高考英語真題解析分項(xiàng)版匯編專題12短文改錯(cuò)書面表達(dá)

1、2011年高考英語試題考點(diǎn)分項(xiàng)解析短文改錯(cuò)考綱解讀和近幾年考點(diǎn)分布短文改錯(cuò)高考英語試題中，短文改錯(cuò)題是眾多考生得分較低的一項(xiàng).短文改錯(cuò)不僅要求 學(xué)生要有較高的閱讀理解能力，還要求學(xué)生有深厚的語法知識(shí)，善于分析英語基本句型和句 子結(jié)構(gòu).它主要是考查學(xué)生辨析并改正語言知識(shí)在運(yùn)用時(shí)常出現(xiàn)的各種錯(cuò)誤的能力。從近幾年高考命題短文改錯(cuò)考查的知識(shí)點(diǎn)來看 ，短文改錯(cuò)主要考查：考生運(yùn)用基本語法 知識(shí)識(shí)別短文中不合乎內(nèi)容邏輯的錯(cuò)誤和語法結(jié)構(gòu)上的各種錯(cuò)誤，綜合使用英語各項(xiàng)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)行快速閱讀理解，掌握短文的內(nèi)容和內(nèi)容上的前后邏輯關(guān)系，進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的糾錯(cuò).因此 短文改錯(cuò)與完形填空.閱讀理解一樣注重強(qiáng)調(diào)整體理解，從宏觀上把

2、握。從2009年起,浙江、海南、寧夏、遼寧等省采用新型，短文改錯(cuò)題新短文改錯(cuò)題不再 以行為單位，而是要求考生在整篇文章中改錯(cuò)，所以答題難度無疑增加了。全國普通高等學(xué) 校入學(xué)考試說明（英語）把短文改錯(cuò)列為寫作部分的第一節(jié)，作為測(cè)試考生對(duì)語言知識(shí)和 書面表達(dá)能力的一個(gè)部分，題目要求如下：第一節(jié)：共 10分。本題給出一篇約100個(gè)單詞 的短文，文中有10處錯(cuò)誤，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)句子進(jìn)行判斷，如有錯(cuò)將其改正.錯(cuò)誤類型包括 詞法、句法、行文邏輯等，從這一點(diǎn)我們可以看出該題型的變化和難度有所增加。名師考點(diǎn)透析高考短文改錯(cuò)的錯(cuò)誤類型概括起來主要是語法錯(cuò)誤、邏輯錯(cuò)誤和搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤。I .語法錯(cuò)誤包括動(dòng)詞、名

3、詞、代詞、主謂一致、非謂語動(dòng)詞及情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等方面的錯(cuò)誤。.名詞:名詞錯(cuò)誤主要考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤，可數(shù)與不可數(shù)名詞的混用。 確定名詞單復(fù)數(shù)有以下幾種方法：看修飾語；看主謂語的一致性；可數(shù)名詞前無單數(shù)修飾語一定要用復(fù) 數(shù)；看其他限制。.動(dòng)詞：時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，常出現(xiàn)在總體時(shí)態(tài)為過去或現(xiàn)在時(shí)，中間雜有不適的另一時(shí)態(tài)的現(xiàn)象；或是及物動(dòng)詞后無賓語，或是不及物動(dòng)詞后加了賓語；需要接ing形式的接了 to,或相反等。對(duì)于這一類錯(cuò)誤可根據(jù)上下文語境或者句子的平行結(jié)構(gòu)確定動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。.形容詞、副詞：常在需要形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反；關(guān)系副詞where,when,why等的缺失或錯(cuò)用。根據(jù)形容詞、副詞的基本用法或句意確定

4、錯(cuò)誤。.介詞:主要是介詞的多余或缺失，錯(cuò)用。.主謂一致：主語為單數(shù)，動(dòng)詞用了復(fù)數(shù)；而主語為復(fù)數(shù)，動(dòng)詞卻用了單數(shù)形式。再就是就近原則對(duì)主語的影響.冠詞:主要考查表示特指和泛指時(shí)冠詞的使用情況。定冠詞the的多余或缺失，如季節(jié)、月份、星期、球類及三餐活動(dòng)、稱呼頭銜前等不能加the的地方加了 the,或是same等常和the一起使用的詞卻漏掉了 the； a,an的混用等。.數(shù)詞:主要是序數(shù)詞與基數(shù)詞的混用和錯(cuò)用，如分?jǐn)?shù)的分子大于一時(shí)分母沒有用復(fù)數(shù)等，基數(shù)詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式如幾百hundreds of,幾千thousands of漏掉了 s,或是當(dāng)其前有具體數(shù)字或 several 時(shí)力口了復(fù)數(shù)，如 sev

