2017-2021年北京高考英語真題分類匯編之書面表達(dá)

1、2017-2021年北京高考英語真題分類匯編之書面表達(dá)一書面表達(dá)（共9小題）1（2021北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua2（2020北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復(fù)學(xué)在即，作為俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人，你給Jim寫一封電子郵件，請他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師，內(nèi)容包括：（1）條件及要求；（2）表示感謝并

2、提醒注意防護(hù)。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于50；（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua3（2020北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班班長李華。居家學(xué)習(xí)期間，你們班開展了一次以自律為主題的調(diào)研活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文稿件，給你們學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，記述你在本次活動中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：自律 selfdiscipline4（2019北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華你們班上周組織了一次以勞動最光榮為主題的社會實(shí)踐活動請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：西瓜 w

3、atermelon5（2019北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1 交通出行；2 必備衣物注意：1 詞數(shù)不少于50；2 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim，Yours，Li Hua6（2018北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)他們體驗(yàn)中國茶文化的全過程注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 7（2018北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來北京上大學(xué)他向你咨詢相

4、關(guān)信息請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1表示歡迎；2推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；3建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作注意：1詞數(shù)不少于50；2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim， Yours，Li Hua8（2017北京）你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：長江之行或者泰山之旅Jim來信希望你能給些建議請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1你建議的線路；2你的理由；3你的祝愿注意：1詞數(shù)不少于50；2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim， Yours，Li Hua9（2017北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以感恩母

5、校為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：視頻video2017-2021年北京高考英語真題分類匯編之書面表達(dá)參考答案與試題解析一書面表達(dá)（共9小題）1（2021北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】提綱類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一：We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian P

6、ark this weekend，where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring.翻譯：我們原計(jì)劃這周末去海淀公園踏青，在那里我們可以欣賞早春美景。分析：這句話使用了where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。高分句型二：The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week.翻譯：醫(yī)生給我做了仔細(xì)的檢查并且告訴我我至少在床上休養(yǎng)一周。分析：這句話使用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句?！窘獯稹緿ear JimHow is

7、everything going？We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend，where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring.【高分句型一】But I am afraid I couldnt make it.（表達(dá)歉意）I was severely injured in a soccer game last night.The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay

8、in bed for at least one week.【高分句型二】I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could recover faster，yet the answer was negative.My condition doesnt allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered.（說明原因）It is a pity for me to miss this trip that I have been longing for.Shall we pu

9、t it off until next weekend if the weather permits？Looking forward to your reply.（推遲約會）YoursLi Hua【點(diǎn)評】這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)

10、，不要太多也不要太少。2（2020北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語戲劇俱樂部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國。復(fù)學(xué)在即，作為俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人，你給Jim寫一封電子郵件，請他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師，內(nèi)容包括：（1）條件及要求；（2）表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于50；（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim，_Yours，Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】提綱類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一：Since youre away in Britain， we need a drama teacher to be in your place.譯文：既然你不在英國，我們需要一

11、個戲劇老師來代替你。分析：這句話使用since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。高分句型二：Remember to wear a mask when necessary.譯文：必要時記得戴口罩。分析：這句話使用when引導(dǎo)省略的時間狀語從句?！窘獯稹緿ear Jim，How are you doing？ I hope everythings OK with you. （問候）Our schools drama club plans to start practising. Since youre away in Britain， we need a drama teacher to be in your pl

12、ace. 【高分句型一】Would you please recommend one for us？ （寫信目的）He or she should be a native English speaker， currently in Beijing， and experienced in both directing and teaching.（條件及要求）Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary. 【高分句型二】（表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)）Best w

13、ishes.Yours，Li Hua【點(diǎn)評】這是一篇提綱類作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。3（2020北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班班長李華。居家學(xué)習(xí)期間，你們班開展了一次以自律為主題的調(diào)研活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序

14、，寫一篇英文稿件，給你們學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，記述你在本次活動中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：自律 selfdiscipline【考點(diǎn)】圖畫類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一：While studying at home， I surveyed my class on selfdiscipline. The findings worried me a lot.譯文：在家學(xué)習(xí)時，我對班上的自律進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。這些發(fā)現(xiàn)讓我很擔(dān)心。分析：這句話使用while引導(dǎo)省略的時間狀語從句。高分句型二：Three months later， I did a second survey， wh

