單元寫作指導(dǎo)“百校聯(lián)賽”一等獎-完整精講版課件

1、如何寫好個人隨筆個人隨筆主要是寫自己所見所聞(或按提示要求去寫),并適當(dāng)談?wù)勛约旱男牡皿w會或看法、建議等。它不拘一格,短小精悍,形式靈活,可以描寫或評論,或夾敘夾議或抒情等。其主要特點(diǎn)是層次和結(jié)構(gòu)比較簡單,內(nèi)容單一(如寫學(xué)校、環(huán)境等),寫作材料易于收集(主要是身邊的世界,比較熟悉),利于用已學(xué)知識表達(dá)生活中的內(nèi)容。在寫作時,要注意把握主題,然后圍繞主題安排相關(guān)的個人信息或背景材料、支持細(xì)節(jié)等。譬如寫學(xué)校,就要注意地理位置、科目、課外活動、理想中的學(xué)校等,然后安排好段落,使用連接手段,層次清晰地進(jìn)行表達(dá)。1.At the moment,I go to a senior high school i

2、n.2.My perfect/dream school would be.3.We should study all the school subjects such as.4.Its not difficult to find evidence of.5.We would save water and electricity.6.There would be many interest groups,such as.第一段:寫作背景或引子第二段:具體現(xiàn)象或存在的具體問題第三段:希望或愿望(譬如理想的校園、課程或課外活動等)請你根據(jù)下面的提示,以“My Dream School”為題寫一篇文章

3、,詞數(shù)100左右。 內(nèi)容提示:1.你?，F(xiàn)狀(周圍有噪音,課程枯燥等)。2.理想學(xué)校:(1)遠(yuǎn)離噪音,綠色、安靜;(2)課程多樣化,有選修課等;(3)有各種興趣小組等。注意:(1)開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。My Dream SchoolAt the moment,Im studying in a senior high school in my hometown.My life參考范文:My Dream SchoolAt the moment,Im studying in a senior high school in my hometown.My lif

4、e there is quite boring most of the time because it is located in the centre of the city,with a market to the south.And we have no alternatives aside from attending classes.Whats more,the timetable is dull and there are no computers or after-class activities.So I hope my school would be a quiet and

5、clean place,away from noise and pollution.The students would also have optional subjects,such as Chinese painting or computer classes.They would have music,P.E.,Chinese,maths,English,chemistry and physics.There would be many interest groups,such as film club,chess association or football club.In conclusion,my dream school would have a variety o