5、en hundred,寫作 seven hundredso.連詞:不符合句中的邏輯關(guān)系。如需轉(zhuǎn)折連詞（如but）的時(shí)候用了承接連詞（so）,或相反等等。.代詞:主要是代詞的性、格與數(shù)的錯(cuò)用。這類題應(yīng)根據(jù)句意或句型結(jié)構(gòu)確定錯(cuò)誤。n .邏輯錯(cuò)誤主要出現(xiàn)在肯定與否定以及表示遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞上。判斷這類錯(cuò)誤， 要從上下文、慣用法、主從復(fù)合句的句意來找到錯(cuò)誤。若為并列句，要從上下文來判斷句 與句之間的關(guān)系是并列、轉(zhuǎn)折、選擇、遞進(jìn)還是其他關(guān)系，從而選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。若為復(fù) 合句，應(yīng)首先判斷屬于哪一種從句，然后根據(jù)主、從句之間的邏輯關(guān)系判斷連接詞的使用正確與否。田.固定搭配錯(cuò)誤 TOC o 1-

6、5 h z 主要有習(xí)慣用語和固定搭配中的介詞、冠詞、連詞、副詞等的錯(cuò)誤。做這類題首先要 弄清習(xí)慣用語和固定搭配的正確形式和確切含義，判斷是否有多用、漏用和錯(cuò)用介詞、副詞、冠詞等現(xiàn)象。三、短文改錯(cuò)的應(yīng)試要點(diǎn).粗看全文，不要一上來就改動(dòng)；.一行看三行，就某一行做判斷時(shí)，要顧及上下兩行或整句；.一行想全文，單句中合理還不夠，要全文合理；.一行只能動(dòng)一個(gè)詞；.別忘了在錯(cuò)詞下畫線；.多詞處要在原文中劃掉此詞，在抄完此詞后也用斜線劃掉；.弄清句子結(jié)構(gòu)有利于判斷；.如感覺一行有兩處錯(cuò)，應(yīng)將最有把握處改正；.復(fù)核，做完題重看全文?！?1真題全解全析】（2011遼寧卷）第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題l分，滿

7、分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（，），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉.修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分.（試題內(nèi)容見答題卡）In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks. W

8、hen, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there wasthe immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who （is） directly responsible for the study all such repsorts,dec

9、ided to making his findings known. They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,becausethe rate remainded above the previous level.注：文章紅色部分為需要修改的地

10、方！第1個(gè)考查 主謂一致，werewas;第2個(gè)考查 名詞單復(fù)數(shù) weeks-week第3個(gè)考查 介詞從外面來，介詞應(yīng)該用from.第4個(gè)考查冠詞the-a第5個(gè)考查非限制性定語從句注意be responsible for表示對(duì)什么負(fù)責(zé)。第6個(gè)考查非謂語 decide to do sth.第7個(gè)考查代詞 指代前面Wayne Tyler,因此用he。第8個(gè)考查非謂語做狀語用following.第9個(gè)考查動(dòng)詞explain是及物動(dòng)詞，不需要介詞。去掉 for.第10個(gè)考查連詞because表示原因，根據(jù)上文應(yīng)該是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞（2011 全國2卷） 此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每

11、一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)勾（J）;如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤）則按下列情況改正：此行多一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文上把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文的缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（八），并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在答題卡短文錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出 改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。Dear George, TOC o 1-5 h z Its been a week after we left your family and we are now76.back h

12、ome. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After78.we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,79.where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond80.of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying81. another cou

13、ple of day. However, my father had to return to82.work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It83. was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to84.our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85.Yours,Mike76. aftersince80.去掉 much84.trip 前 a.themus81.stayi

