四級(jí)漫畫作文寫作方法課件

1、漫畫作文寫作在2012年6月六級(jí)（CET-6考試）中，就考查了互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)人際交流的影響這樣一篇漫畫作文題目?？碱}貼近日常生活化 英語(yǔ)實(shí)用性須重視 . 自“多題多卷”改革以來，繼四六級(jí)聽力不斷向日常生活化靠攏后。從今年的考題可以看出，作文也像日常生活化靠攏?？疾榉绞降母淖儯瑢?shí)際上是引導(dǎo)考生們?cè)谄綍r(shí)復(fù)習(xí)過程中，一是更加重視能力的日積月累；二是引導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的實(shí)用性。對(duì)于作文這一塊，無論考何種形式作文，最簡(jiǎn)易的處理方式是：有漢語(yǔ)提綱則按照漢語(yǔ)提綱寫相應(yīng)的功能段落，若無漢語(yǔ)提綱則按照話題和內(nèi)容要求直接寫相應(yīng)的功能表達(dá)或自己列出基本提綱再寫相應(yīng)功能表達(dá)！圖表和圖畫、書信亦可如此！圖畫、話語(yǔ)評(píng)論和圖表作文可按

2、照相同模式來處理：首段引出話語(yǔ)，圖畫和圖表，并對(duì)其內(nèi)容描述評(píng)論；二段寫對(duì)應(yīng)現(xiàn)象、意義或危害，尾段寫看法和建議并展望！2013.122013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain

3、 the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone

4、in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.分析:傳統(tǒng)的作文歸類方式，如觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比、問題解決或按圖畫、圖表或名言警句類劃分的方式正逐漸退出歷史舞臺(tái)。相反，按照題目要求寫相應(yīng)的“功能段落”和表達(dá)是答題的永恒方式，永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)因?yàn)槌鲱}方式的改變而失效。本篇作文體裁明確，話題清晰，內(nèi)容要求具體，即：簡(jiǎn)要解釋手機(jī)的過度使用并分析其可能產(chǎn)生的后果。可以看出，題目明確要求寫的“現(xiàn)象”、“危害”，此外可

5、寫的是“建議”。第一段寫作方法1. Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are crossing the street; to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.2. As the drawing presents, there is a man walki

6、ng across the street absorbedly focusing on his cell phone without noticing the surroundings. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon and rare in some cities, especially among the youngsters.第一段寫作方法3. From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instea

7、d of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security.4. The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative inf

8、luence of mobile phone. As is subtly shown in the picture，so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road. What a meaningful cartoon!第一段寫作常用句式1. From the cartoon given above, we can observe that2. The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenome

9、non in contemporary society that 3. As is subtly shown in the picture4. As the drawing presents5. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon 6. . Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. Yo

10、u should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I ar

11、e fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.分析:顯然，首先的第一項(xiàng)要求寫的內(nèi)容是“網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人際交流的影響”，卻非圖畫描述。之后，提出一個(gè)問題“電子交流是否會(huì)替代面對(duì)面交流”，考生需要自己給出觀點(diǎn)。This simple but thought-provoki

12、ng cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help o

13、f the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the pic

14、ture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第二段寫作方法(寫后果)1. We learn from the cartoon that cell phones have been

15、increasingly widespread in peoples life（現(xiàn)象描述，呈上）. Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. One of the most obvious advantages is that we can contact with our friends and relatives more conveniently than ever before. （好處）However, it is mobile-phones advantages that lead some people to overuse o

16、r be addicted to them（自然過渡到不好的影響）, which tends to exert a negative impact on our life. For example, overusing cell phones will reduce face-to-face communication among people（具體說明不好的影響是什么）. 第二段寫作方法（寫后果）2. It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces negative influences on body and mind(開門見山提出

17、總括句). First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs ones eyesight. （第一）Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, l

18、earning, or daily life（第二）. Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind. An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.（第三）第二段寫作方法（寫后果）3. What the picture illustrates is the prevailing situation t

19、hat has long existed in todays China（呈上）. That is the mobile phone obsession. With the advent of information age, people are becoming increasingly fascinated on the electronic products, especially the cell phones（現(xiàn)象闡述）. Not surprisingly, you could easily notice that most of us are obsessed in sendin

20、g messages, playing online games with their mobile phones（進(jìn)一步闡述現(xiàn)象）. It cannot be denied that this phenomenon may negatively impact the relationship among people, and therefore they will become estranged and isolated（負(fù)面影響）.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay b

21、ased on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy, -How

22、are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.分析:顯然，首先的第一項(xiàng)要求寫的內(nèi)容是“網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人際交流的影響”，卻非圖畫描述。之后，提出一個(gè)問題“電子交流是否會(huì)替代面對(duì)面交流”，考生需要自己給出觀點(diǎn)。Th

