顧家北翻譯練習(xí)句

1、顧家北翻譯聯(lián)系 100 句翻譯1:經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)提高人的自信錯(cuò)誤的句子： Exercise regularly can rise ones confidence.錯(cuò)誤1 Exercise如果這里是動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞，如果是名詞，不能用副詞修飾錯(cuò)誤2 rise不及物動(dòng)詞正確的句子： Regular exercise can increase ones self-confidence.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(confidence)可以用定語從句擴(kuò)充：Participating in sports frequently can boost peoples confidence, which i

2、s important not only to the youth but also to the elderly.注：不可以說a regular doing exercise，因?yàn)樾稳菰~regular不可以修飾doing中文：經(jīng)常參加體育活動(dòng)能夠提高人們的自信心，這不但對(duì)年輕人而且對(duì)老人很重要。翻譯2:教學(xué)的質(zhì)量對(duì)學(xué)生成績(jī)有很大的影響。錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：Teaching qualities are important to students improve academicperformance錯(cuò)誤1 quality表示質(zhì)量的時(shí)候不可數(shù)錯(cuò)誤2 to是介詞，后面不用加句子正確的句子： The qu

3、ality of teaching can make a huge difference to students academic performance.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主謂賓也可以用并列句拓展The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students academic performsand therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children.中文：教學(xué)的質(zhì)量被認(rèn)為是決定學(xué)生成績(jī)的關(guān)鍵，因此，家長(zhǎng)喜歡為孩子選擇名校。翻譯3:家長(zhǎng)和老師應(yīng)該努力去減

4、少小孩看電視的時(shí)間。錯(cuò)誤的句子： parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children.錯(cuò)誤 1 make an effort to固定表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤2 curb 一般是抑制某種行為，而不是接time.錯(cuò)誤 3 watching TV on children也不通。正確的句子： parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children s screen time.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(parents and teache

5、rs +及物動(dòng)詞(make)+賓語(effort)拓展的句子： Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit childrens screen time, thereby protecting childrens eyesight and encourage them to do more out-dooractivities. 錯(cuò)誤：protecting 和 encourage 不對(duì)稱正確的句子： Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit childrens screen

6、time, thereby protecting childrens eyesight and encouraging them to do more outdoor activities.注：這句話的分詞最好不要改成定語從句，因?yàn)榍懊娌恢朗切揎棥?screen time還 是 “l(fā)imit screen time”中文：家長(zhǎng)和老師應(yīng)該努力去減少孩子看電視的時(shí)間，這樣會(huì)保護(hù)孩子的視力，鼓 勵(lì)他們做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。翻譯4：經(jīng)濟(jì)的下滑(economic slowdown)導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率的上升錯(cuò)誤的句子： Economic slowdown made the climbing unemployment ra

7、te.錯(cuò)誤1 不要用過去時(shí)錯(cuò)誤2用不定冠詞好一點(diǎn)，因?yàn)檎谏仙氖I(yè)率一般不可能是唯一的。正確的句子： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語拓展的句子： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, in view of the fact that employers are reluctant to recruit new employees so as to cut overhead.錯(cuò)誤： 可能產(chǎn)生歧義，re

8、cruit new employees 是雇傭， “ reluctant to recruit newemployee是不愿意雇用。到底是哪個(gè)事情導(dǎo)致“ cut overhead ?正確的句子： Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate becauseemployers intend to cut overheads and refuse to recruit new employees.中文：經(jīng)濟(jì)下滑已經(jīng)導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率上升，因?yàn)楣椭鞔蛩悴脝T而且拒絕雇用新員工。另外一個(gè)豆瓣的學(xué)生寫的句子也不錯(cuò)，我發(fā)出來：Economic s

9、lowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, as people balk at starting up new businesses and a number of giant companies downsize their workforce.中文：經(jīng)濟(jì)下滑已經(jīng)導(dǎo)致失業(yè)率上升，因?yàn)槿藗儗?duì)開展新失業(yè)猶豫不決，而且很多 大 公司裁員。翻譯5:經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展需要年輕的勞動(dòng)者錯(cuò)誤的句子： The economic development requires a great number of fresh working forces錯(cuò)誤1 worki

10、ng force沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)正確的句子： A countrys economic development relies on a supply of young workers句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語也可以用分句擴(kuò)充，“ the problem is that是表語從句A countrys economic development relies on a supply of young workers, but the problem is that the aging society has an adverse impact on the labour force.中文：一個(gè)國家的經(jīng)

