1wc高考英語2010屆短文改錯復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)課件

1、短文改錯復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)一 短文改錯的話題選擇 二 短文改錯的設(shè)題切入口三 短文改錯的題型設(shè)計四 解題指導(dǎo)與建議1.短文改錯的選材通常取自學(xué)生的作品，或 類似學(xué)生的作品。2009年短文改錯題，依然是一 篇學(xué)生習(xí)作,設(shè)計的考點(diǎn)也與往年相同。2.內(nèi)容來自學(xué)生身邊的常見話題。3.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的難易程度符合學(xué)生的實(shí)際水平。4.語言明白易懂。5.基本上不涉及生僻的語言現(xiàn)象和繁難的語句結(jié)構(gòu)。6.試題并不是單純檢測語法知識，而是檢測考生 寫作能力中的校驗?zāi)芰?。? 試題的話題選擇二. 短文改錯的設(shè)題切入口近五年高考短文改錯題題型穩(wěn)定、考查點(diǎn)多、覆蓋面廣。一般以四種題型出現(xiàn)：對、錯、多、少。從錯誤比例上看，一般為多詞1處

2、，少詞1處，正確1處，錯誤67處。設(shè)問的角度有三個：詞法、句法和行文邏輯。從這三個角度考查學(xué)生在語篇中綜合運(yùn)用英語的準(zhǔn)確性。2009年高考短文改錯分析多詞少詞全國卷I全國卷II浙江卷陜西卷各1各1各1詞法名詞/代詞代詞的選擇（1）名詞的數(shù)（1名詞的數(shù)（1）名詞的數(shù)1形容詞級別（1）形容詞做定語1副詞副詞誤用（1）副詞誤用（1）副詞級別1介詞搭配（1）誤用 1動詞時態(tài)（1）語態(tài), （1）。搭配（1）時態(tài)（1）語態(tài)（1）搭配（1）時態(tài)（1）語態(tài)（1）形式）搭配（1）冠詞冠詞誤用(1 ）冠詞誤用(1)冠詞誤用(1)冠詞誤用(1)非謂語動詞非謂語動詞2句法主謂一致There be句型變體（1） 單復(fù)數(shù)

3、(1)單復(fù)數(shù)(1)慣用法固定句型(1)語篇邏輯連詞的使用(1)連詞的使用(1)連詞的使用(1)連詞的使用(1)1.缺詞是指由于漏掉某個詞而使句子成份或固定搭配殘缺不全。多表現(xiàn)為缺少冠詞，連詞，介詞，物主代詞，助動詞和不定式符號to,被動語態(tài)的be等。The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in its place. (2009全國卷1)分析：sports前加a。 sports

4、center是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，表示不確定。Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lot s of good books and fresh fruit. (2009陜西卷)分析：they take him- and. 前后文是并列關(guān)系，用并列連詞and。 It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.2009浙江卷分析：考查固定句型。此處用 It is/was possible to do st

5、h.句型 2. 多詞多詞現(xiàn)象主要表現(xiàn)為詞義重復(fù)，冗言。做題時不僅應(yīng)注意分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，詞義內(nèi)涵，還應(yīng)重視語篇整體構(gòu)成。某些句子，獨(dú)立分析似無懈可擊，但根據(jù)行文邏輯進(jìn)行分析，則錯誤迭現(xiàn)。The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. (全國卷1) 分析：去掉been。短語give way to “讓路”，用主動語態(tài)。 Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday

6、.(2009全國卷2) 分析：去掉to ，return歸還，是及物動詞，這里to多余 I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger was so thoughtful.2009浙江卷 分析：去掉believe后的in，這里不是信任而是相信的意思 3. 錯詞此類錯誤涉及面較廣，較為常見的是搭配錯誤和語法錯誤。考生平時寫作中易范的錯誤常常是命題的焦點(diǎn)。介詞錯誤B. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用C. 代詞誤用D. 時態(tài)錯誤E. 非謂語動詞錯誤F. 主謂不一致錯誤G. 詞性誤用H. 連詞誤用I. 冠詞誤用A. 介詞錯誤1. Im a ne

7、wcomer here of a small town. (NMET2004)分析： of 改為from。 from “來自于”2. Im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. (NMET2004)分析： to改為at。 Laugh at 是固定搭配。After five years away in my hometown, I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot. (2009全國卷1)分析： infrom。句意是我離開家鄉(xiāng)五年，aw

