考點5書面表達

1、圓學子夢想 鑄金字品牌溫馨提示： 此題庫為Word版，請按住Ctrl, 滑動鼠標滾軸，調(diào)節(jié)合適的觀看比例，點擊右上角的關(guān)閉按鈕可返回目錄?？键c5 書面表達（一） 提綱作文Passage 1 (2010·全國卷I/寧夏海南卷)假設(shè)你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽 (speech contest)希望附近某大學的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。英語演講比賽主題：人與自然時間：6月15日下午2：005：00地點：501教室參賽選手：10名學生聯(lián)系人：李華（電話44876655）歡迎大家光臨注意：詞數(shù)100左右。*Dear Ms. Smi

2、th,_With best wishes,Li Hua【寫作指導】 內(nèi)容要點：a) 自我介紹；b) 邀請做評委；c) 演講主題；d) 比賽時間；e) 參賽選手；f) 聯(lián)系方式。注：信中無需出現(xiàn)比賽地點，但寫出亦不扣分?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Ms Smith,Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech

3、contest to be held in our school on June 1st.  It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. P

4、lease call me at 44876655, if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Li Hua Passage 2 （2010·全國卷II）假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你?，F(xiàn)在需招聘外教，請給他寫封信，告知招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括：1.教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等2.授課對象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎(chǔ)）3.工作量：每周12學時，任選三門課擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）注意：1.字數(shù)100左

5、右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭語已為你寫好，請將完整的回信書寫在答題卡上。*Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China._Best, Li Hua【參考范文】 Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senio

6、r high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and American Today, and teach of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our schools English newspaper.Please te

7、ll me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. Id be more than happy to help.Best, Li Hua Passage 3 (2010·天津卷)假設(shè)你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信： 對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生及社會的益處等）個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可適當加入細節(jié)，

8、以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學 Chenxi Hope School Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. 此處不能答題                            

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11、lass One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.I think I am qualified for being the pupils English co

12、ach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. Thats why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. Whats more important is to stimulate t

13、heir interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 4 （2010·重慶卷）假設(shè)你是李華，于2010年6月3日搭乘國外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個行李箱（suitcase）?，F(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。信件要點包括：l 陳述寫信原因l 簡要

14、描述該行李l 說明其重要性l 期待回復并表示感謝注意：1詞數(shù)100左右2信件格式已為你給出3請在答題卡上作答?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suicase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a labl

15、e on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your

16、 earliest reply.Yours truly, Li Hua.【寫作指導】本文屬于半開放性質(zhì)的文章。根據(jù)所給出的提示可以分為三段。第一段陳述寫信原因，包括時間、人物 地點。第二段。簡要描述該行李，說明其重要性。 這一段是關(guān)鍵。第三段。期待回復并表示感謝。注意：書信的格式、恰當使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章連貫。 Passage 5 （2010·安徽卷） 假如你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動，征文的內(nèi)容要求你在電視、手機(cell)和網(wǎng)絡三者中，放棄其中一個并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or web?”為題，寫一篇英語短文

17、。注意：1.字數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫.寫作要點：1. 電視、手機和網(wǎng)絡的普及；2. 自己的選擇；3. 陳述理由?！緟⒖挤段摹縒e are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.    However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn

18、 off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to ke

19、ep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.Passage 6 (2010·遼寧卷)你校學生會需招聘一名留學生做英語學習顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括：母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先解答用語學習問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動每周4小時，報酬面議聯(lián)系人：李華（Tel注意：1。詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.啟事標語和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。寫作要點：1. 這是一則招聘啟事，時態(tài)應用一般現(xiàn)

20、在時。2. 內(nèi)容要點要全面，不能有遺漏?！緟⒖挤段摹縀nglish Advisor WantedThe Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English, answering their questions, and h

21、elping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 1301122334

22、4 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.Student UnionYucai High SchoolPassage 7 （2010·山東卷）假設(shè)你是新華中學的學生李華，你和在上海上學的英國朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解釋原因；3. 另約時間。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120150；【寫作指導】本次高考作文要求考生寫一封電子郵件，而實際上從寫作內(nèi)容來看就是一篇致歉信，因此從命題上更加生活化

