譚慧—短文改錯(cuò)（2015）

1、 Proof Reading How to Find out Incorrect Words Proof reading testVery goodatOk atQuiteweak at Difficulties 1. grammar (語法)2. discourse (語篇) What to be tested 1. Words (詞法)2. Sentences(句法)3. Logic (邏輯)動(dòng)詞名詞形容詞副詞代詞連詞冠詞介詞1) words2). Sentences long sentences sentence patterns clauses, etc .3). logic in c

2、ontext and, but, or but / however; here/there; come/go do / dont etc .How ? Ways out:Step 1. Skimming (速讀全文，通曉大意)Step 2. Scanning （逐句逐行逐字研讀，審查句子結(jié)構(gòu)，找出明顯錯(cuò)誤）Step 3. Checking （復(fù)讀全文，檢查核對）Step 2. Scanning How to scan effectively to find out the incorrect words? To find them out according to the principle

3、of agreement in discourse. 根據(jù)語篇中的“一致性”原則去找錯(cuò)詞一、主謂一致 1. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （2003全國） 2Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as they please.（2005全國I） wordsallows二、_一致 2I took it in mine and we walkedThen I ask him, 3We had guests last night who have not stayed

4、 in a B&B hotel before. askedhad_時(shí)態(tài)1. I win a national prize for painting last week. _won 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)要與_和上下文的_保持一致時(shí)間狀語時(shí)態(tài)三、_指代一致 1. Some students may also save up for our college and future use2. I just smiled to me and thought3. I was only six when he held his hand out to meI took it in me and we walked.人

5、稱代詞、關(guān)系代詞、指示代詞等代詞theirmyselfmine_定語從句的關(guān)系代詞勿與關(guān)系副詞弄混，要分清同位語從句和定語從句。 4I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China 5My school is organizing a basketball team and theres just a chance which I can join it which_that四、名詞的_要與文意保持一致1, but after class we become stranger at once 2I looked at his other hand

6、s 單復(fù)數(shù)strangers_hand五、詞性一致 1. My pronunciation was terribly 2She called 119 immediate terrible_immediately3Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience(服從). 4He never helped other 5However, we seldom felt lonely and hopelessly hopeless_othersimportance六、并列一致 1I would describe myself as shy a

7、nd quietly.2We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories3I like singing as well as dance quiet_dancingvisited_七、搭配一致 1Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool2When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf_thatat3，but now I am intersting in football 4Gr

8、andpa, how come you have so much lines on your hand? _manyintersted八、_Id like to stay there for half a month, visiting places of interest or practicing my English as welland_邏輯一致2I came intoand saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light 3The food was expensive and the ser

9、vice was good. but_and九、_一致 1These are the happier girls Ive ever seen 2The weather in Beijing is colder than in Guangxi happiest_that比較Dear Ken,I am very exciting to learn that youre coming to Beijing for the OlympicsBoth my parent miss you a lotSo do our friend, CathyAugust is the best time of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too _parentsexcited_doeslittle_coldThere are so many places which I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteerWhen you come, you can stay with ourselvesMy ho