考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作第一23講

1、教學(xué)內(nèi)容：1）作文概述縮進(jìn)式齊頭式2）寫(xiě)作步驟3）常用的語(yǔ)法表達(dá)4）第一段寫(xiě)法訓(xùn)練5）第二段寫(xiě)法訓(xùn)練6）第三段寫(xiě)法訓(xùn)練一、 寫(xiě)作概述1） 小作文寫(xiě)作的題型書(shū)信類 （公務(wù)書(shū)信 、 私人書(shū)信）通知 （正式通知，留言）摘要英文書(shū)信必備三部分1）稱呼2）正文3）落款注：此三部份為英文書(shū)信格式必需組成部分，。常見(jiàn)稱呼Mr.(先生)Dr./ Prof. 博士/教授（用于學(xué)術(shù)界）Ms.（）已婚，未婚均可Editor(編輯)Dear Sir or Madam,用于不知收信人時(shí)To Whom It May Concern,常用于信、證明信、鑒定信一類稱呼的使用1）寫(xiě)給機(jī)構(gòu)：Dear Sir or Madam,T

2、o Whom It May Concern,或者：Dear Mr.,Dear Mr. Wang，Dear Bher 屠夫: a man who killed ad sold the pork.2)寫(xiě)給個(gè)人：Dear Mr. Wang，(關(guān)系不親密)Dear Michael， (關(guān)系親密)落款（結(jié)束語(yǔ)）放在右下角公務(wù)信函和私人信函，均可通用：Yours sincerely,Li Ming對(duì)親人或朋友還可用：Yours, Love, Best wishes，2）小作文寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)1）書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔：閱卷規(guī)定，書(shū)寫(xiě)不清可以降低 1 檔（3 分左右）如果寫(xiě)錯(cuò)一個(gè)單詞你要用一道斜線或者橫線把它勾掉再重新寫(xiě)一遍

3、2）格式規(guī)范：如作文標(biāo)題，書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭及落款3）虎頭豹尾：作文的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾不可出錯(cuò)。前三句即決定成績(jī)。4）避免明錯(cuò)：時(shí)態(tài)，單復(fù)數(shù)，主謂不一致3）小作文寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分分為五個(gè)層次2 4 6 8 10（8-10 分）的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1）包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2）使用豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3）語(yǔ)言自然流暢，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤極少1-24）有效的采用了多種銜接，文字連貫5）格式和語(yǔ)域恰當(dāng)貼切How are young ?非正式的信件當(dāng)中4）小作文寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)通常分三段首段：寫(xiě)信目的 1 到 2 句話中段：寫(xiě)信詳情 4 或 5 句，通常第一句為總述，或者過(guò)渡句。尾段：收尾 2 句，S1：感謝看信，S2：期待回信（可以稍稍改變）5）小作

4、文寫(xiě)作時(shí)間分配（15 分鐘）二、寫(xiě)作步驟1）認(rèn)真審題2）列提綱：列出每段要寫(xiě)什么3）動(dòng)筆英語(yǔ)一小作文05 年（辭職信）Directions:Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazineDesigns &fashions. But now you findt the work is not whatyou expected. You decide to quit 辭職. Write a letter to yours, Mr. Wang, 1.ling him your decising 2. yourreason(s),

5、and 3. making an apology.n 不少于 100 words. WriteWrite your letter with no lessit ney on ANSWER SHEET2. Do not sign your on name atof the letter; use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need towrite the address. (10 pos)Dear Mr. Wang,yourcompany,asI appretetsucsful/boomingaswellglowing/thriving/prosperous/,

6、 provides me withthis once-in-a-lifetime opportunity 千載難逢的機(jī)名會(huì)）asaneditor(職位the.However/conversely/nevertheless,absolute reality forme to resign 辭職 from my寫(xiě)作目的currentition.過(guò)渡句 Thereresponsible forcouple of sha quit. On the topexist several elements being導(dǎo)致 my quit/there existamy my yfactors shedding