23、，符合了語言學習學以致用的原則，同時注重考查考生的書面表達能力。雖然提示要點僅有12個字，但寫作任務界定明確，同時又具有一定的開放性，符合考生的英語水平，各層次的考生均能夠發(fā)揮自己的水平，展示其英語寫作能力?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Tom: How are you going? We made a plan that we would travel in Beijing together next week. However, I should apologize to you because I cannot go there on time for the reasons as follow

24、s. First, I cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in Beijing. However, the government encourages us students to go to Shanghai due to the fact that the EXPO is being held in Shanghai now. As the saying goes, strike while the iron is hot. After finishi

25、ng my college entrance examination, I am eager to learn something about study from the EXPO to prepare for my education in college. In addition, I have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired. I need some time to relax instead of traveli

26、ng. For the reasons that I mentioned above, I want to show my apology again. And would you please reschedule your time? Shall we travel in Beijing after two weeks? I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua Passage 8 （2010·陜西卷）假定你是李華。你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流

27、協(xié)議。在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據(jù)寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。寫作要點：1.對她表達感謝之意;2.介紹她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情;3.希望了解她的近況。要求：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。2.短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）。3.內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4.書寫須清晰、工整。5.郵件中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實信息。Dear Sure,Im Li Hua, one of your students in China._【寫作指導】這篇作文屬提綱類作文。提綱類作文一般有較多的文字提示或說明，要求表達的內(nèi)容要點大多

28、數(shù)以提綱的形式給出，并且比較具體明確。這種作文實際上規(guī)定了考生的表達范圍，量化了寫作要點，不允許考生回避任何一項寫作內(nèi)容?？忌诒ＷC內(nèi)容要點全部囊括的基礎(chǔ)上要充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，進而組織自己的語言來表達某種思想，從而使得該題型的寫作具有一定的靈活性，能較好地體現(xiàn)考生的英語思維想象能力。 需要注意的問題是：這類題目包括了很多文字說明，很容易使書面表達變成翻譯，因而考生應該首先梳理要點，理清文章層次，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將試題要求的要點完整準確地表達出來。主題時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 中心人稱：第一人稱結(jié)構(gòu)：首段，表達對Sue Wood的想念和感激之意。 第二段介紹她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)

29、生的事情，時態(tài)要用一般過去時。 第三段了解她的近況，表達自己的愿望及祝福。 最后在右下角署名。表達感謝常用句型：Thank you /Thanks for.We appreciate that.We are grateful for.詢問對方近況常用句型：How is everything with you lately?Is everything going well lately?表達愿望和祝福常用句型：Im looking forward to your reply.I hope to .Best wishes.Everything goes well.All the best.署名時的

30、常用語：Yours, Yours sincerely,【參考范文】Dear Sure,Im Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me

31、of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?How is everything wi

32、th you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.All the best.Li HuaPassage 9 （2010·四川卷）假定你校將舉行一個成人儀式，你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言。請你按以下內(nèi)容要點準備一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1.過去對成年的向往；2.現(xiàn)在的感受和認識；3.將來的目標及措施。參考詞匯：責任 responsibility注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；w_w*w.k_s*5_u.c_o m3.發(fā)言

33、稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）Good morning，everyone！The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. Thank you for listening.【參考答案】Good morning, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so

34、 that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and so

35、ciety in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.(106words)Thank you for your listening.Passage 10 （2010·浙江卷）最近，李越被評為你們班的“每周之星”。請你根據(jù)她的事跡(在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級選購歌詠比賽服裝)，用英語為班級板報寫一篇l00

36、一120個詞的短文。你的文章應包括下列要點：1李越的事跡及其對同學的影響； 2你的評論。 注意：1文章的標題和開頭已給出(不計詞數(shù))。2參考詞匯： singing contest 歌詠比賽Costume 服裝Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class._【參考范文】Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title o

