初中英語作文指導(dǎo)

1、初中英語作文指導(dǎo)英語作文指導(dǎo)要想在測試有限的時間內(nèi)寫出一篇質(zhì)量上乘的書面表達(dá),須掌握熟練的解題技巧,把握幾個解題關(guān)鍵,這里介紹一種五步寫作法.1.細(xì)心審題審題,即考生動筆前通過仔細(xì)閱讀試題,明確目的要求.通過審題可以到達(dá)：(1)明確體裁.書面表達(dá)雖然重在內(nèi)容,但格式也不能無視.(2)確定內(nèi)容.弄清題目設(shè)置的情景或提供的要點(diǎn),便能緊扣題意,定什么不寫什么,做到心中有數(shù),預(yù)防隨心所欲,文不對題.(3)確定人稱.弄清命題者要求考生用什么人稱.(4)確定時態(tài)語態(tài).時態(tài)語態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用,亦是判斷書面表達(dá)好壞的一條重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn).一般說來,說明文、議論文多用一般現(xiàn)在時,記日記多用一般過去時,記敘文多用一般過去時和

2、過去進(jìn)行時.通過審題,明確體裁,知道事情發(fā)生的時間,對確定時態(tài)起著關(guān)鍵作用.2 .理順要點(diǎn)根據(jù)考綱要求,漏寫或沒寫清要點(diǎn)均要失分.理順要點(diǎn),是預(yù)防多寫、漏寫、亂寫,保證內(nèi)容完整的行之有效的方法,有的書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)并非按事件發(fā)生順序提供,考生須通過嚴(yán)密的構(gòu)思加以條理化,最好在寫作前將試題中的要點(diǎn)用筆標(biāo)出,然后按事件先后或各要點(diǎn)之間的內(nèi)在聯(lián)系排列好.3 .組織句子將理順的要點(diǎn)逐句表達(dá)出來,這是書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵的一步.完成這個步驟要注意：(1)書面表達(dá)重在達(dá)意,不要簡單直譯,而要用自己最有把握的短語或句型將意思完整表達(dá)出來,切忌使用冷僻詞語,切忌用漢語句型去套用英語,乃至寫出大量漢式英語.(2)如果碰上

3、漢語提示中一時找不著相對應(yīng)的英語詞語或句型,不要輕易放棄,要開動腦筋,學(xué)會用內(nèi)容相近的句子來表達(dá).(3)盡可能寫結(jié)構(gòu)簡單的句子,少用自己尚無把握的復(fù)合句.(4)選擇正確的人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài),注意冠詞、單復(fù)數(shù)、大小寫、標(biāo)題等.上述幾點(diǎn)在組織句子時假設(shè)能高度重視,那么錯誤便可大大減少.4 .串句成篇這個過程就是將寫好的句子連貫地組織起來,形成短文.串句成篇,絕不是將一句話一句話簡單地排在一起,要注意上下句的邏輯關(guān)系,必要時使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等意義的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語.有的書面表達(dá)還可以分段,但段與段之間要過渡自然.假設(shè)詞數(shù)少于題目要求,可適當(dāng)增加一些與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的句子；假設(shè)詞數(shù)多于題目要求

4、,也可考慮將能夠合并的句子合并起來.5 .檢查修改文章草稿寫成后,默讀一至兩遍,檢查修改,看文章是否對題,格式是否正確,內(nèi)容是否完整,文句有無語病,行文是否連貫,拼寫是否錯誤,詞數(shù)是否恰當(dāng).有的書面表達(dá)題要求考生自擬標(biāo)題,考生這時要注意不要丟掉標(biāo)題,還要注意標(biāo)題首字母的大寫(標(biāo)題中實(shí)詞那么大寫首字母,虛詞那么不必大寫)；如命題者不要求考生自擬標(biāo)題的那么不必擬標(biāo)題,以免畫蛇添足.經(jīng)過檢查修改后,再認(rèn)真譽(yù)寫,力求卷面整潔.這樣經(jīng)過周密思考、按步驟寫出來的文章,比起毫無方案、信手拈來的文章質(zhì)量肯定要好得多.書面表達(dá).(15分)暑假生活即將開始,小明打算提升他的英語成績,但不知該如何去做,請把你的秘訣

