洛陽親友如相問就說我在寫作文英語作文一輪復(fù)習(xí)提升課（Word版）

1、.高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)預(yù)備書面表達(dá):“洛陽親友如相問，就說我在寫作文【考察才能】組織母語；轉(zhuǎn)化英語；詞匯語法【考場(chǎng)用時(shí)】不多于 35 分鐘含填涂答題卡用時(shí)【方法概述】假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校聘請(qǐng)的外教Mrs. Wilson將 于下周來學(xué)校。請(qǐng)用英文給她發(fā)郵件，說明以下事 宜：1.已為她安排公寓，位置便利，設(shè)施齊全；2.教學(xué)可用學(xué)校教材，也可自備材料；3.詢問航班信息，以便安排接機(jī)。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連接；3.開頭結(jié)語已為你寫好。Dear Mrs.WilsonSincerely yours#：一、 才能要求：組織語言【中文】，轉(zhuǎn)化語言【中譯英】高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)細(xì)

2、那么檔次規(guī)定任務(wù)覆蓋內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)語法構(gòu)造詞匯復(fù)雜構(gòu)造、高級(jí)詞匯連接成分與構(gòu)造寫作目的完成情況第五檔2125完全完成覆蓋所有應(yīng)用較多盡力使用語法構(gòu)造詞匯允許有些錯(cuò)誤有效使用連接全文構(gòu)造緊湊完全到達(dá)第四檔1620完成漏掉一兩個(gè)次要點(diǎn)滿足要求詞匯語法構(gòu)造使用根本準(zhǔn)確簡(jiǎn)單使用連接全文構(gòu)造緊湊到達(dá)第三檔1115根本完成漏掉一些內(nèi)容滿足要求有些錯(cuò)誤，但不影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解簡(jiǎn)單使用連接全文內(nèi)容連接根本到達(dá)第二檔610未恰當(dāng)完成漏 掉 一 些 內(nèi) 容， 寫了 無關(guān) 內(nèi)容語法單調(diào)詞匯有限有些錯(cuò)誤，影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解較少使用連接內(nèi)容缺少連接信息未能清楚的傳達(dá)給讀者第一檔15未完成明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容語法單調(diào)詞匯有限錯(cuò)

3、誤較多影響裂解缺乏連接成分內(nèi)容不連接信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者第零檔無與要點(diǎn)無關(guān)內(nèi)容太少無無未能傳達(dá)任何信息²²中文定檔，英文定分，卷面定調(diào)【八大書信體】推薦信 申請(qǐng)信 咨詢信 求助信 感謝信 抱歉信 介紹信 建議信二、操作步驟：1. 審題找點(diǎn)【中文】：逐字逐句讀題，找出要點(diǎn)并標(biāo)號(hào)2. 裂點(diǎn)成剛【中文】：要點(diǎn)劃歸段落，適度裂解次要點(diǎn)3. 創(chuàng)造銜接【中文】：要點(diǎn)介紹順序，大寫凸顯忌冗雜4. 準(zhǔn)確翻譯【英文】：確定初級(jí)版本，有把握選擇晉級(jí)5. 工整謄寫【專注】：按定方案操作，沉著適速上線寫 三、例題講解：假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校聘請(qǐng)的外教Mrs. Wilson將于下周來學(xué)校。請(qǐng)用英文給 她發(fā)

4、郵件，說明以下事宜：1.已為她安排公寓，位置便利，設(shè)施齊全；2.教學(xué)可用學(xué)校教材，也可自備材料；3.詢問航班信息，以便安排接機(jī)。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連接；3. 開頭結(jié)語 已為你寫好。1. 審題找點(diǎn)【中文】：逐字逐句讀題，找出要點(diǎn)并標(biāo)號(hào)2. 裂點(diǎn)成剛【中文】：要點(diǎn)劃歸段落，適度裂解次要點(diǎn) 段一：我是李華，我校已為您安排公寓，離教室很近位置便利，根本生活設(shè)施物品都有設(shè)施齊全 段二：教學(xué)可用學(xué)校教材，您也可以自備教材 段三：請(qǐng)告知您的航班信息，以便我們安排接機(jī)。期待您的到來。3. 創(chuàng)造銜接【中文】：要點(diǎn)介紹順序，大寫凸顯忌冗雜段一：您好，很快樂蒞臨我校，我是李

