陳正康老師新四級高分寫作講義（Chen Zhengkang teacher new-cet high writing）

1、陳正康老師新四級高分寫作講義（Chen Zhengkang teacher new-cet4 high writing）College English composition is an important index to measure students' comprehensive level and application ability, and it is also an important content of the four level examination. In the whole level of four roll surface (710 points)

2、accounted for 15% of the total score, candidates in this part of the score directly determine the fourth grade. Therefore, it is important to write an article for the students who take part in the band four examination. The first part of the new question test for CET four is writing, and how to writ

3、e it will directly affect the future. The essay is written on the back of the answer handy, can play a multiplier effect, otherwise it may work not completed. The four level includes expository writing genre, argumentative and practical writing. The materials or requirements for writing can be Chine

4、se, English and charts. Writing more than 120 words, writing time is 30 minutes, but you should leave a small amount of time for the final inspection. Writing tests your ability to think and judge, as well as your ability to express. Therefore, you should have some knowledge and understanding of som

5、e campus, social news and common sense, and can clearly express your views in the article in a hierarchical and structured way.4.1 writing difficulties analysis4.1.1 difficulty 1: subjective judgment has some influenceIt is undeniable that the four level examination is a large scale, high credibilit

6、y, scientific and objective, which can objectively investigate a person's actual English ability. However, writing is still the subjective part of the four level examination, which has the disadvantages of subjective judgment. Although examiners examine papers according to the standard of four g

7、rade composition, the human factors are unavoidable because of the weakness and blind spot of the examiner mentioned in the paper.The examinee should make clear the scoring standard of the composition in the examination. According to the outline, the scoring standard of the essay is: 1., correctly e

8、xpress the thought; 2. meaning coherence; 3., no major grammatical errors.The three are complementary, but each has its own emphasis. For the convenience of scoring, the national examination group divides the scoring principle into eight words, namely "overall score" and "comprehensiv

9、e evaluation", and makes corresponding explanations. The former refers to that the scoring staff gives a reward for the total impression, rather than the number of errors in the language point". The latter refers to the "to consider the composition is relevant, whether the full expres

10、sion of ideas, will have to consider whether in English clearly and exactly express ideas, is to consider whether the language errors on the obstacles to comprehension, sentences is clearly expressed in words and thoughts".4.1.2 difficulty two: diverse genres, more difficultIt has written lette

11、rs, speeches, charts and essays, and argumentative writing. Word count is also more in the domestic English test, 30 minutes require candidates to write a 150 word short essay. Letter writing, argumentative is to follow, but obviously knowing where to start. This is because the English teaching at a

12、ll levels of the country rarely involves chart writing, and to write good chart composition, not only need good English language ability, but also should have the corresponding analysis, induction ability.4.1.3. difficult three: old problems new, ever-changingFour grade composition has a perfect set

13、 of questions, often through the way keywords can old bottles of new wine, old trees open new flowers. Please look at the following questions:In January four cases of 1:1995 grade composition ZhentiDirections: for this part you are allowed to write a composition 30 minutes on the topic can money buy

14、 happiness you should write no less? Than and you should base 100 words your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1., some people think that money is the happiness of happiness (source of)2., some people think that money is the root of all evil (root of all evil)3. my point of viewIn

15、January 1996 four cases of 2: grade composition ZhentiDirections: for this part,你可以用三十分鐘的時間寫一篇關(guān)于這個周末的作文。你應(yīng)該至少寫100個字，你的作文應(yīng)該放在下面的提綱上：1。雙休日給大學(xué)生帶來的好處2。雙休日可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題三.我應(yīng)該怎樣過好雙休日例3:1999年6月四級作文真題說明：對于這一部分，你可以有三十分鐘的時間寫一篇關(guān)于選擇性閱讀或廣泛閱讀的文章嗎？你應(yīng)該至少寫100個字，并把你的作文放在下面的提綱上：1。有人認為讀書要有選擇2。有人認為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書三.我的看法只要細看片刻就能發(fā)現(xiàn)這三道

16、題如出一轍，提綱的結(jié)構(gòu)實質(zhì)上是完全相同的，不難想像，在寫這些題目時定有套路可循。不少四級考生”談作文即色變”就是因為就題論題，不識廬山真面目。四級作文題目雖然充滿變數(shù)，但萬變不離其宗，考官不可能隨心所欲得出新題或更新題庫。與其上下求索，苦苦積攢上百道變化莫測的題目，不如勤于總結(jié)，牢牢記住以上幾條題目變化的法則。許多學(xué)生習(xí)慣于用漢語思維方式來進行英文寫作，不善于開門見山，缺乏中心句（論文）和主題句（主題句）的意識，談了許多還未談到主題，還未等到他們一步一步地從次要觀點的闡述過渡到主要論點，時間已過去大半，不得不匆忙得出結(jié)論而收尾，作文也因此失分慘重。4.2寫作技巧總體來看學(xué)會寫主題段和主題句，遵