5、告訴他好嗎?timportantthingisthemethodoflearning.It'snotverydifficulttolearnEnglish.ButthemosFirstly,youcanjoinanEnglishclub.Thereyoucanpracticespeakingwithothers.Andyoucanalsomeetalotofnewfriends.Secondly,youcandomorelisteninginthemorning,listentothetapesandrepeatafterit.Inthisway,youcanimproveyourli

6、stening.Thirdly,youcanfindapen-pal,andwritetohimasoftenaspossible,yourwritingskillmustbeimproved.Allinall,Ithinkthemostimportantthingistobeconfident.書面表達(dá).15分請以HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?為題寫一篇記述文.內(nèi)容提示如下：1、長城的景色及地理位置2、游長城的感受3、文章以設(shè)問句HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?開頭.HaveyoueverbeentotheGreatWall?OK,I

7、havebeenthereonce.Thatwasasunnyday,myfriendsandItookabustotheGreatWall.Whenwegotthefootofit,wesawalotofvisitors.Webegantoclimbthewall.Atthistimewesawthebeautifulscenery,thewallislikeahugedragon.theGreatWallisfamousasitsoldwallsintheworld.It'snotfarfromthecityofBeijing.It'ssaidthatitisoneofth

8、esevenwondersintheworld.It'sverylong,themostfamouswallisBadalingWall,I'mproudthatIgottothetopofthewall.Thoughwewerealltired,wefeltveryhappy.書面表達(dá)1假設(shè)你的新筆友叫Mikeo請你給他寫一封回信,介紹你的情況.信的內(nèi)容必須包括：你的姓名,年齡,所就讀的學(xué)校,年級、班級,愛好,最喜歡的學(xué)科及理由,最喜歡的影片及理由等.信的內(nèi)容不得少于十句話.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出.January12th,.2002DearMike,Thanksforyourl

9、etter.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Yours,BobJanuary12th,2002DearMike,Thanksforyourletter,NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Mynameisxx.I'mtwelve.IstudyatBeiDaResourceMiddleSchool,I'minclassFourGradeOne.MyfavoritesubjectisscienceandIalsoLikegeography.Becausetheyarevery

10、importantanduseful.ILikeplayingtheviolin.Ilikeanactionmovie.Becauseitisexciting.Whataboutyou?Doyoulikeanactionmovie?pleasewritetotellmesoon.書面表達(dá)2請你仔細(xì)閱讀下面的招聘廣告.lBoysandgirlsaged12-15.lAreyougoodwithchildren?lHappykidswintercampNeedshelpwith:lsportsmusiccomputerslComeandjoinus!Sendyourpersonal(個人infor

11、mationtohkwc163假設(shè)你是李平想要應(yīng)聘,請你根據(jù)招聘廣告中的要求,在表格空白處至少填出兩項(xiàng)你所能做的事情.并根據(jù)表格中的所有信息,發(fā)一封e-mail,介紹你的個人情況、興趣愛好及水平.字?jǐn)?shù)4060.信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出NamageASchoolLikean11LiPing31No.3MiddleSchoolReading,computers,PlayingbasketballDearsir,IwanttojoinyourWinterCamptohelpthechildrenwithsportsandmusic.MyIthinkIcanbegoodwiththechildrenand

12、Ihopetogetyourlettersoon.Yours,LiPingDearsir,IwanttojoinyourWinterCamptohelpthechildrenwithsportsandmusic.MynameisLiPingIamthirteen(yearsold).Istudy/amastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.Ilikereadingandplayingbasketball.Ilikecomputers,too.Icanplayfootballwell.IcanstagmanyEnglishsongs,AndIcandanceandswim.Ican

13、surftheInternetandsende-mails.IthinkIcanbegoodwiththechildrenandIhopetogetyourlettersoon.Yours,LiPing(書面表達(dá)3)根據(jù)提示,請以“SchoolRules為題,寫一篇短文或?qū)υ捥崾荆好克鶎W(xué)校都有規(guī)章制度,下面是你們學(xué)校的一些規(guī)章制度,請你向一位新生Mary作一下介紹.內(nèi)容包括：1 .上課不能遲到.2 .教室要保持(keep)干凈和安靜.3 .見到老師要問好.greet4 .不允許在教室里吃東西.5 .不許在課堂上聽音樂,玩游戲.6 .不要損害花草樹木.pickflowers;climbtrees

