如何在寫作中避免句式單一

1、1如何在寫作中避免句式單一如何在寫作中避免句式單一一、如何做到句式靈活？一、如何做到句式靈活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2)復(fù)合句復(fù)合句 ( (定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句) )3)3)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型強(qiáng)調(diào)句型4)4)非謂語動(dòng)詞非謂語動(dòng)詞5)5)倒裝句倒裝句6)6)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)Ex:按要求改寫下列句子。1) English is widely used in the world. Most business letters are written in English. (合并為并列句) English is widely used in the worl

2、d and most business letters are written in English. 2) People thought of some ways to solve the problem. These solutions didnt work. (合并為并列句) People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.3) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall. It has a history of more than two

3、thousand years. (合并為定語從句) I suggest that you visit the Great Wall, which has a history of more than two thousand years.July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005. He began his famous voyage on July 11. (合并為定語從句) July 11, when He began his famous voyage, has been named the Saili

4、ng Day in our country since 2005. 5) I will not be able to meet you at the airport. I have some experiments to do that day.(合并為狀語從句) I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day.The problem was complicated. He solved it in only two hours with a compute

5、r. (合并為狀語從句) Though the problem is complicated, he solved it in only two hours with a computer.7) In the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet. It is a fact.(合并為名詞性從句) It is a fact that in the past five years, there have been changes in peoples diet.8) The weather was fine. We wen

6、t to visit the ZhongShan Park. (獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)) The weather being fine, we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.9) You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties. (非謂語+倒裝句) Never should you give up when faced with difficulties.10) When a man and a woman meet, the woman first offers her hand. (改為強(qiáng)

7、調(diào)句) When a man and a woman meet, it is the woman who first offers her hand.11) 眾所周知, 吸煙危害健康。（一句多譯）a. It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health.b. As is known to all, smoking harms peoples health.c. Everyone knows that smoking is harmful to peoples health.Rewrite the sentences 1. Th

8、ey arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一方法一. 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the

9、happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.方法一方法一. 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語動(dòng)非謂語動(dòng)詞詞) 聽到這個(gè)消息聽到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng)他們變的很激動(dòng). _the news, they got excited.2.

10、盡管被告知許多遍盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò)他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò). _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非謂語動(dòng)詞非謂語動(dòng)詞)1,1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從

11、不放棄。2 2，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3 3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.方法二方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he

12、 returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by ch

13、anging the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法二方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒倒裝句裝句)1. 他從不說關(guān)于他家庭的事他從不說關(guān)于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我們每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到水的重要性只有我們每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到水的重要性, 我們才能生活得更好我們才能生活得更好. 3.只有用這種方式只有用這種方式,

14、 我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí)我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).Never did he speak about his own family.Only when each of us realizes the importance of water， can we live a better life.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.方法二方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力5.5. 他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。他是個(gè)孩子，卻知道很多。6.6. 墻上有個(gè)通知，上面寫著墻上有個(gè)通知，上面

15、寫著“請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水請(qǐng)節(jié)約用水”.Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”. As soon as As soon as Li Ming and his wife arrived at Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed .the airport, they were warmly welcomed .On arriving On arriving at th

16、e airport , Li Ming and at the airport , Li Ming and his wifehis wifeLi Ming and his wife were warmly welcomed Li Ming and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment the moment they arrived at the airport.they arrived at the airport.No sooner No sooner had Li Ming and his wife arrived had Li Ming and

17、his wife arrived at the airport at the airport than than they were they were Hardly Hardly had Li Ming and his wife arrived at had Li Ming and his wife arrived at the airport the airport whenwhen they were they were 方法三方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All

18、 these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._ which_With the development of _ _so _ that_In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beij

19、ing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.句式多樣句式多樣文章增文章增“靚靚”一一. 使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔二二. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力三三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式為了增強(qiáng)短文的連貫性，使表達(dá)流暢自然，要巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。請(qǐng)熟記和用好以下的為了增強(qiáng)短文的連貫性，使表達(dá)流暢自然，要巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。請(qǐng)熟記和用好以下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語：關(guān)聯(lián)詞語： A、表并列：、表并列：besides, in addition,

20、whats more, moreover, or, and, also, too, as well as B、表轉(zhuǎn)折：、表轉(zhuǎn)折：however, nevertheless, yet C、表原因：、表原因：because of, thanks to, owing to, due to D、表結(jié)果：、表結(jié)果：thus, therefore, as a result E、表列舉：、表列舉：namely, for example, for instance, that is to say F、表結(jié)論：、表結(jié)論：to conclude, in a word, in brief G、表時(shí)間順序：、表時(shí)間順

21、序：first, second, then, soon, finally, at last H、表空間順序：、表空間順序：here, there, in front of, at the back of, next to, on one side, on the other side I、表對(duì)稱關(guān)系：、表對(duì)稱關(guān)系：for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand, on the other hand如何使文章連貫？如何使文章連貫？(過渡詞的使用過渡詞的使用)5、請(qǐng)看下面兩篇短文的對(duì)比情況：、請(qǐng)看下面兩篇短文的對(duì)比情況：短文短文1：Dear Mr.

22、Principal, Im a senior student of our school. Id like to say something about the canteen service in our school. We are satisfied with the clean and tidy canteen , the delicious food and the good service.We are not satisfied that the price of the food is a little too high and that we have a limited v

23、ariety of dishes to choose from. And we have to wait a long time to get the meal.The problems should be solved as soon as possible. Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 短文短文2：Dear Mr. Principal, Im a senior student of our school. Id like to say something about the canteen service i

24、n our school. In general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dinning hall, its delicious food and the good service. However, what is not to our satisfaction is that the price of the meal is a little too high and that we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose from. In addition, we

25、often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time it is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school? Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely yours, L

26、i Hua5、全面檢查，避免失誤。、全面檢查，避免失誤。 主要從以下幾方面入手： 1）文體格式是否正確。）文體格式是否正確。 2）人稱是否符合要求。）人稱是否符合要求。 3）有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。）有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。 4）大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否有錯(cuò)。）大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否有錯(cuò)。 5）語法是否正確。（句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、）語法是否正確。（句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、非謂語動(dòng)詞、單復(fù)數(shù)、指代詞等）非謂語動(dòng)詞、單復(fù)數(shù)、指代詞等） 6）過渡詞是否使用自然。）過渡詞是否使用自然。 7）要點(diǎn)是否齊全。）要點(diǎn)是否齊全。 8）書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔。）書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔?；A(chǔ)寫作實(shí)踐基礎(chǔ)寫作實(shí)踐

27、請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下資料說明，使用5個(gè)句子描述全部所給的信息內(nèi)容。1、標(biāo)題：Top Meal of the Day2、必須使用五個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容。3、將五個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文。原因：晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一會(huì)。結(jié)果：上課總想睡覺。注意力下降?？荚嚦煽儾焕硐?。建議：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%， 青少年健康應(yīng)從早餐抓起。Some students study late into the night.Some students study late into the night.They choose to miss breakfast so that They choose

28、to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.they can have a few extra minutes in bed.As a result, they tend to be sleepy all As a result, they tend to be sleepy all day. They have bad memories. day. They have bad memories. It is hard for them to get high marks in It is hard fo

29、r them to get high marks in all kinds of exams. all kinds of exams. As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal plays an important part in our daily life.plays an important part in our daily life. It can provide 30% of the whole days It can provide 30% of the whole days energy.energy. We students should start with a regular We students should start with a regular breakfast.breakfast.二