第一章寫作對(duì)策

1、第一章寫作對(duì)策第一章 寫作對(duì)策：1.內(nèi)容是否緊扣主題，涵蓋要點(diǎn)2.作文結(jié)構(gòu)層次是否清晰3.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)是否流暢，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)病，有無(wú)邏輯錯(cuò)誤4.是否能恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠^(guò)渡性的詞語(yǔ)5.作文字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)到要求6.卷面是否整潔，書寫是否漂亮第二章 高分作文捷徑 第一節(jié) 黃金模板的學(xué)習(xí)模板作文可分為三個(gè)階段。第一階段：理解第二階段：模仿第三階段：活用二.高分作文秘訣 作文要想拿高分，就必須有“閃光點(diǎn)”，也就是文章最出彩的地方。那么“閃光點(diǎn)”究竟到底包括拿些方面呢？第一，結(jié)構(gòu) 清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)是最大的“閃光點(diǎn)”。第二，詞和詞組 對(duì)于相同的意思，我們掌握的詞或詞組越多越好，這樣可以根據(jù)不同的情況靈活使用。比如某人某人持怎么樣的

2、觀點(diǎn)，不僅可以用thinkthink,還可以用hold,argue,maintain,take it for grantedhold,argue,maintain,take it for granted等詞表達(dá)。論證觀點(diǎn)不要只用firstfirst，secondsecond和thirdthird.如果是兩點(diǎn)，可以用on the one hand,on on the one hand,on the other handthe other hand或或for one thing,for another.for one thing,for another.如果是三點(diǎn)，可以使用的詞非常多，如to be

3、gin to begin with,moreover,whats the most importantwith,moreover,whats the most important或in in the first place,in the second place,last but the first place,in the second place,last but not leastnot least第三，句型 我們應(yīng)對(duì)英語(yǔ)中的句子有正確的認(rèn)識(shí)，避免出現(xiàn)破句、斷句、連寫句等明顯錯(cuò)誤；加大并列句和復(fù)合句的比例，應(yīng)為連續(xù)使用多個(gè)斷句的效果非常不好。第四，例子 舉例最常見(jiàn)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)是takefo

4、r example或lets takeas an example第五，諺語(yǔ)與名言 用諺語(yǔ)時(shí)常用的句型是as the famous saying goes第六，修辭 這里所指的僅是一些修辭手法，如比喻、擬人和排比等。第七，插入語(yǔ) 插入語(yǔ)看似用不經(jīng)意的手段，卻能直接顯出作者的功底，所以為閱卷老師所青睞。如however,in my mind,有時(shí)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句可以作為插入語(yǔ)第八，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是幫助文字正確記錄語(yǔ)言的一套符號(hào)，是書面語(yǔ)言不可缺少的組成部分。三、寫作常用關(guān)鍵詞文章不只是提供信息、陳述觀點(diǎn)，而且還要感染他人，那么如此短的文章中肯定要多處應(yīng)用極強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣的詞，以引起閱卷老師的注意?，F(xiàn)舉

5、例如下：1.MostMost和more than mostmore than most可用在形容詞前面加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣，表示“非常”，比very的語(yǔ)氣要強(qiáng)的多2.Undoubtedly2.Undoubtedly，unquestionablyunquestionably，undeniablyundeniably和和Beyond doubtBeyond doubt，out of questionout of question這一組詞和詞組語(yǔ)氣非常斬釘截鐵，非常果斷。3.To some extend3.To some extend、generallygenerally和和on the wholeon the

6、 whole這一類調(diào)節(jié)觀點(diǎn)的詞使得文章在說(shuō)理中顯得客觀、適度，避免過(guò)于偏激四、寫作常用關(guān)鍵句型好句為你的作文錦上添花1.由while引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句2.Those who句型3.倒裝句4.條件狀語(yǔ)從句5.強(qiáng)調(diào)句6.反問(wèn)句7.結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句8.讓步狀語(yǔ)從句9.notuntil10.包含never的否定句11.平行結(jié)構(gòu)高分作文黃金模版批駁類模版（1.批駁做法） Today more and more peopleToday more and more people.they argue this .they argue this practice has several advantages.firs