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9、ce 不方便thusCaused分詞作myas后置定語(yǔ).Please acceptsinceremygratitude,asmuchregretserveforherenotanybeingabletolonger.YourssincerelyLiMing寫(xiě)作第 23 次課建議信Directions：Write a letter to youruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestions forimproving its service.Youaboutshouldwrite100wordsonANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your ownna

10、me atof tMing”letter.Use“Liinstead.Donotwritetheaddress. （10 ps）第一段：自我介紹+寫(xiě)作目的第二段：提出具體的建議措施第三段：希望考慮措施并期待回復(fù)Dear Sir or Madam，I,studentasasenior（ 可 以 替 換大。?。ヾepartment 系學(xué)院,academyAcademyofthel theofFinanofManagementuniversity who regularlycome tothelibrarytospendmyve,sparetime,Ibegenerallyservicespeaki

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13、vens symphonies,literaturelike r mastieTwains, which will helpusasbroaden our horizonwellasknowmorean cultures.It will be grateful if you回應(yīng)couldresponditivelyand helpfully抱怨認(rèn)真地tothecomplaandtakeseriouslymysuggestionsaccount 考慮. I amlooking forward to yourreplyatyourearstconvenience.Your sincerely,Li

14、 Ming08 年（道歉信）Directions:YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyour luggagetyoufottoreturnlandlordtoBob,yourWritethere.him a letter to1)andmakeanapology,2) suggest a solution.Youaboutshould100writewordsonANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your ownname atofMingletter.UseLiinstead.Donotwritetheaddres

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17、ity.第二段：1.提出解決方案+附帶的彌補(bǔ)措施（ 你內(nèi)心想多做的事情）致歉信：1. 請(qǐng)吃飯2.3. 參觀中國(guó)的名勝古跡4. 送一些手工的致歉信的最后一段：再次表示歉意Oncereallyagain,guiltyIforfeelanyinconvenienarisingmyish mycareleyouessandcanacceptapology.from因 為11 年（Directions:信）Writealettertoafriend of yours to1)your and2)mend one offavoritemoviesgivereasonsforyourYour aboutme

18、ndationshouldwrite100wordsonANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your ownname atof theletter. User “LI MING”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10 pos)書(shū)最喜歡的人你車啊花啊跟你生活息息相關(guān)的東西你都要去積累一些個(gè)性化的空間詞匯（又臭又長(zhǎng)）BeethovensymphoniessChrysanthemum 菊花Chrysanthemum terrace菊花臺(tái)的救贖正確伊甸湖Antman15Ironman名字和書(shū)名都要加引號(hào)Cant hold olf fromsth禁不住做某ng

19、事=cant helpDear Friend,ng sthI cant hold myself backfrommendingamovie “Untouchables”toyouwhichI sawlastnight/thedaybeforeyesterday/theday.other第一段：寫(xiě)作目的接下來(lái)影故事講述這個(gè)電ls a factual（替換）ItstorybetnPhilippe(cast by Francois Cluzet),同位語(yǔ)awhitemillionaire 分詞作后置定語(yǔ)accident and Driss (castbyOmarSy),manablackhomele

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22、h you later.Yours sincerelyLi MingRobinsonCrusoe 1512 年（信）Directions:Supe you havefound something wrongwith the electronic dictionary t youbought from an onlinestore the other day,Write anto thecustomer service centerto1)and2) demand a prompt 迅速的 立即的solution You should writeabout 100wordsonANSERE SH

23、EET 2Do not sign your ownname atof themake a complaletter, Use Zhang Wei instead .信第一段：自我介紹+寫(xiě)作目的第二段：原因產(chǎn)品的第三段：提出解決措施并期待回復(fù)1.屏幕太小2. 耗電快3.運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)速度慢4. 黑屏5.6.7.8.9.單詞量少色差充電器不合適發(fā)音不標(biāo)準(zhǔn)聲音出不來(lái)信模板Dear Mr. Manager, /ToWhomItMayConcernI am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/不耐摔不方便攜帶表ment( 不air(達(dá) ) disappo滿) regarding/ I venture to write tobeef about the electronic dictionary I bought from youronline store the othercomplainandday.During the five days thedictionary has been inmyses,problems h