高中英語讀后續(xù)寫精講A-little-kindness-makes-a-difference課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫精講A little kindness makes a difference讀后續(xù)寫精講 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫， 使之構成一個完整的故事。 September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where people wholeheartedly enjoy the pleasures of life and nature. Roland was no exception. He was a magnificent German Shepherd, a little lazy and overweight though. He loved

2、to doze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs. Proudfoot. “Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs.Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return. Roland was licking the last piece of meat in his

3、plate when the doorbell burst into music. Mrs. Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side. “Good noon Mrs. Proudfoot “. It was Sam, her teenage neighbor. “My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs.Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in and closed

4、the door behind. Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow, but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids, though she had no kids to call her own. 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫， 使之構成一個完 Once encouraged, Sam disclosed his dilemma. “ My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, bu

5、t he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents cant afford to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but thats far from enough.”With a dramatic sigh he continued, “ If he didnt refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismissed from final exams. That will ruin his future! I have to help h

6、im, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.” “Dont worry, Sammy. You want me to pay” but Mrs.Proudfoot was interrupted.” No, No, Mrs.Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. Ill work for you. Would you favor me to walk your dog please? For 2 dollars a day .” He looked up with begging eyes. Mrs.

7、Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement. “ That cant be better! Ive been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exercise! Its nice of you to make such an offer.” Sam thanked her over and over, “ I will start tomorrow morning.” Once encouraged, Sam d注意：1 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右。2 應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞

8、語；3 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 續(xù)寫完成后， 請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph 1 :Sam arrived very early the next morning.Paragraph 2:A month later, Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.注意：Reading : Analyze the story1 Read for main characters(who)Sam a teenager; Mrs.Proudfoots neighborRoland a

9、 magnificent German ShepherdMrs.Proudfoot a lonely widow2 Read for time and place(when and where)Time : SeptemberPlace: StrathroyReading : Analyze the storySam3 Read for plotRoland, the shepherd, was having his lunch.Sam came to Mrs.Proudfoot, his face pale.Mrs.Proudfoot waved him in and encouraged

10、him to tell what happened.Sam disclosed his dilemma: his friend Barry lost a rare book of school library costing 150 but had only 55.Mrs. Proudfoot offered to give him the money.Sam interrupted and begged to walk the dog for Mrs.Proudfoot and get paid 2 a day.Mrs. Proudfoot agreed, saying her dog ne

11、eded some exercise.Sam was grateful and promised to start the next day.3 Read for plot4 Read for personalities of the characters and important details.Roland:“ He was a magnificent German Shepherd, a little lazy and overweight thoughloved to doze in the backyardyawned and stretched his bodyhe wagged

12、 his tail affectionately in return.Mrs.Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side.a devoted dog; is obedient to Mrs.Proudfootoverweight lazy, doze, yawn, stretch needs exerciseWill it be easy for Sam to walk the dog?How will Sam make Roland obey his instructions?4 Read for

13、personalities of thMrs.Proudfoot:“ Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs. Proudfood with her usual fondness for him“ My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs.Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow but well loved in her neighborhood especia

14、lly by kids, though she had no kids to call her own.Once encouraged, Sam disclosed his dilemma.“ Dont worry, Sammy. You want me to pay”Mrs. Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement,” That cant be better! Ive been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exercise . Its nice of you to make such

15、an offer.”animal-friendly; kind-hearted; warm-hearted; considerate; thoughtful; affectionate;trustworthy; reliableShe needs company.Mrs.Proudfoot:animal-friendly;Sam :“My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents cant affor

16、d to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but thats far from enogh.” With a dramatic sigh he continued,” If he didnt refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismissed from final exams. That will ruin his future! I have to help him, whatever it takes. He is my friend.“ Dont worry, Samm

17、y. You want me to pay” but Mrs. Proudfoot was interrupted. “ No, No, Mrs. Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. Ill work for you. Would you favor me to walk your dog please? For 2 dollars a day.” He looked up with begging eyes. a devoted/loyal/faithful friend; considerate ; a person of self-e

