2022屆高考英語書面表達寫作復習指導之祝賀篇-課件(30頁PPT)

1、首 頁末 頁祝賀篇單詞congratulation n. 祝賀 prize n. 獎品proud adj. 驕傲的 success n. 成功achieve v. 實現(xiàn) deserve v. 值得effort n. 努力 diligent adj. 勤奮的brilliant adj. 閃耀的;杰出的 reward v. & n. 獎賞;回報admiration n. 贊美,欽佩 pride n. 自豪短語express ones congratulations on表達某人對的祝賀be proud of sb. 為某人驕傲achieve ones goal/ aim 實現(xiàn)某人的目標fulfil

2、l ones dreams 實現(xiàn)某人的夢想How happy I am to hear that 很高興得知一、話題詞匯Step 1 素材累積第1頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁開頭引人入勝1. I have learned with delight that you won first prize in the English Speech Contest and Im writing to express my deepest congratulations to you.我很高興得知你在英語演講比賽中獲得第一名。 我寫信是向你傳達最誠摯的祝賀。2. I am very excited and

3、inspired by the good news thatand I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on得知這個好消息,我很激動也很振奮。 我寫信對表達我最誠摯的祝賀。3. Good news travels fast! It was delightful for me to hear thatI would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on好事傳千里! 我很高興聽到。 我想向你傳達最熱烈的祝賀。篇中精編細織1. As your close friend,

4、I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your success.作為你的密友,我只想讓你知道能分享你的驕傲我有多幸運,能分享你的成功我有多喜悅。二、話題句型第2頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁2. I have been witnessing your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put

5、 in.這些年以來,我一直懷著欽佩之情見證著你的進步,我比任何人都清楚你付出了多少努力。3. I understand for sure that it isthat leads you to the current success. is a reward, which you richly deserve.我很清楚是使你獲得現(xiàn)在的成功。 是你理應獲得的獎賞。收尾簡練到位1. Judging from your current success/ achievement, I am confident that you willin the future.從你當前的成功/ 成就來看,我相信你將

6、來會2. I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career.我相信這個職位將會是一個新的開始,也是一個機會,讓你擁抱更充實的生活,為未來的輝煌事業(yè)鋪平道路。第3頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁3. Sincere congratulations to you again! I wish you greater success in the years ahead.再次向

7、你表達真誠的祝賀。 我祝愿你在未來的歲月中取得更大的成功。第4頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁1. 得知你被哈佛大學錄取這個好消息,我很激動也很振奮。 我寫信對你的成功表達我最誠摯的祝賀。_2. 我很清楚是你的勤奮和卓越的能力使你獲得現(xiàn)在的成功。 這份榮譽是你理應獲得的獎賞。_3. 從你當前的成功來看,我相信在不久的將來你會實現(xiàn)夢想。_三、仿寫練習 I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you are admitted to Harvard University and I am writing to offer my sincer

8、est congratulations on your success. I understand for sure that it is your hard work and excellent ability that lead you to the current success.This honor is a reward, which you richly deserve. Judging from your current success, I am confident that you will achieve your dream in the near future.第5頁，

9、共30頁。首 頁末 頁Step 2 遣詞造句一、句型講堂狀語從句(二)1.原因狀語從句原因狀語從句常用從屬連詞 as, because, in that, now that, since, when 等引導。She doesnt want to bother you as she knows you are pretty tired.2. 方式狀語從句方式狀語從句表示動作進行的的方式或樣子,常由從屬連詞 as, as if, as though, like, asso等引導。He treated me as if I were his son._ _ _ _ 主語 謂語 賓語 充當句中的狀語_

10、 _ _ _主語 謂語 賓語 充當句中的狀語第6頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁二、強化訓練(一) 單句改錯。下列每個句子中均有一處錯誤,請找出并修改。1. The teacher hopes that we can correct our attitude like Tom do.2. Since you dont like the movie, you can go shopping to me.3. You had better take a taxi as its raining heavy.4. Now that you agree me, I will get it done at on