14、SchoolRulesWelcometoourschool,Mary.Herearesomeofourschoolrules.Letmetellyou:Wecan'tarrivelateforclass.Wecan'ttalkloudlyinclass.Wehavetobequietinclass,andwehavetokeepourclassclean.Whenwemeettheteachersontheway,wemustgreetthem.Wecan'teatordrinkintheclassroom.Butwecaneatoutside.Wecan'tl

15、istentomusicorplaygamesinclass,either.Wecan'tpickflowersorclimbtrees.書面表達(dá)4根據(jù)以下中英文提示寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的一段話.不少于50個字Jim是個中學(xué)生,學(xué)習(xí)努力,平時喜歡上網(wǎng)沖浪和看英語書.他每周鍛煉一至兩次,飲食習(xí)慣良好,天天步行上學(xué),身體健康.提示詞：Internet,onceortwice,eatinghabit,hardly,junkfood,healthyJimisahighschoolstudent.Heworkshardatschool.HeusuallylikessurfingtheInter

16、netandreadingEnglishbooks.Heexercisesonceortwiceaweek.Hehasgoodeatinghabits.Hehardlyevereatsjunkfood.Everydayhegoestoschoolonfoot.Soheisveryhealthy.書面表達(dá)5根據(jù)提示寫一封6080字的信.Tom邀請LiPing參加他這周日的生日宴會,但LiPing的父母出差要到下個月回來,奶奶又臥病在床,需要人照顧.再說英語測試即將來臨,因此,無法前去參加生日宴會.LiPing感到很抱歉,只好寫信辭謝.DearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvi

17、tingmetoyourbirthdayparty.I'dlovetogobutIcan't.Myparent.FromLiPingDearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourbirthdayparty.I'dlovetogobutIcan't.Myparentsareoutonbusiness.Theyarecomingbacknextmonth.AndnowIhavetolookaftermygrandmabecausesheisillinbed.AndIalsoneedtostudyformycomingEngli

18、shexam.I'mverysorrybutIcan'tgotoyourparty.Thankyouforaskingme.Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.書面表達(dá)6請用所給資料寫一篇短文.Name:LiBinDateofbirth:September12th,19901996:startedtolearnEnglish1999:startedtoplaybasketball2002:jointheschoolboys'basketballteam2003:winthefirstprizeofEnglishSpeechContestatschoolLi

19、Binismygoodfriend.Hewasbornonthe12thofSeptember,1990.HismotherisanEnglishteacher.SohestartedtolearnEnglishwhenhewassix.Hestartedtoplaybasketballattheageofnine.Heplayedwellandhejoinedtheschoolboys'basketballteamin2002.LastyearhewonthefirstprizeoftheEnglishSpeechContestatschool.書面表達(dá)7根據(jù)以下班級活動調(diào)查表,用英

20、語寫一篇文章.Class12,Grade8:ActivitySurveyActivityEveryDayTwiceaWeekFourTimesaWeekWatchTV60%20%20%HaveSports10%20%70%Dohomework100%0%0%Allstudents=100%Moststudents=51環(huán)99%Somestudents=1%50%Nostudents=0%HerearetheresultsofthestudentactivitysurveyinClass12,Grade8.MoststudentswatchTVeveryday.Somestudentswatch

21、TVtwiceaweek.SomestudentswatchTVfourtimesaweek.Somestudentshavesportseveryday.Somestudentshavesportstwiceaweek.Moststudentshavesportsfourtimesaweek.Allthestudentsdohomeworkeveryday.Nostudentsdohomeworktwiceorfourtimesaweek.書面表達(dá)8根據(jù)以下第三中學(xué)八年級3班學(xué)生上學(xué)方式的調(diào)查表,用英語寫一篇短文.不少于70個單詞.許俊語輔導(dǎo)嚴(yán)iI+經(jīng)驗(yàn)=好成績！上

