100句第5次課第61

1、61. 人口的擴大是大量垃圾產(chǎn)生的原因正確的句子:Therapidpopulationexpansionisthemainreasonforthehugeaccumulationofwaste.我的句子：Theenlargement指size或者amount的增加用在這里不合適enlarge有尺寸上的擴大比如enlargeone'sbreasts或者增加知識enlargeone'svocabularyofpopulationisthereasonof建議用forenormousrubbish.Expansion(n)擴大，urbanexpansion城市擴張Population

2、expansion(不可數(shù)n)人口增長若前面加adjeg.Rapidpopulationexpansion,則可數(shù)前面應(yīng)加the/aExpand(v)擴大同義詞：growth(不可數(shù)n)eg.Economicgrowth/development經(jīng)濟發(fā)展Reason:reasonfor加名詞短語或thereasonwhy/thereasonisthat這里的that是表語加句子/thereasonthatthat作賓語時，可省略，that作表語不可省略垃圾:waste/garbage/rubbish/trashUN家庭產(chǎn)生的垃圾householdwasteTheincreaseinpopulat

3、ion人口增長此處為名詞若用increasing為adj后接名詞Accumulation(n)積累，不斷增加變多積累數(shù)據(jù)theaccumulationofdataaccumulate(v)積累財富accumulatewealthTheexpandofpopulationisthemainreasonofenormousrubbishExpand為動詞錯誤Reasonof不建議使用建議用reasonfor此句邏輯存在問題不能說人口擴大是大量垃圾的原因，可以說人口增長時大量垃圾產(chǎn)生的原因改：Therapidexpansionofpopulationisthemainreasonforthehuge

4、accumulationofenormousrubbish.TheincreasedpopulationisthereasonformasrubbishIncreased不正確用increasing邏輯問題人口增長不是大量垃圾的原因改:Theincreasingpopulationisthereasonforthehugeaccumulationofenormouswaste.62. 嚴格的懲罰是減少犯罪率的有效手段正確的句子:Stiffpunishmentisaneffectivemethodtoreducecrime.我的句子:Strictpunishmentisanefficientwa

5、ytoreducethecrimerate表語可以由不定式充當嚴厲的懲罰：Stiff/harsh/strictSerious口語中的嚴重的eg.ItisaseriousproblemMethod方法（眾所周知的，經(jīng)常使用的方法）methodfor表目的methodof的方法Effective元音開頭，用an有效的Punishment懲罰可數(shù)/不可數(shù)懲罰某人（可數(shù)或不可數(shù)）體罰：非正式punishment（不適用大作文）不可數(shù)nStiffpunishment嚴格的懲罰不可數(shù)犯罪：crime可數(shù)/不可數(shù)總稱時不可數(shù)具體的行為，犯罪時可數(shù)Commit（a）crime犯罪4口罪率crimerateRe

6、ducecrime減少犯罪PreventcrimeCombatcrime阻止犯罪打擊犯罪下降：decline下降（vi）只有sthdeclines拒絕（vt）declinetodosthDecrease：Somethingdecrease.不能說somethingreduce只能用decrease表達數(shù)據(jù)下降不能用reduce334ElaineCriminal罪犯本句語義不通應(yīng)說減少罪犯的數(shù)量改:Strictpunishmentisaneffectivemethodtoreducethenumberofcriminals.?1Hrivtdisciplinesnrthcdtoreduc白crim

7、irialwE一Discipline指的是規(guī)則或?qū)W科意思不正確Rate可數(shù)n不能用criminal用crimeThecrimerate改:Strictpunishmentistheeffectivemethodtoreducethecrimerate:131-KEN-0114Strictpunishmentisaneffectivemethodtoreducetherateofoffense.Therateofoffense不準確表示犯罪率用crimerateOffense與crime一樣的用法commitacrime改：Strictpunishmentisaneffectivemethodt

8、oreducethecrimerate.63. 我們的環(huán)境還是很糟糕。正確的句子:Ourenvironmentisstillinadirestate.我的句子:Ourenvironmentisstillawful.介詞短語充當表語此處環(huán)境為大自然環(huán)境形容詞性物主代詞后加名詞后面名詞不用變復(fù)數(shù)或加theEg.Ourcars/orcar糟糕的狀態(tài)：inadire（可怕的，悲慘的）statedire（可怕的，悲慘的）程度較深extremelyterriblestate/condition表示狀態(tài)可數(shù)n別裸奔inabad/terriblestate程度沒有dire深thestate表示政府一般不可數(shù)單

