口語班寫作課

1、口語班寫作課第1頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二 考試作文哈爾濱醫(yī)科大學 瞿平第2頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二圖畫類（難度最大）1Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.2Give your comments.第3頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二第4頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二7、1997：第5頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二托福新題型新型的寫作考試趨勢聽力+寫作第6頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日

2、，6點24分，星期二一、 書信類應(yīng)用文2、2005真題：辭職信道歉信Directions: Two months ago, you got a job as an editor for the magazine Fashion & Design. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making

3、 an apology.第7頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二國內(nèi)作文的評分標準A節(jié)應(yīng)用文的評分側(cè)重點在于信息點的覆蓋和內(nèi)容的組織、語言的準確性、格式和語域（指在書面和口語表達中根據(jù)不同的交際對象，所采用的話語方式，即正式、一般、非正式的話語）的恰當。對語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯多樣性的要求將根據(jù)具體試題作調(diào)整。允許在作文中使用提示語中出現(xiàn)過的關(guān)鍵詞，但使用提示語中出現(xiàn)過的詞組或句子將被扣分。第8頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二B節(jié)B節(jié)作文的評分重點在于內(nèi)容的完整性、文章的連貫組織性、語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的多樣性及語言的準確性。2、評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言

4、確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來給分。評分人員在檔內(nèi)有13分的調(diào)節(jié)分。3、A節(jié)作文的字數(shù)要求是100詞左右。B節(jié)作文的字數(shù)要求是160200詞。文章長度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。4、拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時，視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。5、如書寫較差，以致影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。第9頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二1結(jié)構(gòu)2句子3詞匯4內(nèi)容第10頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二時間：30分鐘字數(shù)：At least 300 words.An effective response is t

5、ypically about 300 words long. If you write fewer than 300 words, you may still receive a top score, but experience has shown that shorter response typically do not demonstrate the development of ideas needed to earn a score of 5. There is no maximum word limit. You may write as much as you wish in

6、the time allotted. But do not write just to be writing; Write to respond to the topic.托福作文 2022/9/511第11頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二 獨立寫作2022/9/512第12頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二獎勵分給分原則書法筆跡 大字vs小字筆的選擇第13頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二獎勵分給分原則正確正規(guī)可讀非正規(guī)標記：&, Vs, etc.簡寫的問題：WTO？World Trade Organization (

7、WTO)_共200字！第14頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二獎勵分給分原則標點的問題隨意點逗號的問題句號的問題省略號頓號書名號驚嘆號和問號第15頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二獎勵分給分原則修改的問題盡量不修改反對對于內(nèi)容的修改正確的修改方法修正液第16頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二范文分析98.1母雞下蛋，虛假承諾 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:1 write out the message

8、s conveyed by the cartoon此提綱應(yīng)分為兩段寫作）2 give your comments描述圖畫闡釋寓意給出評論（解決方法）第17頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二范文分析The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life. Regrettably, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as the h

9、en in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg whites and yolks.第18頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二范文分析Odds and funny as they sound, such false promises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country. Administration departments a

10、ssure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes; manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. 第19頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Can you find anything n

11、ew and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative. As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or deceive the public.第20頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6

12、點24分，星期二范文分析 I dare say that your society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally. But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under market economy system. They should remember the o

13、ld saying, “Honesty is the best policy”.第21頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二范文分析總結(jié)段落安排合理聰明的學生舉例子句式復雜多樣用詞有效替換語法錯誤較少我們的目標？第22頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二簡單句子變復雜的法則1非謂語動詞2插入語句式第23頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二1非謂語動詞我是一名教師。我講課。I am a teacher. I give classes.I am a teacher and I give classes.Because I am a t

14、eacher, I give classes.I am a teacher, so I give classes.Being a teacher, I give classes.I, being a teacher, give classes第24頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二2記者們聽說劉若英要來哈爾濱要來哈爾濱，他們都出去找消息。Hearing that Miss Liu is coming to Harbin , journalists set to obtain news.第25頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二3 老板叫我見客戶，我

15、去見他。The boss asks me to visit a consumer.I go to see him.Asked to see a consumer, I go to see him 第26頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二非謂語動詞法則1 找到一個共同主語2 結(jié)果動詞作為真正的謂語3 其余動詞看與主語的關(guān)系，主動的變成doing，被動變成done。第27頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二My father was denied higher education for historical reasons. But by self

16、studies he became a technician in a factory.He never stopping studying .He took courses of law in his spare time.Later he became a lawyer.第28頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二My father , denied higher education for historical reasons, by self-study became a technician in a factory. Never stopping studyin

17、g and taking courses of law in his spare time, later he became a lawyer.第29頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二practice現(xiàn)在的年輕人沒辦法緩解壓力，他們在朋友的唆使下，轉(zhuǎn)而求助于吸煙。The youth nowadays have no way to relieve their pressure.They are instigated by their friends.They turn to smoking第30頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二The youth

