浙江英語新高考讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)練2學(xué)案

1、精品文檔讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)練 2 學(xué)案Will you come with us,Susa n?cried several girls to a schoolmate.replied Susan, with a sigfin ish the task grabumother tset me to do.“ How tiesome it must be to sty at home to work on a holiday!Roseaidne of the girls, shaking her head.“ Susan grandmother is too strict.”Susan heard the

2、 remark, and, as she bent her head, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant after noon the girlswould spe nd gatheri ng wild flowers in the woods.Soon she said to herself,“ What harm can there be thermvirliciqrandmother put in the stocking? Thewoods must be very beautiful today, and how I

3、 should like to be in them!”“Grandmother, said she, a few minutes afterwards, I ready now. ” “What,so soon, Susan?Her gra ndmother took thework, and looked at it very closely.True, Susa n,” said she, lay ing great stress on each word, true, I count twentanu,nssfrom themarkyou have n ever cheated me,

4、 you may go and amuse yourself as you like the rest of the day.Susan s cheeks wered, and she did not say Thank you. As she left the cottage, she walked slowly away, not singing asusual.Why, here is Susan! the girls cried, wheinedeheir company : but what is the matter? Why have youleft your dear, old

5、 gran dmother?y askd”. theThere is nothing the matter. AsaJedaheep words, she felt that she was trying to cheat herself.She had acted a lie. At the same time she remembered her grandmother s words, You haeateelvme.Yes, I havecheated her, said she to herself. If she knew all, she would never trust me

6、 again.1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；2.應(yīng)使用 5 個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph Whe n the little party had reached an ope n space in the woods,Paragraph2: Now, Susan” said Rose, Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen.”導(dǎo)學(xué) 1：原文內(nèi)容摘要情節(jié) 1：Susa n was in vited

7、 to the woods full of flowers but could n tgo, not finish the work of grandmother 情節(jié) 2:too.We are going to the woocI should like to go with you very much,精品文檔Susan moved the mark in the stocking, cheated her grandmother 情節(jié) 3:Susa n was allowed to go, with red cheeks, feeli ng guilty導(dǎo)學(xué) 2:續(xù)寫情節(jié)推理Paragr

8、aph可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展從上文情節(jié) 1 禾口 3 可推知： other girls enjoy themselves, Susan not happy 從 Paragraph2 的段首語可知： they made a crown,the crown was for Susan合理的細節(jié)增加：the reas on why the crow n was for Susa n可用詞匯及篇章技巧1.可用的關(guān)鍵詞：flowers. Rose2.其它可用的詞語：enjoy on eself, but （Susan 和她的伙伴們的心情對比）Paragraph2:可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展從情節(jié) 3 和 Paragraph

9、2 的段首語可推出：Susa n would refuse to wear the crow n and expla in the reas on go back home and apologize可以詳細描述的情節(jié)：Susan 拒絕佩戴花冠的情節(jié)及情感表現(xiàn)可用詞匯及篇章技巧1.可用的關(guān)鍵詞：cheated, tears, grandmother, home2.其他的可用詞語：not deserve, place on the head, apologize3.在描述 Susan 的錯誤時，可以引用原文中的相關(guān)語句：remove the mark gran dmother put in th

10、e stock ing導(dǎo)學(xué) 3：續(xù)寫微作文1.她的伙伴們都在到處跑著，自我娛樂，可Susan 卻獨自坐在草坪上， 希望此刻她能在家中，和奶奶訴說自己的過錯。（用 wishing 作伴隨狀語，注意其后用虛擬語氣）2.當(dāng)大家說著這些話的時候，花冠戴到了Susan 的頭上。 Susan 立刻摘下了花冠，扔到了地上，說：“不要給我花冠，我不配！我欺騙了我的奶奶?！碑?dāng)她說這些的時候，淚水滑過了她的臉頰。（中用被動語態(tài)；中用 flow down 或 run down,注意 down 要用介詞）精品文檔導(dǎo)學(xué) 4:根據(jù)前面的指導(dǎo)，完成讀后續(xù)寫參考答案：川.續(xù)寫微作文1.Her compa nions were

11、 running about enjoying themselves, but Susa n sat alone on the grass, wish ing she were at homethis moment telling her fault to her grandmother.2.As these words were spoken, the crown was placed on her head. In a moment Susan took it off, and threw it on the gro und,say ing, No crow n for me; I do

12、not deserve it! I have cheated my gra ndmother. ” While she was say ing, tears were flowing dow n her cheeks.IV .根據(jù)前面的指導(dǎo)，完成讀后續(xù)寫ParagraphWhen the little party had reached an ope n space in the woods, her compa nions ran about enjoying themselves, but Susan sat on the grass, wish ing she were at home

13、admitt ing her fault. After a whileRosecried out, Let us make a crown of flowers, and put it on the head of the best girl here. ” Soon the crown was fini shed. All the girlsagreed Susa n was the best girl both in school and at home, so they decided she was to wear it.Paragraph2:Now, Susan, ” said Ro

14、se, Put on the crown of flowers, for you are to be our queen. ” As these words were spoken, thecrown was placed on her head. In a moment she took it off, and threw it on the ground, saying, No crown for me; I do notdeserve it. ” The girls looked at her with surprise. I have cheated my grandmother,” said she, while tears