9、數(shù)形式bad（adj）副詞badly極其狠（adv）程度副詞Mess一團*曹inamesseg.Myroomisinamess表示不干凈的情況時是單數(shù)不可數(shù)可用suchamessEgtheeconomyisinaterriblemess.改:Ourenvironmentisstillinamess.64. 因為失業(yè)率高升，大學(xué)生感到有壓力去努力學(xué)習(xí)正確的句子:Undergraduatesfeelunderincreasingpressuretostudyhard,becauseofthesoaringunemploymentrate.我的句子:Becauseoftheincreaseinthe

10、unemploymentrate,undergraduatesareforced不恰當這個表示武力強迫tostudyunderpressure系動詞可以由remain/feel/touch/sound充當大學(xué)生：undergraduates/universitystudents/collegestudents可數(shù)graduates表示畢業(yè)了的人postgraduates研究生壓力彳艮大：Undergreat/(adj)pressurePressured指焦慮,擔(dān)心,憂慮失業(yè)率：Unemploymentrate可數(shù)名詞Soaring又快又高的Becauseof介詞，后接短語引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句oft

11、heincreasingunemploymentrate,feelapressuretostudyhard.Graduates表達不準確用undergraduates改：Becauseoftheincreasingunemploymentrate,undergraduatesfeelunderpressuretostudyhard.lL-<EN-0Graduatesfeestressedtostudyhardduetotheclimbingunemploymentrate.Graduates表達不準確用undergraduatesStressed表示焦慮，憂慮不表示壓力大表示動詞時為強調(diào)

12、的意思改：Undergraduateswhoareunderpressurewouldstudyhardduetothehighunemploymentrate.65. 種族歧視仍然很嚴重。正確的句子:Racialdiscriminationremainsaseriousproblem.我的句子：Racialdiscriminationisstillseriousinoursociety.種族歧視：Racialdiscrimination不可數(shù)n/RacialProfiling/stereotyping性另U歧視:Sex/genderdiscrimination宗教歧視：Religiousdi

13、scriminationDiscriminationagainst對歧視嚴重的問題aseriousproblem/inaseriousstituationRacismisstillsevereSevere嚴重的terribleRacism種族主義用詞不當改：Racialdiscriminationremainsaseriousproblem.66. 死記乘法表并不是提高算術(shù)能力的最好方式。正確的句子:Learningthetimestablebyroteisnotthebestwaytoimprovenumeracy.我的句子：Learningthetimestablebyroteisnota

14、goodwaytoimprovethearithmeticalability.(Abilitytodocalculations.)死記乘法表：thetimestablebyrote.(multiplicationtable)乘法表timetable時刻表Rote名詞不斷重復(fù)的記憶，不去理解Learningsthbyrote/rote(n)learning或用memoriesArithmetic表示學(xué)科arithmetical指technical學(xué)術(shù)上的算數(shù)相關(guān)的arithmeticalability不準確Arithmeticmean算數(shù)平均值Numeracy算數(shù)能力Literacy讀寫能力Im

15、provenumeracyskills提升算數(shù)能力ItIsnotdnttffectlveapproachtoefihancetfwdrilhmelicdDilit/byreclungibetimesubtebyroteApproach方法Arithmeticability用詞不恰當用numeracyRecite引用此處不正確改：Itisnotaneffectiveapproachtoimprovenumeracybylearningthetimestablebyrote.MemorisedthetimestablesnotthebestwaytnincreasetheabilityMemori

16、zed(v)thetimestable錯誤Increasetheabilityincrease用的不準確應(yīng)該用improve且這里的ability不清楚是啥改：Learningthemultiplicationtablebyroteisnotthebestwaytoimprovenumeracy.0ia4SJO107ricitingtime-tableisnotthebestwaytoimprovetheskillofcalculateReciting不準確加連字符不準確Time-table加連字符不準確用timestableTimetable是時刻表Theskillofcalculate不正

