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1、英語(yǔ)主講老師：1 / 14英語(yǔ)訓(xùn)練關(guān)鍵Methodology:reci ion、imi ion（整篇背誦、模仿） ess：egrated training, logic training (整篇操練，邏輯操練)英語(yǔ)課程體系：1、趨勢(shì)+結(jié)構(gòu)trend, structure.2、大作文（20 分/15 分）開頭what、中間why/effect、結(jié)尾how 3、小作文（10 分）應(yīng)用文，shadowing templates(一)趨勢(shì)+結(jié)構(gòu)句法 trend, structure Trend 1英語(yǔ)一漫畫作文回歸傳統(tǒng)考題趨勢(shì)明顯原題重現(xiàn) （僅替換漫畫）原題變換角度考查（1）10 年 1 月cultu

2、ral pot原題重現(xiàn) （僅替換漫畫）(同 2002 年卷)2 / 14（2）原題變換角度考查05 年to support14 年mutual supportTrend 2英語(yǔ)二圖表作文數(shù)據(jù)單調(diào)性 / 數(shù)據(jù)比較數(shù)據(jù)單調(diào)性示例13 年大學(xué)生3 / 14數(shù)據(jù)比較示例2014話題Structure： What:虛開頭(描述) + 寬泛、宏觀的點(diǎn)評(píng)，50 字左右。Why/effect：內(nèi)因、外因/影響、外部影響；配合舉例。120 字左右。How: suggestions: 規(guī)則，行為，。60 字左右高分作文初感受。Cool structure + luminous sentence4 / 14寫作提綱

3、（brainstorming）:1. what(描寫圖畫，提出宏觀見解段)：global economy, stretcher, economic downturn，save the marketensively by cooperation.why/effect（分析展開原因段）：business cycle - economic crisisoverestimation of economic prosperity, bubblehe securities and the realties.case: one of my fathers colleagues, make use of in

4、stallment policy, speculate in real es e market, only pay 30%of totally-needed funds tosess 3 apartments ,with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million .how/prospect（展望，提出建議段）：“cooperation” - suggestionlaying down the assotive-effective disciplinedelivering the moderate outlook of consumptionensuring

5、our investing manners more rational.MThe global economy, who is sleng over(范文展示):t stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practicedemergency treatment by worldwide-bing systems, which are trying their best to save the marketensivelyby cooperation. Conspicuously, this is a horrible dction re

6、lated to/concerning the economic downturn aroundthe world.Several factors weigh heavily for this round of economic re, yet there are two kernelspended onthe top of the list which should never be overlooked.of all, the economic slide in business cycle, as the caseof economic crisis (the Great Depresh

7、appening betn 1929-1933 for exle), would make its comebackevery 10-30 years on the average, so would this time! Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperity hasresulted in a great multitude of bubbleshe securities and the realties. A case in po is one of my fatherscolleagues, who made use

8、of installment policy to speculate in real es e industry, thus, only paying 30% oftotally-needed funds tosess 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment! What we are glad to see is the keyword“cooperation”! If the drastic measures would be taken

9、 immedia y, just as laying down the asso tive-effective discipline to prevent the crisis from spreading all over the world, delivering the moderate outlook of consumption and ensuring ourinvesting manners more rational, we will surely get through this tough period before long.（二）大作文：開頭 what、中間 why/e

10、ffect、結(jié)尾 howWhat 虛開頭（描述）+ 寬泛、宏觀的點(diǎn)評(píng)What 虛開頭（描述）5 / 141.漫畫作文虛開頭2012 年vs.2012It is hardly/barely difficult for us to figure out in the left half of picture given abovet a,down-hearted and long-faced, is rooting in his chamber and regretting his unhappy bygones. However, in theright one, another man, pa

11、sblue pr .-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach his shining2.圖表作文虛開頭有關(guān)“圖表”的單詞：chartpie chartbar chart餅圖條形圖，柱狀圖curve diagram / line chart 曲線圖table表格（1） This table orderly arranges the information /percentage distribution /proportion of , displaying句子(整體趨勢(shì)具體數(shù)據(jù)) .t +6 /

12、14case: 不同地區(qū)吸煙人數(shù)的比例Eg：This table orderly arranges the information concerning the population of American smokers indifferent ses, displayingt the weather and the natural environment play critical roles in shahuman beings life style.ly, On the contrary, （2）This curve diagram indicates thet.ty fluctuat

