中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)-話題9-成長(zhǎng)變化課件

1、 分析河南近10年中招真題的書面表達(dá)可知，“成長(zhǎng)變化”這一話題2016年以“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”為題進(jìn)行考查，要求介紹自身的成長(zhǎng)變化，包括外貌、性格、心理、學(xué)習(xí)、與人交往或所取得的成績(jī)等方面。結(jié)合全國(guó)近年中考真題可知，該話題通常還有“介紹他人的成長(zhǎng)變化(含家庭成員)”這一命題角度。命題探索(2016河南)我們的每一次變化都見證著我們的成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)以“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”為題，并根據(jù)要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。典例剖析審標(biāo)題：我個(gè)人最大的改變審人稱：第一人稱審文體：記敘文

2、一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 要點(diǎn)： 1)變化是什么； 2)變化是如何發(fā)生的； 3)變化后有何感受。2. 要求： 1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2)詞數(shù)80左右。審時(shí)態(tài)：一般過去時(shí)審要點(diǎn)：變化后的收獲與成長(zhǎng)（時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句 1. I used to be shy and less confident. Now Im different from before.2. Lucy has changed a lot. She used to have short hair.3. Now shes not shy anymore an

3、d loves singing in front of crowds.1角度外貌及性格變化一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背 1. Billy以前很安靜?，F(xiàn)在變得很活潑。_2. Kate變得不一樣了。她過去戴眼鏡。_3. 他現(xiàn)在不再緊張了，而且喜歡與他人交談。_Billy used to be so quiet. Now she is very active.Kate was different. She used to wear glasses.Now hes not nervous anymore and likes communicating with others.

4、 一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 仿 寫 1. She read a little in the past. But now she finds great pleasure in reading.2. My brother didnt like traveling. However, he is crazy about traveling now.3. I hated playing basketball before. Now I love it for my partner.2角度興趣愛好變化一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背 1. 他之前不喜歡聽歌。

5、但現(xiàn)在他發(fā)現(xiàn)了聽歌的樂趣。_ He disliked listening to songs in the past. But now he found great pleasure in listening to them.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 仿 寫 2. 我妹妹之前不喜歡京劇。然而，現(xiàn)在她迷上了京劇。_3. 我之前討厭體育課?，F(xiàn)在因?yàn)轶w育老師我喜歡它。_My sister didnt like Beijing opera. However, she is crazy about it now.I hated PE. class before. Now I love

6、 it for my PE. teacher.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句 1. I am happy now and I work hard.Im much happier now, and I work even harder than I used to.2. I made lots of progress in English learning this year.With the help of the teacher and my classmates, I made lots of progress in English learning this year.3角度其

7、他方面成長(zhǎng)變化(含經(jīng)驗(yàn)、知識(shí)、價(jià)值觀等)一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背3. I knew the importance of time and planning.Day by day, I knew the importance of time and planning.4. I join in the volunteer activity. My experience of caring for others has improved so much.Thanks to joining in the volunteer activity, my experience

8、of caring for others has improved so much.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句 1. I am careful in my study now and very serious with it. (用比較級(jí)升格)_2. I realized the importance of putting things in order.(用with the help of升格)_I am more careful in my study now and much more serious with it.With the help of my parents,

9、 I realized the importance of putting things in order.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 升 格 3. I began to believe that nothing is impossible if you are willing to do it.(用day by day升格)_4. I take part in the sports meeting. I learned the true spirit in sports. (用thanks to升格)_Day by day, I began to believe that

10、 nothing is impossible if you are willing to do it.Thanks to taking part in the sports meeting, I learned the true spirit in sports.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句 1. I have made great progress in the past three years.I am so glad that I have made great progress in the past three years.2. I am sure I will grow

11、 up better with my fathers help.I am sure I will grow up better with my fathers help and I will love him forever.4角度成長(zhǎng)后的感受一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背 1. I have changed a lot these years. (擴(kuò)寫具體的感受)_2. I believe that I can almost do anything. (擴(kuò)寫條件)_Im so pleased that Ive changed a lot these years.I b

12、elieve that I can almost do anything if I believe in myself.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 擴(kuò) 寫 The biggest personal change Ive ever made is _(變化). At first, I hated/didnt like _(事情). Later，_(影響自己的一件事). After that, I found I fell in love with that I become more confident/outgoing/.語(yǔ)段練習(xí)1成長(zhǎng)變化及感受 learning Engl

13、ish/taking part in afterclass activities/speaking in public/. my English teacher asked me to play a part in a group work/.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句練語(yǔ)段_(某事)and I _(具體表現(xiàn)). At the same time, _(這件事)is also a fantastic/wonderful way to pass my free time. From this experience, _ _(變化后的收獲) learning English/spea

14、king English in public/.wanted to learn more about English/. talking with my friends in English/. I realized that interest is the best teacher/as long as we do what we want to do, we will be able to succeed/. 一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句The biggest personal change Ive ever madeThe biggest personal change Iv

15、e ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my fr

16、ee time.Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.一階 審好題三階練語(yǔ)段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章 寫作練兵寫作練兵 (2019臨沂改編)時(shí)光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會(huì)有很多變化。請(qǐng)以“I have changed a lot！”為題，并根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，描述你最重要的變化。1. 要點(diǎn)：1)你過去是什么樣的； 2)你最重要的變化是什么； 3)變化的過程及你的收獲。2. 要求：1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2)詞數(shù)100左右。2020 新變化I have changed a l

17、ot!_寫作練兵I have changed a lot during the three junior high school time. I used to seldom care about others. However, the most important change is that I learned to take responsibilities. Last term, I joined the English Drama Club. The members were divided into different groups and each group acted ou

18、t a story. I was asked to play a small role without lines. However, I acted carefully every time and watched others play carefully. In the end, our performance was a great success. _寫作練兵Its the sense of responsibility that helps us do our work well. And from that I learned to be responsible at any moment.巧用感嘆句可將說話者說話時(shí)驚訝、喜悅、憤怒、氣憤等思想