GuidedWriting考前指導(dǎo)

1、Guided Writing 專訓(xùn)專訓(xùn)2014屆屆高考高考Guided Writing基本解題步驟：基本解題步驟： Step 1: 審題審題：確定體裁，主題：確定體裁，主題 （不同體裁有不（不同體裁有不同寫作模板）同寫作模板） Step 2: 構(gòu)思構(gòu)思：列出各段落提綱：列出各段落提綱 Para 1: 開頭（開頭（Beginning）-提出主題提出主題 Para 2: 正文正文 (Body) (根據(jù)題目要求確定內(nèi)容根據(jù)題目要求確定內(nèi)容) Para 3: 結(jié)論（結(jié)論（Conclusion）-高度概括，升華高度概括，升華主題或呼吁主題或呼吁 Step 3: 成文成文：注意各段落之間，各句之間的銜：注

2、意各段落之間，各句之間的銜接接 (注重連接詞的使用注重連接詞的使用) Step 4: 潤色潤色：嘗試高分句型及成語和諺語：嘗試高分句型及成語和諺語 (注重注重積累積累)演講稿演講稿某校高三學(xué)生秦奮為了提高他最為薄弱的英語學(xué)科某校高三學(xué)生秦奮為了提高他最為薄弱的英語學(xué)科每晚挑燈夜戰(zhàn)，終因體力不支昏倒在課堂上。假如每晚挑燈夜戰(zhàn)，終因體力不支昏倒在課堂上。假如你是秦奮的同學(xué)你是秦奮的同學(xué)，請以此為戒，寫一篇，請以此為戒，寫一篇致高一高二致高一高二學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的演講稿學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的演講稿，包含以下內(nèi)容：，包含以下內(nèi)容： 簡述高三學(xué)生課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)日益繁重的現(xiàn)狀；簡述高三學(xué)生課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)日益繁重的現(xiàn)狀； 簡要分析造成

3、此情形的原因；簡要分析造成此情形的原因； 提出若干緩解課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的建議。提出若干緩解課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的建議。 審題：審題： 主題：高三學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)主題：高三學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān) (study burden of senior 3 students) 體裁：演講稿體裁：演講稿+描述描述+議論議論 構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思： Para 1: 演講稿格式演講稿格式 Hello, everyone! (演講對象演講對象) Para 2: 提出主題，簡述高三學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的現(xiàn)狀提出主題，簡述高三學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的現(xiàn)狀 Senior 3 student be admitted to university burn oil into midnight

4、be burdened with homework be worn out/exhausted faint in class Para 3: 簡要分析原因簡要分析原因 The reasons contributing to this situation may be as follows: 1) wish to be admitted to the university 2) bad habits of learning and low efficiency of study Para 4：論述若干建議：論述若干建議 1) relieve study burden take proper ex

5、ercise and have moderate entertainment) 2) improve learning efficiency form good habits set scientific timetables Hello, everyone! As a senior 3 student, I feel honored to stand here to share some of my feelings with you. Maybe you have already heard one of my classmates Qingfen fainted in class as

6、a result of getting exhausted after burning oil till midnight for several days to improve his English. It is not unusual for our senior 3 students to stay up late at night. And the reasons contributing to this situation may be as follows: On one hand, with the wish to be admitted to the university,

7、Senior 3 students are always burdened with too much assignment and pressure, which will somehow result in their physical and mental problems. On the other hand, bad habits of learning and low efficiency of study are also two factors for the students exhaustion. Under this circumstance, I have some a

8、dvice for all of you. There is no doubt that too much pressure will lead to the opposite effect on the students study. So first of all, you can take regular exercise and have moderate entertainment to keep yourself at ease. In addition, from now on, effective learning skills should be developed and

9、scientific timetables and learning plans should be worked out to improve your efficiency of study. And I firmly believe that great efforts with effective strategies will lead you to the final success. So much for my speech. Thank you for your listening! Practice: 假設(shè)你將作為高三畢業(yè)生代表，在畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用假設(shè)你將作為高三畢業(yè)生代表，在

10、畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用英文作一簡短的告別演講。演講內(nèi)容包括：英文作一簡短的告別演講。演講內(nèi)容包括： 對高中生活的懷念對高中生活的懷念 對老師，對母校的感謝對老師，對母校的感謝 對同學(xué)的祝福對同學(xué)的祝福 審題：審題： 體裁：演講稿體裁：演講稿 主題：畢業(yè)告別主題：畢業(yè)告別 構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思： 畢業(yè)晚會(huì)畢業(yè)晚會(huì) at the graduation ceremony 告別告別 say farewell to 高三畢業(yè)生代表高三畢業(yè)生代表 the representative of senior 3 graduates 從學(xué)校畢業(yè)從學(xué)校畢業(yè) graduate from the high school 感謝某人感謝某人