13、ion of over the period from to , unfoldingcase：城市率This curve diagram indicates thethe period from 2001 to 2003, unfoldingty variation of juvenile delinquencyop-5 metropolises overt high economic boom may bepanied by even more bittersol orders. To begin with, Furthermore,數(shù)據(jù)典型細(xì)節(jié)描述：表示上升的趨勢(shì)： increasegro

14、w uprocket upslumprise up tosurge toupsurge表示下降的趨勢(shì)： decreasego downdrop (to)slide表示平衡的趨勢(shì)： stabilize（stable/steady） keep balancelevel offbreak even表示波動(dòng)的趨勢(shì)： wave用于修飾的副詞： sharplyfluctuatedramatically steadily slightlyEg:increase dramatically by 70 percent from 1000 in 2001 to 1700 in 2002The third quar

15、ter, however, breaks even, wislight drop of only 0.3 percent compared with the former one.（二）大作文：開頭 what、中間 why/effect、結(jié)尾 howWhat 虛開頭（描述）+ 寬泛、宏觀的點(diǎn)評(píng)It is a striking morning call / a typical wake-up call to send us a significant messaget (n.)has beenhe spotlight in current society /(n.) has aroused wi

16、de concern at any corner of our solconsensus.Eg: 家庭成員關(guān)系It is a striking wake-up call to send us a significant messaget the topic concerning the way / theproblem concerning how to get along properly with family members has beensociety.he spotlight in currentWhy/effect(第二段/實(shí)開頭)句) + 原因/影響+ 例子(句Among th

17、e topic concerning 上位, as the dction/ picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the ie of 下位.Eg: 家庭關(guān)系A(chǔ)mong the topic concerning family memberser-holding relationship, as the dction shows, the most7 / 14cardinal tip is related to the ie of raising elders.句Eg:人數(shù) 、人數(shù)、人數(shù)Among the topic concerni

18、ng pursuing knowledge abroad, as the dction shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the ie of whether you have made an elaborate preparation to face the new studying atmosphereand life style in foreign countries.引出原因Several factors could weigh heavily for (the happening of) , yet suspended at the

19、 top of the list are thefollowino aspects. To begin with, . Additionally, .(至少舉一個(gè)例子)Eg：中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化Several factors could weigh heavily for the depressing se of Chi respecting and raising seniors, yet suspended at the top of the list are the followintraditional virtue abouto aspects.引出影響：It is hardly nesar

20、y for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influenoperation gives rise to. To begin with, Apart from ,(t) the aesthetic引出影響：人人考It is hardly nesary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influenstaffing the bureau results in. To begin with, Apart from ,(t) the craze for舉例子A

21、good case blowing my mind now is n . 人/物 , who/ which舉例子:慈善、真正的成功Eg：A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, committing himself to charity industry after his retirement. Consequently, the high sol ladder and the vast esteem are bestowedto this great notabi

22、lity without any-expec ion.特別講解：主體段落展開完整示例（第二段）1. 單向話題The factors contributing to a big rise/ a conspicuous slide/ a shocking aggravation in (n.) are vastly complex. Some attribute it to （n.) . Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on (n.) . Still the rest complain of / attach impo

23、rtance to.case:為什么很多年輕人最終會(huì)抽煙The factors contributing to a big rise in teenager smoking are vastly complex. Some attribute it to juveniles themselves, who cannot resist temp ion from their roommates producing the second-hand cigarettes ( t are) harmful to our health.Others place the blame on the negl

24、ectful parents who tolerate or even stimulate their kids to indulge in8 / 14clove cigarettes. Still the rest complain of the dramatic increaseobaccos advertisements as well as imports,which enable kids to approach 555, Marlboro and Parliament easily.2.雙向話題Case:中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)俗的改變是好還是壞According to my humble, e

25、very sword is double-edged; this kind of cultural shift is bothitive and negative. To begin with, it goes without denyingdistinct advantages.t the new-changed customs and habits haveOn one hand, they abort the superstition and the ignorance of traditional Chiaccordance with the fast rhythm of modern

26、ization.culture to keep inOn the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to provide more opportunities for communication as welleraction among people of different nations, ra, colors and religions, thus, making our world moreascompatible.過(guò)渡句 1Although/ While the new-changed customs and habi drawbac

27、ks when the following pois takeno account.過(guò)渡句 2joy considerable merits, they still have their ownAlthough/ Whiidding farewell to the bygonjoys considerable merits, it still has its own drawbacks.A good case coming to my mind now is the comic comition of thetgraduate English Exam, 2005,which describe

