給即將離開的Black老師寫一封信

1、高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)突破階段專項(xiàng)突破階段書信體應(yīng)用文書信體應(yīng)用文一篇高分作文有什么標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一篇高分作文有什么標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ？ 全國(guó)高考英語書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：全國(guó)高考英語書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 第五檔（很好）第五檔（很好） 1.覆蓋覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；所有主要內(nèi)容； 2.應(yīng)用了應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯； 3.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯匯所致；所致； 4.應(yīng)用語句間的應(yīng)用語句間的連接成分連接成分，使全文結(jié)，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。學(xué)

2、會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞匯學(xué)會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞匯 詞匯反映你詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量知識(shí)貯存量的多少，的多少，也是也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)可知，運(yùn)用高級(jí)的詞匯對(duì)從評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)可知，運(yùn)用高級(jí)的詞匯對(duì)提高書面表達(dá)的分?jǐn)?shù)至關(guān)重要。大家提高書面表達(dá)的分?jǐn)?shù)至關(guān)重要。大家先來看下面這些句子：先來看下面這些句子： Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.（升級(jí)改造）（升級(jí)改造） Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.學(xué)會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞

3、匯學(xué)會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞匯 We all think he is a great man.（升級(jí)改造）（升級(jí)改造） We think highly of him. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.（升級(jí)改造）（升級(jí)改造） A good idea occurred to me. = A good idea suddenly struck me.The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free for the students there.As a result the plan was a

4、failure.The plan turned out (to be) a failure.When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. She went to Austria in order to study music.She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music.When he spoke, he felt more and more excited

5、.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.In our school, there are twentysix classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms. /Twentysix classrooms make up our school.You can find my house easily.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.學(xué)會(huì)使用較豐富的句式學(xué)會(huì)使用較豐富的句式 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個(gè)在整篇文章中

6、，避免只使用一兩個(gè)句型，要靈句型，要靈活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)活運(yùn)用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)，運(yùn)，運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)挠玫卯?dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。例少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝。例如：如：When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（升級(jí)改造）（升級(jí)改造） On his arriving / arrival , please give me an e-mail.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞（使用名詞性從句）性從句）What surpri

7、ses him is that the little girl knows so many things. It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things .Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句)Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型 .It was.not until)It

8、was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虛擬語氣）I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help.If you had not helped me,

9、 I could not have passed the physics exam.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用過去分詞)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.I wont believe what he says. （使

10、用狀語從句）No matter what he says, I wont believe.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.（使用并列句）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 使用使

11、用恰當(dāng)連接詞恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫出一篇有，對(duì)寫出一篇有“英語英語味味”的文章很重要，能使整篇文章的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下銜上下銜接自然、緊湊接自然、緊湊，使文章有一定的，使文章有一定的流暢性流暢性，以使文章以使文章層次清晰，行文連貫層次清晰，行文連貫。下面表格。下面表格中是寫作中經(jīng)常用到的一些連接詞。中是寫作中經(jīng)常用到的一些連接詞。對(duì)稱順序for one thing, for another thing, on one hand, on the other hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果順序because, since, as

12、, thanks to, as a result (of)條件順序as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless讓步順序though, as, even if/though, whether, who(what, when, where)-ever遞進(jìn)順序whats more, besides, to make the matter worse, whats worse過渡性插入語I think, Im afraid, you know, As we all know 假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你作為班長(zhǎng)代表你

13、班，給在校工作一作為班長(zhǎng)代表你班，給在校工作一年即將離校的外教年即將離校的外教Mr Black寫一份寫一份告別信，內(nèi)容如下：告別信，內(nèi)容如下：1. 表達(dá)感謝和不舍表達(dá)感謝和不舍2. 總結(jié)成績(jī)總結(jié)成績(jī)3. 送出希冀送出希冀 注意：注意：1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左右 ；2. 信信的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 試題分析試題分析： 這是一篇這是一篇提綱類作文提綱類作文，表達(dá)，表達(dá)對(duì)即將離開的外教感謝和留戀。對(duì)即將離開的外教感謝和留戀。使用使用第一人稱第一人稱和和第二人稱為主第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)為時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)文章都。要點(diǎn)文章都已經(jīng)給了出來，我們需要用正確

14、已經(jīng)給了出來，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。 本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體體,故需要故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時(shí)注。寫作時(shí)注意意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連，上下文意思連貫，貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用意使用高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)詞匯和和高級(jí)句型高級(jí)句型使文使文章顯得章顯得更有品質(zhì)和文采更有品質(zhì)和文采。特別注。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。相關(guān)詞匯：相關(guān)詞匯：1.表達(dá)表達(dá)感謝感謝的詞匯或用語。的詞匯或用語。 英文英文書