14、ngstay85.bettermore. forwith82.daydays.正確83.flyflewafter改為since。句式It is/has been+-段時(shí)間+ since_表示自從以來已經(jīng)有多 久了”。解題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的提示。them改為us。根據(jù)第一句可知，此處應(yīng)表示“感謝你帶我們參觀你們的城市故用usfor改為而vide sb. with sth.表示“為某人供應(yīng)某物”，為固定搭配。對(duì)。去掉much。此處為so - that.結(jié)構(gòu)，so修飾形容詞fond,故去掉 much。81. staying 改為stay。beg sb. to do sth表示“請(qǐng)求某人做某事”，為固定搭配

15、。day 政為 days。another couple of 后應(yīng)接復(fù)數(shù)名詞。a couple of days 表示 幾天。fly改為flew。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語last Saturday afternoon提示可知，此處應(yīng)使用一般過 去時(shí)。make后加a。make a trip表示“旅行”，為固定搭配。better改為more。more than用于修飾形容詞時(shí)表示非常”，此處表示“我非常愿 意做你的向?qū)А?。better than表示“好于，不符合語境。（2011新課標(biāo)卷）第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

16、文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and a

17、fter that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any lugga

18、ges.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.答案：My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to HangZhou. Ibuyingwas going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to X

19、iamen for long holiday. I boughtmy ticketthereabut turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily andI had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange toinweretravel without any luggages.When I fi

20、nally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel veryluggagefriend sfelthappy that I could change my clothes at last.buy-buying 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，時(shí)態(tài)為一般進(jìn)行時(shí)。here- there代詞指代錯(cuò)誤for后加a a long holiday 一個(gè)很長(zhǎng)的假期but-and邏輯關(guān)系錯(cuò)誤。前后句并無轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是承接關(guān)系。on一in介詞錯(cuò)誤。在我的口袋里。In my pocketwaswere主語中心詞是clothes,謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)、luggage

21、s- luggageluggage行李為不可數(shù)名詞friend -friend s 名詞的所有格結(jié)構(gòu)feelfelt 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去式。（2011 四川卷）第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個(gè)溝（，）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正； 此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞。并也用斜線 劃掉。此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞注

22、意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改Tom was having much troubles getting up in the Morning and was always late with work. His boss wanted to fire him if he didn t start coming on time, but he went to the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. The man did as told

23、 and slept really well, wake up before the alarm had even gone off. He had time for a properly breakfast and was still the first reach the factory. Boss,“ he said /that medicine really works! m pleasing to hear it , “said his boss,“ but where were you yesterday?【答案與解析】.troubles改為troubls考查名詞have trou

24、ble doing sth為固目豆語？ guble為不可數(shù)名詞*with改為 源 考查介詞.從1代far為固定短清“癖憶but改為so,考查并列連詞，分析前后兩句之間及趙京為因果關(guān)系，因此用so, 洛去掉以一考查冠詞.人Ip為不可數(shù)名詢，薊性軍用不定冠詞。thm改為七 考查代i機(jī) 此處指代前文medicine,為不可數(shù)名詞，因此用it指代。wakE改為wakingo考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。動(dòng)詞飛詆 此處與主語為主動(dòng)關(guān)系作狀語，故用現(xiàn)在分詞 naking4properly改為prep曰?？疾樾稳菰~和副詞”此處修飾名詞breakfast,故用形容詞proper.reach前加不，考查謂語動(dòng)詞*此處褥可不定

25、式to reach作the first的后置定語“pleasing改為pieased0考查形容詞此處描述主語為人，故用以-ed結(jié)尾的形容詞.：正確.2011年高考英語試題考點(diǎn)分項(xiàng)解析書面表達(dá)考綱解讀和近幾年考點(diǎn)分布英語考試大綱對(duì)學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力作了明確的規(guī)定：要求考生根據(jù)所給情景用英語寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也對(duì)寫作作了必須要達(dá)到的要求：.能通過文字及圖表提供的信息進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單描述；.能寫出常見體裁的應(yīng)用文，如信函和一般通知等；.能描述人物或事件并進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的評(píng)論；.能填寫有關(guān)個(gè)人情況的表格，如申請(qǐng)表