18、nowadays , having no way to relieve their pressure and instigated by their friends, turn to smoking第31頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二天太熱我不能學習It is too hot to study.It is so hot that I can not study.It being so hot ,I can not study.情況如此危急，解決這個事情刻不容緩。The situation being serious , it is high time that we

19、 solved it.第32頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二插入語2名詞，插入小細節(jié)（意義，功能，相關(guān)的人等），大概念哈爾濱市一個具有悠久歷史的美麗城市，是我的故鄉(xiāng)。Haerbin, (which is )my hometown, is a beautiful city with a long history.第33頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二2 插入語1 主語+謂語+狀語主語，狀語，謂語老板正在和員工制定計劃The boss is making plans with his workers.The boss, with his work

20、ers ,is making plans.不改變整個句式卻顯得句式有張力Eg: 第34頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二水是生命之源，現(xiàn)在被污染的很嚴重，覆蓋面積越來越小。Water ,which is polluted seriously and covers decreasing areas, is source of life.Water ,which is polluted seriously and covers decreasing areas, is the source of life.第35頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Wa

21、ter is polluted seriously.Water covers decreasing areas.Water is source of life. 第36頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二網(wǎng)絡(luò)Internet is a way of communication.Internet is one of the most efficient and convenient ways of communication.Internet , by which many young people make a fortune , is one of the most e

22、fficient and convenient ways of communication.第37頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Internet, which makes the world smaller and smaller, is one of the most efficient and convenient ways of communication.第38頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二八大亮點句式第39頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二1用否定句式表達肯定I am the best writing t

23、eacher in new oriental school .I, it has been said, am the best writing teacher in new oriental school .我不是別人，我是新東方最好的寫作老師。I, rather than anyone else ,am the best writing teacher in new oriental school .第40頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Other thanI, other than anyone else ,am the best writing teacher

24、in new oriental school .Nobody , other than I ,is the best writing teacher in new oriental school .第41頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二中國正在面臨非常嚴重的問題。A problem of is serious in china.In no country other than china, it has been said, is the problem serious.( the phenomenon popular）第42頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6

25、點24分，星期二notso muchas 與其說不如說生活中的成功與其說依靠起學校的成績倒不如說依靠個人的能力和實踐經(jīng)驗。Success in the life does not depend so much on ones school record as ones ability and practice. ( honesty, confidence, persistence) 第43頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二直到20世紀人們才開始重視環(huán)保問題It was not until the end of the 20th century that we attac

26、hed great importance to environment problems.第44頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二2強調(diào)句：It be + 強調(diào)部分+that(who)+ 簡單句戒指是每個女孩都夢想得到的。It is the ring that every girl wants我不是用錢能買來的I am not for sale.It is I who am not for sale.原則：去頭去尾現(xiàn)原形第45頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二在20世紀80是年代，由于中國的改革開放政策，很多外國人開始了解中國及中國的文化。It

27、was in 1980s that a number of foreigners began to learn China and Chinese culture owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out. 第46頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二時間狀語的替代法則1 用強調(diào)句2 時間（主語），witness謂語，賓語In 2000， the number of college students increased sharply.2000 witnessed increase in the n

28、umber of 第47頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二1980s witnessed a fact that a number of foreigners began to learn China and Chinese culture owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out.第48頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二3 倒裝句 ：only句，地點狀語倒裝句，讓步狀語從句的倒裝 只有用這種辦法，我們才能解決這個問題。Only in this way can we so

29、lve the problem在森林里有各種各樣的小動物All kinds of animals are in the forest.In the forest are many valuable species of animals.第49頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二如圖所示，一個年輕人在操場上奔跑，并且沖向終點。終點又是新的起點。As is shown in the cartoon, on the playground runs the young man, rushing to the final, which is defined as another s

30、tart one第50頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Although句型省略盡管她是個女孩，唱歌卻像男人一樣。Although she is a girl, she sings like a man.Girl as she is, she sings like a man.盡管漫畫很簡單，但是其寓意卻非常深刻Simple as a picture is , the meaning behind it is as deep as the ocean.第51頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二4虛擬語氣1）It is high time that+

31、 過去時It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems (喊口號句式，用于最后一段) The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures .第52頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二2）It is important/ necessary/ imperative/ urgent +that +(should)+do政府有必要制

32、定法律法規(guī)來解決這個問題It is imperative that laws and regulations should be worked out to 第53頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二if 句式如果沒有改革開放政策,我們可能根本吃不肯德雞. If there were no the reform and open door policy, we would never taste KFC.第54頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二5 被動句Your baby was born.Measures should be takenAtten

33、tion should be paid to sthEmphasis should be placed uponGreat importance should be attached to 當文中的主語為人們，大家，社會等大詞的時候用被動語氣第55頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二6定語從句交通工具發(fā)出有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。 Automobile discharges lots of fumes which seriously pollute the air你穿牛仔褲還是套裝對我來說無所謂。You can wear jeans or suit, which makes n

