六級(jí)寫作第五次課

1、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型文章結(jié)構(gòu) 第一段：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段第一段：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段 第二段：論述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段第二段：論述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段 第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段 第一段：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段第一段：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)段 文章第一句話：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)文章第一句話：提出對(duì)立觀點(diǎn) 第一種寫法：山寨莎翁名句法 To be or not to be, that is a question. 例：To live in the city or to live in the country, that is a question. To study abroad or not, that is a question. 2009.12S

2、hould Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?1. 家長(zhǎng)送學(xué)生參加各種藝術(shù)班2. 有人支持，有人反對(duì)3. 作為大學(xué)生，我的觀點(diǎn) 第二種寫法：就某事，人們熱烈討論 There has been a heated discussion regarding whether Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 第三種寫法：某事

3、引發(fā)人們關(guān)注 Recently, the phenomenon of “ ” has sparked a storm of controversy online and in the press and aroused wide concern among the public. 2010.12My View on University Ranking1、 當(dāng)今社會(huì)，高校排名很流行2、 個(gè)人看法不同3、 我自己的觀點(diǎn) 文章第二句話：文章第二句話： 提出人們對(duì)此看法不同 Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this phenomenon/issu

4、e? Definitely not. Actually, opinions vary from individual to individual. No unanimous agreement has been reached. There is no consensus of opinion toward such phenomenon.第二段：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)論述段第二段：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)論述段 文章第三句話：文章第三句話：提出正方觀點(diǎn) It is evidently reasonable for some to argue that Those who are in favor of the idea

5、that have their convincing arguments. 某物對(duì)某物有好處： A is beneficial / favorable / conducive to B. Those who are in favor of the idea that lottery games are beneficial to our society have their convincing arguments. 文章第四句話：文章第四句話：支持正方觀點(diǎn)的理由 Those who are in favor of the idea that lottery games are benefic

6、ial to our society have their convincing arguments. Lottery games could serve as a means of raising money for such people as the poor and the disabled. Those who are in favor of the idea that art classes are beneficial to childrens development in the long run have their convincing arguments. They be

7、lieve that the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. 文章第五句話：文章第五句話： 提出反方觀點(diǎn) On the contrary， quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that 某物是有壞處： A is to B A has a negative impact on B In spite of the possible benefit

8、s mentioned, some people stand on the opposite side. 文章第六句話：文章第六句話： 支持反方觀點(diǎn)的理由 They believe that people will be indulged in lottery games and cherish an illusion that they can earn money through gambling instead of down-to earth labor. In spite of the possible benefits mentioned, some people stand on

9、 the opposite side. The greatest concern they might have is that children probably will be deprived of their pleasure due to their tight schedule. They believe all work and no play makes jack a dull boy 第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)段文章第七句話：文章第七句話：提出自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) In conclusion, although its hard to draw / come to / re

10、ach / arrive at an absolute conclusion to this issue, I would not hesitate to assent to the former / latter viewpoint. 文章第八句話：文章第八句話： 支持個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的理由 I believe lottery games help increase governments revenue. Childhood is the most colorful time for children. 文章第九句話：文章第九句話：再次重申自己的觀點(diǎn) 1 Accordingly, weighing

11、 the pros and cons of this argument, I am more inclined to agree with the former/ latter idea. 2 For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that we should further develop lottery games and exert

12、 proper supervision over them so that they can benefit us in a better way. For the reasons presented/stated above, I strongly commit to the notion that children are expected to feel the nature and develop their curiosity rather than be crammed by too much knowledge.引語(yǔ)評(píng)論型2011.12The Way to Success For

13、 this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledThe Way to SuccessThe Way to Successby commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, Give me six hours to chop down Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four a tree, and I will spend the first four sha