11、ce.5. He did exactly as he was telling._does_with_heavilywith_told第7頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁(二) 寫作必備。請將下列中文句子譯為英文。1.曾經(jīng)有一段時間我討厭上學。 (there be a time when)_2.你沒有必要買這本書。 (there is no need)_3. 他趕走了那只老鼠,真的很勇敢! (It is adj. of sb. to)_4. 直到昨天晚上他才回來。 (not until)_5.很遺憾我不能參加這次聚會。 (its a pity)_ There was a time when I hat

12、ed going to school.There is no need for you to buy the bookIt is really brave of him to expel the mouse away.Not until last night did he come back. / He didnt come back until last night. Its a pity that I am not able to attend the party.第8頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁三、短文改錯以下短文共有10 處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或

13、修改。Dear Anna, I am very glad to learn that you had won first prize in your schools English writing contest. And I am writing to offer my congratulations in your excellent performance. Its a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarding. How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning Engli

14、sh for several year and I have little trouble in listening, speaking and reading. Therefore, I find it hard to write the good composition. Although Ive put a lot of efforts into it, but I just cant find a way out. I feel stressed out. I would _have_ a_ on_However_rewarded_years第9頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁appreci

15、ate if you could give me some specific advices on it. Looking forward to your earlier reply. Yours, Li Hua 剖析第一處:hadhave。 考查動詞的時態(tài)。 此處強調的是現(xiàn)在的結果,所以應該使用現(xiàn)在完成時,故 had 改為 have。第二處:inon。 考查介詞。 congratulations 后常常跟介詞 on, 故 in 改為 on。第三處:rewardingrewarded。 考 查 非 謂 語 動 詞。efforts 與 reward 之間是被動關系,所以此處使用過去分詞作賓語補足

16、語,故 rewarding 改為 rewarded。 it_ advice_ early第10頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁第四處:yearyears。 考查名詞的單復數(shù)。 名詞前面有 several 修飾,所以使用復數(shù),故 year 改為years。第五處:ThereforeHowever。 考查副詞。 前一句說到在聽、說和讀方面沒有什么問題,后一句提到發(fā)現(xiàn)寫一篇好作文很難,所以前后兩句是轉折關系,因此這里使用副詞 However,故Therefore 改為 However。第六處:thea。 考查冠詞。 根據(jù)句意可知,李華發(fā)現(xiàn)寫一篇好作文很難,所以使用不定冠詞 a,故 the 改為 a。第七處

17、:but 去掉。 考查連詞。 although 和 but 不能同時出現(xiàn)在一句話中,故 but 去掉。第八處:在 if 前加 it。 考 查 固 定 句 型。 I would appreciate it if you could是一個固定句型,意為“如果你能夠,我將不勝感激”,故appreciate 后加 it。第九處:advicesadvice。 考查名詞的單復數(shù)。 advice是不可數(shù)名詞,沒有復數(shù)形式,故 advices 改為 advice。第十處:earlierearly。 考查形容詞。 根據(jù)句意可知,希望早日收到回信,故 earlier 改為 early。第11頁，共30頁。首 頁末

18、 頁Step 3 謀篇布局一、案例展示英語高考原創(chuàng)題書面表達 假定你是李華,近日與你一起參加全國中學生英語演講比賽的同學David 獲得了一等獎。 請根據(jù)所給提示給 David 寫一封信,要點如下: 1. 告訴他獲獎的消息并表示祝賀; 2. 回顧你們刻苦訓練的過程; 3. 表示感謝并向他學習。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。DearDavid,_ All the best! Yours, Li Hua第12頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁二、審題立意審題定位1. 文體:祝賀信2. 主題:祝賀同學獲獎3. 要點:傳達消息并祝

19、賀+回顧刻苦訓練過程+感謝并向他學習4. 要求:詞數(shù) 100 左右,適當增加細節(jié)以使文章充實、連貫5. 人稱:第一、第二人稱為主6. 時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時和過去時為主,現(xiàn)在完成時和將來時為輔技巧點撥1. 根據(jù)要點的多寡以及要點間關系的密切程度和邏輯關系劃分段落。 一般分為三段較合適。2. 適時地采用倒裝句、強調句、虛擬語氣等來強化情感的表達。3. 盡量不使用簡單句型來表達。 可使用非謂語結構、獨立主格結構、被動句型或者復合句來表達,以體現(xiàn)英語文章的句子多樣性。4. 注意語句間的銜接,使用體現(xiàn)句子之間的邏輯關系的過渡性詞語。第13頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁要點整合1. 祝賀:傳達消息,表示祝賀。2.

