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1、作文講評建議信第1頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日 Tips高考英語書面表達(dá)高分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 有效地使用語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊第2頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日假如你是高三(1)班的班長李華，得知美國學(xué)生Chris作為交換生，下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫封郵件。(1) 表示歡迎；(2) 介紹本班情況及與本地生活相關(guān)的信息（如氣候，飲食等）；(3) 希望Chris做哪些事情，以增進(jìn)中美學(xué)生間的了解和友誼。Dear Chris,Im Li Hua, monitor of Class

2、One, Grade Twelve._Yours,Li Hua第3頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日I. 審題：體裁和格式： 人稱: 寫作內(nèi)容及時態(tài)：郵件（屬書信體，格式已給出）書面表達(dá) you, I, we一般現(xiàn)在時，一般將來時注意：(1) 請勿提及相關(guān)的真實(shí)信息；(2) 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；(3) 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。在作文里不能涉及任何所在地區(qū)、學(xué)校的信息，否則高考時會被視為作弊行為。 字?jǐn)?shù)不能超12行，否則扣2分！轉(zhuǎn)換應(yīng)試意識表達(dá)言簡意賅 第4頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日II. 佳句背誦

3、1.Knowing/When /On knowing the news that youre coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term, we can not conceal our excitement and look forward to your arrival.得知 我們.2. The moment we know the news that word s fail to describe our excitement ）得知 我們. 第5頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日二.介紹

4、-同位語，非謂語，定從，with結(jié)構(gòu)1.Our class consists of 50 optimistic and easy-going students , all of whom are willing to accept you as one of us and make you feel at home. Not only will they make acquaintance with you ,but also they would like to give you a hand when you are in rouble.2. My Class , a big family

5、 consisting of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, are willing to accept you asone of us and make you feel at home.4.Consisting of 50 students ,our class seems like a big family with a relaxing and harmonious atmosphere , which will make you feel at home.第6頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日3.Consistin

6、g of 50 optimistic and easy-going students, my class is a big family ,inwhich we live together in harmony.4.Class 1, where you are going to study ,is a big family consisting of 50 students, all of whom are willing to accept you as one of us and make you feel at home. 第7頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日5

7、. My city ,a fascinating harbor /a fascinating coastal city , enjoys pleasant weather, with bright sunshine all the year round.6.Located in the south of China, our city is rich/abundant in /is distinguished for seafood ,which I hope youll like/youll get accustomed to7. Compared with America , the we

8、ather here may be different from that in your hometown. （非謂語)And here Ill tell you something about the local life, which may be different from that in your hometown. 第8頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日 8. We all view this as a precious chance for us to learn about what life is like in your country, espe

9、cially school life. Meanwhile, we can have our spoken English improved when we have fun together.（ what引導(dǎo)賓語從句， when引導(dǎo)狀語從句。 9 Indeed, we feel excited about having you as our new classmate and we are curious aboutwhat life is like in your country, especially school life. Meanwhile, you are expected to

10、 involved yourself in . , where .in this way .our friendship will surely be promoted. 第9頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日參考范文：Dear Chris, Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. Im more than glad to know that youre coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming term. In fact, all my clas

11、smates are kind and look forward to your coming, and are willing to accept you as one of us. Besides, I hope that youll have no difficulty adapting to the food and weather here. It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warmer winter, compared to that in America. We have rice

12、 as our main food, which I hope youll like. Indeed, we feel excited about having you as our new classmate. For one thing, we can have a better knowledge of American culture and social customs with your help. For another, we view this as a good chance for us to improve our English. Hope to see you so

13、on. Yours, Li Hua第10頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日2. Dear Chris, Im Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. Hearing that youll come to our class, all my classmates feel excited. We are kind and easy to get along with, so theres no doubt that we will make you feel at home once youre here with us.

14、Life in China can be different from that in America. To begin with, we feed mainly on rice, which I hope youll get accustomed to. In addition, we have hot summer, but in winter its generally warmer. We all see this as a precious chance for us to learn about what life is like in your country, especia

15、lly school life. Meanwhile, we can have our spoken English improved when we have fun together.亮點(diǎn)：1. 句型結(jié)構(gòu)有：分詞作狀語和賓補(bǔ)，so連接并列分句，同位語從句，非限制性定語從句，what引導(dǎo)賓語從句， once引導(dǎo)狀語從句。2. 短語：feel at home, be different from, feed on, get accustomed to, seeas, have fun。 3. 使用 to begin with, in addition, meanwhile等詞語使行文流暢。第1

16、1頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日III. 改錯：下列句子是寫作中易出現(xiàn)的普遍錯誤，請找出錯誤并改正。1. Know that youll join in us next term, I am glad.2. There are many seafood in our city.3. You can help us in our English.4. Our class is consisted of 56 students, all of them are friendly.5. Life in China can be different from America

17、.正：Knowing that youll join us next term, I am glad.正：There is much seafood in our city.正：You can help us with our English.正：Our class consists of , all of whom are 正：Life different from that in America.第12頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日 6. I convince that.7. Not only are they willing to make acquainta

18、nce with you ,but also give you a hand when you are in trouble.8.I and my classmates welcome you to our school.第13頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日 2016廣州一模假定你是李華，你要完成一項(xiàng)關(guān)于中英學(xué)生寒假生活的調(diào)查。請給你的英國筆友Bill寫一封信，交流相關(guān)信息。要點(diǎn)如下：1寫信的原因；2介紹中國學(xué)生的寒假生活；(1)時長：約20天(2)活動3詢問英國學(xué)生的寒假生活。第14頁，共15頁，2022年，5月20日，23點(diǎn)37分，星期日How is everything?I m doing a project on how British and Chinese students spend their winter holidays. In China, the winter vacation is usually about