15、書信中的信中的表達(dá)表達(dá)感感謝的用語謝的用語（超級(jí)有用超級(jí)有用） When writing a letter , you should always be polite. The following sentences may be useful for you to express thanks to those who you write to. 相關(guān)詞匯：相關(guān)詞匯：1.表達(dá)表達(dá)感謝感謝的詞匯或用語。的詞匯或用語。 (1) Thank you very much. 非常感非常感謝謝您您 Thank you ever so much. 非常非常非常非常感感謝謝您您。 Thank you ind

16、eed . 確實(shí)確實(shí)感感謝謝您您。 Thank you most sincerely. 最真最真誠誠地地感感謝謝您您。 Thank you most sincerely from the bottom of my heart. 衷心衷心地地感感謝謝您您。(2)Many thanks for your kind and warm letter. 感感謝謝您友好而您友好而熱熱情的情的來來信。信。 Thanks a million. 萬萬分分(非常非常)感感謝謝。 (3) Please accept my sincere appreciation for . 請(qǐng)請(qǐng)接受接受我我真真摯摯的感的感謝謝 I

17、 wish to express my sincere appreciation for . 致以衷心的感致以衷心的感謝謝 I wish to express my grateful appreciation for . 致以深切的感致以深切的感謝謝 (4) I sincerely (deeply) (warmly) appreciate sth. / doing sth.我真我真摯地?fù)吹?(深深深深地地)(熱熱情情地地)感感謝謝(5)I am very sincerely (most) (truly) grateful to you for . 為為了了，我非常真，我非常真摯摯的的(深深的深

18、深的)(真真真真誠地誠地)感謝您。感謝您。 (6) convey our sincere gratitude to you for sth. (張銘州張銘州)2. 總結(jié)成績(jī)的用語。總結(jié)成績(jī)的用語。(1) make a great deal of progress in listening , speaking , reading and writing.(2)要不是有你的幫助要不是有你的幫助,我不會(huì)取得如我不會(huì)取得如此多的成就此多的成就.We wouldnt have made such achievements without you (but for you ) .3. 表達(dá)美好祝愿的用語

19、。表達(dá)美好祝愿的用語。（1）除了美好祝愿沒有什么能表達(dá)）除了美好祝愿沒有什么能表達(dá)我的感激之情。我的感激之情。Nothing can express my gratitude except for my best wishes. （2）請(qǐng)接受我們的美好祝愿和感謝。）請(qǐng)接受我們的美好祝愿和感謝。Please accept our sincere good wishes and thanks . （3）借此機(jī)會(huì)，請(qǐng)你轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們對(duì)）借此機(jī)會(huì)，請(qǐng)你轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們對(duì)你家人的美好祝愿。你家人的美好祝愿。We wish to take this opportunity to ask you to convey ou

20、r best regards to your family.Para 1 Dear Mr Black, How is everything going on with you ? Im Li Hua , monitor of Class 9/ 10. The news that you are leaving next month fills us with a mixture of feelings. Now I , on behalf of my whole class , am writing to express my grateful appreciation for your ex

21、cellent Para 1 teaching as well as to send our best wishes .Para 2 In our heart , you are much more than our teacher of English. In fact, you have also become our close friend. Over the past year, we have benefited greatly from your instructive and inspiring teaching. Besides , you teach English us

22、in an interesting way. Not only do youPara 2 try different ways to keep us interested in your lessons , but also encourage good students to learn more and help the students who are left behind to catch up with others. When we felt frustrated and needed guidance , you were always Para 2 there and rea

23、dy to offer your help. When we won some honor or prize, you were so happy as if you were the one who was rewarded. It is you who leave us so many precious memories.Para 3 I very much (really ) hope we can keep in touch. If possible , send us an e-mail or write us a letter at times. In addition , wis

24、h you to have a pleasant journey home and give our best regards to your family .小結(jié)：小結(jié)：學(xué)會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞匯學(xué)會(huì)使用較高級(jí)的詞匯學(xué)會(huì)使用較豐富的句式學(xué)會(huì)使用較豐富的句式學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 Dear Mr. Smith,On behalf of the students of our class, I e-mail you telling you how we feel about your first-week teaching in our class. All of us studen

25、ts think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.Some of u

26、s are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?If you have any difficulties in your life here, just tell us. We are ready to offer you any help.Yours,Li HuaDear Mr Black, How are you? Im li Hua. On behalf of m