11、 say/extend thanks to sb. be thankful/grateful to sb. 我們一起度過的日子成為了彼此的回憶。我們一起度過的日子成為了彼此的回憶。 The days that we spent together will be the unforgettable memory of each other. The days when we worked hard will be our memory. 我祝愿你們夢想成真。我祝愿你們夢想成真。 We wish all of you to make your dreams come true. We wish t

12、hat all the senior 3 students could realize your dreams. Dear teachers and students, In this glorious summer, we will say goodbye! People who have experienced life in high school will say: three years of high school time is so impressive and profound. The past three years has been really a wonderful

13、 journey with laughter and tears. This is not only due to living under high pressure ,faced with piled of test paper ,but also when we spare no effort to study but achieve nothing. Anyway, we benefit a lot from the life in senior 3. In the three years life, our teachers contribute their time, energy

14、, love and whole heart to all of us. Here, we are extremely grateful to all that our dear teachers have done for us. Finally, todays graduation is not only a summary of yesterday, but a new start of tomorrow as well. Now, I represent the whole school to wish all senior 3 students to make their dream

15、s come true in the college entrance examination and in the future. Thats all, thank you! 書信書信閔行區(qū)一模閔行區(qū)一模 志志 愿愿 者者 招招 募募 愛共線是由民間發(fā)起的愛心公益組織，主要致力愛共線是由民間發(fā)起的愛心公益組織，主要致力于貧困地區(qū)兒童相關(guān)的援助項(xiàng)目。于貧困地區(qū)兒童相關(guān)的援助項(xiàng)目。 我們期待你的加入！我們期待你的加入！ 崗位崗位1：網(wǎng)頁編輯（：網(wǎng)頁編輯（webpage editor） 崗位崗位2：影像制作（：影像制作（cameraman） 崗位崗位3：論壇管理員（：論壇管理員（forum adm

16、inistrator） 崗位崗位4：活動(dòng)組織（：活動(dòng)組織（event organizer） 有意者請來信告知：有意者請來信告知： 1) 你個(gè)人的基本情況；你個(gè)人的基本情況； 2) 你所申請的崗位和申請的理由；你所申請的崗位和申請的理由； 審題：審題： 主題：崗位申請主題：崗位申請 體裁：申請信體裁：申請信 構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思： Dear Sir or Madam, Para A (開門見山開門見山) Having seen your advertisement for employing volunteers to help poor children in poverty-stricken area

17、s, I wish to apply for the position as . in your organization. Para B 個(gè)人情況介紹個(gè)人情況介紹 Para C 申請職位的理由申請職位的理由(分點(diǎn)講自己的競聘優(yōu)勢分點(diǎn)講自己的競聘優(yōu)勢) Para D (結(jié)尾結(jié)尾)I would appreciate your time in reading my letter and if there is any additional information you need, please contact me. Im looking forward to your reply! Your

18、s, Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your advertisement for employing volunteers to help poor children in poverty-stricken areas, I wish to apply for the position as the webpage editor in your organization. I am a Senior 3 student majoring in literature. Mercy for the poor children and passion for volu

19、ntary activities trigger me to make up my mind to do whatever I can for them. And the reasons why I apply for the post as the webpage editor are as follows: On one hand, during my study in school, I am good at writing articles of different styles, such as comments and news reports. On the other hand

20、, surfing the Internet frequently offers me rich experience of designing attractive webpages, which will undoubtedly qualify me for the job as the webpage editor. I would appreciate your time in reading my letter and if there is any additional information you need, please contact me. And Im looking

21、forward to your reply! Yours, Nancy 介紹信介紹信Practice:你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上結(jié)識了一位美國筆友你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上結(jié)識了一位美國筆友Tom，現(xiàn)請你用英語給，現(xiàn)請你用英語給他寫封信，作個(gè)自我介紹。他寫封信，作個(gè)自我介紹。Dear Tom, I am writing to introduce Best wishes! Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,回信回信Practice:暑假后你的筆友暑假后你的筆友Tom給你寫了封信，現(xiàn)在你要用英語給給你寫了封信，現(xiàn)在你要用英語給他回封信，介紹你的暑假。他回封信，介紹