15、ich showed great improvements in selfdiscipline.譯文：三個月后，我做了第二次調(diào)查，結(jié)果顯示自律能力有了很大提高。分析：這句話使用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。【解答】While studying at home， I surveyed my class on selfdiscipline. The findings worried me a lot. 【高分句型一】（自律的研究結(jié)果讓作者擔(dān)心）To solve the problem， I asked my parents for help， and they offered some prac

16、tical advice. Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves. After that， we all knew better what to do. （和同學(xué)在線討論）Three months later， I did a second survey， which showed great improvements in selfdiscipline. 【高分句型二】I phoned my teacher about it， and we both fe

17、lt very pleased.（三個月后的調(diào)查取得進(jìn)步）【點(diǎn)評】看圖作文是借助于圖畫進(jìn)行寫作的一種文體。它要求作者將畫面直觀的內(nèi)容或圖片包含的信息轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神表意的文字形式，屬于說明文性質(zhì)。其目的是考查考生的觀察分析能力、想象力和語言表達(dá)能力。要求：（1）主題明確，即能概括畫面或圖表所反映的中心議題。（2）圖文一致，即要包括畫面或圖表中所反映的主要內(nèi)容。4（2019北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華你們班上周組織了一次以勞動最光榮為主題的社會實(shí)踐活動請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：西瓜 watermelon【考點(diǎn)】圖畫類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】

18、高分句型一：When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip譯文：當(dāng)我到家的時候，我為這次旅行收拾行李分析：when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句高分句型二：While working， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun譯文：當(dāng)工作的時候，我意識到在炎熱的太陽下面在田里勞作是多么難分析：使用while引導(dǎo)省略的時間狀語從句，realized后面是how引導(dǎo)賓語從句【解答】Last week I took part in a farm work program

19、me in the suburbs（引出話題）At the class meeting， our teacher told us about the programme with the theme Working is most beautiful And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands（圖一）When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip【高分句型一】（圖二）On the farm，we helped pick watermelons While wo

20、rking， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun【高分句型二】（圖三）When I came back home，I shared my experiences with my parents And they were very proud of me（圖四）【點(diǎn)評】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來 動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使

21、用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果5（2019北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華你的英國好友Jim打算暑假期間來北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來郵件詢問相關(guān)信息請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1 交通出行；2 必備衣物注意：1 詞數(shù)不少于50；2 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim，Yours，Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】提綱類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型一：I suggest that you begin from Beijin

22、g， and Ill show you around譯文：我建議你從北京開始，我會帶你參觀分析：that引導(dǎo)賓語從句高分句型二： After that， you can go to Shanghai， where you can stay for a week譯文：之后，你可以去上海，在那里你可以待一個星期分析：使用where引導(dǎo)定語從句【解答】Dear Jim，Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China（寫明寫信目的）I suggest that you begin from Beijing， and Ill show you around 【

23、高分句型一】Tianjin will be your next stop After that， you can go to Shanghai， where you can stay for a week【高分句型二】 You can take highspeed trains to both cities（交通出行）Summer in these cities is hot and rainy， so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you（必備衣物）Looking forward to your arrival（愿望）Yours，Li Hua【

24、點(diǎn)評】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來 動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果6（2018北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)他們體驗(yàn)中國茶文化的全過程注意：

25、詞數(shù)不少于60Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture， which turned out to be extremely rewardingOn arriving at the tea house ， the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of te

26、a culture， including its profound history， its rich variety， and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea With their interest greatly sparked， I then began to teach them how to make teaIn order to deliver a clear presentation ， I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail Ab

27、sorbed in every move of mine， the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to timeNext came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves Washing the tea pots， adding tea leaves， and pouring water into the cups ， they foll

28、owed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of usAt the end of the activity ， holding the tea bags in our hands， we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea

29、culture was of great charm and huge value And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world【考點(diǎn)】圖畫類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型：句型一：Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture， which turned out to be extremely rewarding上周，我?guī)ьI(lǐng)外國學(xué)生到我們學(xué)校體