26、等；.能以小組形式根據(jù)課文改編短劇。書面表達(dá)是考查考生用英語表達(dá)自己思想的能力，即運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語知識(shí)及合乎英語習(xí)慣的表達(dá)方式來傳遞信息， 進(jìn)行思想交流的能力。這將要求考生根據(jù)所給的情景和要求，在限定時(shí)間內(nèi)（一般30分鐘）寫出100個(gè)詞左右的書面材料。因此考生要做到：審題正確、 要點(diǎn)全面，能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)、 詞匯知識(shí)，使上下文連貫，同時(shí)語言要準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)， 條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。所以，具有良好的書面表達(dá)能力是非常必要的，它也進(jìn)一步突出了 對(duì)考生創(chuàng)新能力的考查。一、命題形式多樣化雖然每年的書面表達(dá)都屬于提高性寫作，但越來越重視創(chuàng)造情景，由單純的漢語提示轉(zhuǎn)向以圖表為主、漢語提示為輔?？忌仨毷紫壤?/p>

27、解圖表的含義， 然后才能開始組句成文。 二、書面表達(dá)的體裁呈現(xiàn)多樣化，為應(yīng)用文 （書信、通知、便條等卜記敘文（圖表作文、日 記等）和說明文（人物介紹、活動(dòng)介紹等） 三、試題突出了交際性、實(shí)用性書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容主要取材于校園、家庭生活和一般外事活動(dòng)，符合高中學(xué)生的年齡特 點(diǎn)和生活背景，基本都是考生已經(jīng)熟悉的或?qū)碛锌赡芙?jīng)歷的事情，情景真實(shí)可信。所提 出的要求符合考生的實(shí)際英語水平， 具有可寫性，能夠充分展示學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。四、改革力度逐年增大高考英語書面表達(dá)（全國卷）的命題方式和題型相對(duì)穩(wěn)定，與單獨(dú)命制的試題相比，全 國卷改革的力度較小，命題思想相對(duì)穩(wěn)定。而單獨(dú)命制的試題則敢于創(chuàng)新，勇于求變。

28、如 北京卷增設(shè) 開放作文”題型；上海卷也呈現(xiàn)靈活性較強(qiáng)的特點(diǎn)。 隨著更多的省市自行命題， 書面表達(dá)的題型會(huì)穩(wěn)中有變。五、內(nèi)容更突出時(shí)代特色近幾年的話題十分貼近現(xiàn)代生活，因此內(nèi)容貼近考生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活將成為今后命題的 方向。名師考點(diǎn)透析早在2004年公布的高中英語新課標(biāo)中就已明確指出培養(yǎng)初步寫作的能力是英語教學(xué)的目的之一而高考英語書面表達(dá)命題目的就是要測(cè)試學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語知識(shí)和掌握的技能來表達(dá)思想和進(jìn)行交流的能力?？梢哉f這種題型最能檢驗(yàn)出學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語語言能力的高低。高考英語書面表達(dá)具體主要考查學(xué)生以下幾種能力：.觀察分析，獲取，加工和輸出信息的能力。.體現(xiàn)語法規(guī)則，并且正確熟練運(yùn)用語法的能力

29、。.語言交際表達(dá)得體，突出正確語用的能力。.關(guān)注社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)，錘煉思維表達(dá)能力。備考策略：.學(xué)習(xí)生活中多參加一些集體和公益活動(dòng)，重視交流，在交流中有目的的運(yùn)用語言， 以達(dá)到學(xué)習(xí)和學(xué)以致用的目的。 同時(shí)注意歸納整理得體用語， 以擴(kuò)充知識(shí)面。注重積累時(shí) 尚語言，增強(qiáng)時(shí)尚語言表達(dá)意識(shí)。.平時(shí)就要注重體裁，話題等方面的積累準(zhǔn)備。并且尋找適當(dāng)材料進(jìn)行作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn) 練，并定期進(jìn)行歸納整理和分類鞏固，循序漸進(jìn)掌握作文寫作技巧。實(shí)際寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真分 析材料所提供的背景，落實(shí)已知信息與所求信息。注重靈活應(yīng)對(duì)開放式寫法。.學(xué)好語法知識(shí)，注重操練運(yùn)用。平時(shí)可以多做一些句型轉(zhuǎn)換、單句翻譯、用詞、 短語或句型造句、文章縮寫、改

