新目標(biāo)-七年級(jí)英語-期末英語作文寫作指導(dǎo)-含范文

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上七年級(jí)英語上冊(cè)期末復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專練Unit1 My name is Gina. 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步五要素法介紹自己】寫作思路分三步    第一步：確定自我介紹的內(nèi)容和順序。第二步：列舉自我介紹的句型，多多益善。第三步：成段成篇，修訂完善。文章的內(nèi)容五要素  1姓名name：（姓、名、中文名英文名）My name isMy first/last name is  2年齡age：I am/He is/ She is years old./   3性別sex：I am a girl/ boy.  4所在學(xué)

2、校和班級(jí)school and class ：I am inMiddle School . I am in Class，Grade  5聯(lián)系方式（電話號(hào)碼、QQ號(hào)碼、郵箱等）：My telephone number is    可拓展發(fā)揮內(nèi)容：生日、出生地、職業(yè)、興趣愛好等?！疽族e(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1代詞的使用   形容詞性物主代詞my/his/her一定要放在名詞之前，如My name is，His telephone number is；人稱代詞的主格I和賓格me一定要正確使用：I作主語，me用作賓語跟在動(dòng)詞之后。如：I am a middl

3、e school student. Please tell me your name.2句型的靈活運(yùn)用   在介紹人物的時(shí)候，有很多方面的內(nèi)容可以寫，也有很多種不同的句型可以表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，在寫作時(shí)要選擇句型相對(duì)復(fù)雜但是自己絕對(duì)有把握的句子使用，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)看起來層次更分明，更高于同等水平。  如：我叫吉娜。My name is Gina. I'm Gina. Gina is my name.  我是一個(gè)中學(xué)生。I am a middle school student. I study at a middle school.  我12歲了

4、。I am 12.I am 12 years old. I am a 12-year-old girl./ I am at the age of 12./ I am a girl of 12./  3恰當(dāng)使用連詞：英語中每個(gè)句子之間應(yīng)該用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接，這樣才是一篇完整的文章，而不是一個(gè)個(gè)孤立的句子。常用連詞and，but。 【范文欣賞】    Brief introduction about myself    Hello, everyone,（ now I want to introduce myse

5、lf）. My name is Gina Green. Gina is my first name and Green is my family name. I am a 12-year-old girl , and I am from Nanjing Foreign Language Primary School. I like chatting on the Internet（上網(wǎng)）,and my QQ number is . What's yours?點(diǎn)評(píng)：該文作者開開門見山地介紹了自己的姓名，并運(yùn)用到了本單元的重點(diǎn)句型；文章恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞now, and分層介紹自己的個(gè)人信息，

6、而且在結(jié)尾時(shí)候介紹了自己的聯(lián)系方式，符合文章寫作要求；最后收篇提出了了解其他同學(xué)QQ的想法，作為自我介紹很自然的收尾。【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是Kate Jane Brown，你剛剛結(jié)交了一位新的筆友Jennifer。請(qǐng)寫信告訴她你的個(gè)人情況和在校的情況?！镜淅啃聦W(xué)期開學(xué)了，請(qǐng)給大家介紹你的一位新同學(xué)。  要求：1詞數(shù)60左右。        2介紹中包括他/她的姓名、年齡、聯(lián)系方式、愛好和飲食習(xí)慣等。        3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與

7、校名。Dear Jennifer,_ _ _                                            

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12、ateUnit2 This is my sister. 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【總分總?cè)椒ń榻B家庭】   總：第一步總體介紹家庭人口數(shù)量。   分：第二步分述各自家庭成員的職業(yè)，也可加上興趣愛好等。   總：第三步再進(jìn)行對(duì)家庭的感情表達(dá)或評(píng)價(jià)，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用?！疽族e(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】  注意介紹人的句型使用This is/That is ,These are /Those are. 。注意反復(fù)數(shù)一致和單詞拼寫不要出錯(cuò)?！镜淅空?qǐng)以Zhan Hui的身份，給Tom寫信介紹自己的家庭成員及他們的情況，如父母的職業(yè)等。【范文欣賞】Dear To

13、m,   Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. It's a nice photo. I like it very much.   Now let me tell you about my family.  There are three people in my family.  They are my father, my mother and I. Here is my family photo. This is my father. 