14、rpening the axesharpening the axe. . You should write at least150words but no more than200words. 第1段：引語(yǔ)引用+簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論段 第2段：意義闡述段 第3段：總結(jié)：結(jié)合實(shí)際第1段：引語(yǔ)引用+簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論段 文章第一句話：直接引用引語(yǔ)文章第一句話：直接引用引語(yǔ) 第一種寫法： 名人名言 1 “ .”Sb. once said. 2 Sb. once said，“ .” 3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said,

15、 “ .” 第二種寫法： 俗語(yǔ)/ /成語(yǔ)/ /諺語(yǔ) As a commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，俗語(yǔ). I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , “ .” 文章第二句話：簡(jiǎn)化引語(yǔ)文章第二句話：簡(jiǎn)化引語(yǔ) 用自己的語(yǔ)言說(shuō)明、自由發(fā)揮 That is to say / In other words, although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down

16、the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. 文章第三句話：過(guò)渡文章第三句話：過(guò)渡 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy. Simple as the sentence may sound, the connotation subtly conveyed should be taken into consideration with more insight.第2段：意義闡述段文章第四句話：深層含義 Th

17、e saying/proverb/ sbs remark aims at informing us of the significance of 主題. 文章第五句話： 強(qiáng)調(diào)主題的重要性 canttoo muchEg: I cant thank you too much. There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of 主題 too much. 文章第六句話： 論述主題的重要性 Full preparation enables us to fulfill a task perfectly. 主題 can be co

18、nsidered as a building block for success. Over the years, 主題has enabled people to enabled people to achieve their dreams. With 主題, the goal we set can be reached, and the hard nut can be cracked. Without 主題, hardly can any one reach goals and achieve success in his career. It is主題 that enables you t

19、o overcome challenges or obstacles you may encounter in your personal, professional and spiritual life 文章第句七話：舉例論述主題的重要性Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of 主題. However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: To further demonstrate the importance of 主題,

20、 I would like to take sb. as a case in point. 第三段：結(jié)合實(shí)際第三段：結(jié)合實(shí)際文章第八句話：銘記主題的重要性文章第八句話：銘記主題的重要性 In view of the importance of 主題, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that 主題 will exert a profound influence on our life/work. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of 主題. 文章第

21、九句話：結(jié)合實(shí)際提建議文章第九句話：結(jié)合實(shí)際提建議 It is imperative for us to take some measures to advocate 主題 in our society.應(yīng)用文2004.6A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper設(shè)想你買了一本英文詞典，發(fā)現(xiàn)有這樣那樣的質(zhì)量問(wèn)題，書店的服務(wù)態(tài)度又不好，因此給報(bào)社編輯寫信。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：1、事情的起因2、與書店交涉的經(jīng)過(guò)3、呼吁服務(wù)行業(yè)必須提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量2005.12A Letter Declining a Job Offer1、對(duì)公司提供的職位表示感謝2、解釋為何不能接受提

22、供職位的原因3，希望予以諒解，并表達(dá)公司良好的祝愿 高分和低分作文分析： Dear Big boss： I do not want work longer. Hope you understand me, understand my difficulties. Money is not high. You know, I am a college students, can have a large money. However, you only gives me small job and little money. I was a monitor always in my college

23、. I don not want work here, really? I hope you will not angry me. Yours sincerely, Li Ming Dear Manager Wang,Dear Manager Wang, I am writing this letter to express my rough I am writing this letter to express my rough decision for quitting job.decision for quitting job. I really hope that you could

24、I really hope that you could understand my deplorable situation as losing understand my deplorable situation as losing orientation in workplace.orientation in workplace. Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably low compared to other same-level c

25、o-workers. After low compared to other same-level co-workers. After all, I have got a Bachelors degree so that I should all, I have got a Bachelors degree so that I should have earned a little bit more. However, a merely have earned a little bit more. However, a merely trivial position was given to

26、me here. It is a great trivial position was given to me here. It is a great pity that I hardly find any opportunity to get self-pity that I hardly find any opportunity to get self-promotion. Actually, it takes me a great multitude promotion. Actually, it takes me a great multitude of time to make up my mind f