28、s the eclipse of one of the Chivirtuesreadily raising seniors.After all, lots of old traditions stand for the essence of our nations main-stream virtue. So, to discard onenations classic cultural legacy may be considered as a kind of betrayal to some extent.How 提出建議 suggestion （規(guī)則，行為）1.Lay down the

29、effective regulations to 呼應(yīng).2.Deliver the moderaten .詞 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.3.Exert/ implement/ practice the rational 詞 manners to live in a much more harmonious /compatible atmosphere /circumstance.Lay down the available / reliable regulations to protect the rights of el

30、ders.Lay down the drastic measures to protect the environment in which we live.Lay down the self-reminding discipline to cultivate our habits concerning studying as well as living.Deliver the moderate sucs/ life/ material/ world/ knowledge/ energy / moral / aesthetic outlook to guide us both physica

31、lly and mentally. Exert the rational energy-consuming /sucs-attaining manners to live in a much more compatiblecircumstance.*補(bǔ)充方法/救命心法：名人名言(特別適用于最后一段提完建議之后)As a classic saying goes, a journey of a thousandbegins wisingle step.9 / 14提完建議之后：t depending on the lack of superviYet, it is very probable to

32、 say / laws / education / moral code,many citizens / youths would have been immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time. Does iveopportunities for us to make a change? / Is itsible to make a change?Actually, as a classic saying goes,“a journey of a thousandbegins wisingle step”. We will su

33、rely handle / optimize / refrain from .as long as the above mentioned proals would be implemented immedia ycase：道德下滑t depending on the lack of sol consensus, many citizens / youthsYet, it is very probable to saywould have been used to such a moral-disastrous condition for a long time. Is itsible to

34、make a change?single step”. We will surelyActually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousandbegins wirefrain from abandoning ourselves to the slump of morality as long as the above mentioned proimplemented immedia y.als would becase：奢侈浪費(fèi)t depending on the lack of available legal superviYet

35、, it goes without any exaggeration, manycitizens / youths would have been immersed in such a consumerism-oriented era for a long time. Does iopportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousandvebegins wisingle step”. We will surely build a thrifty life

36、style as long as the above mentioned proalswould be implemented immediay# 無(wú)模板頂級(jí)范文示例1.圖表作文頂級(jí)范文示例It is described by the chartt the aging problem has shown an irreversible trend in China. As wecan see, the proportiont elders above 60 years old take in the whole population has risen up steadily by0.4%-0

37、.8% oage every year from 11.6% in 2007 to 13.7% in 2011, which has brought a heavy burden to oursol security system.10 / 14Generally speaking, the aging society is the strongest proof of a countrys sound development. It is hardlydifficult for us to figure out thisitive sign in developed countries. H

38、owever, what we should not ignore is thecomplicated situation in our motherland., China is a vast economic and political entity with the huge population. If there are too many olds butrelatively less youngsters, we donve enough labors available to keep our development sustainable. Second,Chinas sol

39、security system, involving insurance mechanism, health care policy, etc., is still in a low-developedlevel, which can barely meet the needs of vast majority of seniors.Thus, we still have a long hard trail to blaze. Consideringt the aging problem is termed as a critical factorto sol stability, we ha

40、ve all reasons to be serious about it. Also, oursystem immedia y to build up a sense of justice and equality.ernment should reform the security2.漫畫作文頂級(jí)范文示例Its the mosteresting cartoon Ive ever methe latest 10-year real exrs. We can fillhe blunder every singlewith pairs of words, for exle, justice (l

41、eft) and efficiency (right), environment (left)and development (right), etc. .If the manhe right scissors the rope, both the victimhe left and himself/herself will lose the chance tosurvive. Actually, to hurt someone is good to none but worse to yourself, as a Chiclassic saying goes.These days, weve

42、 seen a lot of moral disasters via sol networks. The underlying reason for our mind tohurt each other ist we are used to let our own ego out.he background of the “fast and furious” economicdevelopment, every specific al options.Normally, the way to fit the fiercan feel under unspeakable prere due to

43、 the limited occupations andituation is to change yourself. However, few people are willing to get outof the way of themselves. Rather, they have indulged themselves in egoistic impulse, which may lead them tosacrifice others benefits.Whats worse, it is hard to be aware of the factteraction abounds

44、in human society, whieans youhurt someone today, they will send you a negative feedback no matter accidentally orentionally. For exle,its very irrational to sacrifiol justicehe name of efficiency because the terminal of happiness is equalcare towards everyone rathern the richness of minority. When e