18、steem and independenceSam :a devoted/loyal/faithful 5 Read for theme (本文的主題可以從多個角度提煉， 但是不管從哪個角度提煉，無論前面情節(jié)情感是怎樣變化， 最終的主題都應該是積極的正面的。）1）Helping others is helping yourself.2) A kind person will never be lonely.3) Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining.4) Roses given, fragrance in h

19、and.5 Read for theme (本文的主題可以從多個角度Continue writing :1 先把最后一句寫好， 即：主題句Paragraph2:A month later, Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.At the end of the storyRoland:Sam:Mrs. Proudfoot:fit and energetic, liked exercisegot enough money for his friend Barry to pay for the lost book

20、 so that Barrys future wont be ruined. possible development Sam was thankful to Mrs.Proudfoot and offered to continue walking the dog, but for free.delighted to find Roland fit and energetic; got visited every by Sam, not lonely any more.Continue writing :At the end oThe last sentence:Sometimes only

21、 a little kindness can ignite something shining, making the world more beautiful and harmonious.Tips 1 根據(jù)對已給故事的分析， 結合第二段所給段落首句， 確定主題， 寫好主題句， 然后再圍繞主題來展開前面兩段落情節(jié)的發(fā)展。 2 把銜接句寫好， 即第一段的最后一句。Paragraph 1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Paragraph 2:A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find R

22、oland fit and energetic.Possible sentence: With the temptation of the delicious meat, Roland followed Sam eagerly. Day by day, it gradually became a routine for both of them ./Delightedly, Sam found Roland had gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside.The last sentence:3.緊接著每段的提示語句寫角

23、色的情感或反應。Paragraph 1:Sam arrived very early the next morning. Sam RolandPossible sentence: Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed in to a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened, trying to tempt Roland to stand up and follow him out. main interaction3.緊接著每段的提示語句寫角色的情

24、感或反應。 main inParagraph2:A month later, Mrs Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Possible sentence: Satisfied with Sams work, she gave him some extra money, saying ,” Life is marvelous. Thanks to your help, a fat lazy dog has become strong and energetic.”/Wagging his tail merrily,

25、 Roland bounced beside Mrs.Proudfoot, as if ecstatic over her praise./ Enjoying the pleasure to roam along the country road with Roland , Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time.Paragraph2:4 把每段的中間補充完整（以action-response)的方法推動中間情節(jié)發(fā)展， 即角色A的所言，所行， 所感，所想會引起其它角色的反應）Paragraph1: Sam arrived very ear

26、ly the next morning. Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened, trying to tempt Roland to stand up and follow him out. Giving him a lazy glimpse, Roland politedly wagged his tail and then turned his head away, falling soun

27、d asleep again.(Roland-Sam-Roland)Tip2: 一定要反復研讀揣摩所提供的段落以及所提供的兩個首句， 注重對重要細節(jié)的理解， 分析人物性格， 領會故事發(fā)展方向和主題。4 把每段的中間補充完整（以action-response)A possible versionParagraph1: Sam arrived very early the next morning. Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him,

28、 arms widely opened. Giving him a lazy glimpse, Roland politely wagged his tail and then turned his head away, falling sound asleep again . Desperately brainstorming, Sam got a piece of delicious bone from Mrs. Proudfoot. Lured by the tasty smell, Roland swiftly bounced up and jumped at the bone, fo

29、llowing Sam out. In this way, the first day was smoothly finished. Day by day, Sam was delighted to find Roland gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside.A possible versionParagraph2: A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Enjoying the pleasure

30、to roam along the country road with Roland, Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time. Eventually one day, Sam was excited to tell Mrs.Proudfoot , “ Barry and I have earned enough money. Thank you, Mrs. Proudfoot! But can I continue walking Roland for you? For free!” Radiantly, Mrs. Proudfoot nodded. Receiving positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated. Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining, making the world mor