11、濟(jì)發(fā)展依靠一定量的年輕勞動(dòng)力，但是問題是老齡化的社會(huì)對(duì)勞動(dòng)力有負(fù)面影響。翻譯6:工作很多的人沒有時(shí)間去休息錯(cuò)誤的句子： People do with heavy workload cannot have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries錯(cuò)誤1 do不知道功能是干嘛的。錯(cuò)誤2 time不可數(shù)錯(cuò)誤5 cannot是表示不可能，這里應(yīng)該是do not正確的句子： People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語，“to rest and

12、recharge batteries不定式充當(dāng)time的 后置定語 也可以用定語從句擴(kuò)充People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest, which can be harmful to their fitness.中文：工作很多的人沒有足夠的時(shí)間去休息和充電，這樣對(duì)他們的健康有害。翻譯7:在中國，很多學(xué)生晚上都要自習(xí)錯(cuò)誤的句子： Large number of students in China have to study at night.錯(cuò)誤 1a large number of ” 固定搭配正確的句子： A l

13、arge number of students in China have to do self-study at night.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語也可以用狀語從句來擴(kuò)充A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night, so extra-curricular activities have to give way to studies.中文：在中國，許多學(xué)生都要在晚上自學(xué)，所以課外活動(dòng)不得不給學(xué)習(xí)讓路。翻譯8: heritage sites因?yàn)槌鞘邪l(fā)展而受到威脅錯(cuò)誤的句子： The developm

14、ent of cities have pose a threat on heritage sites.錯(cuò)誤1 have pose動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤而且主謂不一致錯(cuò)誤2 pose a threat to固定搭配正確的句子： The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites.句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(development) +及物動(dòng)詞(pose)+賓語(threat)還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites, but the govern

15、ment has no idea whether to protect or demolish these constructions.中文：城市的發(fā)展已經(jīng)威脅到歷史遺跡，但是政府還沒有辦法是否去保護(hù)還是毀壞這些建筑。翻譯9:我們不能夠忽視面對(duì)面的交流錯(cuò)誤的句子：It cannot be ignored by people to have some face-to-face communication.錯(cuò)誤1 it指代不清楚錯(cuò)誤2 to have face-to-face communication不定式一般是表示沒有發(fā)生而有可能發(fā) 生的事情。正確的句子： We should not igno

16、re face-to-face communication.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(communication)還可以用狀語從句擴(kuò)充We should not ignore face-to-face communication because this has a direct impact on social relationships.還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充Internet can enrich our social lives, but we should not ignore face-to-face communication, because this has a direct

17、 impact on social relationships.中文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)能夠豐富我們的生活，但是我們不應(yīng)該忽視面對(duì)面的交流因?yàn)樗鼘?duì)社會(huì)關(guān)系有直接影響。翻譯:10:有些公共服務(wù)很難收支平衡錯(cuò)誤的句子： Some public services have problems in break even.錯(cuò)誤1 break是動(dòng)詞，在這里 in是介詞，后面應(yīng)該加動(dòng)名詞正確的句子： Some public services have problems in breaking even.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞（have）+賓語（problems）還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充Some public services

18、 have problems in breaking even and need government funds.中文：一些公共服務(wù)很難收支平衡，需要政府資金。翻譯11:我們需要考慮社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)的環(huán)境錯(cuò)誤的句子： We have to consider about social and economic context.錯(cuò)誤1 consider及物動(dòng)詞，后面不需要加介詞正確的句子： We have to consider the social and economic context.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語還可以用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)擴(kuò)充We have to consider the social

19、 and economic context when analysing the root causes of juvenile delinquency.中文：當(dāng)分析青少年犯罪的根本原因的時(shí)候，我們應(yīng)該考慮社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)環(huán)境。翻譯12:密度種植對(duì)生物多樣性造成了威脅錯(cuò)誤的句子：Intensive farming poses a threat to stemming the lose of bio-diversity.錯(cuò)誤 1 pose a threat to stemming the loss of bio-diversit y 太羅 嗦了。錯(cuò)誤2 lose是動(dòng)詞，OF前后一般要有名詞正確的句子：