14、He is a worker. This is my mother. She is a nurse. This is me. I am a middle school student. I love my family. Wish you happy every day!   See you soon!                       

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19、;    Zhan Hui點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文中格式與四要素方法一致，全文結(jié)構(gòu)如下：稱呼 Dear.正文 對(duì)收到來信致謝： Thank you for your letter. 介紹家庭情況： There are.people in my family,             This is. / She(He) is/I am 表達(dá)祝愿：Wish you happy every day!/ See you soo

20、n!結(jié)束語 Yours, /Your friend, 【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】    假如你是Vera，準(zhǔn)備將自己全家福寄給在上海的筆友Rosie，并寫信向她介紹你的家庭成員。  要求：1詞數(shù)：60詞左右；2介紹家庭成員，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮姓名、職業(yè)、年齡、外貌等。 3. 不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。_                     

21、0;              Unit3 Is this your pencil? 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【六要素法寫失物招領(lǐng)尋物啟事】寫作內(nèi)容六要素物品名稱 丟失撿到時(shí)間 姓名物品特征 丟失撿到地點(diǎn) 聯(lián)系方式【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1體裁：首先審題確定是Lost還是Found。2格式：通常Lost，F(xiàn)ound放在左上角并且用冒號(hào)或正中間，首字母要大寫，落款處為人名。3寫作重點(diǎn)：正文描述物品名稱、特征、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、姓名及聯(lián)系方式，可用

22、句型為：Please call.at. ， My telephone number is.4注意禮貌感謝?！镜淅考偃缒闶荍ane，你丟了你的黃色的筆記本，并且你的學(xué)生卡也在你的筆記本里。寫一則尋物啟事，希望有人撿到你的筆記本并打833-9669聯(lián)系你?！痉段男蕾p】Lost :   I lost my notebook. It's yellow.  My school ID card is in it. My phone number is  8339669.  Please call me at .   Thank

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25、#160;               Jane 【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】假如你是露西，1月1日你把你的一個(gè)黑色筆記本遺失在學(xué)校操場(chǎng)，你的手機(jī)號(hào)碼是，請(qǐng)寫一則30詞左右的尋物啟事。_Unit4 Wheres my schoolbag?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步三層法介紹物品的位置】1.寫作思路分三步  第一步：確定介紹的對(duì)象，如“我的房間我家的客廳”等。  第二步：運(yùn)用方位介詞來談?wù)撐锲返奈恢谩?第三步：可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，描述對(duì)于相關(guān)物品的感受。

26、【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1使用介詞短語介紹方位時(shí)，be(is/are)是最容易忘掉的。 My book on the desk. × My book is on the desk. 主語和謂語不一致。 His shoes is under the bed.× His shoes are under the bed.2注意句型的靈活運(yùn)用。在介紹物品的時(shí)候，可以使用.is/are  in/on/under.的句型，也可以使用There be句式來表示“某地有某物”。也可以用 You can see .也可將幾種句式結(jié)合起來使用，以避免句子的形式太過單一。eg：表達(dá)桌上有一本書。

27、A book is on the desk./ There is a book on the desk.You can see a book on the desk. Where is my book? Oh,its on the desk. 3恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B詞：句子與句子之間應(yīng)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接，這樣才能使文章有自然的過渡，以使整篇文章流暢。常用連詞有and，可以表并列、承接或遞進(jìn)but表示轉(zhuǎn)折?！痉段男蕾p】      Hi, every one! This is my room. It is not very big but very nice

28、. There are many things in it. First, you can see the desk. Some books and a computer are on it. Under the desk, it is my chair. Beside the desk there is a bookcase. I like reading books very much. So I have a lot of books. Where's my bed? It's beside the bookcase. I like my room. What about