17、循外國人的”線性思維模式”。從全篇來看，一般的議論文大多都分為三大部分，即提出問題、分析問題、解決問題，四級作文也不例外，三部分缺一不可。文章的第一段落應(yīng)是主題段，簡單介紹了文章的大體思路。之后的段落要按邏輯順序展開，這是因為結(jié)構(gòu)的完整還包括結(jié)構(gòu)的合理性，就像說明文有說明順序一樣，議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)分布同樣應(yīng)該掌握一個遞進深入的順序。從每段來看，第一句應(yīng)是主題句，表達了本段的中心思想，其后的每一個觀點都應(yīng)圍繞這個中心展開。所有擴展句都緊扣主題。一般應(yīng)在段首就亮出主題句，避免主題句放在段中或段末從而無法明顯辨別引起混亂具體來講，考生應(yīng)做到：第一：卷面整潔，書寫清楚。第二：構(gòu)思簡單，少犯錯誤。第三：中心

18、突出，層次分明。從近幾年的四級考試作文看來，盡管實用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用”中心句1、2、3”模式。即每段第一句是主題句，改編自該段相對應(yīng)的提綱，后面的1、2、3是銜接詞，每個1、2、3后接分支觀點。這種表達，中心突出，層次分明，同時也節(jié)省了考生構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)的麻煩。銜接詞是文章邏輯關(guān)系的體現(xiàn)，所以不妨盡可能多的使用。比如，“起”的過渡詞：目前，目前，首先首先，“承；“的過渡詞：第二，而且，而且，而且，很明顯，此外，換句話說；“轉(zhuǎn)”的過渡詞：然而，另一方面，但是，相反，Conversely; "conjunction" transitional words: therefo

19、re, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion.Zhenti playbackThe following is the June 2006 CET-4 essay and essay, outline is as follows:1. Some universities allow students to freely select teachers for certain courses2. The main factors that students consider when choosing a tea

20、cher are.3, the benefits and possible problems of students' optional teachersNowadays, there is a general discussion today about the issue of some changes on campus. Particularly, students in universities have optional choices on their teachers.A number of factors are responsible for decisions i

21、n choosing teachers. For one thing, the character of a lecturer plays a significant role in this issue, which means the teacher should meet the learners taste. For another thing ", opinions from other students are likely to bring effects on the decision. In other words, we are possibly influenc

22、ed by negative or positive words from others.Obviously, there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of this matter. On the one hand, students are treated better than before. On the other hand, some top teachers will be ignored, if they are not able to please the market. From what h

23、as been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that further attention will be paid to this matter.Fourth: fixed classics, famous attention.For example, the sentences used for the beginning of the article:1, When it comes to. People 's opinions differ.2, There is a public discussion t

24、oday about.3, There is no consensus of opinions among people as to of the viewSentences used at the end of an article:1, it is high time that we take measures to.2, judging from all evidence offered, we may safely come to the conclusion that.3, all the evidence points to the fact that.4, It is essen

25、tial that effective measures should be taken to situation. control thisSentences used to explain causes:1, Some reasons are responsible for this.2, There are lots of reasons for the dramatic growth/decrease. First,. Second,. Finally,.3, The phenomenon/change in. Mainly results from the fact that.4,

26、One may regard the phenomenon as a sign of.Fifth: focus on change, rather than simply do not abuse.Special note: in writing, we should try to avoid: first, taboo blind. Blind believe in the so-called "secret religion" or "internal disclosure test paper", four and six levels of ex

27、amination is a higher scientific domestic and English examination, in the premise of increasing safety, there is almost no chance of missing questions. Second, taboo only see not practice. Just look at the topic or think only, but not practice. The composition part of CET is to examine students'

28、 active application ability, so the candidates for at least a month before the exam should be hands-on exercises, mainly over the years writing topic for review,After writing, I will revise the model essay again, and write down the classical sentences and cohesive words in the essay to be used in th

29、e examination room.4.3 Zhenti exercisesThrough the December 2005 four model essay, Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist?1. prestigious campus is becoming a new hot spot of Tourism2. whether campus should be open to tourists, people have different views3. I think.First of all, the layout a

30、nd structure of template.Paragraph 1: asking questions or phenomena.Nowadays,. Have become one of the popular. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that. .The second paragraph: positive and negative enumeration of people's views.So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or b

31、ad thing to. Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for. In that. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. opinion In their,. Will have negative effect on. Because it will not only do harm to. But also to. .

32、The third paragraph: put your point of view.In my opinion,. Is not a good thing. With the increasing. It will ruin. .Classical representationNowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousand

33、s and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the Universities famous in their own province.So far as the present situation is concerned, is

34、 it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists Different people have different opinions.? On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the Uni

35、versity and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not on

36、ly do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.Copy sth. without

37、catching its spiritIn December 2005, the template structure imitated the four grade composition of December 2006:1. many people like to watch the Spring Festival Gala on New Year's EveTwoBut some people proposed to cancel the Spring Festival Gala3. my point of viewNowadays, the Spring Festival E

38、vening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year s Eve. It has been "shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering

39、 with their beloved family.However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening Different people have different opinions.? On the one hand, some people argued t

40、hat it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch the amusing, comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the