合并句子(廣州和四川)

1、二、超級仿寫2009江門二模你的英國朋友向你了解廣州, 請用英語寫一篇短文介紹廣州。包括上表中所有內(nèi)容。概況中國第三大城市; 別稱: 五羊城、花城等; 廣東省省會; 全市面積7,434平方公里; 人口1,000多萬。歷史2,200多年歷史的文化名城, 歷史上絲綢之路（海路）的始發(fā)港。地理珠江從市中心穿過, 溫暖濕潤。旅游風光旖旎, 旅游資源豐富。1 Let me tell you something about Guangzhou. Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong Province and the third largest city in C

2、hina, is also known as Five-lamb City, Flower City and so on. This city / It covers a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers with a population of more than ten million. 2Guangzhou, a famous city with a history of more than 2, 200 years, is a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history. With

3、 the Pearl River winding its way / running through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. The beautiful city, which is well-known for its beautiful scenery, is also rich in traveling resources. I hope you will have a good time in Guangzhou. 3Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers,

4、 Sichuan Province, is located in the south-west of China, whose capital is Chengdu.定語應(yīng)盡量靠近所修飾的詞定語從句盡量靠近先行詞Covering an area of 485,000 square kilometers, Sichuan Province, whose capital is Chengdu, is located in the south-west of China.4Sichuan Province, located in the south-west of China, covers an

5、area of about 485,000 square kilometers, ,whose capital is Chengdu.定語應(yīng)盡量靠近所修飾的詞定語從句盡量靠近先行詞Located in the south-west of China, Sichun Province, whose capital is chengdu, covers an area of 5Jiuzaigou which is famous for its lakes is located in the north-west of Sichun, with beautiful rivers.專有名詞（獨一無二的

6、）如人名、地名后應(yīng)該使用非限制性定語從句Jiuzaigou，which is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers，is locatedJiuzaigou，which is located, is famous for its lakes with beautiful rivers.6The Dujiangyan Irrigation Project has played a important role now, with a long history of more than 2,000 years.The Dujiangyan Irriga

7、tion Project, with a long history of more than 2,000 years, is still playing an important role now. 7Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot.邏輯關(guān)系The weather in Sichun is neither too cold nor too hot.8 Sichuan Province, whose capital city is Chengdu, lies in the south-west of China and covers an area

8、of about 485,000 km2 with a population of more than one hundred million. It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 9Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, whose water is so clear that you ca

9、n see the bottom of them. Another attraction is the Jujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part (in irrigation) today. Whats more, the nice / comfortable weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can also make

10、 your trip even more enjoyable.10李明一直很想實現(xiàn)自己的理想, 成為一名探險家。2. 他的父母一直試圖說服他放棄這個想法。3. 一天，李明離家出走, 并留下一封信, 為自己的不辭而別向父母道歉。4. 李明決定啟航去無名的島嶼, 尋找刺激感。5. 在海上遇上了龍卷風(tornado), 李明意識到自己陷入了困境。116. 這是李明第一次獨自出行, 他差點被嚇死了。7. 在好心人的幫助下, 他幸免于難。8. 住院兩個星期后, 李明康復(fù)了。9. 他設(shè)法聯(lián)系到父母, 讓他們到醫(yī)院去接他。12Liming wanted to achieve his ambition of

11、 being an explorer.But his parents tried to persuade him to give up the idea all the time.One day, Li Ming left home and left a letter, in order to make an apology to his parents for leaving without saying goodbye.Li Ming decided to set sail to the unknown island, in search of excitement. 135. On th

12、e way to the island, Li Ming met the tornado, which made Li Ming be aware of getting into trouble.6. It was the first time that Li Ming had gone out alone and he seemed to scared to death.7. With the help of the kind people, he survived.be aware of + n be aware / realize that + 句子148. After living i

13、n the hospital for two weeks, he recovered.9. He managed to get in touch with parents, made them pick him up from the hospital.stayingasking them to pick15優(yōu)秀句子But unluckily, he met a tornado on the sea and he realised that he was stuck in trouble, which sacred him to death. ( 9班，劉佩雄) One day, he set

14、 sail in search of an island without name to experience excitement after leaving a letter to apologise for leaving without saying good-bye. (9班，石玉良)16沒有語法錯誤但不建議使用的句子1. Li Ming went away from home with a letter left for the purpose of apologysing without saying good-bye to his parents.1. 從簡原則leaving

15、a letter2. 目的 for the purpose of + n(名詞) to + do(動詞)to apologise17沒有語法錯誤但不建議使用的句子2. Li Ming decided to set sail to the unknown island, just for finding the felling of excitement.1) 表目的 for + n(名詞) to + do(動詞)2) find 找到 look for / search for 尋找 / 尋求to look for18沒有語法錯誤但不建議使用的句子3. One day, Li Ming left

16、 home and left a letter with the purpose of making an apology to his parents for leaving without saying good-bye. 目的 for the purpose of + n(名詞) to + do(動詞)to make19沒有考慮邏輯關(guān)系進行的錯誤合并1. It was the first time that he had got out alone, so he realized that he got into trouble and was scared to death while

17、 meeting a tornado in the sea.因為他是第一次獨自出門，所以他意識到While meeting a tornado , he realized that he got into trouble. And since it was the ., he was scared to death.20沒有考慮邏輯關(guān)系進行的錯誤合并2. Li Ming wanted to realize his dream that he would become an explorer so that his parents always tried to persuade him int

18、o giving up this thought.李明想實現(xiàn)當探險家的夢想，以致于他的父母總是想勸他放棄。but21為了減少句子數(shù)量而拼命堆砌信息的錯誤合并3. When the first time for him to travel on his own, he was scared to death as he was facing the tornado in the sea, which help him come to realize that he was stuck in trouble. Since / Because it was the first time that h

19、e had traveled on , he was scared to death. When he was faced with, he realized that he was221. 李明一直很想實現(xiàn)自己的理想, 成為一名探險家。Li Ming always wanted to achieve his ambition to be an explorer.2. 他的父母一直試圖說服他放棄這個想法。His parents have been always trying to persuade him to give up this idea.233. 一天，李明離家出走, 并留下一封信,

20、 為自己的不辭而別向父母道歉。One day, Li Ming ran away from home and left his parents a letter to apologize for leaving without saying goodbye.244. 李明決定啟航去無名的島嶼, 尋找刺激感。Li Ming decided to set sail for unknown islands, in search of excitement.5. 在海上遇上了龍卷風(tornado), 李明意識到自己陷入了困境。Li Ming ran into a tornado on the sea

21、, and realized he got into trouble.256. 這是李明第一次獨自出行, 他差點被嚇死了。This was Li Mings first time that he had traveled on his own, and he was scared to death.7. 在好心人的幫助下, 他幸免于難。With the help of kind-hearted people, he survived the accident.268. 住院兩個星期后, 李明康復(fù)了。8. After staying in hospital for two weeks, Li Ming recovered.9. 他設(shè)法聯(lián)系到父母, 讓他們到醫(yī)院去接他。 9. He managed to get in touch with his parents and asked them to pick him up at the hospital.27 Li Ming al