22、學(xué)方式BusWalkingBikeCar學(xué)生人數(shù)1510250TherearefiftystudentsinClass1,Grade8atYuyingMiddleSchool.Everydaytheygotoschoolindifferentways.Fifteenstudentstakebusesbecausetheylivefarfromtheschool.Tenstudentswalk.Theythinkwalkingisgoodfortheirhealthandtheyliveneartheschool.Twenty-fivestudentsridetheirbikestoschool

23、becausetheylikeridingbikesverymuchandtheirhomesarenotveryfarfromtheschool.Noonegoestoschoolbycar(書面表達(dá)9)一些英國朋友要來參加你們班舉行的英語晚會.作為主持人,你需要用英語準(zhǔn)備一份60-80個詞的歡送辭.包括以下英文提示的內(nèi)容(開頭已給出)：1. thenumberofstudents(boys32,girls28)2. WhatdoyouthinkofEnglish?3. HowdoyoulearnEnglishinyourfreetime(magazines,TV,radio,etc)?4.

24、 YourEnglishprograms(plays,songs,etc).5. ending(結(jié)束語)Goodevening!Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoourclassandwelcometoourEnglishEvening.Firstofall,letmesayafewwordsaboutourclass.Goodevening!Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoourclassandwelcometoourEnglishEvening.Firstofall,letmesayafewwordsaboutourclass.Thereare

25、60studentsinourclass.32ofusareboysandtheothersaregirls.MostofuslikeEnglishandstudyhardatit.InourfreetimeweoftenreadEnglishbooks,newspapersandmagazines.SometimeswelearnEnglishontheradioandsometimesonTV.Thiseveningyou'llenjoysomeshortplays,songs,dancesandsoonbyourclassmates.Ihopeyou'lllikethes

26、eprogramsandhaveagoodtime.Thankyou!(書面表達(dá)10)請你寫一篇制作玉米花(popcorn)的小短文.注意使用first,next,then,finally等表示過程的詞.不少于50個詞.HowtomakepopcornIlikepopcornverymuch.Ilearnedfrommymotherhowtomakepopcorn.Nowletmeshowyoutheways.Firstyouputthepopcornintothepopper.Next,turnonthepopper.Waitforseveralminutes.Thenyoupourthep

27、opcornintothebowl.Andputsaltonthepopcorn.Finallyyoucaneatthepopcorn.書面表達(dá)11根據(jù)以下情況寫一篇短文介紹你的這位筆友李華,英文名叫Tony,是第一中學(xué)一年級二班的學(xué)生.他出生于1989年8月12日.他的出生地在廣東深圳.他今年13歲,愛好音樂和籃球.他喜歡英語,愛玩電腦游戲.他經(jīng)常放學(xué)后與同學(xué)打籃球.B寫短文介紹,開頭已給出Ihaveagoodpenpal.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.Ihaveagoodpenfriend.Letmetellyousomethingabouthim.Hisna

28、meisLiHua.HehasanEnglishname.ItisTony.HeisamiddleschoolstudentinClassTwo,GradeOneofNo.1MiddleSchool.Heis13yearsoldnow.HewasborninShenzhen,Guangdong.HisbirthdayisAugustthetwentieth.Helikesplayingbasketballandlisteningtomusic.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.HisfavouritesubjectisEngl

29、ishandhelikesplayingcomputergamesbest.Iliketowritetohim.Heismygoodfriend.書面表達(dá)請你以校辦公室的名義用英語發(fā)一那么Noticeo告知初二學(xué)生明天將去四個地方作調(diào)查,考前須知寫在提示里,題目：Notice.寫作提示：1 .visitfourplaces2 .tomorrow,leaveafterbreakfastat8:003 .lunchattheplaceofvisit4 ebackintheafternoon5 .fourgroups,eachgrouptoaplace6 .eachclassagroup,saywh

30、ichplaceyouwanttovisit,thentelltheofficeNoticeAllthestudentsinGradeTwowillvisitfourplacestomorrow.Youwillleaveschoolafterbreakfastat8o'clock.Lunchwillbeattheplaceofvisit.Allmustcomebackintheafternoon.Eachclasswillbeagroup.There'llbefourgroupstogether.Eachgroupwillvisitaplace.Pleasetellthesch