20、Intensive farming can pose a threat to bio-diversity.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語（threat）還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充Intensive farming has a great impact on natural flora and can pose a threat to bio-diversity.中文：密集種植對(duì)野生植物有巨大影響，對(duì)物種多樣性有巨大威脅。其他選擇Intensive farming has a seriously negative impact on natural flora, and this may pose a

21、threat to sustainable development of agriculture.中文：密集種植對(duì)天然植物有嚴(yán)重的負(fù)面影響，這可能對(duì)農(nóng)業(yè)的可持續(xù)發(fā)展有威脅。翻譯13:平等的教育能幫助解決學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好錯(cuò)誤的句子： Equal access to education can overcome educational underachievement.錯(cuò)誤 1 overcome educational underachievemen格配不好；a educationalunderachievemen t 是指學(xué)生成績(jī)不好的意思。正確的句子： Equal access to educ

22、ation can help tackle educational underachievement.句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞（help） +賓語（to tackle.這里省略了 to）還可以用定語從句擴(kuò)充Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children.a problem 在這里是個(gè)同位語， 指代前面的 aeducational u

23、nderachievement ；而 “found among disadvantaged children 過去分詞，充當(dāng)定語。中文：當(dāng)?shù)卣畱?yīng)該保證平等教育，這樣能夠幫助落后學(xué)生去解決學(xué)習(xí)的落后。翻譯14：接觸不同的文化可以促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新錯(cuò)誤的句子： Contacting with a wide variety of cultures can promote the creativity of native culture.錯(cuò)誤1 Contacting with中國式英文錯(cuò)誤2 native culture別扭，不知道為什么要說本土文化正確的句子： Exposure to different c

24、ultures can encourage creativity.句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語還可以用定語從句擴(kuò)充Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity, which is an asset for enterprises or countries.中文：接觸不同的文化能夠促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新，這是企業(yè)或者國家的財(cái)富。翻譯15：政府應(yīng)該重視社會(huì)福利(welfare services),尤其是醫(yī)療服務(wù)。錯(cuò)誤的句子： The government should give a priority to social welfare, es

25、pecially the healthcare錯(cuò)誤 1 give priority to 沒有 a正確的句子： The government should give priority to welfare services, especially the healthcare.句子的結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語還可以用名詞性從句，定語從句擴(kuò)充some people suggest that the government should give priority to welfare services, especially the healthcare, which helps stop the

26、 disadvantaged population dying needlessly.中文：一些人認(rèn)為政府重視社會(huì)福利，尤其是醫(yī)療服務(wù)，這會(huì)幫助阻止弱勢(shì)群體無助地死去。翻譯16:教育或許決定了人的工作機(jī)會(huì)。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Education may do hold the key to one s job prospect.錯(cuò)誤：may和do不能連用。正確的句子： Education may hold the key to one s job prospect.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(education) +及物動(dòng)詞 hold)+賓語(the key)拓展的句子：可以使用狀語從句Education ma

27、y hold the key to one s job prospect, especially when people intend to jobs in the hi-tech industry.翻譯17:使用化石資源對(duì)環(huán)境會(huì)造成破壞。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Use fossil fuels can cause damage to the environmental problem .錯(cuò)誤：USE是動(dòng)詞，不能作為主語。錯(cuò)誤：cause damage to已經(jīng)表示出對(duì)環(huán)境的破壞，不需要再說problem正確的句子： The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to

28、 the environment.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語（use） +及物動(dòng)詞（can cause）長(zhǎng)語（damage）拓展的句子：可以使用狀語從句The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment, possibly because it creates air pollution.翻譯18:建造住宅樓有助于解決城市的擁擠問題。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Building apartment blocks contribute to solve the crowed problem in cities錯(cuò)誤1 building是動(dòng)名詞，主謂不一致錯(cuò)

29、誤2 contribute to后面要加名詞，而不是動(dòng)詞原形錯(cuò)誤3 crowed problem沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)正確的句子： Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞（helps）+賓語（solve overcrowding,省略了 to,本來是不定式 to solve overcrowding）拓展的句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities, because it can contain more peop

30、le with limited space.錯(cuò)誤：contain more people 搭配不是彳艮好正確的句子： Apartment blocks, which make the most of land and space, help solve overcrowding in cities.中文：住宅樓由于其能最大限度地利用土地和空間，所以有助于解決城市的擁擠問題。翻譯19:貧窮的人可以通過努力工作來提高社會(huì)地位錯(cuò)誤的句子： People at disadvantage are likely to improve their social status by working hard,

