2020中考英語作文高分秘笈敘事描寫類

1、敘事描寫類的書面表達(dá)是以敘述和描寫為主要表達(dá)方式，以寫人、敘事和經(jīng)歷、寫物、 繪景等為主要內(nèi)容的文體：這一類的書面表達(dá)動(dòng)詞現(xiàn)率最高且富于變化得最多的是動(dòng)詞的過去時(shí)各時(shí)態(tài)為輔。合理使用豐富多彩的動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)是這類書面表達(dá)的首要語言特征。人物類書面表達(dá)如果對(duì)人的性格、外貌等敘述常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，如果通過事件來刻畫人物的性格，那么就要用過去時(shí)。寫好類書面表 達(dá)要注意以下幾:頭緒明脈清寫好書面表達(dá)，首先要頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚，明確文章要求寫什么。要對(duì)所寫的事件或人物進(jìn)分析，弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個(gè)過程，然后再收集選取素材。這些素材都要圍繞個(gè) W和一個(gè)H展開，分別是 when, 及 how。突出心詳?shù)?/p>

2、在文章的框架確定后，對(duì)支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文主題的需要出發(fā)，分清主次，定好詳略。詳寫細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫或粗那些非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而會(huì)使情節(jié)羅列化，使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點(diǎn)是寫好記敘文要解的一 個(gè)基本問題，也需要一定的技巧。用活言準(zhǔn)生記敘文要用具體的事件和生動(dòng)的語言對(duì)人、事、物加以敘述。一篇好的敘事描寫類書面表達(dá)的 言既要準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)，又要表現(xiàn)力強(qiáng)，這樣才能把人、事物描寫得具體生動(dòng)。 kinds of in my the unforgettable sunny/rainy morning， while I was.First of a

3、ll. Then. After In end.1 He/she/this one of most that I have I will remember him/in forever加句： Sth. impressed me impressed me 經(jīng)句： Sunday（） it （rainy, windy, ） I got very early late）. After I went to with bus. We enjoyed We forgot the time. We didn come until 5 oclock. We all felt very tired, but we

4、were I thought I would never forget this summer, parents and I for holidays. We lot of of We a there.10. bought lot of clothes here are cheap.人物類書面表達(dá)主要通過刻畫人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表現(xiàn)主題，模版如下：I willforget感想敘事和經(jīng)歷類書面表達(dá)通過敘述事件的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果表現(xiàn)主題。2寫景狀物類書面表達(dá)通過對(duì)事物和景點(diǎn)的描述表現(xiàn)主題。文章宜采用總 分 總結(jié)構(gòu)或總 分的結(jié) 構(gòu)，模版如下：介紹景觀介紹旅行總結(jié)旅行感受 one of

5、most beautiful scenery I a to It a and but I was very 典一 河南）如有會(huì)任一名共午。根以要點(diǎn)要用語一短。 1.要：這個(gè)名人是;你為什么想和他或她共進(jìn)午;你想和他或她談?wù)撌裁础?.要：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名;詞數(shù) 左右。【參考范文】Id like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, founder of the -known Chinese tech company Mr. is great has everything mapped And under his Huawei has giant the l

6、unch, I will listen to his success story. I will ask him important it happen. If time permits, Ill ask for his advice for us teenagers today.Im expecting this lunch already.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)文章符合寫作提示要求，思路清晰，開門見山地引出介紹的對(duì)象。作者運(yùn)用了很多巧妙3的語句，使短文文采豐富，讀后余味無窮，是一篇值得品味的佳作。亮點(diǎn)回放 is considered great .們認(rèn)為任先生是一個(gè)偉大的人。 his has a wor

7、ldwide。華為已經(jīng)成為了一個(gè)世界性的高科技巨人。在他的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下， If , I ask for advice or teenagers today. 如果時(shí)間允許，我會(huì)請他給我 們今天的青少年一些建議。典二2019 津）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，平時(shí)堅(jiān)持用英語寫日請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，描述你 星期三放學(xué)乘地鐵回家路上看到的事情，并表達(dá)自己的想.一男孩不舒服，開始嘔吐，一位穿著漂亮的女士幫著擦拭地面，男孩表達(dá)感(2)地鐵到站，有人擠向座位，有下不去車，有人因此爭.(3)你認(rèn)為.參詞：開始嘔吐 begin to 擠向座位 push towards seat爭吵 a quarrel要：(1)詞數(shù)：80