29、 you?【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】介紹一下你們的教室(Classroom)。 要求：1.不少于60詞； 2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。_                                         &

30、#160;                          Unit5  Do you have a soccer ball?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步三層法談?wù)撐锲肥詹亍?寫作思路分三步：  第一步：確定談?wù)摰膶?duì)象，如“我的體育用品收藏我爸爸的郵票收藏等”。  第二步：運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞have/has來具體談?wù)撌詹仄返臄?shù)

31、量、顏色大小、外形等特征。  第三步：可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，結(jié)合收藏品描述愛好、特長、及日常體育活動(dòng)等。 2、【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1注意人稱代詞與謂語動(dòng)詞及助動(dòng)詞的搭配,尤其是單三人稱，動(dòng)詞加s/es。說到他人的收藏時(shí)，可以用He/She has.；說到自己的收藏時(shí)，可以使用I have.。2注意名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的問題。在說到多個(gè)物品時(shí)，可數(shù)名詞一定要變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，如：three basketballs（三個(gè)籃球），seven pens（七支鋼筆）等。3注意代詞的使用。代替上文中所提到的單數(shù)物品時(shí)用It/it，代替復(fù)數(shù)物品時(shí)用They/them。盡量減少名詞的重復(fù)。   

32、;  eg: I have four ping-pong balls. They are white.I play them after school4恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B詞。句子與句子之間應(yīng)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞連接，使之達(dá)到自然過渡的目的，以使整篇文章流暢。  eg：I have three basketballs,and I like them very much.我有三個(gè)籃球，而且我很喜歡它們。 I have many balls，but I don't play them.我有很多球，但是我不玩。寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練 你有一位好朋友Sam, 他有一個(gè)小的體育用收藏。六個(gè)籃球、八個(gè)

33、排球、十個(gè)乒乓球和四個(gè)乒乓球拍。還有一件運(yùn)動(dòng)T恤和三雙運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋?？梢越Y(jié)合收藏品談?wù)剛€(gè)人的愛好、特長和日?；顒?dòng)等。要求。1. 60詞左右 2.根據(jù)所提供信息描述。 3.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 _ _   Unit6  Do you like bananas?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三層次三要素法寫談?wù)摵脨杭安惋嬍场?寫作思路二層次：表達(dá)喜歡的事物；表達(dá)不喜歡的事物。2寫作內(nèi)容三要素：早餐、午餐、晚餐 3.除了描寫飲食，本單元寫作可以和第九單元結(jié)合，描述人們的其他愛好。包括最喜歡的科目、顏色、運(yùn)動(dòng)、人物、時(shí)間等?！疽族e(cuò)點(diǎn)提示及點(diǎn)撥】1主語是單三人稱，動(dòng)詞like忘記加s. 2.

34、 Like后跟動(dòng)詞忘記加ing. 或者可數(shù)名詞忘記加復(fù)數(shù)s/es He likes eat chicken for lunch. He likes tomato.3談?wù)撊惋嬍秤镁湫虵or breakfastlunchdinner.，注意介詞for。4描述理由時(shí)候，代詞缺少或者和前文的單復(fù)數(shù)不一致。 He likes hamburgers. Because he thinks are healthy./ Because he thinks it is healthy./ 5、 I like math best. = My favorite subject is math. 用favorite

35、寫的時(shí)候，其前面用所有格的詞。 6、中國式句子。 I very like PE.  × I like PE very much.【典例】根據(jù)下面表格的提示，寫出你的朋友Mike一日三餐喜歡吃什么和不喜歡吃什么。(60詞左右)   Mike Breakfast   eggs,hamburgers /  × / tomatoes,bread Lunch   / cola(可樂) ,French fries  ×  bro

36、ccoli(西蘭花)，apples  Dinner   / vegetables, meat × dessert(甜點(diǎn))，chicken /【范文欣賞】    I have a good friend,Mike. His eating habits are very unhealthy. For breakfast, Mike likes eggs and hamburgers. I think hamburgers are not good for his health. He doesn&#

