讀后續(xù)寫句型積累準(zhǔn)確的動作和神態(tài)描寫10句

1、讀后續(xù)寫中準(zhǔn)確的動作與神態(tài)描寫10句|品讀原著燦爛千陽|分級原著讀寫素材關(guān)于不可寬恕的時代，不可能的友誼以及不可毀滅的愛。燦爛千陽再次以阿富汗戰(zhàn)亂為背景，時空跨越三十年，用細(xì)膩感人的筆觸描繪了阿富汗舊家族制度下苦苦掙扎的婦女，她們所懷抱的希望、愛情、夢想與所有現(xiàn)實的失落。通過對人物個性化的行動、動作的描寫，來揭示人物性格。動作描寫在文學(xué)作品中塑造人物很重要。人物是在言行中站起來的。學(xué)會了描寫動作，也就學(xué)會了“用事實說話”，就可以把內(nèi)容說清楚了。在描寫動作時，注意的問題：1描寫動作時，不能太籠統(tǒng)2抓住特征，準(zhǔn)備運用動詞3與主題無關(guān)的動作不要寫4養(yǎng)成細(xì)致觀察的習(xí)慣，勤奮練習(xí)神態(tài)描寫的作用：1.表現(xiàn)

2、人物內(nèi)心世界2.刻畫人物性格，反映人物品質(zhì)3.更加突顯人物個性使作文給人真實感,人物造型栩栩如生,使文章生動形象1Nanacollapsingsuddenly,herbodytightening,becomingrigid(僵硬的),hereyesrollingback,herarmsandlegsshakingasifsomethingwerethrottling(壓制)herfromtheinside,thefroth(泡沫)atthecornersofhermouth,white,sometimespinkwithblood.描述可憐的Nana發(fā)病時的狀態(tài)：herbody-tighten

3、ing,becomingrigid(僵硬的)；hereyes-rollingback；herarmsandlegs-shaking；thefroth(泡沫)atthecornersofhermouth-white,sometimespinkwithblood.作者從Nana身體的各個部位進(jìn)行描述，給人以真實感,人物造型栩栩如生,使文章生動形象。2WhenMariamspoke,hisattentionwasalwaysfocusedonthelecture.Henoddedslowlyandsmiledwithalookofgratitude,asifhehadbeengrantedagrea

4、tprivilege.本句描述了師生的關(guān)系和諧，其中在描述老師傾聽Mariam講話時的神態(tài)特別形象：noddedslowlyandsmiledwithalookofgratitude描寫動作時，為了讓動作更豐滿，更靈動，可以適當(dāng)運用副詞，介詞短語等來補(bǔ)充說明。比如本句中：noddedslowly；根據(jù)情景我們還可以用noddingquickly等等。s再比如，在表達(dá)微笑的時候，本句中smiledwithalookofgratitude=smilegratefully；根據(jù)情景，還可以有smilebroadly,開懷地笑。milecharmingly迷人地笑.smilecunningly狡猾地笑

5、。smilepleasantly令人愉快地笑smilefaintly微微一笑；等等。lookingather3“Isthatwhatyouwant?”MullahFaizullahsaid,withhissoft,wateryeyes.對老師講話時的神態(tài)描寫：眼睛lookingatherwithhissoft,wateryeyes4Whenshelaughed,shecoveredhermouthwithafisttohidethebadtooth.娜娜笑的時候的神態(tài)描寫：coveredhermouthwithafisttohidethebadtooth.用拳頭蓋住她的嘴巴以掩飾她糟糕的牙齒，

6、體現(xiàn)了她愛美，又不太自信的神態(tài)。5Shewaiteduntilherlegswerestiff(堅硬的).Thistime,shedidnotgobacktothekolba.Sherolledupthelegsofhertrouserstotheknees,crossedthestream,and,forthefirsttimeinherlife,headeddownthehillforHerat赫拉特(阿富汗西北部城市)用動作表達(dá)她內(nèi)心的掙扎與果敢：waiteduntilherlegswerestiff(堅硬的)rolledupthelegsofhertrouserscrossedthes

7、tream,headeddownthehill6Finally,onThursdays,allshecoulddowassitagainstawall,withhereyesgluedtothestream,andwait.IfJalilwasrunninglate,aterriblefrightfilledherbitbybit.Herkneeswouldweaken,andshewouldhavetogosomewhereandliedown.等候父親的神態(tài)描寫：withhereyesgluedtothestream體現(xiàn)了她的渴望;aterriblefrightfilledherbitby

8、bit;Herkneeswouldweaken;.gosomewhereandliedown用具體的身體反應(yīng)與動作表達(dá)她的恐懼與焦慮。7Alookofconfusioncrossedthegirlsface.Then,aflashofrecognition.Therewasafaintsmileonherlipsnow,andthegirlsaidquickly,“Waithere.”神態(tài)的細(xì)微變化：先是Alookofconfusioncrossedthegirlsface然后aflashofrecognition.之后是afaintsmile最后是thegirlsaidquickly.一連串

9、的神態(tài)變化，細(xì)微的表情特寫，最后輔以動作。就像是看電影。8Sheswungherfeetoverthesideofthebedandhurriedover.Shekissedhishandasalwaysandhiseyebrows.一連串的動作描寫：swung-hurriedoverkissedhiseyebrow這一連串的動作將瑪麗亞姆對父親到來的熱情與愛表達(dá)出來了。9Jalilseyesliftedslowly,metMariams,pausedforamoment,thendropped.Heopenedhismouth,butallthatcameoutwasasingle,painedsigh.細(xì)膩的神態(tài)描寫：父親Jalil的反應(yīng)：Jalilseyes-liftedslowly-metMariams-pausedforamoment-dropped-openedhism