31、 studying hard.錯(cuò)誤1 at disadvantage沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤 2 working hard, studying hard 沒有連詞正確的句子： People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(people) + 及物動(dòng)詞 (improve)+ 賓語(status), “from disadvantaged backgrounds是 people 的定語還可以用并列句擴(kuò)展People from disadvantaged backgr

32、ounds can improve their social status by working hard and this seems an arduous but rewarding process.中文：貧窮的人可以通過努力工作來提高社會(huì)地位，這看起來是一個(gè)辛苦但有效的過程。翻譯20:因?yàn)槿蚧?，人們需要和來自不同背景的人工作。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Because of the globalisation, people should work with others who comes from different backgrounds.錯(cuò)誤1 the globalization的the比較

33、多余錯(cuò)誤2 who comes from沒有必要用定語從句錯(cuò)誤3 should有點(diǎn)過分了，“必須”的意思正確的句子： Because of globalisation, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds.注：這里的those就是其他人的意思，不能說 those people這樣會(huì)和主語重復(fù)。句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(people)+ 及物動(dòng)詞(need) + 賓語(to work)because of globalisation 介賓短語充當(dāng)狀語翻譯21:我們需要采取措施去解決一些棘手的問題。錯(cuò)誤的句子： We must ta

34、ke measurement to tackle thorny problems.錯(cuò)誤measurement的意思是測(cè)量正確的句子： We need to take action to solve some intractable problems.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語 (we) +及物動(dòng)詞(need)+賓語(to take .)翻譯22：媒體通過夸大受害者的傷痛去吸引觀眾。錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions.錯(cuò)誤1 ： Media本身就是復(fù)數(shù)。錯(cuò)誤2: hurt是動(dòng)詞，OF前后要加名詞。

35、錯(cuò)誤3： attentions不可數(shù)名詞。正確的句子： The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims suffering.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(the media) +及物動(dòng)詞(attracts)+賓語(attention)； “by+”方式 狀語拓展的句子： The media attract public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as t

36、heir exposure to the public. 錯(cuò)誤1： while是從屬連詞，后面不能直接加動(dòng)詞原形。錯(cuò)誤2 ignore和bring兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞。錯(cuò)誤3 them指代不清楚正確的句子： The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to thepublic.中文：媒體通過夸大受害者的傷痛去吸引觀眾， 而忽視對(duì)這些觀眾的有害

37、結(jié)果，比 如將他們?cè)诠娒媲捌毓?。?及物動(dòng)詞+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語翻譯23:基因工程讓人們能培養(yǎng)新品種農(nóng)作物錯(cuò)誤的句子： Genetic engineering allows people to nurture new species crops.錯(cuò)誤 1 species crops語序有問題正確的句子： Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語（people） +賓語補(bǔ)足語（to nurture- ）拓展的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to

38、nurture crop varieties that are resistant to droug ht thereby improving land productivity.中文：基因工程使人們能培育出抗旱的農(nóng)作物品種，因此可以提高土地利用率。翻譯24:經(jīng)常運(yùn)動(dòng)使得人們保持健康的心態(tài)錯(cuò)誤的句子： Doing exercises regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind.錯(cuò)誤1 Doing exercises 一般是不可數(shù)正確的句子： Doing exercise regularly helps people maint

39、ain a healthy state of mind.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語（people） +賓語補(bǔ)足語（to maintain省略了 to） 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress.中文：經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動(dòng)幫助人們保持一個(gè)健康的心態(tài)，是他們更容易應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。翻譯25:不健康的生活方式讓人們處于生病的危險(xiǎn)之中。錯(cuò)誤的句子：Unhealthy lifestyle is likel

40、y to make people at risk of illness.錯(cuò)誤 1: make somebody do something或者是 make somebody 理容詞是更常見的用法。錯(cuò)誤2： lifestyle可數(shù)名詞，要加冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù)正確的句子： An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(An unhealthy lifestyle) +及物動(dòng)詞(put) +賓語(people) +賓語補(bǔ) 足語 (at risk of illness)翻譯26:獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金可以鼓勵(lì)更多的學(xué)生去學(xué)習(xí)研究生課程。錯(cuò)誤