37、39;t like tomatoes or bread.For lunch ,he likes cola and French fries ,but he doesnt like broccoli or apples . For dinner, Mike likes vegetables and meat . He doesntlike dessert or chicken. I think his eating habits are not healthy. He should eat more vegetables and fruit. What do you think of his e

38、ating habits? 【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】假如李軍是你的體育老師，飲食健康，而且酷愛運(yùn)動(dòng)，他有著強(qiáng)健的體魄，而且收藏了很多的體育用品。 結(jié)合以上信息，給大家介紹一下你的這位老師吧。_     Unit7 How much are these socks?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【首尾呼應(yīng)法寫廣告詞】1. 開門見山進(jìn)行宣傳，多為號(hào)召性語言。  如：Come and buy your clothes at great sale! Come and see for yourself. Hurry up and see!2介紹產(chǎn)品物美價(jià)廉，有各種樣式可供選擇，針對(duì)不同人

39、群有不同樣式，達(dá)到激發(fā)顧客購買欲望的目的，細(xì)節(jié)要具體到品種、顏色、價(jià)位等句式可有：品種：Do you need.? / Do you like？/ For，we have/ You can buy/ We sell顏色：We havein顏色價(jià)位：We haveat very good prices/ We have sweaters for only 15 dollars./ The sweaters are only 20dollars.3畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾呼應(yīng)，再次號(hào)召：Come to buy some good clothes!【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1、 yuan單復(fù)數(shù)同形，而dollar的復(fù)數(shù)需

40、加s。2、 介紹價(jià)位時(shí)，兩種句子容易出現(xiàn)混淆。 Eg. We have sweaters are only 20 yuan. 這個(gè)句子是錯(cuò)誤的。句中的are應(yīng)該刪掉，換成for. 【典例】毛毛服裝店開張了，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示寫一篇60詞左右的廣告。要求：廣告簡(jiǎn)單易懂，同時(shí)突出商品的亮點(diǎn)。    要求靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)過的單詞、短語及句子。  要寫清商品及價(jià)格?！窘ㄗh模塊】開頭：（點(diǎn)出商店名字）Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Clothes Store!正文：（所售商品及價(jià)格）We have + 商品名 (hats, bags,

41、 skirts.) + for + (價(jià)格).      For boys. For girls.結(jié)尾：（宣傳語） Come and see for yourself!【范文欣賞】                     Maomao Clothes Store Sale!Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Cl

42、othes Store! Do you like hats? We have black and red hats for Y12. We have sweaters at a very good price-only￥60 ! Do you need bags for sports?We have great bags for only￥45. For boys, you can buy football socks for only￥8. For girls, we have skirts in different colors for only￥18!   Come

43、and see for yourself!點(diǎn)評(píng)：全文簡(jiǎn)單明了，開篇點(diǎn)明服裝店名稱，用了號(hào)召句型如句；后又用幾個(gè)疑問句引出所談商品如句和句，親切而自然，句式靈活；句子運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確如句，We have.；短語運(yùn)用也恰當(dāng)如in different colors，讓人印象深刻，語言流暢，重點(diǎn)突出；最后句與首句呼應(yīng)，再次點(diǎn)題?！緦懽麽槍?duì)性訓(xùn)練】  請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，給一家商店寫廣告詞。1. skirts  2. shirts   3.T- shirts  4. trousers  5. shoes   6. socks

44、0;Big Sale ! Liangli Clothes Store_ _                            Unit8 When is your birthday?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)1文章內(nèi)容的五要素  姓名性別：My name is.I am a boy/girl.  年齡出生日期出生地：I

45、 am. years old. My birthday is on./ I was born on/in.  愛好：I like playing the piano.   介紹相關(guān)活動(dòng)的日期。  聯(lián)系方式（電話號(hào)碼、郵箱等）：My telephone number is.2、【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】1代詞的使用  形容詞性物主代詞myhisher等一定要放在名詞之前，如His/her birthday.2日期表達(dá)法  按月、日、年的方式：2013年12月7號(hào)，可以表達(dá)為December 7th，2013；  按日、月、年的方

