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1、G 類 書信寫作A 類 圖表作文150詞+ 大約20分鐘 + 占到總分值1/3對(duì)于參加General Training(移民類)雅思考試的考生來說，Task1的寫作任務(wù)是完成一封書信。題目中給出一個(gè)背景話題，然后要求考生完成題目中給出的三個(gè)要求。書信寫作的高分關(guān)鍵在于：1. 編故事的能力要出色，能寫出一個(gè)連貫合理的故事；2. 文字表達(dá)不需要過于學(xué)術(shù)，但是要偏向地道表達(dá)；3. 注意書信寫作的時(shí)態(tài)，有可能在一篇文章里使用超過5種時(shí)態(tài)。書信內(nèi)容介紹書信寫作的內(nèi)容包括很寬的范圍：道歉；感謝；投訴；建議；申請(qǐng)；邀請(qǐng)；介紹；尋求幫助下面這封郵件來自于鐵路公司官方。雖然和考試的內(nèi)容不是完全一樣，但是結(jié)構(gòu)和用

2、語都很恰當(dāng)。書信格式介紹1). 最好是左邊對(duì)齊，每段之間空一整行；2). 稱呼Dear 名字/頭銜/Sir or Madam；3). 結(jié)尾部分一定需要比較禮貌的收尾：kind regards-sincerely/faithfully-lots of love1). I am writing this letter to 2). 3). I would be grateful if you could .My request ist I will be looking forward to your reply.Dear Jason,I am writing this letter to apo

3、logize for wha sorry about the noise from my dog.ve happened these days. I am reallyLastk, my sister sent her dog, Fr, to us asking me to be a puppy-sitter for twoks. She went to China for honeymoon. I was toldt Frhad beenng welland barely made trouble for my sister. Unfortunay, it is cleart the dog

4、 does notlike his temporary home t is unfamiliar to him.sibly because it is thetimet he lives in a placeIf the situation were reversed, I would feel the same. I knowt you musve beenannoyed by the barking of the dog all day long, so I am going to fix it. Sending Frto the pet househe community may be

5、a good solution. There, he can dowhatever he wants while leaving others in peace.I would be grateful if you could understand my situation and accept my apology.Sincerely yoursJeremy LinDear Dave,I am writing to let you knowlast we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldnt go onlivinghe two-bedro

6、om bungalow nowt the twins are growing up and the new baby hasarrived. So we started lookingand one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.I am sure you will like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen.The kids are happy because there is muore sp

7、ace with the big living room and the gardenoutside. But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesnt need to do much decorating.Why dont you come round thiskend and see what you think of our new place? We would alllove to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecuehe garden.Our new

8、address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.Lots of loveFrancoise書信閱讀清單1. 描述邀請(qǐng)劍橋81702. 單純介紹劍橋6-1703. 道歉劍橋5-1704. 投訴工地建設(shè)劍橋3-1695. 事故投訴劍橋4-1706. 物品服務(wù)投訴劍橋61697. 出售轉(zhuǎn)讓劍橋41728. 請(qǐng)假工作經(jīng)歷劍橋3-1679. 請(qǐng)假劍橋9-170對(duì)于參加A類考試的同學(xué)，你們被要求在Task1完成對(duì)一個(gè)圖表的描述。Line graph 線圖Bar chart 柱狀

9、圖Pie chart餅圖Table 表格圖Diagram 地圖或者流程重要的事情說三遍erchangeable的請(qǐng)不要按照?qǐng)D形分類，因?yàn)閳D表之間是！1. 100% 完全對(duì)比圖(沒有時(shí)間變化)-按照宏觀 + 微觀的方法來寫；2. 80%變化圖(有時(shí)間變化)-主要描述每個(gè)元素的變化過程，可以用數(shù)據(jù)之間的對(duì)比來做引導(dǎo)和過渡；簡單對(duì)比圖不靠分析，靠句型。Coke的全球銷量達(dá)到了17.1 billion, 其中北美洲有最大的比率，是30.4%， 而非洲和中東地區(qū)只有7%。 在其他三個(gè)地區(qū)中，拉丁美洲有相對(duì)較高的銷售比率，達(dá)到15.7%， 然后是歐洲20.5%和亞洲16.4%。The total sale