30、驗(yàn)中國真正的茶文化，這次活動真的非常有益此處是關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容句型二：Absorbed in every move of mine， the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to time 外國學(xué)生被（我介紹的）茶文化深深吸引，驚嘆于這獨(dú)特的茶文化，他們?nèi)滩蛔r不時地拍照此處結(jié)構(gòu)為過去分詞短語Absorbed in every move of min

31、e作原因狀語，表狀態(tài)，主句為the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldnt help taking pictures from time to time，短語be absorbed in意為沉浸在【解答】Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture， which turned out to be extremely rewarding【高

32、分句型一】（開頭引出話題承上啟下） On arriving at the tea house ， the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture， including its profound history， its rich variety， and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea With their interes

33、t greatly sparked， I then began to teach them how to make tea（介紹茶文化相關(guān)歷史，外國學(xué)生興趣被激發(fā)） In order to deliver a clear presentation ， I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail Absorbed in every move of mine， the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and th

34、ey couldnt help taking pictures from time to time【高分句型二】（介紹泡茶的過程，外國學(xué)生驚嘆拍照） Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves Washing the tea pots， adding tea leaves， and pouring water into the cups ， they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture The tea

35、 house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us（介紹泡茶的過程，外國學(xué)生驚嘆拍照） At the end of the activity ， holding the tea bags in our hands， we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value And I swelled wi

36、th pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world（拍照留念，進(jìn)一步傳播茶文化）【點(diǎn)評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型7（2018北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計(jì)劃明年來北京上大學(xué)他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1表示歡迎；2推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；3建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作注意：1

37、詞數(shù)不少于50；2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim，I am very glad to know that you are coming to attend university in Beijing next year（表示歡迎） Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture， I recommend Peking University for you， which is one of the best universities in China【高分句型一】Not only because it has the best hist

38、ory major in China， but also because of its strong traditional Chinese culture atmosphere【高分句型二】 To be admitted into it， you should sign up on line ahead of time， and hand in your application as well as your high school diploma（推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作）I have attached the enrollment prospectus at the end

39、 of the letter If you still have questions， you can visit their website directly（隨信附上北京大學(xué)的聯(lián)系方式）Looking forward to meeting you here soon（期盼見面）Yours，Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】提綱類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】這是李華給英國朋友Jim一封信根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主高分句型1Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture， I recommend Peking University for you

40、， which is one of the best universities in China句子里Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語； 代指先行詞Peking University ， which引導(dǎo)定語從句 is one of the best universities in China我知道你對中國文化感興趣，我推薦北京大學(xué)給你，這是中國最好的大學(xué)之一2 Not only because it has the best history major in China， but also because of it

41、s strong traditional Chinese culture atmosphere句子里Not onlybut also 表示不但而且不僅因?yàn)樗谥袊泻芎玫臍v史課程，而且因?yàn)樗泻軡夂竦闹袊鴤鹘y(tǒng)文化【解答】Dear Jim， I am very glad to know that you are coming to attend university in Beijing next year（表示歡迎） Knowing you are interested in Chinese culture， I recommend Peking University for you， whi

42、ch is one of the best universities in China【高分句型一】Not only because it has the best history major in China， but also because of its strong traditional Chinese culture atmosphere【高分句型二】 To be admitted into it， you should sign up on line ahead of time， and hand in your application as well as your high

43、school diploma（推薦他上哪所大學(xué)；建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作） I have attached the enrollment prospectus at the end of the letter If you still have questions， you can visit their website directly（隨信附上北京大學(xué)的聯(lián)系方式） Looking forward to meeting you here soon（期盼見面） Yours Li Hua【點(diǎn)評】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)寫作

44、時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化8（2017北京）你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：長江之行或者泰山之旅Jim來信希望你能給些建議請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1你建議的線路；2你的理由；3你的祝愿注意：1詞數(shù)不少于50；2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear Jim，I am glad to learn that you are coming to visit ChinaOf the two routes given by your

45、school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the Yangtze River deserve the effortFor one thing，you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which has been handed down from generation to generation； For another，the river，extending as long as 6300 kilometres，runs through different parts of

