高中英語(yǔ) 新外研必修一 U5 課時(shí)6 Writing 課件

1、深圳市教育科學(xué)研究院 2022 年2月深圳教育云資源平臺(tái)建設(shè)教學(xué)教材：外研版高中英語(yǔ)新教材必修一教學(xué)內(nèi)容：Unit 5 Into the wild第六課時(shí): Writing: write an animal fact file執(zhí)教人：鄒夢(mèng)靈/深圳實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校光明部Feb. 22nd, 2022Lesson 1Starting out & vocabulary與動(dòng)物有關(guān)的英文習(xí)語(yǔ)、英國(guó)人飼養(yǎng)寵物的情況Lesson 2Reading黑脈金斑蝶的遷徙Lesson 3Using language中國(guó)熊貓出訪荷蘭Lesson 4Listening & speaking關(guān)于動(dòng)物園圈養(yǎng)動(dòng)物的辯論Lesson 5

2、Reading一次驚心動(dòng)魄的拍攝經(jīng)歷Lesson 6Writing創(chuàng)建動(dòng)物檔案Lesson 7Presenting ideas & reflection介紹一個(gè)表現(xiàn)人與動(dòng)物關(guān)系的電影或故事課時(shí)設(shè)計(jì)與銜接樹(shù)立人與動(dòng)物和諧相處的意識(shí)，關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物，尊重動(dòng)物，保護(hù)動(dòng)物。大觀念：通過(guò)以上內(nèi)容的學(xué)習(xí)旨在幫助學(xué)生了解動(dòng)物習(xí)性、特征等相關(guān)知識(shí)，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生深入思考人與動(dòng)物的關(guān)系，使學(xué)生最終形成關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物、與動(dòng)物和諧相處的正確的、可持續(xù)發(fā)展的觀念。思考人和動(dòng)物的關(guān)系感知人與動(dòng)物之間的和諧相處Unit 5 Into the wildPeriod 6 WritingInto the wildThe objectives o

3、f the lessonGeneralize the structure of writing animal introductions;Write your own animal fact file;Improve your writing based on the scoring criteria and sample essay. BrainstormideasStructurecontentsUse accurate & advanced languageEnhance writing effectivelyMultipleabilitiesInto the wild1. What a

4、nimal does the video introduce?2. What is the current number of the animal in the world?3. Why was the animal endangered?Watch the video and answer the questionsAnswers:The video introduces the red-crowned crane, a longevity bird cherished by the Chinese people.There are only two thousand red-crowne

5、d cranes left in the world.The red-crowned crane was endangered because its natural habitat had been fast disappearing.adj. 瀕危的n. 長(zhǎng)壽n. 棲息地What does the red-crowned crane look like?Where can you find it?Where does it migrate to?What does it eat?What symbolic meaning does the red-crowned crane have in

6、 Chinese culture?12345Page 59Read the paragraph and answer the questionsInto the wild3 mins to write down your answersIt has white feathers except for some black ones on its face, neck and wings. It also has bright red skin on the top of its head.It can be found in China, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and

7、 the Korean Peninsula.It migrates to east-central China when the weather gets cold.It eats fish, snails and water plants.It has a symbolic meaning of long life and good luck in Chinese culture.12345Page 59Check your answers to the questionsInto the wildAppearanceHabitatMigrationRed-crowned craneone

8、of the largest, 150 cm tallfeathers as white as snow, some black ones on its face, neck and wingsbright red skin on top of its headDietOther informationChina, Russia, Mongolia, Japan and the Korean PeninsulaWarmer months in the rivers and wetlands in the north-eastMigrates to east-central China when

9、 the weather gets coldFish, snails and water plantsA symbol of long life and good luckInto the wildRead the paragraph again and summarize the outlinePage 59()()Into the wildBrainstorm and develop your writing outlinePage 59AppearanceHabitatMigrationDietOther informationSize, weight, color, body stru

10、ctureCountries and regions, climate, landforms Destination, migration route, timeVegetables, meats, balanced dietOrigin, history, how do you think of itChoose an animal and draw out your own fact file outline!5 minsInto the wildAn example of outlinePage 59Siberian crane 白鶴Appearance140 cm tallFeathe

11、rs all white, except for some small black ones only seen in flightFeatherless and reddish faceHabitatEast AsiaIts numbers known as the eastern populationsOther informationA symbol of elegance, purity, good fortune and long life in ChinaDietGood and diverse food structureFish, insects, roots, tubers

12、of water plantsMigrationMost of them migrate to China in winterSmaller populations migrate to Iran in winterInto the wildPage 59AppearanceHabitatMigrationDietOther informationWriting an animal fact fileIt is tall/short/heavy/light.It gets its name fromIts unique feature isIt lives inIts food include