20、 回顧刻苦訓練過程:每天早上大聲朗讀,互相指出錯誤,互相鼓勵。3. 感謝并向他學習:感謝他傳授了很多知識,學習他刻苦學習的態(tài)度和精神?？蚣軜嫿ǖ谝欢?告知對方在全國高中生英語演講比賽中獲得一等獎,對對方的獲獎表示祝賀。第二段: 成功都是來自努力奮斗,回顧以前早起練習說英語,互相指出練習中出現(xiàn)的錯誤,英語不斷進步的過程。第三段:對于對方的幫助表示感謝,這將對將來的事業(yè)有益。第14頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁斟詞酌句1. 傳達消息+祝賀:I am writing to tell you thrilling news that you have won first prize in the Natio

21、nal High School English Speaking Contest.I would like to tell you a piece of good news that you have won first prize in the National High School English Speaking Contest.Id like to offer my congratulations on your success.2. 回顧刻苦訓練過程:As is well-known, success comes from diligence and intelligence.It

22、 was in the early morning that you practiced reading English aloud till you could speak English as fluently as Americans did.Whats more, when I found a mistake in your English, immediately, you repaid with appreciation.Not only did you make your English improved every day but also you encouraged me

23、to practise more.3. 感謝+學習:With my English improved a lot, I hope you can accept my gratitude.I have learned a lot from you, which will benefit my career in the future.I will always remember your great spirit in learning Engish and learn from you.第15頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁三、妙筆生花 豐富的詞匯和多樣的句型,是從眾多作文中脫穎而出的關鍵。積累高級

24、詞匯,學會運用多種句型,你的作文才能出類拔萃。詞匯與短語thrilling news 激動人心的消息 as is well-known 眾所周知benefit my career 對我的事業(yè)有幫助 diligence and intelligence 勤奮和智慧first prize 一等獎 whats more 此外repay with appreciation 用感激來回報 accept my gratitude 接受我的感激句型與表達I am writing to tell you thrilling news that you have won first prize in the N

25、ational High School English Speaking Contest.句中 that 引導同位語從句,是高水平的句子。As is well-known, success comes from diligence and intelligence.as 引導的非限制性定語從句。第16頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁It was in the early morning that you practiced reading English aloud till you could speak English as fluently as Americans did.強調 in the

26、 early morning, 強調句型起到增強情感的作用。Not only did you make your English improved every day but also you encouraged me to practise more.由 not onlybut also引導的倒裝句。With my English improved a lot, I hope you can accept my gratitude.with 結構作狀語放在句首。第17頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁四、寫作達人第18頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁第19頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁Step 4 經(jīng)典再現(xiàn)

27、一、考題回放201 6 洛陽 高 三卷 假定你是李華,得知你的美國筆友 Eric 獲得了漢語橋世界大學生中文演講比賽一等獎。 你為他感到驕傲,并給他寫一封祝賀信,要點如下: 1. 表示祝賀; 2. 分享快樂; 3. 寄予希望。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Eric,_ Yours, Li Hua第20頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁二、思路點撥 本文要求寫一封祝賀信。 內容要點都已給出,但各部分的內容都需要考生發(fā)揮補充。 為了保證內容的完整無缺,寫作思路“三步走”:(1)寫信的目的和表示祝賀;(2)對喜訊進行

28、積極的評價(包括肯定被祝賀人過去的努力和優(yōu)點,這部分很容易被考生忽略);(3)表達衷心的祝福及未來的希望。 此外,考生還要注意語氣要真誠、自然、親切動人。三、詞句錦囊offer ones sincerest congratulations to sb. 向某人表達最真誠的祝賀 win first prize 獲得一等獎 speech contest 演講比賽 reward 獎勵 deserve 值得 share ones pride 分享某人的驕傲make greater progress 取得更大的進步 obtain a bright future 獲得光明的未來at last 最后 com