17、確theof結(jié)構(gòu)前后都是名詞改:Learningtimestablebyroteisnotthebestwaytoimprovetheabilitytodocalculations.67. 貧窮國家的首要問題是滿足人們基本生存需求。正確的句子:Thetoppriorityfordeprivedcountriesistosatisfycitizens'basicneeds.我的句子：Whatpoorcountriesshoulddofirst不要寫這種句子在大作文里istosolvepeople'fundamentalrequirements指要求的意思.不建議使用在這里用詞伙b

18、asicneeds首要解決的任務(wù)：priority優(yōu)先權(quán)，優(yōu)先考慮的事不可數(shù)nthetop/highpriorityfor貧困國家：Poor/deprived（經(jīng)濟貧窮的）countries滿足：Satisfy/meetCaterfor迎合此處用不準確Basicneeds基本的需求，生存需求：衣食住行，不需要livingCoverbasicneeds滿足基本開銷Povertyneg.Thecountriesinpoverty.貧窮的Poverty-stricken（非常窮的）countries/areasDisadvantaged（貧困的）countries/areasCitizen居民可數(shù)n

19、61&7R1S022STheforemostgwbl削ofdiudlvartaigdcountries值tosatisfypeople'sliving阿Foremost表示重要，最好褒義詞加problem很奇怪Basiclivingneeds其中l(wèi)iving多余改:Thetoppriorityfordisadvantagedcountriesistosatisfypeople'sbasicneeds.Theprwbemfurdtpihtodddrtspeople十Lusktwtrdb.=_Priorityproblem沒有這種表達Address表示解決問題不能這么表達改

20、:Thetoppriorityfordeprivedcountriesistosatisfycitizens'basicneeds.68. 基因食物對健康的影響仍然未知。正確的句子:ThehealtheffectofGEfoodremainsunclear/yettobeknown.我的句子:Theinfluencesofwhethergenetic（genetically）engineerinci（engineered）fooddoharmorgood啰嗦tohealtharestillunknown.基因食物就是指轉(zhuǎn)基因食物：Geneticallymodified/engineer

21、edfoodGeneticengineering基因工程對健康的影響：thehealtheffect（詞伙）仍然未知:remainunclear（理解上不清晰）/yettobeknown/remainunknownObscure模糊的unsure不確定的兩個不表示未知69. Remain仍然包含still的意思若用了就不要用still網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物對于很多人已經(jīng)成為生活中的很普通的一部分。正確的句子:Onlineshoppinghasbecomeanormalpartofpeople'severydaylife.我的句子：Forsomepeople,onlineshoppinghasbeen

22、anormalpartoflife.遠程學(xué)習(xí)onlinecourse網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物onlineshopping(n)/shopping(v)onlinePart前有形容詞修飾加aeg.anormalpart沒有adj修飾不用加人們的日常生活，生活狀況Everyday(daily)life/livesNormal正常的副詞normally表示通常Common普遍共有ordinary常見的普通的anordinarybikeOnllineshoppinghasbecomeanormallypartofmanypeople"slifePart為n用adj修飾不用副詞normally改:Online

23、shoppinghasbecomeanormalpartofmanypeople'slife.f172Sqf!§voriclofe定shoppingonlinehavebecameacommonpartofpeoplesdailylives主謂不一致改：Shoppingonlinehasbecomeanormalpartofpeople'sdailylives70.在一個消費社會里，人們不再滿足生活必需品(barenecessities。正確的句子:Intheconsumersociety,barenecessitiesarenotableto(改成cannot更好)

24、satisfypeople'sneeds.我的句子：Inamassconsumersociety,peoplearenolongerjustsatisfied做形容詞時加with表示滿意barenecessities.Beableto一般指人不是人做主語cannot更好消費型的社會intheconsumersociety(可數(shù)n)thethrowawayculture消費型的文化生活必需品：bare/basicnecessities詞伙沒有dailynecessities這種表達！不能滿足于:satisfyone'sneedsBenotsatisfiedwith不滿意但不表示不

25、滿足P&oplecannanittatheLifeintijralobjertinsconsumesociety,Integral(adj)object錯誤改：Intheconsumersociety,barenecessitiesarenotableto(改成cannot更好)satisfypeople"sneeds.3305Joey021169Jnaconsumingsociety,peoplecantbesatisfiedwithbarenecessities.Cannot不能縮寫沒有consumingsociety只有consumersocietyBenotsatis