8、 個(gè)(2)日記格式和開頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)揮 I took back home from school，I noticed .【參考范文】 I took back home from school， I noticed around 4The first thing I met is boyThe boy didnt began A beautiful theboy helped him floor the boy for The second about When the got to lot of people pushed towards So some

9、people couldnt get off undergroundSome quarreel because In my ，The girl did a thing and we her in this for It shows your quality If you wait in will get off If us can in this way，our world will be beautiful.亮點(diǎn)回放 全巧用 first thing ，the thing 等接詞，把地鐵上所見所聞寫的非常清 晰，讓閱卷老師一目了然。 全采用了定語從句、狀語從句、并列句等多種長難句，為文采分增色

10、不少。A【2019 甘肅省天水市“你養(yǎng)我長大，我陪你變父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學(xué)會(huì)感受愛、回報(bào)愛。今天你即將畢業(yè)，是向父母表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英短文。 要點(diǎn)：給生命，一直照顧我成長；(2)努力工作，為我提供良好 生和教育條件；(3)擁有愛心，教我學(xué)會(huì)；(4)今天，我要為你（自主揮一至少兩點(diǎn)a注意事項(xiàng)：詞 右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校、人名等信息。 me up. I will with in your life. in process of growth. _ 5 【天津市西青區(qū) 2019 年年級(jí)初中畢業(yè)生學(xué)業(yè)考試調(diào)查班同

11、學(xué)成績有好有差，對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)成績好的學(xué)是否愿意和學(xué)習(xí)成績差的同學(xué)坐在一起呢？我們看看李磊是怎么做的呢，請同學(xué)們按照以下內(nèi)要點(diǎn)記敘 這件事并發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。 李的學(xué)習(xí)成績非常好，樂于助人，和班里每個(gè)同學(xué)都相處融洽 上，班里新來了一個(gè)同學(xué)叫做王剛，張老師讓他坐在李磊旁邊。 王成績不好，上課愛說話惹老師生氣。很多人不愿意和他做朋友。 但李磊幫他學(xué)習(xí)，并且阻止他上課亂說話過了一段時(shí)間他們共同取得了進(jìn)步。 如你的身邊有王剛這樣的 student，你會(huì)怎么做？注意： 詞數(shù) 詞左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 短需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 參詞匯：成績差的學(xué)生： a slower

12、 ；老師生氣 make sb. angry 亂說話 nonsenseLi Lei is very good A【參范】 me up. I will with in your life. in process of growth. give me me all the I have with study and life, you always enough help me. In to let me live a receive good6education, always work hard from to every You have heart full love.You are rea

13、dy to help people need. It is teach kind person. the never said love you” to you. Today, I will graduate, want to it to y loudly. I will better results in the future.I you will happy 本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，按照寫作要求，根據(jù)詞語及問題提示，用簡潔的 名師點(diǎn)評(píng)語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。寫作思路清晰。BLi Lei is a good student. He good at help others

14、he well with classmates.Last a new student Wang Gang came to his Zhang made him sit Li Lei. But Gang in loves talking in teachers angry wouldnlike make with But Li Lei him talking nonsense After time, they made together.If I a with this slow student like Wang I will him patiently and learn from each

15、 othe名師點(diǎn)評(píng)本文屬于材料作文，介紹李磊如何幫助差生王剛以及如果你的身邊有和王剛一樣的差生，你會(huì)如何做。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)回放這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文好的完了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)主一致特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句 good to do, get well with, be make make great share with, 以過去分詞作后置定語。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān) 系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。7Venice city of great small, waterside city in northeast Italy. It known as City of Water , City ofBridges The Ctiy of Light It by to be of the most beautiful cities in and March 4, carnival（歡節(jié)） For people, means and feasts. But