5、華，作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席由我代 表學(xué)校和您說一下本次行程安排。我校已為您安排公寓，離教室很 近，根本生活設(shè)施物品都有，只需攜帶隨身物品。段二：我們學(xué)校有自己的教材，當(dāng)然，您也可以根據(jù)自己的需求自 備教材。段三：請(qǐng)告知我們您的航班信息，以便我們安排接機(jī)。期待您的到 來。4. 準(zhǔn)確翻譯【英文】：確定初級(jí)版本，有把握選擇晉級(jí) 段一：您好，很快樂蒞臨我校，我是李華，作為學(xué)生會(huì)主席由我代 表學(xué)校和您說一下本次行程安排。我校已為您安排公寓，離教室很近，根本生活設(shè)施物品都有，只需攜帶隨身物品。We are so glad to know you will visit our school. Im Li Hua a

6、nd on behalf of the school as the Chairman of Students Union, Im just writing to inform you that we have already prepared an apartment for you. It is inside our schoolyard and conveniently close to theteaching buildings, which will save you much time on the road. Besides, basic living facilities are

7、 available in the apartment, and you just have to bring your personal belongings.段二：我們學(xué)校有自己的教材，當(dāng)然，您也可以根據(jù)自己的需求自 備教材。We have our own textbooks at hand, from which you can choose one. Of course, you can develop your own teaching materials according to your teaching requirement.來。Id appreciate it very m

8、uch if you could let me know the detailed information about your flight, which will be helpful for us to meet you at the airport.Looking forward to seeing you soon.5. 工整謄寫【專注】：按定方案操作，沉著適速上線寫性格 描 述easygoing 溫和的outgoing 外向的 aggressive 有進(jìn)取心的 energetic 精力充分的 honest 老實(shí)的 independent 有主見的 enthusiastic 熱情的

9、straightforward 坦率的 ambitious 雄心壯志的 hard-working 勤勞的 friendly 友好的helpful 樂于助人的considerate 體貼的gentle 有禮貌的frank 直率的，真誠(chéng)的 generous 大方的 humorous 幽默的 patient 有耐心的warm-hearted 熱心的selfless 無私的 sincere 真誠(chéng)的 straightforward 坦率的 kind-hearted 好心的 optimistic 樂觀的工作 能 力capable 有才能的 devoted 有獻(xiàn)身精神 的competent 能勝任的 inv

10、entive 有創(chuàng)造才能的 creative 富創(chuàng)造力的 efficient 有效率的 active 主動(dòng)的，活潑的 aggressive 有進(jìn)取心的 earnest 認(rèn)真的ambitious 有雄心壯志的 hard-working 勤勞的 adaptable 適應(yīng)性強(qiáng)的 confident 有信心的 cooperative 有合作精神的dependable 可靠的disciplined 守紀(jì)律的 faithful 守信的，忠誠(chéng)的 hospitable 殷勤的loyal 忠心耿耿的modest 謙虛的punctual 嚴(yán)守時(shí)刻的rational 有理性的 reasonable 講道理的 rel

11、iable 可信賴的 responsible 負(fù)責(zé)的 self-conscious 自覺的人際 交 流friendly 友好的helpful 樂于助人的 considerate 體貼的 gentle 有禮貌的frank 直率的，真誠(chéng)的 generous 大方的 humorous 幽默的patient 有耐心的warm-hearted 熱心的selfless 無私的 sincere 真誠(chéng)的 straightforward 坦率的 kind-hearted 好心的 strict 嚴(yán)格的知識(shí) 水 平intelligent 有智慧的knowledgeable 有見識(shí)的learned 精通某門學(xué)問的we

12、ll-educated 受過良好教育的experienced 有經(jīng)歷的 versatile 多才多藝的興趣 愛 好工作相關(guān)Reading newspaperWriting novel/articles/easyReading books Taking photos Record and shareSports fitness building Foreign language using業(yè)余愛好Playing balls football, basketball, volleyball Listening to musicOutdoor recreations swimming, runnin

