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1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上“感到害怕”的細(xì)節(jié)描述例子一：當(dāng)看到那只兇惡的狼時，我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。 _2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1._2_3_ 參考答案：1.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared.2. 1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟)2）At

2、the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(嚇呆了，不敢動彈)3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗)“感到興奮”的細(xì)節(jié)描述當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。1、 大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。_2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意

3、的合理。1_2_3_ 參考答案：1.When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.2. 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激動得兩眼放光）2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激動得心砰砰跳)3) When the host an

4、nounced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (興奮不能自已)“感到悲傷”的細(xì)節(jié)描述一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。 _2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。 1_2_3_ 參考答案：1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.2. 1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down h

5、er cheeks. (心痛，眼淚直流)2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲傷到失去知覺，不能開口說話)3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly.(被一股悲傷之感控制，忍不住哭泣)“感到開心”的細(xì)節(jié)描述當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時，小baby開心極了。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。_2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述

6、，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1_2_3_ 參考答案：1.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常開心) 2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile

7、 lit up the room. (眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間) 3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (歡欣雀躍)感到羞愧的細(xì)節(jié)描述她感到非常羞愧。1、 大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。_2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1_2_3_參考答案：Key 1: She felt ashamed.Key 2:1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face bu

8、rning.(臉上滾燙)2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上臉頰)3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)“感到生氣”的細(xì)節(jié)描述Sheldon感到非常生氣。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。_2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1_2_3_參考答案：Key 1: Sheldon felt very angry.Key 2:1) Sheldon felt

9、so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him. (沖出房間；狠狠摔門)2) Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火中燒；揮舞拳頭)3) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. (充滿憤怒；說不出話)“感到絕望”的細(xì)節(jié)描述Tony感到很絕望。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達(dá)清楚。_2、請你在此概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏

10、輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。1_2_3_參考答案：Key 1: Tony felt hopeless/desperate.Key 2:1) As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入絕望)2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. (感覺被遺忘、忽視)3) Tonys beliefs in looking forward

11、and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.“人的行走之態(tài)”細(xì)節(jié)描述1、踉踉蹌蹌_2、悄悄地走_(dá)3、猛沖_Keys:1. The player lost his balance, staggered back and toppled over. 這個運動員失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。2. She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window. 她溜下床，踮起腳尖走向窗戶。3. The minion made a rush for the door and escaped from the sc

12、ene. 小黃人向門沖去，逃離了現(xiàn)場。說話的方式多種多樣，如果都用talk就顯得索然無味，也不夠準(zhǔn)確，所以要多積累各種各樣的表達(dá)。1、說長道短；八卦_2、小聲咕噥_3、嚎叫_Keys:1. The whole company is gossiping about the reason for his dismissal. 整個公司都在談?wù)撍幻饴毜脑颉?. He murmured against the strict rules of the reality show. 他私下低聲抱怨真人秀的嚴(yán)苛規(guī)則。3. Treated so unfairly, she howled in pain an

13、d anger. 被如此不公正地對待，她痛苦而又憤怒的嚎叫。細(xì)節(jié)描述之“思考”如何表達(dá)一個人暗自思索時的樣子對學(xué)生來說是很困難的，大多數(shù)情況下，學(xué)生往往會選擇避開，但是，人無時無刻不在思考，強(qiáng)行避開會使得故事內(nèi)容上有些不銜接。所以，今天我們就一起來學(xué)習(xí)一下如何表達(dá)一個人的思考神態(tài)。1. 得知問題所在之后，他的大腦開始急速運轉(zhuǎn)，想要想出一個好的解決方案。2. 獨自一人時，他總是會想到那可怕的經(jīng)歷。3. 在他洗澡時，突然想到了一個好主意。 (答案見底部)Keys:1. After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, tryin

14、g to think of a good solution. (大腦飛速運轉(zhuǎn))2. When left alone, he would always be haunted by that horrible experience. (不好的回憶縈繞心頭揮之不去)3. When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly crossed his mind. (突然閃過某人的腦海)細(xì)節(jié)描述之“describe a peaceful scene”1. 享受陽光2. 山間有小屋和田地3. 入暮時分，蘆葦隨風(fēng)飄揚(答案見底部)Keys:1. When

15、 I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. (沐浴在陽光下；琥珀色的陽光親吻著全身的肌膚)2. Mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages. (點綴著)3. The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds. (優(yōu)雅地隨風(fēng)飄揚的蘆葦)細(xì)節(jié)描述之“describe stormy weather”今天，我們來看看該如何描述風(fēng)雨交加的天氣。1. 烏云密布2. 勁風(fēng)惡浪肆虐3. 暴雨疾風(fēng)(答案見底部)Keys:1. The sky is overcast, darken