基礎(chǔ)寫作-如何描寫一個地方

1、如何描寫一個地方1is in / on / toofbe located / situated inlie inneighbor / border5 on its east lies 東邊有中國在俄國的南邊 China is located to the south of Russia.梅州坐落在廣東的東北部 Meizhou lies in the northeast of Guangdong. 地理位置2 has / covers an area of . 占地面積 takes up + . 占地面積 is long and wide 多長多寬小鎮(zhèn)占地5平方英里。 The small tow

2、n covers an area of 5 square miles. 新疆占我國國土的六分之一。 Xingjiang takes up about one-sixth of our territory. 這花園長三十米, 寬二十米。 The garden is 30 metres long and 20 metres wide. 表達占地面積3 has a large/small population 人口眾多/稀少 has a population of 有人口 The population of is 有人口percent of the population are . 百分之的人口是

3、這個城市人口超過一百萬。 This city has a population of more than 1,000,000. 這個縣的農(nóng)村人口為40萬。 The rural population of the county is 400,000.百分之八十的人口是農(nóng)民。 Eighty percent of the population here are farmers. 表達人口4has a history ofhas a long history. with a history of中國上下五千年 China has a history of more than 5,000 years.中

4、國歷史悠久，占地960萬平方公里 With a long history, China covers an area of 9.6 million kilometres. 表達歷史5 be rich /abundant in.某地含有豐富的，盛產(chǎn) be wealthy in 某地富于 produces sth. 某地出產(chǎn) be famous/well-known for 某地因而聞名。 The main agricultural products are. 主要農(nóng)產(chǎn)品是be made up of/consist of由組成. a fantastic place 一個極好的地方新疆有豐富的自然資

5、源，以葡萄而聞名。 Xingjiang is rich in natural resources and is famous for grapes. 該縣主要農(nóng)產(chǎn)品是小麥、玉米 The main agricultural products in this county are wheat and corn 常用的句型6 a place of interest a historical attraction a scenic spot ; a fantastic place 一個極好的地方表達“吸引、著名” sth. attract / appeal to sb.; sth. be attrac

6、tive / appealing / wonderful be famous for 因而著名; be famous as 作為而著名 著名景點71. 我向你介紹一下我的家鄉(xiāng)。 I would like to introduce my hometown to you. 2. 我的家鄉(xiāng), 毗鄰香港, 位于廣東省。 My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province. 相關(guān)句式83. 廣州, 擁有一千三百萬人口的一座城市, 有 三百多年的歷史了。 Guangzhou, a city with a populati

7、on of about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.4. 這座城市占地面積達7, 434平方公里, 人口 大約是10, 000, 000。 Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers this city has a population of about ten million.95. 它自然資源得天獨厚, 有豐富的煤和金礦, 而 且氣候溫和。 It is rich in natural sources such as coal and gold, an

8、d has mild climate. 6. 我們學校再也不是過去的樣子了 Our school is no longer what it used to be. 10能力提高1. 請根據(jù)中文提示, 完成有關(guān)地點介紹的語匯積累。(1) 位于 _(2) 靠近 _(3)有(多少)人口 _ next to / close to, in the neighborhood of, neighboring.be located /situated in；lie(s)inIt has a population of . ; With a population of ., sth. .; The popula

9、tion has reached.11(4)有(多久)歷史 _(5) 占(多大)面積 _ _ (6) 表達“容量”The hotel _(擁有)120 rooms; The building can _(容納)5000 people.cover an area of .(square kilometers / square meters)possessesholdIt has a history of .; With a history of .，12(7) 是(多少)長/寬/深 It is. _/ _ / _. =It is. in _/ _/ _ .(8) 著名景點 a place of

10、_, a historical _, a scenic spot (9) 表達“吸引、著名”sth. _sb.; sth. be_ (形容詞); be famous _(因而著名);be famous _(作為而著名) aslong widedeeplengthwidth depth interestattractionattract / appeal toattractive / appealing / wonderfulfor132. 請根據(jù)中文, 完成短文。Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of

11、Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and (1) _ _(政治，經(jīng)濟，科學，教育，文化中心).(2) _ _ (全市面積7434.4平方公里), it is home to more than 11 million people. Covering / With an area of 7434.4 square kilometersthe centre of itspolitical，economic，scientific，educational，and cultural life14Located in the middle o

12、f Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou (3)_ (氣候溫暖濕潤). Besides, it is a famous city with (4)_ _(有著2, 200多年歷史)and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou (5) _ _ (旅游資源豐富).enjoys a warm and we

13、t climatea historyof more than 2, 200 yearsabundant in traveling resourcesis also15 典型例題你將帶領(lǐng)一個外國旅游團參觀長城，請根據(jù)以下的信息要點，用5個規(guī)范的英語句子寫一篇長城的簡單介紹。你的介紹應包括全部信息要點，介紹的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入5個句子中?！拘畔⒁c】歷史有兩千多年的歷史。特點世界上最長的城墻, 長6000多千米;建筑材料主要為石頭, 磚頭, 修建工作都是人工進行; 主要用于防御外來入侵者(foreign invaders), 沿墻每隔幾百米就有烽火臺(watchtower)?，F(xiàn)狀世界著名旅游景點

14、之一，每年吸引許多外國游客到長城觀光旅游。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。評分標準 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確, 信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。16 技巧點撥介紹或描述地點的基礎(chǔ)寫作, 通常以表格形式來呈現(xiàn)寫作點。該類表格通常有兩列,其中一列概括事物特征、屬性, 另一列對此特征、屬性展開描述。學生必須重新組織表格內(nèi)容, 不能死板地依據(jù)表格從左到右翻譯, 如不能寫成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”這樣不地道的句子,相應的表達應該是: Guangzhou lies in the south of China.172. 確定時態(tài)。介紹地

