雅思寫作之利弊討論型市公開課獲獎?wù)n件

1、雅思主流寫作題型之利弊討論型 第1頁第1頁組合作文法-審題（topic interpretation）This kind of argumentative essay requires clear thinking, preparation, and a concise (non-waffly) writing style. 當(dāng)前雅思主流寫作4題型A. Argumentation （觀點辯論型）(1) 利弊題（Advantages or disadvantages）(2) 兩種/各種選擇權(quán)衡題（TWO options）(3) 觀點判斷題（opinions/ comments）BDiscussi

2、on（事實討論型）Introduction a hot issue (Introduction, first paragraph); find out possible explanations (depends, second paragraph); analyze its impact on society (detailed, both sides, third para) ;suggest feasible approaches to it (corresponding to previous).第2頁第2頁表現(xiàn)形式Do you think its advantages outweig

3、h disadvantages?Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it?Do you think it is positive or negative situation? It has positive or negative effect on ? Discuss both advantages and disadvantages.第3頁第3頁真題示例.1.14There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the

4、 use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?.2.11In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?.2.25More and more measures to im

5、prove the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks?.5 .20The international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. To what extent do you think its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages?第4頁第4頁1月17日

6、Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport.Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?3月14日More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits o

7、utweigh the problems associated with it?第5頁第5頁4月4日Nowadays，people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?5月30日Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alterna

8、tive sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?6月11日The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local prod

9、uced food.What extend does the advantage outweigh disadvantage?第6頁第6頁利弊類題型審題小結(jié)該類題目通常也以某一即定事實/現(xiàn)象為分析基礎(chǔ), 但因為該趨勢/現(xiàn)象原因討論不是很有必要,轉(zhuǎn)而只分析其利弊(其實就是正面或者負面影響分析), 因此本質(zhì)和事實討論型題目是一樣,只是解題方向不同.事實討論型通常需要剖析原因,而利弊型通常不用;事實討論型分析影響時有指向(比如直接說問某社會現(xiàn)象/趨勢會產(chǎn)生什么問題即等于指明要分析負面影響), 而利弊型通常是正反兩面都要分析;事實討論型分析影響有時會有限定對象,比如個人或/和社會, 利弊型通常不會限定

10、該影響對象, 但個人/社會還是能夠成為分析利弊不同切入點.因為該題型討論開展基礎(chǔ)同為即定事實/現(xiàn)象,因此利弊類話題能夠很容易被轉(zhuǎn)化為事實討論型問題(原因影響對策),反之亦然. 但一切以題目要求為準(zhǔn).第7頁第7頁4月4日Nowadays，people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?(沒有分析原因必要,故而只討論該趨勢利弊影響)5月30日Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas

11、) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?(可轉(zhuǎn)換為事實討論型:給出替換能源使用日益普遍這一現(xiàn)象,分析替換能源使用日益普及原因及其影響)6月11日The food travels thousands

12、of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food.To what extent does the advantage outweigh disadvantage?(嚴(yán)格地說這是一個混合型題目,由于它夾雜了一個現(xiàn)象和就這個現(xiàn)象一個相關(guān)觀點. 因此又帶點觀點判斷題特性. 但是題目不要求對觀點直接進行對錯是否評判,而還是側(cè)重在利弊分析上. 但是此時利弊分析是建立在與現(xiàn)實對立觀

13、點基礎(chǔ)上利弊分析.)第8頁第8頁利弊討論型必背詞匯AdvantageProsBenefitMeritPositive sideGood newsStrenth/strong pointboonDisadvantageConsDrawbackProblemNegative sideBad newsWeakness/weak pointbane第9頁第9頁利弊討論型慣用句型表語從句The biggest advantage/disadvantage for is that同位語從句We should be aware of the merit/problem that 第10頁第10頁解題環(huán)節(jié)一：

14、審題相對觀點判斷題容易。題干：通常是一個常見社會/生活現(xiàn)象而不是觀點注意：這類題目重心是分析利弊，而不是問詢原因。題目另有要求除外。第11頁第11頁解題環(huán)節(jié)二：分析利弊仍然使用六大原則對該現(xiàn)象進行利弊分析第12頁第12頁解題環(huán)節(jié)三：段落安排第一段：簡介背景，引出現(xiàn)象，可適當(dāng)?shù)貙υ蚣右躁U明（不需很詳細）第二段：利1到2個；第三段：弊1到2個(假如能論得很透話,利弊各一也可)；第四段：總結(jié)，闡明利不小于弊或弊不小于利。第13頁第13頁引言段示例1利弊型題目同事實討論型同樣, 可用一兩句簡樸進行背景簡介. 接著再改寫題目表示. 最后說:有利有弊;或說利不小于弊或弊不小于利. (當(dāng)然利弊孰大觀點能夠

15、留在最后總結(jié)段點明.比如:3月14日More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it?引言段: (參看基礎(chǔ) P97)第一句: 背景闡明:Peoples living standards has improved over the years and many parents tend to pay more attention to their c

16、hildrens education. 第二句: 引出話題(改寫原題)Therefore, an increasing number of young people choose to go abroad to pursue their higher education. 第三句: 點明立場: Frankly speaking, studying overseas has both its advantages and disadvantages. 第14頁第14頁引言段示例2.1.14There are social, medical, and technical problems asso

17、ciated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?引言段: (原創(chuàng))第一句: 背景簡介With the improvement of peoples living standards as well as the advancement of technology, various kinds of machines or instruments are playing an in

18、creasingly important role in our daily life. For example, mobile phones are so widely used that we cannot imagine our life without them. 第二句: 引出話題(改寫原句)However, the prevalent use of mobile phones also causes myriads of social, medical, and technical problems.第三句: 點明立場Yet in spite of their drawbacks,

19、 I have to say mobiles phones is more helpful than harmful in our everyday life.87w第15頁第15頁引言段演練1.2.11In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?引言段演練第一句:背景簡介With the improvement of living standards

20、as well as the advancement of medical technology, regular people can live a much longer life than ever before.第二句: 引出話題(改寫原句)Therefore, many countries have witnessed a steady increase in the percentage of population of senior citizens.第三句:點明立場This trend, of course, has both positive and negative imp

21、acts on the society.57w 第16頁第16頁引言段演練25月30日Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?引言段演練:第17頁第17頁引言段演練35月30日Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the us