45、fficiency kills justice, he himself will die soon.11 / 14For the sake of yourself, please cherish every little drip of others kindness and discard the Devil inside.(三)小作文中的應(yīng)用文作文，110-120 字。下面是大綱要求的幾種具體應(yīng)用文。1、letter(郵件)：生活化 2、notice(通知)3、abstract(摘要)4、note(便條)邀請(qǐng)信學(xué)術(shù)邀請(qǐng)（充滿敬意）開頭：正式邀請(qǐng)（參會(huì)的時(shí)間和會(huì)議主體：介紹會(huì)議安排結(jié)尾：希望

46、得到正式答復(fù)，并確認(rèn)）開頭Dear Professor ,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invi ion of an academic forum held on 具體時(shí)間 in/at 地點(diǎn) , which focuses on the topic of主體The forum mentioned above will be arranged as follows.ly, at 8 a m. will start the opening of the forum,which includes a brief presen ion w

47、ith regard to the prospects as well as plights (t) the involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including . Then at around 時(shí)間 , 另一個(gè)安排 .結(jié)尾sible, I would like to ask you for sending me your baccount, andI really hope you can make it. If it isIll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture f

48、ees as the deReply, if you please before 最后期限 .it.范文: 開頭Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invi ion of an academic forum held on Jan. 1heNations Theater, which focuses on the topic of Chitraditional culture.主體The forum mentioned above will be arranged as follows.ly, at

49、8 a m. will start the opening of the forum,which involves a brief presen ion with regard to the prospects as well as plightsculture may encounter.t the promotion of ChiAfterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.

50、 Then at 9 to 11 oclock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecturenamed “World Needs China”.結(jié)尾sible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bI really hope you can make it. If it isaccount, and12 / 14Ill pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deit. Reply, if you please be

51、fore thiskend.（二）申請(qǐng)信 application學(xué)校組織社團(tuán)評(píng)優(yōu)，要寫申請(qǐng)。你是學(xué)校創(chuàng)新社（Innovation Agency）的 founder，請(qǐng)代表寫一封申請(qǐng)信。Dear Sir,社參與評(píng)優(yōu)，I am the Director of Innovation Agency who writes this letter to apply for the prize “MostImprovedanization Award”. The reasons for which we consider our group as a qualified candidateare as fo

52、llows.ly, we spelize in private tools rebuilding and spare no efforts to enhance the living standard ofour schoolmates who are physically challenged. For ex/easy /friendly to wheelchairs.le, we rebuilt the building to make it acsibleFurthermore, there is a whole-newitive motivation as well as atmosp

53、here inside theanizationt every member enjoys not only the pros of innovative undertakings but the exaltedexperiento change our lifestyle.Really hope your majesty be touched by the efforts we have made. If you have any requirement or need any further narration, please do not hesie to call me via .Yo

54、urs faithfully,Li Ming三、信（有節(jié)有禮）你參加了一個(gè)公司的面試，結(jié)果在面試過(guò)程中考官批的顏面全無(wú)，根本不顧及你的感受，請(qǐng)寫信給這個(gè)公司的。1.說(shuō)明來(lái)信目的-explaining the aim of your letter2.具體闡述理由extending the causes of your dissatisfaction3.期待的解決方式y(tǒng)our點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一封典型的ipation for handling this ieegration（合體式）作文，它既涉及找工作面試用語(yǔ)，又涉及信，代表了應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。MESSAY:Dear Sir or Madam,I,

55、the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participatedheerview held by your company lastWednesday. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraidjob-striving/job-struggling experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with thet I have to make a compla about thise but the tone of youre

56、rviewer, Mr.Wang., when I was about illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsenseaccording to his “noble”.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feelt I am a reject. After all, I am a novice who hassteppedo this ruthless career field for thetime.I apprete it ver

57、y much if you could take my lettero consideration. What I really want is just an apology delivered by him, and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours,Li Ming練公司的特快專遞延遲了三周才到手上，導(dǎo)致我因你的產(chǎn)品延遲交付而不得不推遲了一項(xiàng)工作。13 / 14（四）回復(fù)（）信（對(duì)于別人你負(fù)責(zé)的勤工助學(xué)中心某學(xué)生表現(xiàn)糟糕的回復(fù)和安撫）I will not use your temporary stan

58、y more for their disastrous performance.Dear Sir,In response to your letter of complaabout our temporary administration assistant you received from myanization, I would like to apologize. We really care about our c nts andt is why we will try to givesome explanation about whappened.Actually, every candidate would obtain his or her qualification only if passing our strict and systematictraining. I promise theyou received lastk