37、f "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comf

38、ortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time

39、to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.（二） 圖畫作文/ 漫畫作文 Passage 1 （2010·北京卷·情景作文） 假設(shè)你是紅星中學高二(1)班的學生李華，利用上周末的時間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，敘述你從準備到送行的全過程。 注意：1周記的開頭已為你寫好。 2詞數(shù)不少于60。Last weekend, I helped my

40、grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.【寫作指導】主體時態(tài)：一般過去式 中心人稱：第一人稱結(jié)構(gòu)：按時間順序，先寫提前在網(wǎng)上查詢有關(guān)周末的天氣，到北戴河的火車票及北戴河當?shù)氐馁e館的住宿情況，接下來寫去排隊買票，然后寫為祖父母打點行李，最后寫到車站為他們送行。注意：.要選用恰當?shù)倪^渡詞，把圖中的四個活動連接起來，使之成為一個有機的整體。.要避免使用單一的一般過去式的簡單句，以免顯得過于單調(diào)?！緟⒖挤段摹縇ast weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On

41、Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I pack

42、ed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.Passage 2 （2010·上海卷）下圖是小學新生的課堂一角，對照你當時的上課

43、情況，作出比較并談談你的感受。你的作文必須包括：描述圖片里學生上課的場景比較你同時期的上課情況簡單談談你的感受【參考范文】In the picture, theres a scene where some foreign school children in grade one are having a class and its obvious that they are all putting up their hands voluntarily answering questions.This picture brings back my school days to me when I

44、 was in grade one. The difference is that not all of us raised hands when questioned, since some of us were afraid that we would make mistakes or that we would be criticized by teachers if we were wrong. In fact, we were not encouraged to express our own ideas freely.As far as Im concerned, educatio

45、n abroad is preferable. Nowadays, quality-oriented education is being advocated. All the students should be encouraged to voice different viewpoints. Only in this way can students take an active part in class and after-class activities and achieve all-round development.Passage 3 （2010·福建卷）假設(shè)你是李

46、華，福建省某中學高中學生，今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為 “WATER FOR LIFE” 的交流活動。請你以參訪代表的身份，根據(jù)以下圖片提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。高考資源網(wǎng) 高考資源網(wǎng)注意：1.根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容適當展開，以使行文連貫；2.開頭與結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；4.詞數(shù)：120左右。參考詞匯：短缺 shortage; 資源 resourceLadies and gentlemen, Good morning. Im Li Hua from Fujian, China. Its my great honor to be here to say somet

47、hing about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. Thats all. Thank you.【參考范文】Ladies and gentlemen,Good morning. Im Li Hua from Fujian, China. Its my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.As we know, the global water shorta

48、ge is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, its high time we did something about it.Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be

49、 developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, its everyones responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion, people around

50、 the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically. Thats all. Thank you.Passage 4 （2010·廣東卷·基礎(chǔ)寫作） 以下是一則關(guān)于中國政府決定禁煙的報道的主要內(nèi)容。內(nèi) 容：公共場所禁煙實施時間：2011年1月1日起實施范圍：全國目 標：所有室內(nèi)公共場所無煙w_w w. k#s5_u.c o*m措 施：張貼禁

51、煙標志W(wǎng)_w w.k*s*5 u.co m相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)：（1）吸煙人數(shù)：約3.5億（2）分 布：男性75；女性：25（3）受二手煙影響人數(shù)：約5.4億（4）因二手煙死亡人數(shù)：超過10萬/年co m二手煙：second-hand smoke寫作內(nèi)容請根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容給學校英語墻報寫一篇通訊，內(nèi)容包括：1.禁煙決定的內(nèi)容及實施的時間和范圍;2.目標和措施;3.相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)。 寫作要求只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。評分標準句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。W_w w.k*s*5 u.co m【參考范文】 China begins to carry out the policy to prevent smo

52、king in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of no smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke.（三） 圖表作文Passage 1 （2010·江蘇卷）假設(shè)你應邀參加學校組織的“英語學習師生座談會”，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)