2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)單元測試題(含答案)經(jīng)典1

1、2020-2021 年中考英語書面表達(dá)單元測試題（ 含答案 ） 經(jīng)典 1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1 .近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，整個國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應(yīng)對措施，寫一份英文的倡議書，呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少對空氣的污染。要點(diǎn)提示：（1 ）我國空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。（至少寫2 點(diǎn)）2 2）空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫2點(diǎn)）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。（至少寫2 點(diǎn)）要求：（1 ）80 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dear students ,As we all know , hazy

2、 days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the seriousairpollution【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air

3、pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution

4、 is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】 【詳解】 這是一篇材料作文

5、，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個國家的空氣污染狀況。所提供的 材料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（ haze）情況越來越嚴(yán)重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象， 原因，應(yīng)對措施三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中 適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒e had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車。這里had better 表示最好，后面跟

6、動詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車?！靖叻志湫投縋rotecting the environment is our duty.保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)。這里 Protecting the environment做主語，用的是動詞的 ing形式。2.書面表達(dá)我的英語學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)與方法，請你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)卜面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫一）痘文，多聽聽收音機(jī)，聽音樂等，可以放松 .多說運(yùn)用英語，增強(qiáng)能力與信心.多讀書開闊視野，了解英語文化.語法規(guī)則更好地理解與運(yùn)用.寫作寫寫日常生活.其他要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范;2

7、.必須包含表格中所有內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3.行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù) 80100?！敬鸢浮縈y English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listen

8、ing to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn som

9、e grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 look back, listen to the radio, a good way to learn English , relax ourselves, commun

10、icate with , help sb. do , do more reading , in addition , in a word 等。而感嘆句 How time flies!, 倒裝句 only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 和復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu) Use spoken Englishwhen communicating with classmates.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá) 更有邏輯性，

11、也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3.書面表達(dá)暑假即將來臨，對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期，家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示 寫一篇英語短文，描述他們的不同看法，同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀 點(diǎn)°Parents' opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkK

12、id's opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注思(1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考，允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(2)開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息(4)詞數(shù)：不少于80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.【答案】 How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have the

13、ir own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with

14、their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的

15、內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi) 容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié) 構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān) 系【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some lifeskills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightsee

16、ing. 這些給文章增色不少。4 “ inspire 一詞的漢語解釋是 ”“激勵；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請以“ Theperson who inspired me 為題寫一篇不少于 ”80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語園地投稿。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she ？2. How did he/ she inspire you ？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. The

17、y helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help

18、for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton an

19、d ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me 為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題

20、可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個人；然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻 譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù) 合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成 分

21、使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。短文有 以下幾個優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是 誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排 合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主 來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù) 形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語 的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如 But the person who insp

22、ired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as bad

23、minton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。5.書面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語?？⒄Z天地 對此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕?己的觀點(diǎn)。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement (75%)1 .a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun2 .bring people closer, ma

24、ke more friendsDisagreement (25%)spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞： We chat微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭 已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3）文中請勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息As we all know, grabbing red packets on lin

25、e won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets ” among students.【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during theS

26、pring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets ” among students.t haveAbout 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make mor

27、e friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbin g red packets. They don enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, bu

28、t also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break th

29、eir cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)

30、習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it i

31、s a popular form ofs livesentertainment, bring them more fun. 、 Grabbing red packets has been part of people 、 About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets 、 Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people

32、 in a special form. 、 If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. 等等。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇 文章的質(zhì)量。6 題目 “持之以恒，方得始?！眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持 ”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣 ），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感

33、受。提示詞語：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題：1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have keptrunning for three years.When I was in Grade 7， I was no

34、t good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates ， I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes ， I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what

35、kind of difficulties I faced ， I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎 么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺??！驹斀狻? . 本篇要求根據(jù)所給材料，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事

36、，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do湘一般過去時，描寫 How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主 題，文句通順。2 .本例文開篇立即點(diǎn)明自己的堅(jiān)持做的事是“跑步 ”，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑；結(jié)尾談了這件 事對自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。3 .本例文出彩之處在于用了很多的短語和重點(diǎn)句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing、be good at、catch up with、be pr

37、oud of; 不 定式 in order to ; try my best to ; 狀語從句 sothat ;比較級 do much be tter in 、 feel more confident 等；短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。7 2019 年 2 月 20 日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時代楷?！狈Q號。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn) “愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?，以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important

38、提示問題： What should you do in your daily life? Why do you do so?As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in o

39、ur daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但

40、寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語： protect the environment ； pick up the rubbish ； behave well ； be kind to sb ； more and more beautiful 。句型： By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful ； we can pick up the rubb

41、ish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on 。8 書面表達(dá) 中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainTimeJuly 1 - July 14Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace（白金漢宮）visit the British Museum （大英博物館）watch football matchesAttentionchangeable weatherCost20,000 yuanAustrali

42、aTimeAugust 15 -August 24Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast（黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionwinterCost16,000 yuan要求：1 .所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由；2 .結(jié)合游玩國家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動，并提出1-2點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng);3 .文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4 .語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范；5 .不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相

43、關(guān)信息。The summer holiday is coming. I think it' s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. I think it ' s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we ca

44、n go toBritain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and c

45、ulture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England. I

46、hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提 供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個 要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文 章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的 結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的 復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確

47、保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文 章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。9.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 網(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片， 看不到商品本身2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online; 商品 goods;導(dǎo)致 cause注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含

48、表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；3 .詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopp

49、ing online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you' reinterested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are ge

50、nerally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it' s very easy fcto buy goods that aren ' t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that a re not badly needed. That ' s a waste o

51、f money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時 態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí) 慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 convenient , disadvantage, ingood quality ， figure out ， have the chance to do ， be attacked by， of course， take care of 等。增

52、強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確 性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還 要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。10.你是一位九年級的學(xué)生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy,感謝她對你關(guān)心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。要點(diǎn)如下：（ 1） . 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。你認(rèn)為自己學(xué)習(xí)上還要多花工夫。 2） .你的父母對你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。（舉例說明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮23句） 3） 3） . 老師很樂意幫助你們。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。他們說（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2 3句）注意：