7、tpractice has several advantages.first，.second.second，.for example.for example，. .分兩點(diǎn)舉例說(shuō)明某些人的做法、想法。 I am afraid Icannot agree with their I am afraid Icannot agree with their opinion.to begin with,although you may feelopinion.to begin with,although you may feel，it it doesnt meandoesnt mean.in the sec

8、ond place,.in the second place,.Finally,as .Finally,as toto, ,. .我的不同觀點(diǎn)和第三理由；第一句批駁 From the above analysis，we may arrive at the conclusion that is not wise choice.下結(jié)論My view on putting work My view on putting work until the last minuteuntil the last minute1.現(xiàn)在有些人主張將其工作留到最后來(lái)做2.我不同意他們的觀點(diǎn)，理由是 Today mor

9、e and more peopleToday more and more people put their work until the last put their work until the last minute.minute.they argue this practice has several they argue this practice has several advantages .First,advantages .First,the impending dealing gives them a last-the impending dealing gives them

10、 a last-minute driveminute drive，which can help them finish the job which can help them finish the job quickly.quickly.Second,Second,if they have a lot of time to finish the jobif they have a lot of time to finish the job，they cannot concentrate on they project quickly because they they cannot conce

11、ntrate on they project quickly because they are not pressed by me are not pressed by me .For example.For example，some children have some some children have some homework for his winter vacationhomework for his winter vacation，but they always do it in the but they always do it in the last week.last w

12、eek. I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion .To begin with with ，although you may feelalthough you may feel anxious to finish the work when anxious to finish the work when the deadline is drowning nearthe deadline is drowning near，it doe

13、s not meanit does not mean you can you can finish your job with high qualityfinish your job with high quality。In theIn the second place second place ，a a wise man will not always leave his task until the last wise man will not always leave his task until the last minute . If a person wants to be hig

14、hly efficientminute . If a person wants to be highly efficient，he should he should learn to divide his tasks into several small parts learn to divide his tasks into several small parts ，and and set deadlines for each of them. set deadlines for each of them. FinallyFinally，as toas to the children the

15、 children finishing assignments finishing assignments ，I believe that they cannot enjoy I believe that they cannot enjoy themselves with their assignments unfinished.themselves with their assignments unfinished. From the above analysis ，we may arrive at the conclusion that putting work until the las

16、t minute is not a wise choice.批駁類模板 （批駁觀點(diǎn)） Recently it seems that Recently it seems that . Many people. Many people，especially the parentsespecially the parents，think it will think it will certainly do good to their children becausecertainly do good to their children because . . Moreover, Moreover,

17、. . 某種做法與支持這種做法的觀點(diǎn)。 After careful consideration ,I have to say After careful consideration ,I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, hand, .on the other hand ,.on the other hand , . . 從兩方面進(jìn)行批駁；第一句批駁。 We can see clearly that alt

18、houghWe can see clearly that althoughmay may bring favorable resultsbring favorable results，there are still a lot there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young to worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation before students to make a careful

19、investgation before . . 下結(jié)論。My view on teenagers studying abroad1.現(xiàn)在有很多青少年出國(guó)留學(xué)2.有些人認(rèn)為這種做法是有益的3.我認(rèn)為這種做法是不對(duì)的 Recently it seems thatRecently it seems that among the students who choose among the students who choose to study abroad to study abroad ，there are more and more teenagers who study there are m

20、ore and more teenagers who study in high school or even elementary schools .in high school or even elementary schools .Many people Many people ，especially the parentsespecially the parents，think it will certainly do good to think it will certainly do good to their children becausetheir children beca

21、use the independent life will make them the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.learn confidence and perseverance.moreover moreover ，the quality of the quality of overseas education is often higher overseas education is often higher ，thus the child stands a thus the chi

22、ld stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the futurebetter job in the future。 After careful consideration After careful consideration ，I have to I have to say the above view is more than biased .