26、fiedwith不滿意但不表示不滿足改：Inaconsumersociety,barenecessitiescannotsatisfypeople"sneeds.F虹PeoplenolongerwtiMwdth住b宙德n會in【EDHSumer知ciHy*Satisfiedadj此句無謂語動詞改：Peoplearenolongersatisfiedthebarenecessitiesinaconsumersociety.71. 人們不健康的生活方式是他們傾向于依賴科技的結(jié)果。正確的句子:People'sunhealthylifestyle(lifestyles)is(are)

27、theresultoftheirtendencytorelyheavilyontechnology.我的句子:People'sunhealthylifestylesaretheresultoftotallydependingontechnology.生活方式lifestyle一個單詞過度依賴于：RelyheavilyonIstheresultof.of后面為定語，修飾resultAtendencyto(do)傾向Technology(technologies)科技也可以寫成:Becauseofpeople'tendencytorelyheavilyontechnology,th

28、eyleadanunhealthylifestyle.72. 貧窮是社區(qū)犯罪上升的原因。正確的句子:Povertyisresponsibleforthecrimewaveinmanycommunities.我的句子：Povertyisthemainreasonfortheincreaseincommunitycrimes.沒有這個表達的原因可以用reason或isresponsiblefor前原因后結(jié)果for后加名詞短語社區(qū)犯罪：用地點狀語翻譯crimewaveinmanycommunities社區(qū)犯罪上升的原因：Theincreaseincommunities'crimerates.

29、Crimewave可數(shù)n用單數(shù)Beresponsiblefor是的原因Takeresponsibilityfordoingsth對承擔(dān)責(zé)任772.PovertyisthereasonofTh-eincreaseincrimiinfllrate.Reasonof不建議用用reasonfor犯罪率crimerates改:Povertyisthereasonfortheincreaseincrimerates.72、Communitycrimeraiseisbecauseofpoverty,Raise為動詞raisemoney籌款raiseyourhands本句兩動詞改:Povertyisthere

30、asonfortheincreaseincrimerates.73. 電子汽車的發(fā)明是我們維護環(huán)境所做努力的其中一部分。正確的句子:Theinventionofelectricvehiclesispartofourefforttosustaintheenvironment.我的句子:Theinventionofelectriccarsisjustapartofoureffortstoprotecttheenvironment.Innovation為創(chuàng)新等同于creativity不可數(shù)，創(chuàng)新的點子為可數(shù)nPart前有形容詞修飾加aeg.anormalpartof沒有adj修飾不用加Playapa

31、rtin/playarolein扮演角色Electronicdevices電子產(chǎn)品Electrical和電相關(guān)的electricalapplies/anelectricalengineer電工Electric用電馬區(qū)動的electricguitar/electricvehicles保護環(huán)境:Preserve/protect/sustainSustainableagriculture可持續(xù)農(nóng)業(yè)001uIl0114Part不對努力和work不一樣用efforts改:Theinventionofelectricautomobilesispartofoureffortstopreservetheenv

32、ironment.yLO96mmnniO121Theinvestigationofelectricvehicesisapartofoureffortsonprotectingtheervironmet.Investigation調(diào)查這里要用發(fā)明inventionApart中a省掉用efforttodosth不用on改:Theinventionofelectricvehiclesispartofoureffortstoprotecttheenvironment.74.送貴重的禮物(lavishgifts)是中國的習(xí)慣。正確的句子:ItisverycommonforChinesepeopletoe

33、xchangelavishgifts.我的句子:ItisverycommoninChinatosendlavishgiftsItis形式主語不定式為真正主語送貴重的禮物：exchangelavish(奢侈的)gifts也可以用traditionCommon常見的普遍的也可以用動名詞做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)iSO.udyOlO?Itisatraditionhabitat/customthatsenesomebodytolavishgiftsHabitat棲息地Sendsbsthorsendsthtosb改：ItisaChinesetraditiontosendlavishgifts.75.未來幾十年我們很難保護植物多樣性正確的句子:Wewillfinditdifficulttopreservebiodiversityinthecomingdecades.我的句子:Itishardforustopreservebiodiversityinthecomingdecades.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+謂語+賓語(it,形式賓語)+賓語補足語(difficult),而不定式是真正的賓語tod。才是真賓語Itisdifficultf