41、的句子： Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum.錯(cuò)誤1 scholarship可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該有復(fù)數(shù)或者冠詞錯(cuò)誤 2 regarded as something太過羅嗦錯(cuò)誤3 curriculum不是course的替換詞，curriculum的意思是課程大綱正確的句子： Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduatecourses.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(

42、government grants)吸物動(dòng)詞(encourage)侯語(students)聯(lián)語補(bǔ)足語(to take postgraduate courses)翻譯27:社區(qū)改造為罪犯提供了獲得職業(yè)技能的機(jī)會(huì)錯(cuò)誤的句子： Replacing the long sentence by working for the locals provides offenderswith transferable skills.錯(cuò)誤1主語很別扭，兩個(gè)東西沒有替換性正確的句子： Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire

43、transferable skills.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(offenders) +賓語補(bǔ)足語(with opportunities to) 還可以用并列句擴(kuò)充Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released.中文：社區(qū)服務(wù)給犯人提供獲得實(shí)用技能的機(jī)會(huì)，給他們好的起點(diǎn)當(dāng)他們被釋放后。翻譯28:法律應(yīng)該將醉駕變成刑事犯罪。錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：the governm

44、ent should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence.錯(cuò)誤定語從句還原是“ a law is drunk driving顯然不對(duì)。 中國學(xué)生有個(gè)誤區(qū)，就是一定 要寫個(gè)從句，才能加分。正確的句子： Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(legislation)+及物動(dòng)詞(make)+賓語(drink driving)+賓語補(bǔ)足語(acriminal offence)翻譯29:鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)給人們提供機(jī)會(huì)去遠(yuǎn)離現(xiàn)代生活的壓力和噪音

45、。錯(cuò)誤的句子 ：rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life.錯(cuò)誤1 ： rural area可數(shù)名詞，沒有冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù)。錯(cuò)誤2： opportunity在這里用復(fù)數(shù)比較好。正確的句子： Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(rural areas)+M物動(dòng)詞(provide) +賓語(people)+賓

46、語補(bǔ)足語(with opportunities)拓展的句子：Rural area is beneficial to peoples fitness, because it provides people withopportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.錯(cuò)誤：rural area可數(shù)名詞，沒有冠詞，或者復(fù)數(shù)。兩個(gè)句子的主語都一樣，還不如用分詞正確的句子： Rural areas are beneficial to peoples health, providing people with opportunities t

47、o escape pressure and noises of modern life.中文：鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)對(duì)人們的健康有益，因?yàn)樗o人們提供機(jī)會(huì)去遠(yuǎn)離現(xiàn)代生活的壓力和噪音。翻譯30:人口老齡化促使國家去提高法定退休年齡(statutory retirement age 。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban.錯(cuò)誤1 ： retirement age是可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)誤2： reason is attributed to這個(gè)

48、搭配不好正確的句子： The ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(ageing population)及物動(dòng)詞(prompt)+賓語(countries)+賓語補(bǔ)足語(to raise-)拓展的句子： The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problemwhich has promote countries to raise the statutory retirem

49、ent age.錯(cuò)誤：應(yīng)該是skilled workers. Skillful表示人們做某事的時(shí)候所展示的技藝嫻熟正確的句子： The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.注：a problem在這里是同位語，指代前面的 shortage中文：人口老齡化導(dǎo)致高級(jí)技術(shù)工人的短缺，這個(gè)問題已經(jīng)促使國家提高了法定退休年齡。主+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語+直接賓語翻

50、譯31:政府提供一些城市很多資金去保護(hù)歷史建筑(historic buildings)。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Many areas now pay attention to protect historic buildings.錯(cuò)誤：pay attention to的to是介詞，后面不能加動(dòng)詞正確的句子： Governments should offer some cities funds to preserve historic buildings.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語（areas +及物動(dòng)詞（offer）+間接賓語（some cities）+直接賓語（funds）拓展的句子：可以使用定語從句拓展的句子：

51、 Governments should offer some cities funds to preserve historic buildings, which are part of our cultural heritage.被動(dòng)語態(tài)翻譯32:學(xué)校應(yīng)該允許老師強(qiáng)制搗蛋的小孩離開教室。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Schools should allow teachers to make the children with disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms.錯(cuò)誤：children with disruptive behaviours 略顯羅嗦正確的句子：