23、On say the above view is more than biased . On the other hand ,the other hand , early independent life is not early independent life is not necessarily good necessarily good ，if the child cannot receive if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both proper guidance and tender

24、care from both teachers and parents. teachers and parents. On the other hand ,On the other hand , the the educational quality is also a question too educational quality is also a question too many foreign universities aim at earning many foreign universities aim at earning money . When the children

25、come back money . When the children come back ， who can who can guarantee that they adapt to the fierce guarantee that they adapt to the fierce competition herecompetition here？ We can see clearly that althoughWe can see clearly that although teenagers studying abroad teenagers studying abroad may b

26、ring may bring favorable resultsfavorable results，there are still a lot to there are still a lot to worry about .It seems necessary for young worry about .It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investgation beforestudents to make a careful investgation before going abroad .going abr

27、oad .批駁類模板（混合類：觀點(diǎn)批駁+辦法） Nawdays there is a commonly held belief that .actually,it is not the real case . 第一句提出觀點(diǎn)；第二句立即批駁。 On the one hand , .on the other hand , . Most important of all , . 從三方面來(lái)說(shuō)明。 We need to carry out several measures to promote .First , we should . Second ，we should . 提出兩個(gè)方面的辦法。Bl

28、ood donationBlood donation1.有人認(rèn)為獻(xiàn)血有害健康有人認(rèn)為獻(xiàn)血有害健康2.實(shí)際情況并非如此實(shí)際情況并非如此3.應(yīng)采取措施促進(jìn)獻(xiàn)血應(yīng)采取措施促進(jìn)獻(xiàn)血 Nawdays there is a commonly held belief thatNawdays there is a commonly held belief that donating blood will do harm to a persons donating blood will do harm to a persons health . health . Actually,it is not the r

29、eal caseActually,it is not the real case . . On the one hand ,On the one hand , the small amount of blood the small amount of blood donated in a short time. on the other hand , with donated in a short time. on the other hand , with the development of medical science the development of medical scienc

30、e ，it is much it is much safer and more convenient now for people to safer and more convenient now for people to donate blood . donate blood . Most important of allMost important of all ,donating ,donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients blood can help save the lives of dying patient

31、s ， which is significant to the hole society.which is significant to the hole society. 熟讀唐詩(shī)三百首，不會(huì)作詩(shī)也會(huì)吟！ We need to carry out several We need to carry out several measures to promotemeasures to promote blood blood donation .donation .First , we shouldFirst , we should impart impart medical knowledge

32、to common medical knowledge to common citizens citizens ，convincing them that convincing them that blood donation is not dangerous at blood donation is not dangerous at all . all . Second Second ，we shouldwe should help help people realize that helping others people realize that helping others is eq

33、ual to helping ourselves is equal to helping ourselves ，not not only because it is a virtue to be only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others ,but also ready to help others ,but also because one day we will be those in because one day we will be those in need of help .need of help .批駁類模板（

34、復(fù)合批駁）It become a common tendency these days for people to many people are opposed to this practice because they think . They also argue that . 第一句說(shuō)明某些人的做法；第二句寫有些人的反對(duì)；第三句補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明。In my mind , however , I cannot agree with these people on this occasion , . At the same time , . In addition , . 第一句說(shuō)我不同意這些人的

35、看法；分三點(diǎn)說(shuō)明。In conclusion , . 下結(jié)論。My view on bank loanMy view on bank loan 1.現(xiàn)在許多人向銀行貸款2.有些人反對(duì)這種做法3.我不同意這些人的反對(duì)意見(jiàn) It becomes a common It becomes a common tendency these days for people tendency these days for people toto ask for bank loans to buy a ask for bank loans to buy a house or a private car. house or a private car. Many Many people are opposed to this people are opposed to this practise because they thinkpractise because they think bank loan is equal to bank loan is equal to debt ,and they will always debt ,and they will always feel burden on their back in feel burden on their back in