34、o difference to me. (matter a lot to sb) A majority of youth tend to smoke, which has a negative( positive , profound) influence in society.第56頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二運用定語從句法則1盡量找出句子相互重疊的部分，2把其中從句的重疊部分用關(guān)系代詞which, that, who whose ，whom或關(guān)系副詞where或者 介詞+which ,whom 來連接兩句話第57頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24

35、分，星期二我愛上一個讓我奮不顧身的人。女生版：I fall in love with him at whom I throw my life 男生版：I fall in love with a girl for whom I can do everything.第58頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二If， 及because句式的替換I want to buy the cup because its color is special. I want to buy the cup whose color is special. If the students can ge

36、t a job in their area, they are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.The students ,who can get a job in their area , are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.第59頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二If the students can get a job in t

37、heir area, they are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.The students ,who can get a job in their area , are gaining valuable experience and putting their knowledge to use immediately.第60頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person c

38、an learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history.The person， whose hobby is stamp collecting, can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history.第61頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Our neighbor, learning about my familys condition and beginning to help us,

39、lent some money to my parents who used the money to open a shop and got through the hard life.第62頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二7 主語從句What makes the cartoon surprising (interesting ) is that +環(huán)境細節(jié) What makes the cartoon surprising is that the old father is kicked off by his daughters and sons like a b

40、all.第63頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二8比較句式1與老一輩人相比，現(xiàn)在的年輕人在很小年紀就獨立了。The youth nowadays are more independent at an early age than the old.Compared with the old generation, young people nowadays tend to be more independent at an early age.同級代替比較級；比較級代替最高級第64頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二2傳統(tǒng)觀念認為，素食主義者活的更長

41、，然而他們卻因為營養(yǎng)不良而死的更早。Contrary to the thought（belief) that , 主句Contrary to the thought that vegetarians can live longer ,they die earlier for lack of nutrition.第65頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二The more we learn about the issue, the more we realize that it is of importance.Contrary to the thought (belief,

42、 conclusion )that , Contrary to the thought (belief, conclusion )that vegetarians could live longer, most of them die earlier for lack of nutrition.第66頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二詞匯詞匯的多樣性詞匯量的概念簡單詞復雜化的方法重復率高的詞匯詞匯的替換方法第67頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二實現(xiàn)詞匯的降級替換EG：在當今社會In contemporary societyIn modern s

43、ociety/todays society /nowadays/at present/today/now第68頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二重復率高的詞匯1 顯示：圖標圖畫中，show ,indicate, reveal, reflect, demonstrate, conveys the message that, imply, suggest, illustrate, depict 2重要：Be of importance, significant, vital, essentially , critically , crucial, play a role,

44、should be taken seriously, importance should be attached to 第69頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二veryof great importance, significantly important替換very的方法：將adj. 的同義詞 變?yōu)閍dv. 即相當于very第70頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二4 極大的：great /sharp/ dramatic/ sizable/significant/ enormous/considerable/profound5 think: be

45、lieve, convince, suppose, assume, guess, reckon ,insist, maintain, argue, claim, in ones opinion, be of opinion/view that, hold the view that, as far as I am concerned, in my eyes第71頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二6 Different various, a variety of, vary from person to person， Peoples opinions are vario

46、us.7 more and more Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly important.More and more teachers are demanded withWith the development of economy there is an increasing demand of teachers,第72頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二mostThe vast majority of students take a part time

47、job.The large (considerable) percentage of college students takes a negative attitude of smoking.第73頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二As is shown in the pictures, with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fishes has dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and

48、 only fishing-boat in 1900.On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing-boats.Shown- described/ depictedPicturecartoon/ caricatureRampancydisorder/ immoderationDramaticallysharply/considerably/profoundly/rapidly/SignificantlyVariousall sorts of/ diverse kinds of/On the contrary

49、by contrast/ but on the other hand/Manyinnumerable/ countless/ a large number of第74頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二例文As is shown in the pictures, with the rampancy of commercial fishing, the number of fishes has dramatically decreased. In one picture, there were various kinds of fish and only fishing-b

50、oat in 1900.On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing-boats.第75頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean recourses. Owing to over-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased .If

51、we let this situation go as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.第76頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the decrease of ocean recourses. Owing to ov

52、er-fishing, the number of fishes has obviously decreased .If we let this situation go as it is, we do not know where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will suffer a great destruction.Showwarn/sound an alarm toDue attention has to be paid toimportance should be attached toDecr

53、easedecline/reduction/shrinkOwing toas a result of/ on account of/ as a consequence of/Over-fishingexcessive/immoderate fishingObviouslyevidently/apparently/visibly第77頁，共130頁，2022年，5月20日，6點24分，星期二Purposemoral(adj 道德的，n 寓意)/ motive/ theme (音樂)Showwarn/sound an alarm toDue attention has to be paid toi

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