《基礎寫作之人物信息整合》 課件

1、Welcome to our class!【W(wǎng)arming up】 Guess who the boy/girl is!Step11.能辨別長句、高級句子中所運用的語言技巧。2.能說出人物簡介中并列結構，同位語結構， 非謂語結構，定語或狀語從句結構的常用詞。3.能把并列結構，同位語結構，非謂語結構，定語或狀語從句結構靈活運用到人物簡介相關信息的整合中。 4.能運用所學的1-2兩種技巧把一篇人物簡介的多個信息點（句子）整合成符合高考要求的5句話作文。學習目標： Basic Writing character writing B級 3-4種 C級2-3種 DE級1-2種【展示預習成果】 】1.觀察

2、AB兩篇英文習作，談談兩篇的異同。 相同之處：（ ）不同之處：1.句子數(shù)量？ 2.句子結構？文采？你比較喜歡哪篇？為什么？電子書包互動討論人物寫作信息整合課前預習Step2 A篇 Jay Chou is a famous singer. He was born in January, 1979 in Taiwan. He was raised by his mother. He was shy and quiet during his childhood. As he showed interest in music, he began learning to play the piano a

3、t the age of three. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升). He received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting ne

4、w things.B篇 Born in January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of three. When Jays first album was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention. Hi

5、s popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs(突破) as he takes risks in attempting new things.閱讀C,D兩篇人物寫作范文，判斷劃線部分所用的寫作技巧。 電子書包測試反饋3語法技巧測試題 1.Born in Poland i

6、n 1867, Madame Curie, 2 a French physicist, showed great interest in physics 3 when she was young. At that time she worked very hard but women were not admitted to universities in Poland, 4 so she was determined to go and study in Paris University 5 where she succeeded in taking a first class degree

7、 in physics in 1893. In 1895, she married Pierre Curie 6 with whom she worked together on the research into radioactive matter. In 1904 she and her husband received the Nobel Prize for Physics 7. and in 1911, she received a second Nobel Prize for chemistry. In a word, Madame Curie is regarded as the

8、 great scientist 8 who is the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.9（）Born on March 7, 1915, Allan Stewart, 10（）an Australian, become the oldest man to obtain a masters degree over the world in 2006. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. He got his first degree

9、in 1936 and then his doctors degree in medicine. He decided to study law in his eighties,11（） and he got the masters degree in 2006, 12（）which was his third degree. In 2012, he managed to get his fourth degree by online learning 13（）and won praise from his teacher for his good time management in stu

10、dy.D篇 2012年廣東高考英語試卷基礎寫作范文欣賞 3：在人物簡介中，a并列結構 常用詞：b同位語結構常用詞： C,非謂語結構 常用詞：d 定語從句 常用詞：e狀語從句 常用詞： and, and then, but, so, bothand,not only, but alsoa famous singer, a French physicist, an Australian to do (主動、將來) doing（主動、進行） having done (主動 完成） done （被動、完成） 人+who that, 地點where 時間when 事件which If ,Though w

11、hen/After/Since 整合技巧：并列結構同位語非謂語結構定語從句狀語從句 and, and then, but, so, bothand not only, but alsoa famous singer, a French physicist, an Australian to do (主動、將來) doing（主動、進行） having done (主動 完成） done （被動、完成） 人+who that 地點where 時間when 事件which If ,Though when/After/Since【研學問題（活動）一】【電子書包-互動討論區(qū) -人物寫作信息整合研學問題

12、一】人物概況信息點的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones age, sex, birth-place, background into one sentence ?BrainstormStep3 1.Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China . He was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 1). Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China and he was born in Guangzhou

13、 in 1941. 2). Zhong Nanshan , one of the greatest doctors in China , was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 3). Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China . 4). Zhong Nanshan who was born in Guangzhou in 1941 is one of the greatest doctors in China ./ Zhong Nanshan who

14、is one of the greatest doctors in China was born in Guangzhou.【研學問題（活動）二】人物外貌、性格、品質(zhì)信息點的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones appearance , characters and qualitiesinto one sentence ?【電子書包-互動討論區(qū) -人物寫作信息整合研學問題二】Brainstorm .Cindy is a cute girl. She has long hair and big eyes. She runs like the win