29、municate with 與交流第21頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁四、補充完整Dear Eric, I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations to you on your winning first prize of “Chinese Bridge” World College Students Chinese Speech Contest. I know you have worked so hard in the past years that 1._ (這是你非常值得的獎賞). I just want you to know h

30、ow lucky I am to be able to share your pride and 2. _ (對于你的成功我有多么喜悅). 3._ (我相信你會取得更大的進步) in your study and obtain a bright future in your life. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other soon. Yours, Li Hua it is a reward you fully deserve how pleased I am at your success I am sure y

31、ou will make greater progress第22頁，共30頁。Step 5 佳作研習一、作文典范佳作研讀Dear Peter, I am very excited to tell you that you have been awarded first prize in the Chinese speech contest hosted by my city. Congratulate you on the great success! But I know it was not easily achieved. Only after you made great effort

32、s did it turn natural. You specifically devoted a week to travelling around the city, looking carefully to find out beauties of it and its peoples life, and describing them from unique angles. You just began as a Chinese learner when invited to take part. However, in order to make a perfect speech,

33、you practised speaking Chinese every day. The past three 承上啟下+achieve+被動語態(tài)倒裝句+make effortsdevoteto+并列分詞作介詞賓語狀語從句省略in order to 狀語第23頁，共30頁。 months saw how you got close to the city and how hard you studied Chinese. Your speech was credible and unquestionable, and you fully deserve the title! I found

34、youve really fallen in love with the city. So do you take it into consideration to work and live here? Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours, Li Hua非生命名詞作 see 的主語+get close to+賓語從句第24頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁習題示例 假定你是李華,在得知你的美國朋友 Peter獲得了你市舉辦的中文演講比賽一等獎后,給他寫一封信,告訴他這個消息并表示祝賀。 具體內容如下: 1. 表示祝賀; 2. 演講的成功來自他的努力

35、和對這座城市的愛; 3. 建議來該市工作生活。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可 以 適 當 增 加 細 節(jié), 以 使 行 文連貫; 3. 開頭語和結束語已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Peter, I am very excited to tell you that you have been awarded first prize in the Chinese speech contest hosted by my city._ Sincere congratulations to you again!Yours,Li Hua第25頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁一、作文典范研習以上范文

36、美句,將下列句子譯為英文。 法律只有在通過后才生效。2. 那 5 個人走進房間,好奇地四處張望著。3. 要是好好讀一下的話,這本書肯定會帶給你許多思考。4. 為了能讓人聽見,安妮提高了嗓門。5. 世界歷史所見證的眼淚比歡笑多。_ The five people entered the room, looking around curiously.Only after it is passed will the law take effect. If well read, the book will give you much to think. Anne raised her voice in

37、 order to be heard. The world history has seen more tears than laughter.第26頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁Step 6 仿真模擬 假定你是李華,你的美國朋友 Jim 參加了由圍棋委員會舉辦的圍棋人機大戰(zhàn)且打敗了人工智能程序 Blaster 獲得第一名。 請根據(jù)以下內容要點給 Jim 寫一封電子郵件向他表示祝賀。 1. 對他表示祝賀; 2. 肯定他付出的努力; 3. 對他的祝福。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:圍棋 go chessTask 1Task 2 假定你是李華,你的美

38、國朋友 Elaine 告知你她競演學校的灰姑娘話劇角色,得到了灰姑娘這個角色,將代表學校參加市里組織的“英語文化節(jié)”話劇比賽。 請你給 Elaine 回一封郵件,要點包括: 1. 對她表示祝賀; 2. 你對此事的看法; 3. 對她的祝福,并表示你會去現(xiàn)場看比賽給她加油。注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。第27頁，共30頁。首 頁末 頁Dear Jim, Im much delighted to know that you won first prize in the go chess competition between human and machine organized by the go chess committee, defeating the artificial intelligence program Blaster. Id like to