10、s of Coke reached 17.1billion bottles in 2000, with Normericahaving the largest proportion at 34%,compared to only 7% in Africa and MiddleEast.he other three regions, LatinAmerica had a relatively higherpercentage(25.7%), followed by Europe (20.5%) and Asia (16.4%).很明顯，中國游客的錢主要花在了購物上，占到71.2%， 而食物的花費(fèi)

11、才只有1.2%?；ㄔ趭蕵泛陀^光方面的錢很相近，分別占到12.9%和11.6%。其他方面的花費(fèi)占到3.1%。It is obvioust Chitourists spentmost of their money on shopaccounting for as much as 71.2%, compared to only 1.2% on food. Theamount spent on entertaent andsightseeing varied slightly, with 12.9% and11.6% respectively. Spending on other items took

12、 up the rest 3.1%.簡單對(duì)比圖一般出現(xiàn)在混合圖表中?；旌蠄D表里的兩個(gè)圖一般都是分開描述，如果有一些內(nèi)在的聯(lián)系，只需要在結(jié)尾段點(diǎn)出來就好了。復(fù)雜對(duì)比圖核心段的內(nèi)容以特點(diǎn)為主，滿足如下邏輯。General feature + figures(below)There are 2/3 main featureshis chart/graph.ly, it is obvioust . To be specific, (/)Secondly, we can seet . Specifically, Overall, /這個(gè)table給出了信息關(guān)于5個(gè)國家消費(fèi)者在三種商品上的花費(fèi)。顯而易見，

13、在所有國家中，花在FoodDrinksTobacco上的錢的比率都是最高的，其中Turkey有最大的數(shù)據(jù)，32.14%，緊跟著的是 Ireland，28.91。剩下三個(gè)國家的數(shù)據(jù)范圍差別不大，分別是Spain18.8%，Italy16.36和Sweden15.77%。與之相反，花在LeisureEducation上的比率是最低的。Turkey的數(shù)據(jù)又是最大的，達(dá)到4.35%，而Spain的是最低的，只有1.98%。 Italy和Sweden之間的差距幾乎不可見，分別是3.2%和3.22%。自己看著辦Overall, 在所有國家，消費(fèi)者更愿意花錢在必需品上。The table gives inf

14、ormation regarding consumer spending in 5 countries in 2002.It is obvioust the amount of money spent on Food/Drinks/Tobacco accounted forthe highest proportion in all the countries, with Turkey having the largest data(32.14%), closely followed by Ireland (28.91%). Figures for the other three countri

15、esvaried slightly ranging betn 15.77% in Sweden and 18.8% in Spain.By contrast, the percentage of money paid for Leisure/Education was the lowest of all countries, with Turkey again having the largest data at 4.3%, compared to only 1.9%in Spain. The difference betn Italy and Sweden was barely notice

16、able,constituting 3.2% and 3.22% respectively.In all the listed countries, lessn 10% of money was spent on Clothing/Footwear.Italian consumers were the largest spenders incategory who used 9% of theire. There was a tiny difference approximay 6.5%.money, while Swedish only paid 5.4% of theirbetn the

17、figures for the other three countrieOverall, consumers of all the five countries tended to spend their money on dailynesities.The chart gives information about estimated global illiteracy rates of males andfemaleshe year of 2000. As I can see, there are two major featureshis chart.It is obvioust in

18、all the regions the illiteracy rate of females was highernt ofmales. The differenwere minimal in developed countries and Latin America at 1%or 2%, while there were much larger differen and 20%.he other regions betn 10%We cso findt the figures for femaleshree regions were relatively higher,with Sousi