15、d. 1).Cindy is a cute girl with long hair and big eyes and she runs like the wind. 2) Cindy , a cute girl, has long hair and big eyes and runs like the wind.3) Cindy ,a cute girl with long hair and big eyes, runs like the wind.3). Cindy ,who is a cute girl with long hair and big eyes, runs like the

16、wind.4).Cindy is a cute girl who has long hair and big eyes , running like the wind. 【研學問題（活動）三】人物教育經(jīng)歷信息點的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones education into one sentence ?【電子書包-互動討論區(qū) -人物寫作信息整合研學問題三】Brainstorm Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University. He graduated with excellent results. Afte

17、r graduation he went to America for further study. 1）Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University where he graduated with excellent results and after graduation he went to America for further study.2）Tao Xingzhi graduated from Jinling University with excellent results and after graduation he went to Am

18、erica for further study. 3) Tao Xingzhi graduated from Jinling University with excellent results and then he went to America for further study. Tao Xingzhi studied in Jinling University. He graduated with excellent results. After graduation he went to America for further study. 4) After graduating f

19、rom Jinling University with excellent results, Tao Xingzhi went to America for further study.5）Having graduated from Jinling University with excellent results, Tao Xingzhi went to America for further study. 【研學問題（活動）四】人物生平、成就信息點的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones events and achievements into

20、 one sentence ?【電子書包-互動討論區(qū) -人物寫作信息整合研學問題四】Brainstorm 4.Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006. Liu Xiang became the idol of the youth. 1).Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006 and then he became the idol of the youth. 2).Liu Xiang ,who broke the wor

21、ld record and got the gold medal in 2006, became the idol of the youth.3).Having broken the world record and got the goldmedal in 2006, Liu Xiang became the idol of the youth.4).After Liu Xiang broke the world record and got the gold medal in 2006, he became the idol of the youth. 【研學問題（活動）五】人物評價信息點

22、的整合：How to combine the sentences about ones evaluation into one sentence ?【電子書包-互動討論區(qū) -人物寫作信息整合研學問題五】Brainstorm Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person . He is known as the “King of Pop”.He is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music his

23、tory. 1) Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person and he is known as the “King of Pop”, because he is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 2) Michael Jackson ,the “King of Pop”, was an outstanding music versatile person and h

24、e is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. Michael Jackson was an outstanding music versatile person . He is known as the “King of Pop”.He is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 3) Mic

25、hael Jackson , who is an outstanding music versatile person, is known as the “King of Pop” and he is the first artist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history. 4) Known as the “King of Pop” , Michael Jackson ,an outstanding music versatile person ,is the first art

26、ist to sell more than one hundred million records beyond U.S.A. in music history.鞏固拓展-應用 1.請先按人物寫作的內(nèi)容順序分為5個部分。 小組合作探究合并句子的技巧， 學習組長指導。2.把狄更斯人物簡介11個信息點整合為5句話作文。 要求用同位語、并列句結構，非謂語結構， 定語從句結構、狀語從句結構等技巧中的1-2種。 B層同學自由發(fā)揮。層的1-2種技巧。層同學至少學會用并列句合并句子。把狄更斯簡介11個信息點整合為5句話Please combine the 11 sentences aboutCharles

27、Dickens into five sentences.【電子書包我的作業(yè)】Step41) Charles Dickens was a famous novelist of England.2) He was born in February, 1812 . 3) He passed away in June.4) When he was young, his family was poor.5) He was forced to work in the factory.6) He was interested in writing.7) He wrote many novels.8) Man

28、y of his novels described the inferior group. 9) His works were affected by his childhood experiences.10) His writings reflected the darkness and unfairness of the society. 11) Many of his works are still popular in the world. 概況教育背景生平成就評價應用展示 【電子書包-互動討論區(qū)1.是否5句？5句3分。多或少扣1分。2.每句的結構是否正確?一句2分。3.含2個整合技巧

29、的3分。多的加1分。認真評價各小組作品。Step5Charles Dickens, a famous novelist of England, was born in February, 1812 and passed away in June, 1870. When he was young, his family lived in poverty and therefore he was forced to work in the factory. Later, he developed an interest in writing，coming up with many novels which showed the