8、ay from屬于固定搭配。B. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用 I stayed here for one a nd a half hour. (2009全國卷2)分析：. hour改為hours One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to stop beside us. (2009浙江卷) 分析：考查名詞數(shù)。one of 后受one of影響必須用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，應(yīng)改為friends.C. 代詞誤This man might need the umbrella himself, but he pr

9、eferred to give it to everyone else. (2009 浙江卷)【解析】 everyone-someone/somebody?？疾椴欢ù~用法。everyone else 錯誤說法，每個人，就不可能再有別人；別人應(yīng)表示為someone/somebody else。Im glad to know that you have an interest in Chinese Food. Here Id like to tell you something about them. ( 2009重慶卷)分析：them-it依語境知。D. 時態(tài)錯Im sorry that I

10、wasnt able to return your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, but was hold up on my way back. (2009全國卷2)分析： mean改為meant, hold改為held;文章是描述過去發(fā)生的事情。Im glad to know that you had an interest in Chinesefood. (2009重慶卷)Food. 分析:had-have描述現(xiàn)在的事情E.非謂語動詞錯So I help

11、ed them going to the nearest hospital. (2009全國卷2)分析： going改為go考查非謂語動詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：help sb( to) do sthMy classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg. (2009陜西卷)【解析】 breaking- broken非謂語動詞做定語，與所修飾詞是被動關(guān)系，用過去分詞 F. 主謂不一致錯誤I stayed here for one a half hours and made sure that the girl were al

12、l hope you understand. (2009 全國卷2) 分析：.were改為was主語是第三人稱she A little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather hot. (2009四川卷). 分析:differ-.differsThe factory at the comer of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place.

13、 ( 2009全國卷1)分析：their its。 前文中提到了名詞The factory是單數(shù)，因此把their改為its。代詞應(yīng)與指代對象一致。 。 G. 詞性誤用（常發(fā)生在動詞與名詞、名詞與形容詞，形容詞與副詞之間）He has a comfortable. room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. (2009 陜西卷)分析； patiently- patient. so I grateful accepted the offer. (2009浙江卷)分析：grateful-gratefully考查副詞用法。副詞修

14、飾動詞accept.H.連詞誤分析：they take him- and. 前后文是并列關(guān)系，用并列連詞and。 Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him Lost of good books and fresh fruit. (2009陜西卷) I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was hold up on my way back. (全國卷2)分析： and改為but前后文是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞butI. 冠詞誤Eve

15、ry kind of the Chinese food is worth trying. (2009重慶卷)分析： 去掉the 【解析】考查冠詞用法。由umbrella 的發(fā)音可知，元音前應(yīng)使用冠詞an The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella. (2009浙江卷)J邏輯失誤A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them go to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a ha

16、lf hours. (2009 全國卷2)分析：. here改為there; 短文改錯糾錯口訣短文改錯得分易，正確格式記心里：一看一致二詞類，三多四少五搭配，六句七語八非謂，九看邏輯對不對，校驗無誤就全對。解題指導(dǎo)要提高短文改錯的解題能力，不僅需要平時有計劃地按照語言知識的難易程度、語言使用規(guī)律，由淺入深、由簡到繁地進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練，而且還應(yīng)掌握一定的解題技巧，以減少盲目性。一、 通讀全文，掌握大意二、整句理解，逐行推敲三、先易后難，各個擊破EXERCISE：2009全國卷1After five years away in my hometown, I find that 76. _The neigh

17、borhood which I used to living in has changed 77._a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 78 ._ across the street from our middle school were gone. 79._There exist now a park that has a small river running 80._through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81. _Zhongshan Ro

18、ad has been moved out of the city, and sports 82. _center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. _Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84. _a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 85. _ school is still there. 【解析】 76. infrom。句意是我離開家鄉(xiāng)五年，away

19、from屬于固定搭配。 77. living live。used to 后跟動詞原形，表示“過去常常做某事請”。78. older old。句中沒有比較的意思。 79. were are。 根據(jù)上文可知飯店和魚店消失都陳述的是現(xiàn)在的情況。 80. exist exists。 主語a park是單數(shù)第三人稱。 81. 正確 82. sports前加a。 sports center是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，表示不確定。 83. their its。 前文中提到了名詞The factory是單數(shù)，因此把their改為its。 84. 去掉been。短語give way to“讓路”，用主動語態(tài)。 85. Besides But。前后表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。Hi,