52、Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.原句：Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語（schools） +及物動(dòng)詞（permit）+賓語（teachers）侯語補(bǔ)足語（to use force ）翻譯33:農(nóng)村的失業(yè)問題在某種程度上可以通過城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移（rural-to-urban shift）解決

53、。錯(cuò)誤的句子： Unemployment in rural areas can be address by rural-to-urban shift.錯(cuò)誤1被動(dòng)語態(tài)沒有過去分詞錯(cuò)誤2 shift是可數(shù)名詞，最好要有冠詞正確的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：（主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語）的被動(dòng)語態(tài)拓展的句子：Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urb

54、anshift, because rural areas are lack of industry and services, which causes highunemployment rate.錯(cuò)誤1： because后面的內(nèi)容只是解釋了為什么鄉(xiāng)村的失業(yè)率很高，但是沒有解釋為什么 城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移可以解決這個(gè)問題。錯(cuò)誤2： rate可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)誤3: 一般不要lack of充當(dāng)表語正確的句子： The lack of infrastructure and government funding in rural areas is the main cause of unemployment, whic

55、h can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift.中文：農(nóng)村失業(yè)問題的主要原因是缺少基礎(chǔ)建設(shè)和政府資助，這個(gè)問題在某種程度 可以通過城鄉(xiāng)轉(zhuǎn)移解決。翻譯34：高層建筑有時(shí)候被認(rèn)為是城市的eyesore錯(cuò)誤的句子 （4.5 分）：Occasionally, high rise buildings are tend to be regarded as the eyesore of a city.錯(cuò)誤1 Occasionally表示的意思是“偶爾地，很少地”錯(cuò)誤2be + do”永遠(yuǎn)是錯(cuò)的正確的句子： High-rise building

56、s are sometimes regarded as eyesores of the city.注：這句話里如果說“the eyesore就是特指，意思就是城市只有一處難看的地方，事實(shí)上未必如此。句子結(jié)構(gòu)： somebody regards something as something是“主語 + 及物動(dòng)詞 + 賓語 +賓語補(bǔ)足語”的結(jié)構(gòu)。而這句話是這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。翻譯35:太空科技的投資應(yīng)該獲得政府的支持錯(cuò)誤的句子： The investment on space technology should be supported by government.錯(cuò)誤1 investment i

57、n固定搭配錯(cuò)誤 2 governments or the government正確的句子： The investment in space technology should be supported by the government.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞（support被動(dòng)語態(tài)）+賓語還可以用狀語從句和并列句擴(kuò)充The investment in space technology should be supported by the government because the commercialization of such technology will bring more b

58、usiness opportunities and improve peoples living standards.中文：政府應(yīng)該支持對(duì)太空科技的投資因?yàn)檫@些科技的商業(yè)化會(huì)帶來更多的商業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，提高人們的生活水平。翻譯36:歷史文物因?yàn)樗臍v史重要性而被保存錯(cuò)誤的句子： Antique heritages should be completely preserved due to its historical importance.錯(cuò)誤1 Antique heritages沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤2 heritage是個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)誤3既然主語是復(fù)數(shù)，為什么后面用代詞 its正確的句子： Histor

59、ic relics should be preserved for their historical significance.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞（preserve被動(dòng)語態(tài)）+賓語翻譯37:學(xué)?；顒?dòng)的設(shè)置要能讓孩子體會(huì)到成就感和提升他們的幸福錯(cuò)誤的句子： The main purpose of the school activities which can give the childrens a sense of accomplishment is to promote the studentss well being錯(cuò)誤1主語里加了個(gè)定語從句，太長(zhǎng)錯(cuò)誤2給學(xué)生成功感和提升學(xué)生的幸福應(yīng)

60、該不是方式和目的正確的句子： Sports and other school activities can be designed to give children a sense of accomplishment and to promote their well-being.句子結(jié)構(gòu)：主語+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語 （design的被動(dòng)語態(tài)）注：也可以說 improve well-being.注意我在句子里加了個(gè)體育，就是簡(jiǎn)單的一個(gè)例子，讀者就清楚你想表達(dá)的東西。好的文章是可讀的，內(nèi)容充實(shí)的，而很多同學(xué)的問題是比較死板和枯燥地將一些單詞放進(jìn)去。翻譯38: 一些員工 被鼓勵(lì)著去打破陳規(guī)錯(cuò)誤的句子：