高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作技能培優(yōu)第五講用好非謂語動(dòng)詞-提升寫作檔次(共6頁)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上第五講用好非謂語動(dòng)詞，提升寫作檔次眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換，不僅句型多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡(jiǎn)意明。1我為那事感到非常遺憾，開始考慮做些什么來幫一下。拼十年寒窗挑燈苦讀不畏難；攜雙親期盼背水勇戰(zhàn)定奪魁。如果你希望成功，以恒心為良友，以經(jīng)驗(yàn)為參謀，以小心為兄弟，以希望為哨兵。I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to he

2、lp.Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)2另一方面，我將幫著建立英語角，給我們學(xué)生提供一個(gè)練習(xí)英語口語的平臺(tái)。On the other hand, I will help set up the English corner. It will provide us students a platform to practice our oral English.On the other hand, I will help set up the English corne

3、r, providing us students a platform to practice our oral English.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)3這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom.All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(過去分詞作定語)4我們應(yīng)該多講英語。我們認(rèn)為這是很重要的。We should speak more English. We think it is very important.We think it v

4、ery important to speak more English.(it作形式賓語，不定式作真正賓語)5我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平？這是個(gè)問題。How should we improve our spoken English? It is a question.How to improve our spoken English is a question.(不定式短語作主語)The question is how to improve our spoken English.(不定式短語作表語)用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換1(2015·全國卷書面表達(dá))It carries a

5、rticles about the cultures of their home countries.They are written by foreign friends.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.(過去分詞作定語)2(2015·湖南高考書面表達(dá))I went back home proudly that afternoon. I jumped with joy.I went back home proudly that afte

6、rnoon, jumping with joy.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)3As he is encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.Encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.(過去分詞作狀語)4The boys were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.The boys were making the most of time to finish the work

7、earlier.(不定式作狀語)5The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry.The boys coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句比轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句要容易一些，因?yàn)樾柁D(zhuǎn)換的一般是從句部分，這時(shí)只需要判斷用何種非謂語動(dòng)詞，再把握好時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)即可，所以只需兩步。示例第一步：寫出復(fù)合句。(安徽高考書面表達(dá))Since you have realized that your time is limited

8、, youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.第二步：把since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為非謂語動(dòng)詞，realize與you之間為主謂關(guān)系，且表示完成，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作狀語。Having realized that your time is limited，youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.其他幾個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)換的例子如下：1We can set out early so that well have more time t

9、o read and select books.To have more time to read and select books, we can set out early.2(2015·廣東高考書面表達(dá))If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.Carried out continuously，it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to ma

10、ke obvious progress.3(2015·湖北高考書面表達(dá))Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型

11、轉(zhuǎn)換1(山東高考書面表達(dá))When we are faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help.Faced with difficulties，we need friends to give us comfort and help.2(安徽高考)When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.Seeing a car running towards her, I reached my hand

12、 out and pulled her back.3(湖南高考)After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner.1remain to be done有待于被Many questions have to be settled and much remai

13、ns to be done in our educational work.我們的教育工作中還有許多問題要解決，還有許多事情要去做。2疑問詞to do(江西高考書面表達(dá))To all of you，fresh students，how to adapt yourself to the new environment is the first thing that you have to face.對(duì)你們所有新生來說，如何使自己適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境是必須要面對(duì)的首要問題。3連詞when/while/once/unless/althoughdoing/done(湖南高考書面表達(dá))When searchin

14、g for some information，we can operate by touching the screen.當(dāng)查找一些信息時(shí)，我們可以通過觸摸屏來操作。4easy/difficultto doSome bad habits such as smoking and drinking arent easy to get rid of.像吸煙、酗酒等一些壞習(xí)慣不容易改掉。5prefer to dorather than do/would rather dothan do/would dorather than do寧愿做,而不愿做Nowadays some teenagers pref

15、er to chat with strangers online rather than talk with their parents face to face.如今，一些青少年寧愿在網(wǎng)上與陌生人閑談也不愿與父母面對(duì)面談話。6having done已經(jīng)(江西高考單項(xiàng)填空)Having spent nearly all our money, we couldnt afford to stay at a hotel.幾乎把所有的錢都花完了，我們沒有錢住賓館了。7by doing通過做(2016·全國卷乙書面表達(dá))Moreover, by doing the part­time

16、 job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.而且，通過做兼職工作，我能獲得一些寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，以致于能更好地適應(yīng)社會(huì)的發(fā)展和變化。8only to do sth.(表示出乎意料的結(jié)果)Whats worse，I found myself having a fever this morning and I went to the clinic for immediate treatment, only to be advised

17、 to stay in bed for three days.糟糕的是，今天早晨我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己發(fā)燒，立刻去診所治療，結(jié)果被建議臥床休息三天。9judging by/from根據(jù)判斷Judging from the expression on her face，she must have news of great excitement to tell us.從她臉上的神情看，她一定有非常令人興奮的消息要告訴我們。10compared with/to與比較There is clear evidence that children who take music lessons develop a be

18、tter memory compared with children who have no musical training.有明顯的證據(jù)表明，與那些沒受過音樂訓(xùn)練的孩子相比，上音樂課的孩子有更好的記憶力。11be said/reported/consideredto do據(jù)說/報(bào)道/認(rèn)為A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of control on a highway south of the city.據(jù)報(bào)道，一輛滿載乘客的公共汽車在市南的一條公路上失去了控制。12with賓語賓語補(bǔ)足語With everyone

19、respecting him，he decided to make great contributions to the country.大家都很尊敬他，他決定為國家做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)。用非謂語動(dòng)詞完成句子1人們可以一邊吃月餅一邊賞月，月餅是這個(gè)節(jié)日的特殊食品。People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes, which are the special food for this festival.2隨著太空技術(shù)的快速發(fā)展，我們一定會(huì)在將來某一天奔赴月球。With space technology developing so rapidly, we

20、are sure to make a visit to the moon some day.3有些人寧愿騎自行車也不愿坐公交車，因?yàn)轵T自行車沒有乘坐公交車的麻煩。Some people prefer to ride bikes rather than take buses/would rather ride bikes than take buses/would ride bikes rather than take buses as riding bikes has none of the troubles of taking buses. 用非謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換1As soon as t

21、hey saw a few people still in the burning house, they rushed into it to save them without hesitation.On seeing a few people still in the burning house, they rushed into it to save them without hesitation.2We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we als

22、o think that it is possible that they can master one.We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one3I took part in the meeting, which was held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive, which was hosted

23、by a manager who came to our company yesterday.I took part in the meeting held in Beijing last Friday.It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager coming to our company yesterday4Mother went to work in a hurry, and she didnt have breakfast.She was as busy as a bee these days and came back h

24、ome very late.Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfastShe was as busy as a bee these days，coming back home very late5As the society develops rapidly, its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.With the society developing rapidly, its necessary for us to have

25、 a good knowledge of English and computer.(with句式) 請(qǐng)按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文,盡可能多地使用非謂語動(dòng)詞(2017·山西省質(zhì)量檢測(cè))假如你是李華，在“國際青年服務(wù)日(Global Youth Service Day)”與同學(xué)去老年之家(nursing home)幫忙。請(qǐng)給網(wǎng)友Tom寫封郵件，簡(jiǎn)述此次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2活動(dòng)過程；3你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好 ，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Tom，The annual “Global Youth Service Day” is aimed at cultivating young peoples love of service._Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li HuaOne possible version