13、g, jogging, climbingplaying the instruments violin, guitar, pianoplaying chess【問候】熟人之間How are you doing?How is everything going? How is life treating you?【自我介紹】2,句型積累I am Li Hua, a 18-­year-­old boy currently studying in XXX middle school. My name is Li Hua, I am a boy/ girl at the age of

14、18.As a boy/girl of 18, I am XXXI am a student from Class XXX Grade XXX from XXX school.【性格描繪】1.Im easygoing and independent.2.I am a bright and cheerful boy from3.As a boy/girl of 18, I am full of energy and ambition to4.Actually, I am a humors and optimistic boy, being friendly to everyone5.Being

15、patient and warm-­hearted, I often【寫信背景】I heard that +事件My teacher told me+事件I am informed that+事件I learned that+事件我得知 I read in your newspaper/ micro-­blog /website that+所獲信息You said in your last letter that+詳細(xì)情況【寫信目的】I am writing to do sth.I am writing this letter/ these few lines to do

16、sth.自薦信：I am writing to apply for the job/position.感謝信:I am writing to show / express my heartfelt gratitude to you.邀請(qǐng)信：I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/experience the + 活動(dòng) + as ourguest / judge / instructor.建議信：I am writing to suggest / propose / recommend you+事件求助信：Now, I am writing to ask

17、 you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.抱歉信:Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.告知信:Now, I am writing to tell you about the details.【表示感謝】1.Many thanks for +事件2.Please accept my sincere thanks for your+事件3.It was so kind/ nice of you to help me.4.I really appreciate your hel

18、p.5.Im much obliged to you for+事件【表達(dá)喜歡】1.Like/enjoy/love doing sth deeply/every much2.Im alover3.I m keen on doing4.My favorite is./is my favorite5.Prefer to do/doing6.My interests/hobby is7.During my spare time, I often do【表達(dá)歉意】8.I am/feel very/ terribly/ extremely/ deeply sorry for / about doing s

19、th.9.I am / fell very/ terribly/ extremely/ deeply sorry that+從句【期待回復(fù)】1.I am looking forward to your reply.2.I am looking forward to hearing from you.3.Your prompt response will be much appreciated.【性格描繪】1.Im easygoing and independent.2.I am a bright and cheerful boy.3.As a boy/ girl of 18, I am ful

20、l of energy and ambition to do sth.4.Actually, I am a humorous and optimistic boy, being friendly to everyone.5.Being patient and warm-­hearted, I often do sth.【人際交往】1.Im ready to help others at any time.2.Im willing to help others.3.Im eager to help people;4.Im generous in giving help5.I get o

21、n well with others and have good communication skills6.Friendly and patient as I am, I treat everyone as my friend.【個(gè)人才能】1.I am good at +能力 and working with children as well.2.I was elected as monitor as I get on well with others and have good communication skills.3.I can do well in +工作4.I have grea

22、t capacity for/ in +工作5.Taking good care of children is my strength6.I am responsible for every task that I do7.I have a strong/ high sense of responsibility8.I am teamwork-­oriented.9.I have good team work spirit【知識(shí)程度】1.I have been a xxx in xxx, which made me experienced in doing sth.2.My Engl

23、ish is good enough to deal with such a job.3.I have wider range of knowledge and become more experienced after three years of working.4.I have made a lot of progress during the last X years, and my range of knowledge is widened.5.These experiences greatly enlarge my knowledge scope and improved my a

24、bilities.【帶來好處】1.建議內(nèi)容+ be good for ones health/ knowledge/ life/ skills2.建議內(nèi)容+enrichs ones daily life.3.建議內(nèi)容+records ones happy moments/ memory/ daily life.4.It can make ones lifelives colorful / meaningful.5.it can cultivate ones taste/ nourish souls/ mentality.6.事件+gives me a lot of fun and helps me to develop in an all-­roundway at the mean time.7.They not only color my life but also improve myself in all-­round way.【獲獎(jiǎng)經(jīng)歷】1.After winning the second award in the Beijing Photo Contest of youth group,