漫畫作文示范課課件

1、漫畫作文示范課Anfeng Senior High School MuHongmei漫畫作文示范課Attention please!2012江蘇高考說明江蘇高考說明高考英語高考英語書面表達示例書面表達示例2-看圖作文說明：看圖作文說明：看圖作文的看圖作文的 “圖圖”不局限于某一類型不局限于某一類型的圖，如漫畫、廣告，也包括其他圖片的圖，如漫畫、廣告，也包括其他圖片、照片、圖表等情景材料?？忌鷤兛筛⒄掌?、圖表等情景材料?？忌鷤兛筛鶕?jù)情景圖示的寓意、內(nèi)容或情節(jié)線索，據(jù)情景圖示的寓意、內(nèi)容或情節(jié)線索，自己組織文字，進行描述、敘述、比較自己組織文字，進行描述、敘述、比較或表達思想觀點。作文應覆蓋提示

2、的要或表達思想觀點。作文應覆蓋提示的要點，但應避免僅根據(jù)提示文字作簡單翻點，但應避免僅根據(jù)提示文字作簡單翻譯。譯。漫畫作文示范課 Different forms of pictures漫畫作文示范課漫畫作文示范課漫畫作文示范課漫畫作文示范課Writing based on cartoons漫畫作文示范課Are you familiar with this cartoon?漫畫作文示范課What abilities should we have?1. 讀圖讀圖3. 謀篇謀篇2.解意解意漫畫作文示范課.讀圖：讀圖：Topics of cartoons漫畫作文示范課Topics of cartoon

3、sEnvironmental/Natural problemsSocial phenomenonAttitudes towards life漫畫作文示范課.解意解意(theme)-to the point 注意注意: 文字說明部分往往含有重要信息文字說明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認真閱讀！切記要認真閱讀！1. 辨明褒貶，找準角度辨明褒貶，找準角度 (angle) . 聯(lián)系生活，明晰主旨聯(lián)系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)漫畫作文示范課 下面的漫畫反映了一種社會現(xiàn)象下面的漫畫反映了一種社會現(xiàn)象，請你根據(jù)對，請你根據(jù)對 這幅漫畫的理解，用英語寫一篇這幅漫畫的理解，用英語寫一篇短文，

4、描述一下他們的不同境遇，并就如何解決短文，描述一下他們的不同境遇，并就如何解決此問題發(fā)表你的看法。此問題發(fā)表你的看法。Example1._漫畫作文示范課角度角度comparison主旨主旨educationinequality漫畫作文示范課 The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.漫畫作文示范課角度角度criticize主旨主旨The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievem

5、ents, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.Example2漫畫作文示范課Judge the themes of the followingcartoons as quickly as possible.漫畫作文示范課Come on! Choose me! 213456漫畫作文示范課People lack communication.Picture1漫畫作文示范課Protect animals.No buying, no killing.Picture2漫畫作文示范課People cant afford heavy me

6、dical fees. Picture 3漫畫作文示范課Picture 4One false move may lose the game.Look before you leap.漫畫作文示范課Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre5漫畫作文示范課 下圖是某人壽保險公司的一則經(jīng)典廣告招畫，這則廣告想要告訴我們什么？if unexpectedcant foreseeprotect ourselvesbuy insurancePicture6漫畫作文示范課The advertisement above shows u

7、s that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”.漫畫作文示范課Conclusion:When it comes to attitudes towards life, usingproper sayings makes sense.漫畫作文示范課.謀篇謀篇 -

8、organizationStep1. Descriptionstep2. AnalysisStep3. Solutions發(fā)現(xiàn)問題發(fā)現(xiàn)問題解決問題解決問題分析問題分析問題漫畫作文示范課Step 1 Description（人稱（人稱/時態(tài)）時態(tài)）To what degree should we describe the cartoon? Organization漫畫作文示范課Examplea country boycryinglong for educationa city boyenjoy all the benefitsof education漫畫作文示范課As is vividly sh

9、own in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are The picture shows a common phenomenon.Sentence structures:漫畫作文示范課_, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.

