上海中考英語(yǔ)話題作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

1、話題作文一Write at least 60 words about the topic “_left me a new impression.”（請(qǐng)以“_給我留下一個(gè)新印象”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）你身邊有熟悉的同學(xué)、朋友、老師，有一天可能因?yàn)槟臣伦屇銓?duì)她（他）改變了原有的看法。請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，并結(jié)合這個(gè)事例談?wù)勊ㄋ┙o你留下的這個(gè)新的印象。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）二Write at least 60 words on the topic Happiness doesnt always disappear durin

2、g difficult times(以在困難時(shí)期，幸福感不一定會(huì)消失為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格).小到個(gè)人，大到團(tuán)隊(duì)、城市、國(guó)家，都會(huì)有困難時(shí)期，但即便是困難時(shí)期，人們還是能感受生活中的小喜悅，感受幸福溫馨的片刻，請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己或他人的經(jīng)歷，說(shuō)說(shuō)困難時(shí)期的幸福感。(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予計(jì)分)_三Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根據(jù)以下情境寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)法國(guó)“蜘蛛人”阿蘭.羅伯特的經(jīng)歷告訴我們， 戰(zhàn)勝恐懼也可以是一種勇敢。你對(duì)勇敢的理解是如何

3、的呢？請(qǐng)以“The time I was brave(那次我很勇敢)” 為題，根據(jù)自身的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀銓?duì)勇敢的理解。（注意： 1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀的語(yǔ)篇不得分。）_四Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Life in 2050”（請(qǐng)以 “2050 年的生活”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）提示：到2050年，我們的生活會(huì)是什么樣的？請(qǐng)選擇下圖中(或自擬)12個(gè)方面展開(kāi)描述。_五Write at least 60 words about the topic M

4、y opinion on remote lessons (請(qǐng)以我對(duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的看法為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)疫情期間我們開(kāi)啟了一種全新的學(xué)習(xí)模式遠(yuǎn)程課堂(remote lessons)。在此期間你是如何學(xué)習(xí)的？請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)剬?duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的看法。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。The following is for reference only. (以下表達(dá)僅供參考)because of the virusmanage timeself-controleffective_六Write a passage of at least 60

5、 words on the topic “The first time I .”（以“我第一次”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于 60 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）要求：1. 補(bǔ)全作文標(biāo)題。2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。_范文及解析一范文：The teacher left me a new impression.Once Iwas not interested in English. Thatwas Miss Wang who changed me. One day, our teacher told us we would have an English speec

6、h competition two months later. Everyone was happyexcept me, because I couldnt dare to speak English in public. My English teacher came with asmile and encouraged me. From then on, I practiced every day. The day came, I got the first prize at last. From Miss Wang, I know that if you decide to do som

7、ething and put your heart into it , you will succeed. The teacher left me a new impression.1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題，并且根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，敘述因?yàn)槟臣伦屇銓?duì)她（他）改變了原有的看法，給你留下了新的印象。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；描述故事時(shí)，力求描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，故事發(fā)生的背景、起因等敘述完整，保證條例清晰。二范文Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult timesEveryon

8、e may have difficult times. Even in difficult times, people can still feel the small joys in life.One day, it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school. I didnt take an umbrella, so I was wet. Suddenly, a stranger came toward me. He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home.

9、 I didnt know him but I was very thankful he helped me. Although the weather was cold, I felt very warm in my heart.題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們以“Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult times在困難時(shí)期，幸福感不一定會(huì)消失”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮想象力，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，寫(xiě)一篇切題的文章。這是一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，學(xué)生所選取的生活中的事例應(yīng)合情合理。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，

10、這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)和表達(dá)習(xí)慣，寫(xiě)完整的句子，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)等復(fù)雜句式，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫、表達(dá)流暢。三范文：The time I was braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.I used to be afraid of s

11、peaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teachers encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time

12、I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Dont let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示，首先敘述自身的經(jīng)歷，然后根據(jù)經(jīng)歷談?wù)剬?duì)勇敢的理解。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述自身的經(jīng)歷；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)敘述過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)來(lái)敘述自己的成長(zhǎng)和對(duì)勇敢的理解。描述經(jīng)歷時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)

13、確，敘事完整，行文連貫，保證條理清晰。四范文Life in 2050Life has changed a lot in 2050. The environment will be better and better. The air is fresher and the water is clearer. In 2050, people will no longer eat traditional food. People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full for a long time. Science and tec

14、hnology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of human beings. Flying machines will replace todays cars. People wont have to go to school to study. They will study at home through computers.1、題干解讀：文章要求對(duì)2050年的生活的影響，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)；人稱應(yīng)以第三人稱第一人稱為主。2、寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：例文先是一句話點(diǎn)題；然后分開(kāi)介紹了環(huán)境、食物、科技、交通和上學(xué)情況

15、。語(yǔ)言流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。五范文My opinion on remote lessonsBecause of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks. By communicating with teachers on the online communication platform, I can also solve the problems in the new knowledge in time. It is important for me to keep learning every day. Remote le

16、ssons can provide us with a good opportunity to learn. Remote lessons have many advantages over the traditional classes. However, remote lessons also has some disadvantages. For example, staring at the screen for a long time is very harmful to students eyes. And we students need self-control. Then w

17、e can finish learning effectively.題目解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，要求寫(xiě)出自己對(duì)遠(yuǎn)程課堂的影響，可以結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷談。文章注意談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)看法時(shí)，需要觀點(diǎn)明確，有自己的見(jiàn)解。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文分成兩頓，第一段介紹自己六個(gè)月的遠(yuǎn)程課堂經(jīng)歷，以及如何學(xué)習(xí)的，第二段介紹了作者認(rèn)為遠(yuǎn)程課堂的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)明確，行文流暢，句型多樣。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：solve the problems；for a long time；be harmful to；finish doing。句型：it作形式主語(yǔ)It is important for me to keep learning every d

18、ay.；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)應(yīng)用Because of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks.六、The first time I succeeded in cookingWhen I was very young, I liked to watch my mother cook. I always found it amazing when colorful dishes appeared on the table. So I begged my mother to teach me to cook. Though I started with some simple dishes, it wasnt so easy as I had imagined. But I kept practicing. Then, one day in the holiday, I decided to make lunch without my mothers help. I tried two of the dishes I had learnt. To my surprise, I made it! At that moment I was proud of mys