30、寫等練習(xí)。.回歸高中英語課本，切實(shí)找到并且分析高考英語書面表達(dá)在課本中的典型體現(xiàn)。 學(xué)生一定要牢固掌握和靈活運(yùn)用文化、地理、環(huán)境、健康、社會(huì)等話題的內(nèi)容。同時(shí)課本 中精選的文章不僅語言規(guī)范準(zhǔn)確，而且內(nèi)容豐富，能夠讓學(xué)生體會(huì)到學(xué)習(xí)和運(yùn)用英語的快 樂?！?1真題全解全析】書面表達(dá)分類匯編之圖畫寫作江蘇卷：第五部分：書面表達(dá)（滿分 25分）書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）81.下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用 英語寫一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容:.描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?舉例說明你能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么。.可參照?qǐng)D.中.文

31、.字.及下面文章開頭 所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.【思路點(diǎn)撥】這 A篇看圖作文。這幅黑片展現(xiàn)，立以婢裒的媽媽拿包的情景，畫面感人親切，體 現(xiàn)了感恩的鮮明主鶻 考生苜先需又孀:進(jìn)6福熟苗述，撼度點(diǎn)包括情最 人物、動(dòng)作等 接著結(jié) 合自

32、身實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的感想;最后舉例說明能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么。寫作過程中,考生應(yīng)注意審準(zhǔn) 主題，描述照片時(shí)要言簡(jiǎn)意賅，要點(diǎn)覆蓋全面，讀感想時(shí)要自然合理，具有邏輯性。所舉例子應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔 明了，措施尊當(dāng)，易于說明問題，能支持自己的現(xiàn)點(diǎn)。【參考范文】The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The picture shows us a touching momen

33、t when a little girl comes to greet her workingmom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day s work, the girl helps to remove the bagfrom her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she c

34、ould to let me havethe best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always thinks studying well is the only thing I could in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast

35、 myself, so as to share mother daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a good student.【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】范文審題準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，能覆蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，感想自然合理，最后提出措 施得當(dāng)。層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。語言地道，且過渡自然流暢；一些高級(jí)詞匯、固定短語和 靈活多變的句式如 Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day s work, the girl helps t

36、oremove the bag from her shoulder. Athis reminds me of my mother who has been doingwhatever she could to let me have the best.等的應(yīng)用都彰顯了作者較扎實(shí)的英語基本功。福建卷：第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）為紀(jì)念汶川大地震三周年，某英文報(bào)發(fā)起關(guān)于災(zāi)區(qū)新貌的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示，以“ Great Changed為題，用英語寫一篇短文應(yīng)征。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：.某中學(xué)災(zāi)后三年來的變化，如教學(xué)與活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所，以及師生精神面貌等；.發(fā)生變化的原因；.你的感想。注意：.短文標(biāo)題與開頭已

37、給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);.可根據(jù)圖片提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.詞數(shù)：120左右Great ChangesI am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the pastthree years.參考答案One possible version:Great ChangesI am deeply impressed by the great changes that have place in the school over the past three years.On May 12, 2008

38、, a server earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving badly damaged buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playgroud. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once ruined place has now

39、been turned into a beautiful school, full of life.Obviously ,without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and

40、 helping those in need .Union is strength. 湖南：Section C (25 marks)Directions; write on English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假設(shè)你參加所在年級(jí)的英文寫作比賽，請(qǐng)按如下要求完成一篇短文：.簡(jiǎn)要描述下圖內(nèi)容，并點(diǎn)名主題；.聯(lián)系實(shí)際，表達(dá)該圖帶給你的啟示%+ 4十戰(zhàn)二期=fprcstI E +藕小兩也 _- _ ._ _ 一 一一注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱Countless

41、 drips of water bring the sea its vastness； every single tree is the indispensable element of a verdant forest, as well, we people as individuals, constitute the society. In order to achieve a goal, everyone ought to make his own contributions.We are often advised, by people around, to choose those

42、specific popular majors in university in the future , for they think we will be able to enjoy a happier and easier life after graduation if we are doctors, engineers or government officials. However , as far as I am concerned, as long as an individual is contributing his or her part to the society ,

43、 he or she should be respected, no matter how low the class of his job is.As the above picture shows, if every one of us successfully assumed our responsibility , our earth will become a lovely home for human being 。北京卷第四部分：書面表達(dá)（共兩節(jié)，35分）第一節(jié)情景作文（20分）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的學(xué)生李華。下面四幅圖表述了近期發(fā)生在你們班的一個(gè) 真實(shí)故事，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片的