19、a having the largest proportion (55%), followed by Arab Ses (about52%) and Africa (roughly 48%). The percentage in Oceania was nearly twice as highast in Latin America, with 20% and 12% respectively. There were only 2% ofwomen in developed countries poorly educated.When it comes to the proportions o

20、f men who were not able to read and write, it iscleart Africa, Arab Ses and Sousia had extremely similar data approaching30%. Besides, the illiteracy rate in Latin America (10%) was slightly higherntin Oceania (roughly 8%), but dramatically largernt in developed countries(lessn 1%).Overall, in all t

21、he regions men were more likely to get educatedn women, and thegaps in develocountries were muore considerable.The bar chart compares four countries with regard to their spending on six kinds of products.It is obvioust the British were the largest spenders on all the products, with photographic fico

22、sting the largest amount of money (172,000 pounds), followed by toys (168,000) and CDs(162,000). The popularity of tennis racquets and Britain, costing 153,000 pounds respectively.al stereos was the same and the least inCompared with other countries, by contrast, German consumer generally spent the

23、least moneyon photographic fi(147,000), toys (148,000) and CDs (147,000). On perfumes and tennisracquets, the amount spent by Germans was only morent by the French.In Italy, the amount of money spent on those products varied slightly, ranging betn 150,000and 157,000 pounds. French people had a simil

24、ar habit of spending as their British countarts,. Themeaningt they paid the largest amount of their money (166,000) on photographic fifigures for toys and CDs were red the second place and exactly the same at 158,000 pounds.The money consumed on the other three products was lessn 150,000 pounds.Over

25、all, consumers were more willing to spend money on photographic fi regardless of nationality., toys and CDsThese charts make comparisons among three kinds of music about their popularity.erms of the preference of male and femauyers, we can seet the proportionof the former is highernt of the latter i

26、n all kinds of music. To be more specific,the figures for pop and rock music are similar with 28% of males and 18% of females. Classical music is less popular purchased by only 9% of men and 7% of women.When it comes to the preference of different age groups, it can be noticedt popand rock music hav

27、e the same pattern of music purchasing. The proportion of musicbuyers aged 25-34 is the highest (32%), followed byt of peopetn 16 and24 (30%) andt of buyers aged 35-44 (26%). While only 8% of people over 45choose pop and rock music, the percentage of their count music is considerably higher at 20%.a

28、rts in favor of classicalOverallmales are more likely to buy music have similar preference on all kinds of music.n females and people aged 26-34變化趨勢圖變化圖表相對(duì)簡單，整個(gè)過程的核心一定是變化的內(nèi)容。每個(gè)元素單獨(dú)描述或者按相似/相反的方法分組。元素3分組描述如果有可能，在第一段用一句話總結(jié)整體變化趨勢。The charts show how much a UK school spent ondifferent running costs 1991

29、and 2001.hree separate years:1981,In all three years, the greatest expenditure was on staff salaries. But while other workers salaries saw a fall from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001, teachers pay remained the biggest cost, reaching 50% of total spending in 1991 and ending at 45% in 2001

30、.Expenditure on resoursuch as books had increasedto 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% byof the period. In contrast, the cost of furniture andequipment saw an opite trend. This cost decreasedto only 5% of total expenditure in 1991 but rosedramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of thescho

31、ol budget. Similarly, the cost of insuranaw arising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001.Overall, teachers salaries constituted the largest cost to the school, and while spending increased dramatically for equipment and insurance,there were correspondingdrops in expenditure on thing other worke

32、rs salaries.ch as book and onThis bar chart shows the changeshe number of prisoners of fivedifferent countries from 1930 to 2000.In 1930, Canada had the largest number of prisoners at 120,000,while the figure freat Britain was the smallesonly 30,000.Throughout the period from 1930 to 1980, the two countries sawopite trends. To be specific, the number of Canada generally haddecreased to 90,000 by 1980, despite several slight increasesduring