2022屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫教研公開課同課異構(gòu)課件

1、Continuation Writing Watch a video about two larvas:Red & YellowWarming up 1.Can you predict the ending?A:The two larvas failed to survive.B:The two larvas succeeded in rescue.setting( when, where)Theme(main idea+writing purpose) characters( who) plot（what ,how, why) What makes a story?What makes a

2、great story?vivid & proper descriptions Six elementsStep 03Step 02Step 011.Read for Theme2.Read for plot3.Infer the plot4.Try to write Step 04 Four StepswhowherewhenHowwhywhatendingbeginning an old man & his sonAn crow perched on their windowthe old man asked the same question four times,which made

3、his son annoyedon the sofa in his houseStep 1 Read for the theme(main idea + writing purpose)took out the diarythe son:May he was busy and overlooked his fatherthe father:poor hearing and poor understandingThe intention of the writing is to _Step 1 Read for the theme(main idea + writing purpose) war

4、n the son to give more attention and care to his father Further :_how many times: all 23 times to remind us to be more patient and caring with our parents 4 times impatientlovingattitude:BeginningClimax(高潮)Ending sitting on the sofa a crow perchedrepliedhave just now told youimpatientsome expression

5、 of irritation in his toneirritated/annoyedshouted at his fathermad5. the father took out the diary and asked the son to read 6. replied to him 23 times ;hugged lovingly each time ;not felt irritated but had a deep affectionpara 1: After reading the diary, para 2:Feeling ashamed, the son got down on

6、 his knees before his father .Step 2 Read for the plot (underline the sons &the fathers actions and feelings)apologize & forgive Tip 1 :Predict the ending based on the plot and the theme.(reasonabe&positive)1.the first time: _2. the second time:_3. the third time:_4.the fourth time:_MovedashamedPara

7、 1 After reading the diary, _ Para 2Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father._ 1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好.Step 3: Infer plots or events in each paragraph.forgiveness be moved and realized his faultTip 2:Predict the ending of para. 1 based on the two given senten

8、ces.Para 1 After reading the diary, _Step 3: Infer plots or events in each paragraph. realized his faultTip 3:Infer the plot by making questions.(what,how,why.)After reading the diary,what did the son know from the diary?How would the son feel?What would the son think of ? What would the son do?fath

9、er selfless lovemoved by his father& ashamed memories crowed in his mindreflect on his behaviorStep 4 : Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.Para 1 Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. _forgivenessWhat would the son do?What would the son say?How would

10、 the father respond?Why did the son get down on his knees?To get his fathers forgivenessApologize to his fatherMake promises to his fatherForgivenessWhat theme would reveal?Be more paitent and give more care to your parents Tip 3:Infer the plot by making questions.(what,how,why.)Be consistent with t

11、he style Transitional wordsStep 4 : Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.Advanced vocabularyRich sentences structure Based on the “Question”&“Answer”,Please vividly write Para1&Para2 with the ending reasonable and the theme highlighted.AssignmentParagraph 1 After reading the diar

12、y, the son began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father,with eyes filled with tears. His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritated while his father asked him the same question just 4 times! The son thought to himself with regr

13、et：If I attain old age, how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding?One possible version for Para. 1:Paragraph 2 Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior. He said this aloud, “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad. It is