13、sIt is a symbol ofUseful expressionsConstruct your contents with useful expressionsInto the wildReview topic-related wordsCategoriesParts of speechesUsagesWordsCreaturesNounscan be used to name different animalsmonarch butterfly, whale, caterpillar, eagleNature-themed descriptive wordsAdjectivescan

14、be used to describe nature or animals characteristics, appearances, lifestyles, impression on people, etc.Atlantic, annual, amazing, breathtaking, chemicalActionsVerbscan be used to describe animals behaviors, actions or statesmigrate, seek, measure, determine, destroy, survive, recover, brave the e

15、lements, concentrate, freeze, stareMix of other key wordsNouns, adverbialsfrequently used in topic-related discussions and writingsposition, mystery, effect, variety, after all, reaction, etc.Can you add more words to the list?Into the wildLinking words and phrasesCause & effect（因果）so, therefore, th

16、us, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a resultCondition（條件）As (so) long as, on condition that, if, unlessParallelism（并列）First, second, third. ; firstly, secondly, thirdly; First, next, then.; in the first place, in the second place. ; for one thing, for another thing. Transition（轉(zhuǎn)折）however, never

17、theless, nonetheless, though, yet, otherwiseContrast （對(duì)比）on the contrary, in contrast, by contrast, in comparison, by comparisonProgression（遞進(jìn)）also, further, furthermore, likewise, similarly, moreover,in addition, whats moreIllustrations（解釋舉例）for example, for instance, in fact, actuallySummary（總結(jié)）in

18、 conclusion, in short, to sum up, to conclude, in a word然而因此2 mins to take down some notesInto the wildImitate and translate the sentences The red-crowned crane is one of the largest cranes in the world, standing at about 150 cm tall. (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)）_仿寫(xiě)：藍(lán)鯨是世界上最大的動(dòng)物之一，其重量可達(dá)數(shù)百?lài)?。The blue whale is one of the

19、 largest animals in the world, reaching a weight of hundreds of tons.Its unique feature, from which it gets its name, is the bright red skin on the top of its head. (介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）_仿寫(xiě)：變色龍以特殊的皮膚而聞名，其皮膚的顏色可隨環(huán)境的變化而變化。(變色龍: chameleon)The chameleon is known for its special skin, the color of which can c

20、hange with the environment. The red-crowned crane is a symbol of long life and good luck in Chinese culture. (介詞短語(yǔ) a symbol of）_仿寫(xiě)：眾所周知，在中國(guó)文化中，龍象征著權(quán)力與威信。As is known to all, the dragon is a symbol of power and authority in Chinese culture. Into the wildCombine the sentences using relative clauseThe e

21、arthworm lives beneath the soil.The earthworm absorbs nutrition there.1234The earthworm lives beneath the soil, where it absorbs nutrition. The swallow will migrate south in winter.The weather gets cold in winter.Monarch butterflies are decreasing.Human activity is the main reason.There may come a t

22、ime.The number of species will increase again.The swallow will migrate south in winter, when the weather gets cold.Human activity is the main reason why monarch butterflies are decreasing.There may come a time when the number of species will increase again.Into the wildWrite a short paragraph within

23、 100 wordsWhile youre writing, please pay attention:The structure should be complete and clearThe contents should be rich and meaningfulThe grammar and spelling mistakes should be limited as much as possibleTry to use some advanced words and sentencesAfter your finish your writing, please:Upload you

24、r writing onto the Grammarly website: / or 批改網(wǎng), or use the word document to edit your essayRemember to retain the editing marks10 mins for youInto the wildSelf-check through grammarly/Into the wildSelf-check through pigai webpage/Into the wildLearn about the scoring criteriaStructureContentIs the st

25、ructure complete?Is the structure clearly organized?Are all the required content points included?Are the contents accurate?Are the contents coherent and logical?LanguageAre the words and grammar structures rich and diversified?Is the usage of the words and grammar structures accurate?What is the com

26、plex level of the words and grammar used?A well-written essay should be clearly-structured, delivering complete and coherent contents, and applying advanced and accurate language.Into the wildAppear-anceAttributive clausesAdvanced words and phrasesHabitatMigrationsDietSymbolClear StructureRich conte

27、ntsGood languageAppreciate the sample writingThe Siberian crane is also known as the snow crane. It is about 140 cm in height, generally shorter than the red-crowned crane. Its feathers are nearly all snowy white except for some black ones that are only visible in flight. Its featherless face is red

28、dish in colour. The Siberian crane is usually found in East Asia, where its numbers are known as the eastern populations. These migrate to China in winter. Other much smaller populations migrate to Iran in winter. The snow crane has a good and diverse appetite, including fish, insects, the roots and tubers of water plants and so on. In Chinese culture, the snow crane is a symbol of elegance, purity, good fortune and long life.Into the wildSummarize the writing classIn this class, we haveRead and analyzed a paragraph about red-crowned craneSummarized the structure of