書面表達(dá)之三要求及步驟

1、書面表達(dá)專題三書面表達(dá)專題三 寫作要求與步驟寫作要求與步驟 一、總體要求：一、總體要求：1、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落分明。、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，段落分明。2、要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)有序。、要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)有序。3、句意連貫，符合邏輯。、句意連貫，符合邏輯。4、句子規(guī)范，相互關(guān)聯(lián)。、句子規(guī)范，相互關(guān)聯(lián)。5、善用句型，長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合。、善用句型，長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合。6、巧用詞匯，避免平淡。、巧用詞匯，避免平淡。7、書寫規(guī)范，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)。、書寫規(guī)范，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)。8、卷面整潔，內(nèi)秀外美。、卷面整潔，內(nèi)秀外美。二、寫作步驟：二、寫作步驟：請(qǐng)以請(qǐng)以“Fewer people are going out for a tour”為為題，用英語寫一篇題，用英語

2、寫一篇100詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容提示詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容提示如下：如下：、很多人國(guó)慶放假七天，是旅游的好時(shí)候，但、很多人國(guó)慶放假七天，是旅游的好時(shí)候，但外出旅游的人在減少；外出旅游的人在減少；、原因：（）擁擠：交通、景點(diǎn)、原因：（）擁擠：交通、景點(diǎn)（）費(fèi)用昂貴：食宿（）費(fèi)用昂貴：食宿、你的意見或建議：、你的意見或建議：1、仔細(xì)審題，認(rèn)真構(gòu)思。、仔細(xì)審題，認(rèn)真構(gòu)思。 全文分三段：全文分三段： 第一段：第一段： 句句1： 很多人在國(guó)慶期間可享受七天假期。很多人在國(guó)慶期間可享受七天假期。 句句2： 這本應(yīng)該是外出旅游的好時(shí)候，但是現(xiàn)這本應(yīng)該是外出旅游的好時(shí)候，但是現(xiàn)在外出的人數(shù)正在日益減少。在外出的人數(shù)

3、正在日益減少。 第二段：第二段： 句句3： 我認(rèn)為造成這種現(xiàn)象主要有兩方面原因。我認(rèn)為造成這種現(xiàn)象主要有兩方面原因。 句句4： 一是很多人同時(shí)外出旅游，造成路上交通一是很多人同時(shí)外出旅游，造成路上交通擁擠。擁擠。 句句5： 這也使得一些著名景點(diǎn)擠滿了人。這也使得一些著名景點(diǎn)擠滿了人。 句句6： 從而使人們不能很好地享受旅游。從而使人們不能很好地享受旅游。 句句7： 二是旅游費(fèi)用昂貴。二是旅游費(fèi)用昂貴。 句句8： 在這期間，無論是吃飯，還是住宿的費(fèi)在這期間，無論是吃飯，還是住宿的費(fèi)用都比平時(shí)要高得多。用都比平時(shí)要高得多。 第三段：第三段： 句句9： 我認(rèn)為，外出旅游是很有必要的，因?yàn)槲艺J(rèn)為，外出

4、旅游是很有必要的，因?yàn)樗軌蜃屛覀兊纳硇牡玫胶芎玫男菹?。它能夠讓我們的身心得到很好的休息?句句10： 但是，我們也有必要對(duì)地方和時(shí)間的選但是，我們也有必要對(duì)地方和時(shí)間的選擇作仔細(xì)的考慮。擇作仔細(xì)的考慮。 2、提煉句型，精選詞匯。、提煉句型，精選詞匯。 第一段：句第一段：句1：很多人在國(guó)慶期間可享受七天假：很多人在國(guó)慶期間可享受七天假期。期。(1) Many people can have a seven-day holiday during National Day. (2) As we know, many people can enjoy a seven-day holiday duri

5、ng National Day. 句句2：這本應(yīng)該是外出旅游的好時(shí)候，但是現(xiàn)在：這本應(yīng)該是外出旅游的好時(shí)候，但是現(xiàn)在外出的人數(shù)正在日益減少。外出的人數(shù)正在日益減少。(1) Its a good time for them to go out for a tour, but nowadays fewer people are going out. (2) Its a good time for a tour, but nowadays fewer people are going out. (3) As we know, many people can enjoy a seven-day hol

6、iday during National Day, which provides them a good chance to go on a tour. But nowadays, fewer people choose to go out. 第二段：句第二段：句3；我認(rèn)為造成這種現(xiàn)象主要有兩方；我認(rèn)為造成這種現(xiàn)象主要有兩方面原因。面原因。 (1) I think there are two reasons. (2) I think two main reasons lead to this.句句4：一是很多人同時(shí)外出旅游，造成路上交通：一是很多人同時(shí)外出旅游，造成路上交通擁擠。擁擠。(1)

7、Firstly, so many people go out for a tour at the same time and the traffic is very busy on the roads.(2) Firstly, with so many people going out at the same time, the traffic is surely very busy.句句5：這也使得一些著名景點(diǎn)擠滿了人。：這也使得一些著名景點(diǎn)擠滿了人。(1) This also makes some famous places of interest full of people.(2) W

8、ithout doubt, some famous scenic spots will be crowded with tourists.句句6：從而使人們不能很好地享受旅游。：從而使人們不能很好地享受旅游。(1) So people cannot enjoy their tour. (2) Therefore, many of them cannot enjoy their tour.句句7：二是旅游費(fèi)用昂貴。：二是旅游費(fèi)用昂貴。(1) Secondly, the traveling price is very high.(2) Besides, the traveling expenses

9、 are big.句句8：在這期間，無論是吃飯，還是住宿的費(fèi)用：在這期間，無論是吃飯，還是住宿的費(fèi)用都比平時(shí)要高得多。都比平時(shí)要高得多。(1) During National Day, people have to spend much more on food and hotel rooms than usual.(2) In these days, restaurants and hotels charge much more than usual.第三段：句第三段：句9：我認(rèn)為，外出旅游是很有必要的，：我認(rèn)為，外出旅游是很有必要的，因?yàn)樗軌蜃屛覀兊纳硇牡玫胶芎玫男菹?。因?yàn)樗軌蜃屛覀兊?/p>

10、身心得到很好的休息。(1) In my opinion, its necessary to go out for a tour because it can make our body and mind have a good rest.(2) Personally speaking, its necessary to go out for a tour as it can help relax our body as well as our mind.句句10：但是，我們也有必要對(duì)地方和時(shí)間的選：但是，我們也有必要對(duì)地方和時(shí)間的選擇作仔細(xì)的考慮。擇作仔細(xì)的考慮。(1) But, it is

11、also necessary for us to think of carefully the place and time.(2) However, while planning, its also important to take the destination and time into consideration.3、通讀全文，杜絕錯(cuò)誤。、通讀全文，杜絕錯(cuò)誤。 As we know many people can enjoy a seven-days holiday during the National Day, which provide them a good chance t

12、o go on a tour. But nowadays, few people choose to go out. I think there are mainly two reasons lead to this. Firstly, with so many people going out at same time, the traffic is surely very busy. With doubt, some famous scenic spots will be crowded of tourists. Therefore, many of them cannot enjoy their tour. Besides, the traveling expenses are high. In these days, restaurants and hotel will charge much more than usuall