10、As is vividly shown in the picture,漫畫作文示范課Step2 Analysis(聯(lián)系實際分析聯(lián)系實際分析)( facts / reasons/results)漫畫作文示范課Sentence structures1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon?2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection o

11、f4.The picture indicates that we/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that5.This is a ironic (諷刺的諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among漫畫作文示范課Clues：描述一下他們：描述一下他們的的不同境遇不同境遇，并就，并就如如何解決此問題何解決此問題發(fā)表你發(fā)表你的看法。的看法。漫畫作文示范課Indicate:education inequalityFacts:drop out of schoolsuff

12、er fromlow standards ofcomparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment ratesworsen the problemExample漫畫作文示范課 The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who

13、managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than tho

14、se in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.漫畫作文示范課As far as Im concerned/In my opinion,From my point of view,Only in this way can./Only if, can weStep 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediat

15、e measures should be taken toThe government should make laws toThe media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness ofEveryone should make great efforts to從大到小從大到小從意識到行動從意識到行動漫畫作文示范課The governmentThe mediabe aware ofOnly ifsocial justiceharmonious societyExample漫畫作文示范課 To solve this problem

16、 , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these

17、 can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious漫畫作文示范課 Practice 目前醫(yī)療費不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費目前醫(yī)療費不斷攀升，有人因付不起昂貴的醫(yī)療費而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強烈呼吁政府應當建立有而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人們強烈呼吁政府應當建立有效的醫(yī)療保障體制。請根據(jù)下面圖畫，以效的醫(yī)療保障體制。請根據(jù)下面圖畫，以“Health Care”為題寫一篇短文，簡要說明圖畫中所表達的內(nèi)容，為題寫一篇短文，簡要說明圖畫中所表達的內(nèi)容，重點闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的觀點。重點闡述

18、這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果和你的觀點。 _漫畫作文示范課Clues: 簡要簡要說明圖畫中所表達的說明圖畫中所表達的內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容，重點重點闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的闡述這種現(xiàn)象所帶來的后果后果和你的和你的觀點觀點。漫畫作文示范課StepsContentsDescriptionAnalysisSolutionsan old mansuffer fromgo tohospitalmedical billcant affordanother attachResults:1.in debt2.bear the pain3.wait for death1.reduce medicalexpenses2.build up

19、medical insurance/caresystem漫畫作文示范課Health Care (Description) From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his f

20、eet. It was beyond what he could affordIts really another heart attack for him.Sample漫畫作文示范課Analysis At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. (Results) Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they

21、have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. What a pity!漫畫作文示范課 Solutions To solve the problem,we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedThe government should build up medical insurance system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so th

22、at everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. /Only in this way, can we enjoy our life as long as possible.漫畫作文示范課 Whatever the picture is, just remember:Proper descriptionAccurate analysisReasonable solutionsOnly if you keep these rules in mind, can you make it.Lets draw conclus

23、ion漫畫作文示范課Consolidation漫畫作文示范課漫畫作文示范課第五部分第五部分 書面表達書面表達( (滿分滿分2525分分) )下圖描述的是全球環(huán)境問題。請仔細觀察這幅漫畫，用英語寫一篇短文，闡明漫畫中所反映的問題，并提出解決此問題的方法(至少三點)。_Consolidation_DescriptionAnalysisSolution漫畫作文示范課From the picture, we can see that pollution is posing a threat to our earth, which comes in many ways. Millions of chim

24、neys of the factories are pouring heavy somok into air, which causes serious air pollution. A large amount of waste water from the factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink and swim in. Furthermore, a lot of trees have been cut down without proper plans, which

25、 contributes to the soil being washed away. It seems that we really have no clean place to live(Description + Analysis)漫畫作文示范課The pollution is so serious that we have to find effective solutions to it. As far as I am concerned, the government should pass laws to reduce polluted air. Some measures should be taken to purify the water before it is poured into the rivers of the seas. We should plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Whats more, people should be further educated to realize the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way, we will have a clean