狀語(yǔ)）作原因狀語(yǔ)） Being good at communicating with others,連接過(guò)渡連接過(guò)渡Whats mo