31、oolofficewhichplaceyouwanttovisit.SchoolOfficeinNo.14MiddleSchoolMay16th,2005書面表達(dá)你和你的好朋友Jean發(fā)生了爭執(zhí),在自我反省過后,你覺得有必要給她寫一封信向她抱歉,并向她提一些意見.請就此向她發(fā)一封e-mail表示你的誠意,60詞以上.DearJean,1.Iamsorrytoarguewithyouseveraldaysago.Wehaven'ttalkedwitheachotherthesedays.Youaremybestfriend,aren'tyou?FewdaysagowhenIhea

32、rdyoulostmylovelybook,Iwasreallymad,soIarguedwithyou,andsaidthatIcouldnotbeyourfriendfromthenon.Later,Ididn'tsleepwellthosedays.Ialwaysrememberedalotoffunwehad.SoIdecidedtowritealettertosaysorrytoyou.Ialsothinkyoushouldbecarefulandtakegoodcareofyourthings.Let'sbebestfriendsagain,OK?書面表達(dá)請你談?wù)勗?/p>

33、本學(xué)期有何打算或方案,就此寫一篇短文,題目自擬,詞數(shù)80左右.ThistermIshouldstudyharder.Iamgoodatmath,physicsandsciencelessons.MyEnglishisnotgood.IthinkIshouldlearnfrommyfriendNari.HisEnglishisgood.Perhapshewouldliketohelpme.Teachersaid,mycompositionswerenotgood.SoIshouldreadmoreusefulbooksafterclass.IbelieveIwilldowellinEnglish

34、.Ontheotherway,Ishoulddomoreexercise,thiswillmakemestrong.Ilikeplayingballgames.AfterclassIshouldmakemorefriends,becausethemorewearetogether,thehappierweare.Yoursever,Julia書面表達(dá)假設(shè)彳叫HanMeimei,現(xiàn)在青州一中上學(xué).你的筆友Mary邀請你去參加聚會.請你用英語寫一封信給Mary要點(diǎn)如下：1 .你很抱歉,不能去.2 .你母親病了,醫(yī)生叫她臥床幾日,你要照顧母親.3 .謝謝她寄來的漂亮的明信片,你很喜歡,將它放在書桌上

35、.No.1MiddleSchoolQingzhouMarch8,2003DearMary,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourparty.ButIamverysorryIcan'tcome.Mymotherisill.Thedoctoraskshertostayinbedforseveraldays.Ihavetotakecareofmymother.Ilikeitverymuch.IamThankyouverymuchforsendingmesuchabeautifulpostcardgoingtoputitonmydesk.CouldIhearfr

36、omyousoon?Givemybestwishestoyourfamily.Yours,(書面表達(dá))你有集郵(collectstamps)的愛好嗎？請談?wù)勀慵]的歷史.如果沒有,也可以談?wù)勀銊e的愛好,以此為內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的短文.Iliketocollectmanythings,suchasnicestones,namesofmovies,books,toys,photosoffamouspeople.ButIlikecollectingstampsbest.Ihavebeencollectingstampsforfiveyears.WhenIwasveryyoung,myunclese

37、ntmeastampfromAustralia.Iloveditatonce.SincethenItriedtocollectstampsandfellinlovewithit.Ihavemorethanonehundredstamps.Someweresentbymyfriends,somewerecollectedbymyself;somewerefromfoiregncountries,somewereChinese.Ilikethem.Often,Itakethemoutandshowthemtomyfriends.(書面表達(dá))Kelly今天生日,你準(zhǔn)備為她準(zhǔn)備一次surprisepa

38、rty,并邀請你的朋友參加,并且還準(zhǔn)備了一頓specialmeal.請用英語介紹你的準(zhǔn)備情況及邀請的客人.需要用到的單詞及短語：invite,ready,present,laugh,haveagoodtimeTodayisKelly'sbirthday.Sheismybestfriend.I'mgoingtohaveasurprisepartyforherinmyhouse.IinvitedLeina,Sally,Macia,andmanyotherfriends.Allofthemareteenagers.Leinapromisedtobringsomedrinks.Sallywillbringsomesnacks.Davidsaidhewouldbringsomeflowersandpictures.Iboughtabigcakeandapresentforher.Iamgoingtogetreadyforaspecialmeal.Iboughthumburgers,Frenchfries,andImadesomesalad.Kellylikeshamburgersandfruitsalad.Macialikescak