44、先后順序，為校刊英語園地”寫一篇短文，次數(shù)不少于60。（請(qǐng)務(wù)必將情景作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)）第二節(jié)開放作文（15分）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50.In your spoken Endlish class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.（請(qǐng)務(wù)必將開放作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)）參考答案第一節(jié)情景作文（20分） 一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。.老師滑到。.學(xué)生送老師看病。.學(xué)生看望老師.老師回班

45、上課二、One possible version.Last Monday , we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped. and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back. With the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she ha

46、d to stay in the hospital. The following day, went to visit her with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deepl

47、y moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.第二節(jié) 開放作文（15分）One possible version:In the picture,there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream.Across the stream ,a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole.Not far away there i

48、s a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.The message conveyed in the picture is clear.In pursuing a dream ,we might focus on only one way of making it come true ,forgetting that there may be alternatives.As indicated in the picture ,if the man is willing to look for other possibilitie

49、s,he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal.All he has to do is to turn around,cross the bridge and walk to the tree.2011年高考英語試題考點(diǎn)分項(xiàng)解析 書面表達(dá)分類提綱式寫作寫作 四川：書面表達(dá)（滿分35分）最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了 “ After-class Activities ”的欄目，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該 欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)。.你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況；.你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處.為同

50、學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議.為學(xué)校開展課外活動(dòng)提出建議 注意：.詞數(shù)100左右；.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名.稿件的開頭以為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）After-class ActivitiesNowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.參考答案One Possible VersionAfter-class ActivitiesNowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high

51、schools. Inour school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Her

52、e I have some suggestions. To students, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class act

53、ivities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.廣東：m.寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫作(共1小題，滿分15分) 以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關(guān)報(bào)道。基本信息：(1)書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother(2)作者：Amy Chuo ,美籍華人，耶魯*大學(xué)教授(3)出版時(shí)間：2010年(4)內(nèi)容：作者用中國傳統(tǒng)教育方式教育兩個(gè)女的故事(5)效應(yīng)：引發(fā)了中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論相關(guān)報(bào)道：(1)中文版：2011年初開始在中

54、國銷售(2)意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國媽媽不贊同作者的做法(3)最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛*和耶魯錄取* 耶魯：Yale 哈佛：Harvard【寫作內(nèi)容】根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹，內(nèi)容包括：1.圖書的基本信息；2.圖書的相關(guān)報(bào)道?！緦懽饕蟆?.只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)果準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫 參考答案：The book, “ BattleHymn of the Tiger Mother “ was written by Amy Chuo, who is a Chinese American and a professor from Yale University.

55、 Published in 2010, the Chinese version of this book began to sell in China at the beginning of 2011, In this book, she tells us the story/experience of educating her two daughters by using the Chinese traditional education mode/way, which caused the discussion on“ whiclthis Cfetteese traditional ed

56、ucationway or the American education way” . It is reported that her eldest daughter, 17 years old, hasbeen admitted into Yale and Harvard. However, what makes us surprised is that most of the Chinese mothers do not agree with the authors practice.全國卷I:（河北利南/山西/廣西/海南）第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）（注意：在試題卷上作答無效）假定你是李

57、華，正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學(xué)校輔 導(dǎo)中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定，你需書面預(yù)約，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信：.本人簡(jiǎn)介； 2.求助內(nèi)容：3.約定時(shí)間；4.你的聯(lián)系方式（Email: lihua1236. com； Phone: 12345678）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。Dear Sir/Madam,Look forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua參考答案Dear Sir/Madam,I m Li hua , C hinese student tak

58、ing summer courses in your university. I m writing to askfor help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have somedifficulties with note-making and I have n idea of how to use the library. I was told the learning center provides help for students and I m anxious to get help

59、from. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and please remember: lihua1236 com； Phone: 12345678）.Look forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua全國卷2:（黑/吉/內(nèi)蒙/寧/甘/青/新/西/貴/云/海）第三節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假

60、定你是李華，你所喜愛的 Global Mirror周報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見.請(qǐng)你依 據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：.說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者.贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1）兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞2）介紹名人成功故事.提出建議：刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章注意：.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語己為你寫好；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on,the,5h anniversary.of Global Mirror!Sincerely yours,Li Hua參考答案Dear E ditor-in-Chi e C7-n中atuladcmE cm：