46、式：2013年12月7號(hào)，還可以表達(dá)為the 7th of December, 2013.  其中月、日、年的方式為常用的方式。如果加星期，則把星期放在最前面。如：2013年10月13號(hào)星期天，則為Sunday，Oct 13th，2013【典例】假設(shè)你是金霖，今年13歲，生于10月3號(hào)，家里有爸爸、媽媽和妹妹。爸爸的生日是4月13日，媽媽的生日是7月10號(hào)，他們都是醫(yī)生。妹妹今年9歲，生于8月14號(hào)。請(qǐng)寫一篇短文介紹自己和家人。要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。2敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫，要包含家庭所有成員的信息。3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名。【范文欣賞】  

47、0; My name is Jin Lin. I am at the age of thirteen. And I am a student at No.2 Middle School. My birthday is on October 3rd. In my family, there are four people. They are my father,my mother, my sister and me. My father and my mother are both doctors. My father's birthday is on April 13th, and m

48、y mother's birthday is on July 10th. When is my sister's birthday? It's on August 14th. And she is nine years old this year.    When is your birthday? Can you tell me?【寫作針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練】NameDavid SmithAge15Date of birthAugust 21stCityNew YorkSchoolHarvard Middle School.Favoritebaske

49、tballActivities9月1日 School trip 9月10日 Basketball game9月23日 好朋友Ginas birthday party      假如David Smith是你的一個(gè)筆友，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容完成作文。70詞左右。_ _Unit9 My favorite subject is science.創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步三層法寫信發(fā)郵件談?wù)搨€(gè)人喜好】1寫作思路分三步  第一步：確定寫信的對(duì)象及談?wù)摰脑掝}。如最喜歡(不喜歡)的學(xué)科、老師、一天等；  第二步：運(yùn)用品質(zhì)形容詞來談?wù)撓矚g（不喜歡）的理由； 

50、; 第三步：描寫自己最喜歡的事物及平時(shí)的一些做法。 【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提示】 1、favorite 前用形容詞性物主代詞或者所有格即：sbs . My/His/Her/ My sisters favorite 容易錯(cuò)誤寫成 He/she/ my sister/ favorite 2、favorite后的名詞單復(fù)數(shù)和謂語不一致。 My favorite subject are art and music. 3、表述理由時(shí)缺少代詞。 His favorite is geography. Because is interesting. 4、談?wù)撟钕矚g做的事情，be 動(dòng)詞后動(dòng)詞不加ing. His favori

51、te sport is play soccer. ×  His favorite is playing soccer2寫作重點(diǎn)：正文部分是寫作重點(diǎn)。表達(dá)對(duì)事物的喜好句型有三種，最好交替使用，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)看起來會(huì)更豐富。   My favorite subject is science. I like science best  Science is my favorite.3. 如果談?wù)摰氖亲钕矚g做的事情，則動(dòng)詞用動(dòng)名詞結(jié)構(gòu)。   如： My favorite sport is playing basketball. 

52、;    I like playing basketball best.     Playing basketball is my favorite.【典例】假如你是Tom，請(qǐng)你選擇最喜歡的一門學(xué)科，給好友Frank寫一封信，說說喜歡這門學(xué)科的理由以及平時(shí)是怎樣學(xué)習(xí)的。    要求：詞數(shù)70左右；敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫。【參考詞匯】1表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折或原因的詞：and，but，because.2表示喜好的詞匯：like，love，favorite.3表示品質(zhì)的形容詞：interesting，

53、fun，exciting.4拓展詞匯：among.在之中（三者以上）；   what's more而且    get good grades取得好成績(jī)【范文欣賞】Dear Frank,    As a middle school student,l go to school from Monday to Friday. I have seven classes every day:four in the morning and three in the afternoon.   

54、; Among all the lessons, my favorite subject is English because English is very important. What's more, my English teacher Ms Li often makes her class very interesting. And she is very friendly to me. So I often listen to her carefully in class. After class I often ask her questions about English. Ms Li also tells me to watch English movies on weekends. It is really useful.