雅思寫作范文

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)專心-專注-專業(yè)精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)（七分范文）Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career， while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.When they finis

2、h school， teenagers face the dilemma that whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school， I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several re

3、asons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way， they can become independent， and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career， young people who decide to find work， rather than continue their studies， may progress more

4、 quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.On the other hand， I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly， academic qualificati

5、ons are required in many professions. For example， it is impossible to become a doctor， teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result， university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities， and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications

6、. Secondly， the job market is becoming increasingly competitive， and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.For the reasons mentioned above， it seems to me that stu

7、dents are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.以上就是這篇雅思寫作7分范文的全部內(nèi)容，字?jǐn)?shù)足夠。這篇雅思寫作范文所占的觀點是應(yīng)該在大學(xué)繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)，但是對另外的觀點也做了相應(yīng)的論述，所用的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)都值得大家借鑒。Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in

8、the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provi

9、de has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for u

10、niversities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the studen

11、ts might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs

12、 of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a

13、 job, and this can make our countries economy strong.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universitys basic function.只能拿到5分的原因：一、這個題目中有兩方的觀點：some 及others的，很明顯這位考生在后面的論證過程中完全忽視了others的觀點,都在一味地論證some 的觀點的正確性，于是考官給出的評語是：it does not add

14、ress all parts of the question.寫作建議NO.3：Do not neglect any part, or you will regret your mark.不要忽視任何東西，否則你的分?jǐn)?shù)會讓你很傷心。二、這位考生在連接詞和復(fù)雜句型上都表現(xiàn)得不錯，可是他太偷懶了，knowledge and skill這個詞組一共用了9次，這種高頻率的repetition讓這位考生付出了比較慘重的代價，所以看者希望你們能夠汲取這樣的教訓(xùn)，多注意Paraphrase的練習(xí)。尤其是?？嫉目荚囍黝}所可能涉及到的高頻單詞更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就

15、屬于top 3 的高頻考題的教育類，所以這類的詞匯一定是多多準(zhǔn)備才對，如 expertise, conversance, instruction, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿來替換這兩個詞。寫作建議NO.4：Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.改寫能助你拿到高分。Band 6Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others

16、believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe

17、 that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to w

18、in from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to students house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn

19、English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national examinations to test students level of studies. Generally, only

20、 the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfis

21、h. They become careless and dont help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part

22、. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, w

23、ork together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.問題分析：從論證大主題的角度來說，這一篇的最后的收尾是co-operation 更重要的成立的，但是這位考生在文字?jǐn)?shù)量分配上缺乏規(guī)劃，分配給competition的文字明顯多于給co-operation的，這樣就給了考官一個非常合情合理的借口扣分，實在是遺憾啊!寫作建議NO.5：If it

24、 is your preference, give it more reference.如果你更認(rèn)同那個觀點，那就在這個觀點上多寫點吧。如果我們進一步看下Body段里的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，其實這位考生的語法功力和邏輯論證能力比上面那位5分同學(xué)還要差，但是這篇文章把題目中的兩個方面都提到，沒有犯我的NO.3建議中的錯誤。除此之外，文字總量上這一篇文章叫上兩篇都有絕對的優(yōu)勢，所以再強調(diào)下數(shù)量真的也很重要。寫作建議NO.6：A quantitative change causes a qualitative change.量變帶來質(zhì)變。Some people say that the government s

25、hould not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education.Do you agree or disagree?Much discussion concerning allocation of resources assumes that the government should spend money on medicine and education rather than on theatres and sp

26、orts stadiums. In my opinion, this issue should be examined from the angle of whether the investment benefits the great majority of the population.The institutions of medical care and education, undoubtedly, should receive priority in the allocation of a governments expenditures, at the thought of m

27、illions of children from deprived backgrounds who now get a substandard education, and who would require a relatively high quality of education if they are to enjoy anything approaching equality of opportunity in later life. Another pressing need of society is improvement of medical care for the adu

28、lt poor, for the aged, and so forth down the list.Theatres and sports stadiums are institutions for promoting human culture. A successful theatrical event is an exciting and stimulating experience, whether it occurs in a grand theatre or a high school auditorium. Spectators as well as those involved

29、 in the production feel this excitement. Sports stadiums, on the other hand, attract millions of spectators to watch professionals play every year. Many more millions watch games on television, read about them in newspapers, and discuss them with their friends. Therefore, can we say that these are u

30、nnecessary public expenditures the government should ignore?In conclusion, today man is becoming ever more aware of his spiritual needs. Medicine and education are needs that we recognize, but are contacts with theatrical or sports events also basic needs?(250 words)Some people believe that students

31、 who want to go to university after graduation from high school should have about one years time to get a job to obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision.Do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?High school students who intend to study at university should attend tertiar

32、y education after graduation. To spend one years time doing a job to acquire work experience or to travel for broadening ones vision is, to my mind, a waste of time and energy.First, university education is the continuation of high school education for those students who want to pursue their learnin

33、g at an advanced level. A break of one year from academic study will probably weaken ones memory of what has been learned, especially for those who will study such theoretical subjects as mathematics, physics or chemistry.Besides, many nations have established one examination that all students must

34、pass to qualify for admission to a university. For example, in China there is a college entrance examination. Anyone who fails in the examination will be denied of admission into a university.Furthermore, one years work or travel does not help students much in their academic studies at university be

35、cause it is unpredictable for ones work experience to be integrated into ones studies of specific subjects, to say nothing of traveling experience. Even if some subjects, such as MBA, require students to have work experience, one years work experience, however, is not sufficient to meet the requirem

36、ents of three or five years, and ones work experience should, after all, be related to management.To conclude, I would rather suggest that universitys curriculum allow the integration of academic study with practical training for the compensation for students lack of work experience.(250 words)It is

37、 suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?范文：In modern societies, it is increasingly popular that young people volunteer on weekends in the local community service center to help the people in need. If all the youngsters do it in a regular way, the benefits are obvious to both the community and these young adults although there are some minor drawbacks