ANewDimensionofLife(塘廈中學(xué)羅柳梅）

1、 A New Dimension of LifeTangxia High School羅柳梅羅柳梅 東莞塘廈中學(xué)東莞塘廈中學(xué)Dongguan Tangxia High SchooLucy I think the undersea world is_ because _. A New Dimension of LifeAccording to the author, the undersea world is _ . Para. _ Line_. ParagraphsPara.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6color and shapes

2、dangersreflectingthe reefs edgea final thoughtsome sea creaturesTopicsRead for information ParagraphsPara.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6reflectingcolors and shapessome sea creatures dangersthe reefs edgea final thought Topics Para 1: Im sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand .I

3、went snorkelling on the reef offshore . I think every cell in my body woke up. It was like discovering a whole new dimension of life.Para 2: The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colors surrounding me-purples, reds, oranges, yellows, blues and greens.The corals were fantastic- they wer

4、e shaped like fans, plates, brains, . all kinds of small,neat and elegant fish were swimming around the corals. Para 3: I especially loved the little orange and white fish that hid in the waving .a large wise-looking turtle was passing so close to me that I could have touched it.The fish didnt seem

5、to mind me swimming around them.Para 4: .- and eel with strong sharp teeth, with only its head showing from a hole, watching for a tasty fish(or my tasty toe!); a.dangerous but that didnt stop me from feeling scared to death for a moment! There were other creatures that I didnt want to get too close

6、 toA New Dimension of Life Para 1: Im sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand .I went snorkelling on the reef offshore . I think every cell in my body woke up. It was like discovering a whole new dimension of life.Para 2: surrounding me-purples, reds, oranges, yellows, blues and g

7、reens.The corals were fantastic- they were shaped like fans, plates, brains, . The first thing I became aware of (discovered) was all the vivid colors all kinds of small,neat and elegant fish were swimming around the corals. Para 3: I especially loved the little orange and white fish that hid in the

8、 waving .a large turtle that I could have touched it.The fish didnt seem to mind me swimming around them.was passing so close to me that I could have touched it.Para 4: .- and eel with strong sharp teeth, with only its head showing from a hole, watching for a tasty fish(or my tasty toe!); a.dangerou

9、s but that didnt stop me from feeling scared to death for a moment! There were other creatures that I didnt want to get too close toA New Dimension of Life ParagraphsPara.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Para.6reflectingcolors and shapessome sea creatures dangersthe reefs edgea final thought Topicsmy fantas

10、ticsnorkelling experience Read for structureIm sitting and reflecting on the dayI went snorkeling on the reef offshore this morningSeeing such extraordinary beauty,-a day of pure magic!and it was the most fantastic thing I have ever done.I think every cell in my body woke up. what(what(景觀景觀) )how(ho

11、w(描寫角度描寫角度) )emotion(emotion(情感情感) )colors顏色vividcorals1._The corals were 2._small fishappearance(外觀) neat, 3._small fish4. _ I especially loved the little fish the parrotfish, the sea-slug, 5._(action)動作描述It seemed there was 6._ waiting for me around every corneran eel, the giant clam, reef sharks7

12、. _There were other creatures that 8. I _ to get too close to9. _I was very 10._when I looked down into the depths of the ocean.shape(形狀）形狀）fantasticelegantaction(動作動作)the turtlea surprisestate (靜態(tài)描寫靜態(tài)描寫)didnt wantthe reefs edgebraveInformation arrangement (段落信息結(jié)構(gòu)段落信息結(jié)構(gòu)): what(景觀景觀)+emotions(觀感觀感)+h

13、ow(描寫角度描寫角度)colors, shapes, appearance, action, state Her first delight was going to the Tower. （emotion+ schedule）It was built long ago by the Norman invaders of AD 1066. （ ）Fancy! （ ）This solid stone, square tower had remained standing for one thousand years. ( )Although the buildings had expanded

14、 around it, it remained part of a royal palace and prison combined.（ ） To her great surprise, Zhang Pingyu found the Queens jewels guarded by special royal soldiers who, on special occasions, still wore the four-hundred-year-old uniform of the time of Queen Elizabeth I.（ ）Read for structurehistoryem

15、otiondescriptionusageemotion+present situation/unique cultural valueinformation arrangement 2: what(行程行程)+emotions(觀感觀感)+how(說明角度說明角度)-history, present situation, unique value, famous figures, outlook description, explanation C. The last day she visited Karl Marxs statue in Highgate Cemetery.It seem

16、ed strange that the man who had developed communism should have lived and died in London. Not only that, but he had worked in the famous reading room of the Library of the British Museum. Sadly the library had moved from its original place into another building and the old reading room was gone.But

17、she was thrilled by so many wonderful treasures from different cultures displayed in the museum.When she saw many visitors enjoying looking at the beautiful old Chinese pots and other objects on show, she felt very proud of her country.B. Her first delight was going to the Tower. It was built long a

18、go by the Norman invaders of AD 1066. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had remained standing for one thousand years. Although the buildings had expanded around it, it remained part of a royal palace and prison combined. To her great surprise, Zhang Pingyu found the Queens jewels guarded by spec

19、ial royal soldiers who, on special occasions, still wore the four-hundred-year-old uniform of the time of Queen Elizabeth I.A.Im sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand and reflecting on the day of pure magic!I went snorkelling on the reef offshore this morning and it was the most

20、 fantastic thing I have ever done. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up. Try:去年我去了長隆主題公園，那是我做過的最奇妙去年我去了長隆主題公園，那是我做過的最奇妙的事情。的事情。I went to the ChangLong Theme Park last year 坐上坐上65米跳樓機(jī)的那一刻米跳樓機(jī)的那一刻，我覺得我身體的每一，我覺得我身體的每一個細(xì)胞都蘇醒了過來。個細(xì)胞都蘇醒了過來。Getting on the 65-meter high fr

21、ee-fall drops, and it was the most fantastic thing I have ever done.I think every cell in my body woke up. 形容詞the small the giant the yellow and green the little orange and white the long thin a yellow-spotted red a large wise-looking two grey reef 描寫角度描寫角度sizesizecolorsize+colorsize+ patterncolor+patternsize+emotionnumber+color海洋動物fishclamparrotfishfishseaweedsea-slugturtlesharksRead for appreciation描寫角度描寫角度: size, color, pattern, number sharp teethflower-like coralsthe angry-looking fishwarmbird-likewise-lookingRead for appreciationfrighteningthe _ night airits _ mouth