15、點等描述基本特征的文章 通常使用一般現(xiàn)在時。3. 避免開頭指代不明。若文章沒有給出寫作對 象或設定情景，避免用it作主語引導第一句, 而應該具體寫出描述的對象，如the Great Wall, Hong Kong等。 但如果整篇文章 多處用“it” 等作主語,文章會 稍顯遜色, 所以在寫作過程中, 可根據(jù)文意適 當變換主語, 如改寫為the place, the city等。18例題導寫按順序?qū)懽?。學生應該按照表格內(nèi)容(即 “歷史、特點、現(xiàn)狀”)的先后順序進行寫作，這樣既可避免重整順序而浪費時間, 也避免錯改順序而給老師帶來閱卷困難。2. 草擬提綱、簡單翻譯是寫作重要步驟之一。請翻譯要點：有(

16、多久)的歷史 _(2) 世界最長的城墻 _(3) 6000多千米長 _(4) 由石頭, 磚頭做成 _(5) 由人工修建 _It has a history of . be built /constructed by handthe longest wall in the world6000 kilometers longbe made of stones and bricks196) 防御外來入侵者 _(7) 每隔幾百米 _every few hundred meters prevent the country from being invaded; defend the country ag

17、ainst foreign invaders(8) 著名旅游景點之一 _ _(9) 吸引許多外國游客 _one of the famous scenic spots; one of the famous places of interest; one of the famous tourist attractionsattract many foreign visitors203. 規(guī)范表達名詞。如果名詞修飾語過長, 應轉(zhuǎn)用 “a / an / the +名詞+of”的表達, 例如, “兩千多年的歷史”應該寫成“a history of two thousand years”, 而不能寫成“t

18、wo thousand years history”。214. 變換表達, 豐富句式。請按要求完成句子：(1) It is more than 6000 kilometers in length, _(“是世界上最長的城墻”, 使用非限制性定語從句)(2) It was the Great Wall _ _in ancient times. (“幫助人們防御外來入侵者”, 使用強調(diào)句) that helped people fight against the foreign invaderswhich makes it the longest wall in the world22(3)_ _

19、, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall.(“長城 主要用于防御外來入侵者”, 使用原因狀語從句)(4) The Great Wall is one of the well-known places of interest on earth, _.(“每年吸引許多外國游客到長城觀光旅游”, 使用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu))As the Great Wall was built to defend peopleagainst the invaders appealing to a largenumber of foreign

20、ers every year23(5) The Great Wall is _ a famous historical attraction _ it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors each year.(使用 “如此以致”的句型表達)(6) So _that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.(“長城如此吸 引”, 使用倒裝句)attractive is the Great Wallsuchthat24 Ladi

21、es and Gentlemen，welcome to the Great Wall. 25The Great Wall, which is more than 6, 000 kilometers long, is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2, 000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine. As the wall was

22、 built to defend the country against foreign invaders, there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now, the Great wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year.26課堂練習27（From潮州市質(zhì)量檢測卷）將笫四句拆分成二個句子。“客家人的祖先源自中原, 素來崇文重教?！睂懗伞?/p>

23、The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community.”Example 3：笫四部分表格中，“車程所需時間”一欄，用一個句子（However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.），而“課程設置”一欄卻拆分成二

24、個句子（Whats more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University）附：07潮州市質(zhì)量檢測卷:梅州市位于廣東東北部?？?cè)丝?91萬人（2003年）。梅州市是著名的世界客都?？图胰说淖嫦仍醋灾性? 素來崇文重教?？图胰诵凶咛煜?，移民世界，且在海內(nèi)外商界不乏成功者，因此有“東方猶太人”之稱。Meizhou City is sit

25、uated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million. It is the biggest of the Hakkas community in the country known as the Capital of hakkas. The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hak

26、ka community. Because of the Hakkas successes in business worldwide, they are regarded as Oriental Jews. Looking forward to seeing you,.Li Hua282012年體育盛事奧運會將在倫敦舉行。你校一年一度的英語體育節(jié)將至，請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容, 用英語寫一篇介紹倫敦的文章，張貼在體育節(jié)的宣傳欄上。寫作內(nèi)容概況倫敦是英國政治、經(jīng)濟、文化中心和首要工業(yè)城市。位于英國東南部, 面積1580平方公里天氣天氣多變，時常下雨交通交通方便、發(fā)達, 但費用較高旅游風光旖旎, 吸

27、引了四方游客, 給游客留下了深刻的印象可選課外作業(yè)29 London, the most important industrial city of England, serves as the centre of its political, economic and cultural life. Located in the southeast of England, it covers an area of 1580 square kilometers. The weather is changeable and it rains often. People can enjoy the c

28、onvenience of the means of transportation, but at a relatively expensive price. With its beautiful scenery, London attracts visitors from all over the world, leaving them a deep impression. 參考范文 30課外練習你參加了學校的旅游興趣小組，在匯報課上，各小組成員要介紹一個獨具魅力的城市，以下是你搜集到的關(guān)于香港的信息?；拘畔⒖拷鼜V東省南端, 西鄰澳門, 以旅游、美食、購物、影視等聞名地方特色1.匯聚來自世界各地的名牌, 是購物的理想勝地; 2.在眾多著名旅游景點, 如迪士尼樂園, 海洋