46、ChinaAs a result，it can provides splendid landscape of different kindsI believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding，is bound to be a memorable experience for youYours，Li Hua【考點(diǎn)】提綱類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型：句型一：Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that（1）the trip to the Changjiang

47、River deserve the effort（2）你們學(xué)校所提供的兩個路線中，我強(qiáng)烈建議長江之行值得付出努力（1）recommend vt推薦，建議，后接賓語從句，從句中動詞用（should）+動詞原形，為虛擬語氣的用法，是書面表達(dá)的亮點(diǎn)句型（2）deserve vt值得；deserve the effort值得付出努力句型二：For one thing（1），you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which （2）has been handed down from generation to generation（

48、3）； 一則，你能夠體驗(yàn)長江沿途的中國文化，它是代代相傳下來的文化（1）For one thingfor another一則再則；關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章流暢；（2）which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；which指代上文的Chinese culture；非限制性定語從句是書面表達(dá)中的常見的高級句型（3）hand downfrom generation to generation代代相傳；短語是書面表達(dá)中的常見高級詞匯句型三：I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding（1），is bound to （2）be a memorable exper

49、ience for you我相信，這個旅行，既放松又值得；肯定會成為你的一次難忘的經(jīng)歷（1）both relaxing and rewarding既放松又值得，現(xiàn)在分詞短語做trip的非限制性定語；分詞做定語或狀語一直是書面表達(dá)中被推崇的高分句型（2）be bound to do 必然會【解答】Dear Jim， I am glad to learn that you are coming to visit China（表示歡迎） Of the two routes given by your school，I strongly recommend that the trip to the C

50、hangjiang River deserve the effort【高分句型一】（建議的線路）For one thing，you can experience rich Chinese culture along the river，which has been handed down from generation to generation【高分句型二】； For another，the river，extending as long as 6300 kilometres，runs through different parts of ChinaAs a result，it can pr

51、ovides splendid landscape of different kinds（選擇該線的理由） I believe that the trip，both relaxing and rewarding，is bound to be a memorable experience for you【高分句型三】（祝愿）Yours， Li Hua【點(diǎn)評】寫作時首先審題，本題體裁為建議信，屬于常規(guī)復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容選擇其中一條線路，圍繞中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主線去寫就基本能扣題，稍微需要注意題干要點(diǎn)之間的界限，確保要點(diǎn)齊全其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級句型；詞

52、語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、whats more、moreover、for one thing for another等，使文字更加流暢9（2017北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以感恩母校為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：視頻video【考點(diǎn)】圖畫類菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】高分句型：句型一：Having had （1）a heated discussion，we agreed on （2）making a video to record our e

53、xperiences at school經(jīng)過熱烈的討論，我們一致同意制作視頻記錄我們在學(xué)校的經(jīng)歷（1）having had 現(xiàn)在分詞完成式做時間狀語，相當(dāng)于after引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；分詞做狀語是書面表達(dá)的亮點(diǎn)句型（2）agree on 取得一致意見句型二：Material collecting took us a whole week，during which （1）we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life（2）收集材料花費(fèi)了我們整整一個星期；在此期間我們采訪了老師，拍攝了我們學(xué)

54、校生活的每一方面（1）during which 在此期間，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which指代上文的a whole week，非限制性定語從句是書面表達(dá)中常用的高分句型（2）every aspect of school life學(xué)校生活的每一方面句型三：We debated over （1）what to put into（2）the video我們就把什么材料放進(jìn)視頻進(jìn)行辯論（1）debate over 就進(jìn)行辯論（2）what to put into the video為疑問詞+to do相當(dāng)于一個名詞性從句，本句中相當(dāng)于一個賓語從句；書面表達(dá)中運(yùn)用疑問詞+to do會使得表達(dá)

55、簡練【解答】Graduation finally cameMy classmates and I decided to do somethingHaving had a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school【高分句型一】（圖片一：決定制作視頻） Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life【高分句型二】（圖片2：收集視頻材料）The editing part after that was toughWe debated over what to put into the video【高分句型三】Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect（圖片3：視頻取舍和制作） Several days later，when the v