22、你的暑假。Dear Tom, Im very pleased to receive your letter. Now Im writing to tell your something about my summer vacation. Best wishes! Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, 投訴信投訴信 Practice: 假如你叫假如你叫Li Yuan，你買了件商品，但發(fā)現(xiàn)質(zhì)量有問題，你買了件商品，但發(fā)現(xiàn)質(zhì)量有問題，現(xiàn)請你寫一封投訴信，字?jǐn)?shù)現(xiàn)請你寫一封投訴信，字?jǐn)?shù)120-150字。信的內(nèi)容包括：字。信的內(nèi)容包括： 1）

23、你購買商品的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和物品名稱。）你購買商品的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和物品名稱。 2）你購買商品的質(zhì)量問題。）你購買商品的質(zhì)量問題。 3）你希望的解決方式。）你希望的解決方式。 投訴信的常用句型：投訴信的常用句型： 1) I am writing to you to complain about . 2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with. 3) There are some problems . that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there isFor another,. 4)

24、I can hardly bear /tolerate /put up with it any more. 5) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can. 6) We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind. 7) We wil

25、l appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss. 假如你叫趙敏，收到學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)給你的郵件后決定參假如你叫趙敏，收到學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)給你的郵件后決定參加志愿者活動(dòng)，請你按郵件中的內(nèi)容和要求給學(xué)生加志愿者活動(dòng)，請你按郵件中的內(nèi)容和要求給學(xué)生會(huì)回一封郵件。會(huì)回一封郵件。To zhaomin DateMonday, May 14th, 2010 3: 30 p.m. FSubjectVoluntary Activity A Voluntary Activity In the winter vacation 5 Volunteers Wanted As

26、English teachers At S. O. S Childrens Village If you are interested in taking part in the activity, please send an email to studentunior bjsz. Sh. Cn before May 20th, 2010, explaining your past relevant experiences and purposes for applying for the activity. Students UnionStudents Union, Your idea t

27、o do some voluntary activities at S.O.S Childrens Village really interests me. After careful consideration, Im now formally applying for this voluntary activity. Frankly speaking, Im always interested in voluntary activities and therefore, I think I have got quite rich experiences. The latest was on

28、e that required volunteers to teach and play with children in the special school. I was fortunate to be one of these volunteers. The first time I met those children, I found they were not special at all. Instead, they showed me the same passion for life and the same for being their personal best as

29、those normal students. From then on, I began to love children and Im writing to take part in voluntary activities in which I can give a helping hand to children who call for my help. Yes, its the claim “HELP” that encourages me to come again! As far as I know, children in rural areas seriously lack

30、experienced teachers and to make matters worse, English teaching resources are limited. It so happens that I have a good command of English and Im available this winter vacation. Thus, the love for children and the interest in volunteer work push me to apply for this times voluntary activity. For th

31、e sake of those innocent children, for the sake of education in remote areas, I will try my best. Im looking forward to your reply and more details about the voluntary activity.Yours sincerely,Zhao Ming圖畫類圖畫類+倡議書倡議書 在積極倡導(dǎo)低碳環(huán)保的大環(huán)境下，今天的校園內(nèi)，浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)在積極倡導(dǎo)低碳環(huán)保的大環(huán)境下，今天的校園內(nèi)，浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象還很普遍，許多學(xué)生沒有意識到節(jié)能的重要性。請你根象還很普遍，許多學(xué)

32、生沒有意識到節(jié)能的重要性。請你根據(jù)下圖所展示的一些現(xiàn)象，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，就這些現(xiàn)象據(jù)下圖所展示的一些現(xiàn)象，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，就這些現(xiàn)象起草一份起草一份倡議書倡議書，向全校師生發(fā)出倡議，向全校師生發(fā)出倡議，節(jié)約能源節(jié)約能源。 注意：（注意：（1)詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于120-150； （2）可根據(jù)需要補(bǔ)充與文章有關(guān)的信息；）可根據(jù)需要補(bǔ)充與文章有關(guān)的信息； （3）主要內(nèi)容：）主要內(nèi)容：描述圖畫，發(fā)出倡議描述圖畫，發(fā)出倡議。 Dear teachers and students, Nowadays, its common to see students wasting thing in our sch

33、ool. Many students havent realized the importance of energy-saving. For example, sometimes we can see that lights and computers are still on after class, or some students even leave water running after using it. Besides, our paper is printed on only one side, causing much waste. Its time that we did

34、 something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities are switched off when we leave the rooms. Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. Whats more, paper should be printed on both sides and reused if possible. In