23、is simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.From my perspective, the electronic contact can/cannot replace face

24、to face communication owing to the following factors. .As far as Im concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. From my perspective, the electronic contact cannot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. To begin with, over-reli

25、ance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face（個(gè)人關(guān)系）. For example, the aged parents would like their only son who works far away home to come back home more often rather than to talk with him on the inte

26、rnet occasionally（例證）. Whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society（社會(huì)層面）, for it attaches more importance on human affection and feelings instead of convenience and speed.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to w

27、rite a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2013.12第一段：現(xiàn)象描述。第二段：過度使用手機(jī)的后果。第三段

28、：個(gè)人看法，建議或危害。Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken（建議）. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive us of cell-phones（社會(huì)層面）. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start（個(gè)人方面

29、）.建議控制手機(jī)的使用。2013.12第一段：現(xiàn)象描述。第二段：過度使用手機(jī)的后果。第三段：個(gè)人看法，建議或危害。Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that good relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.強(qiáng)調(diào)面對(duì)面交流的重要性。注：face-to-face communication. comm

30、unicate face to face.2013.12第一段：現(xiàn)象描述。第二段：過度使用手機(jī)的后果。第三段：個(gè)人看法，建議或危害。It is high time that we took effective measures to curb/control this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them. 態(tài)度中庸， 強(qiáng)調(diào)一定條件下

31、手機(jī)的作用。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face conta

32、ct. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第三段寫作建議：建議控制網(wǎng)絡(luò)的使用。 強(qiáng)調(diào)親情的重要性，建議面對(duì)面交流。強(qiáng)調(diào)網(wǎng)絡(luò)的有效性的同時(shí)，建議適當(dāng)使用，可作為面對(duì)面交流的補(bǔ)充。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impac

33、t of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第三段寫作建議：建議控制網(wǎng)絡(luò)的使用。 強(qiáng)調(diào)親情的重要性，建議面對(duì)面交流。強(qiáng)調(diào)網(wǎng)絡(luò)的有效性的同時(shí)，建議適當(dāng)使用 。Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in

34、a reasonable way. After all, Internet is invented to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach（以網(wǎng)絡(luò)的作用作為前提條件，以便提出建議）. If we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with them face to face in real life（建議）. Only

35、in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool（替換e-mail,避免重復(fù)） on the net but also make our relationship tighter. （進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)建議。） Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way（承認(rèn)電子交流方式的作用）, but it is face-to face contact that de

36、epens the feelings and emotions between people（同時(shí)強(qiáng)調(diào)直接交流的好處）. 下面提供英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作中常用詞的替換詞，讓你的作文不再平庸。在考前這幾天中每天上午看一遍、下午背一遍，晚上再默寫一遍，確保熟記于心。大多數(shù)人 most people 2) 經(jīng)常 often 3) 我相信 I believe 4) 必須 must5) 知道 know 6) 因?yàn)?because 7) 最后 at last 8) 然而 but 9) 如果 ifthe majority of the populationfrequentlyfrom my standpointIt

37、is a must for us tobe aware ofin thateventuallyhoweverProvided that10,各行各業(yè)的人 all kinds of people 11) 引起，導(dǎo)致 lead to 12) 人 people 13) 好的 good 14) 懷的 bad 15) 很多many 16) 越來越 more and more 17) 很 very 18) 方面 side 19) 表明 showPeople from all walks of lifeContribute toindividualsBeneficial, desirableundesira

38、blenumerousan increasing number ofextremelyaspectsDemonstrate, indicate20) 利用 use 21) 因此/結(jié)果 so 22) 部分 part 23) 提高 improve 24) 改變 change 25) 強(qiáng)調(diào)/重視 emphasize 26) 培養(yǎng) develop 27) 解決 deal with utilizeThereforeproportionenhanceTransform, alterattach great importance toCultivateTackle, figure out28.普遍的 eve

39、rywhere 30) 明顯的 obvious 31) 在當(dāng)今社會(huì) in the modern society 32) 使 makeuniversalapparentIn the current societyenableSave our environment (model test 1) From the picture, we can see a man standing on an empty ground, with nobody around and no trees and birds in sight.(描述周邊環(huán)境) He was carrying an oxygen gen

40、erator, without which he could hardly breathe（描述，并解釋原因） , as the dark clouds floating in the air are a sure sign of extremely serious environment pollution.（由圖表描述引出中心話題）A decade ago, most of us took it for granted that we would forever be blessed by nature(以退為進(jìn)，用來對(duì)比). However, we have come to realiz

41、e that Chinas economic success has taken an unbearable toll on the environment as we are facing grave challenge of environmental protection（解釋污染的原因）. In the recent years, many chemical factories discharged poisonous gas without filtering it, cities were covered with so much poisonous gas that people were killed by the air they breathed in（舉例說明）. If we co