35、 a word, if everybody has the awareness of energy-saving and start with ourselves to reduce the waste, we can contribute to society. Students Union圖表類圖表類 最近國家教育部門就最近國家教育部門就“是否取消中學(xué)文理分科是否取消中學(xué)文理分科”面向全國面向全國征求意見。下面是騰訊網(wǎng)就征求意見。下面是騰訊網(wǎng)就“中學(xué)文理是否應(yīng)該分科中學(xué)文理是否應(yīng)該分科”這這一話題進(jìn)行調(diào)查的結(jié)果。一話題進(jìn)行調(diào)查的結(jié)果。 請你結(jié)合上表，寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶āｉ_請你

36、結(jié)合上表，寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶āｉ_頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Recently, the Tencent Website has launched an online survey on the topic whether science and arts education should be separated.網(wǎng)友觀點(diǎn)網(wǎng)友觀點(diǎn)投票數(shù)投票數(shù)百分比百分比理由理由應(yīng)該分科應(yīng)該分科172 79348. 48%中學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)太重中學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)太重現(xiàn)代社會(huì)更需要專業(yè)人才現(xiàn)代社會(huì)更需要專業(yè)人才不應(yīng)該分不應(yīng)該分科科183 59351. 52 %分科不利于人的全面發(fā)展分科不利于人

37、的全面發(fā)展分科導(dǎo)致全民整體素質(zhì)下降分科導(dǎo)致全民整體素質(zhì)下降 審題：審題： 主題：文理分科主題：文理分科 separate arts and science education 體裁：描述體裁：描述+論述論述 構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思： Para 1: 提出主題提出主題 (已給出已給出) Para 2: 描述圖表描述圖表 (簡要使用表中數(shù)據(jù)簡要使用表中數(shù)據(jù)) According to the chart, As we can see from the chart, As is described in the chart, 48 percent of Para 3: 簡要論述自己觀點(diǎn)簡要論述自己觀點(diǎn) Rece

38、ntly, the Tencent Website has launched an online survey on the topic whether science and arts education should be separated. According to the survey, about 48 percent of people are in favor of the practice of separating science and arts education. They think, for one thing, high school students are

39、suffering from a heavy learning load; for another, what the modern society needs are more professionals in various fields. While more than 50 percent of the netizens dont think so. They believe that the practice of separation goes against a persons all-round development and it leads to the falling o

40、f overall quality of the entire nation. In my opinion, science and arts education are of equal importance and neither should be ignored. Even though the practice of separation is acceptable, a student shouldnt abandon either science or arts education completely, because science makes us wise while a

41、rts makes us cultivated. In addition, the social development demands no separation of arts and science. The important thing is to ensure that students are able to develop real talents by keeping a balance between arts and science studies and thus make great contributions to the society in the future

42、.敘述敘述+議論議論 Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese. 請你根據(jù)請你根據(jù)參加過的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)參加過的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，談?wù)剠⒓由鐣?huì)，談?wù)剠⒓由鐣?huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的體會(huì)體會(huì)以及這樣的活動(dòng)對你將來的人生以及這樣的活動(dòng)對你將來的人生產(chǎn)生的產(chǎn)生的影響影響。 審題：審題： 主題：社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)主題：社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng) social activities 體裁：敘述體裁：敘述+議論議論 構(gòu)思：構(gòu)思： Para 1: 提出主題提出主題 參加社

43、會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng) I have taken part in many social activities up till now, such as playing with children who were homeless, getting into conversation with lonely old men and so on. People who I helped were much obliged to me and I am too glad to do these. (鄭佳穎鄭佳穎) Para 2: 結(jié)合參加過的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，談體會(huì)結(jié)合參加過的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，談體會(huì) 注意

44、：簡單敘述實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；過去時(shí)注意：簡單敘述實(shí)踐活動(dòng)；過去時(shí) Last weekend, I took part in the activity in my community, which armed at keeping the old company. There we performed for them and chatted with them happily. Through that activity, I thought I had a better understanding of the old and knew how to respect and help them. (

45、馬雪斐馬雪斐) Para 3: 論述參加此實(shí)踐活動(dòng)對我人生的影論述參加此實(shí)踐活動(dòng)對我人生的影響響 Although its a voluntary labor without reward, it can help me make progress in social communicative and manipulative abilities. It adds a brilliant touch to my life, so I will always cherish this period of the most beautiful time. (張伊婷張伊婷) Participati

46、ng in social activities can not only broaden our horizons, but also a good way to improve our comprehensive qualities. During a summer vacation a few years ago，l became a museum volunteer and began my one-week volunteer work, which left a deep impression on me. My task was to guide the tourists who came to visit the exhibition, which was a tough job for me. l had to stand in the sun , answering the same questions again and again. But at the same time ,my communication skills were improved and l also managed to get along with other people. Nowadays, social skill