中考英語作文指導(dǎo)課件(共38張)

1、中考英語作文中考英語作文一 寫作步驟1.先審題： 弄清題目要求，確定體裁，擬寫提綱；2.圈要點(diǎn)： 仔細(xì)觀察，將情景中給出的要 點(diǎn)逐條列出3.定基調(diào)： 確定時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，開頭，結(jié)尾4.寫全文： 運(yùn)用熟悉的句型表達(dá)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫而流暢。一 寫作步驟1.先審題：二詞和句子的表達(dá)1詞和詞組的運(yùn)用：使用課本上學(xué)過的，最有把握的詞和詞組，不會(huì)表達(dá)的單詞用同義詞代替。例如：“不知所措” - dont know what to do“偶像”- favorite singer or player“風(fēng)和日麗”-Its fine./ Its a nice day.二詞和句子的表達(dá)1詞和詞組

2、的運(yùn)用：2.句子的表達(dá) (1) 盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句；（2）學(xué)會(huì)使用意譯法，將語義表達(dá)出來即 可，切忌與漢語提示一一對(duì)應(yīng)，否則會(huì)寫出中式英語；例如：我非常喜歡英語。 誤 I very like English. 正 I like English very much.（3）語態(tài)，時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤，主謂要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致；例如：我們應(yīng)當(dāng)尊敬父母，幫助他們做家務(wù)。Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.2.句子的表達(dá) (1) 盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句；三.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)1.開門見山的開頭；2.條理清楚的主體；3.點(diǎn)

3、明主題的結(jié)尾三.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)1.開門見山的開頭；四.成文之后的檢查1，一般語法項(xiàng)目的檢查：人稱：Ms Li is my English teacher, he helps me to learn English. 時(shí)態(tài)：At first ,I have many difficulties.主謂一致：They always speaks English with me.習(xí)慣用法:And Ill never stop learn it.2.字?jǐn)?shù)是否達(dá)要求，有無遺漏要點(diǎn)。中考作文一般要求80字左右。四.成文之后的檢查1，一般語法項(xiàng)目的檢查： 近3年中考作文試題回顧 近3年中考2014年：廣東正在創(chuàng)建教

4、育強(qiáng)省，學(xué)校需要改善辦學(xué)條件。你所在的學(xué)校正在就如何改善學(xué)?，F(xiàn)有的設(shè)施設(shè)備條件征求學(xué)生的意見。請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校的官方微博上留言，內(nèi)容包括：1你喜歡學(xué)校哪個(gè)場(chǎng)所的設(shè)施設(shè)備以及喜歡的原因；2選取學(xué)?，F(xiàn)有的兩個(gè)場(chǎng)所談?wù)勗O(shè)施設(shè)備的不足：這兩個(gè)場(chǎng)所里還缺少哪些設(shè)施設(shè)備或物品；這些設(shè)施設(shè)備或物品的缺乏所帶來的負(fù)面影響；如何改善。2014年：廣東正在創(chuàng)建教育強(qiáng)省，學(xué)校需要改善辦學(xué)條件。你所2015年：每年夏天，溺水事故頻發(fā)。請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1.我們應(yīng)該如何防止此類事故的發(fā)生？（兩點(diǎn)建議）2.如果看到有人落水，我們應(yīng)該如何施救？3.呼吁同學(xué)們熱愛生命，注意安全。2015年：每年夏天，溺水事

5、故頻發(fā)。請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀鉋very coin has two sides.Every coin has two sides.What is a successful article?What is a successful article?Enjoy an articleEnjoy an articleGroup learning 1:Read the article and find out:1 Whats the main idea of each paragraph?（每一段的主要內(nèi)容是什么？）2 Whats the writers opinion? What are the r

6、easons?（作者的觀點(diǎn)是什么？理由？）3 Is the experience typical for the topic?（作者的親身經(jīng)歷對(duì)于觀點(diǎn)來說典型嗎？）4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好詞好句嗎？請(qǐng)劃住。） Group learning 1:Read the arti Can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions. As for me, midd

7、le school students shouldnt use the mobile phones. It is a waste of time. Besides, its bad for the mind and the body. 你的觀點(diǎn) 2至3條理由 Can middle school student Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It

8、 wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.自己的親身經(jīng)歷 Last term, my aunt b All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.總結(jié)全文 All in all,

9、 as middleWrite your own article！ 在生活中遇到問題時(shí)，我們常常有兩種解決方式：自己獨(dú)立解決、與他人合作解決。當(dāng)你遇到生活中的問題時(shí)，怎樣解決更好呢？針對(duì)這一話題，九年級(jí)二班同學(xué)們展開了辯論。 假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員，請(qǐng)圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，說出2至3條理由來說服同學(xué)們（只選擇一方觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)即可）。 要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞； 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。Write your own article！ Group learning 2:Have a discussion:1 How many parts should we write? An

10、d whats the main idea of each part?（我們應(yīng)該分幾部分來寫？每一部分的內(nèi)容是什么？）2 For Part 1 and Part 3, what words or sentences can we use?（在第一和第三部分，我們可以用哪些詞或句來表達(dá)主題？）3 For Part 2, what experiences can we write about?（在第二部分，我們可以寫哪些經(jīng)歷？）Group learning 2:Have a discus第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由觀點(diǎn)：in my opinion as for me in my view.（開門見山，點(diǎn)明

11、主題）Everyone may have problems. So do I . When I meet problems, I often deal with them by myself. .Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. .第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由觀點(diǎn)：in my opinion （第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由理由：on the one hand, on the oth

12、er handbesidesalso.（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由理由：on the one hand, 第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）God helps those who helps themselves.During the process of solving problems, I can improve myself a lot and gain much progress.I should depend on myself instead of others.I can learn a lot when I deal with problems by m

13、yself.正方反方It is good for me to learn something from others.It can help me get along well with others.Its easier for me to get out of the trouble.第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）God helps第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）Last year, I had a problem in English.When I was in Grade 7, I got into trouble learning math.Whe

14、n I entered middle school, I found it was difficult to get along with my classmates.Several months ago, I had so much pressure that I felt really stressed out.第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）La正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I

15、 believed that I could deal with it by myself. I looked over my mistakes and found out what I didnt understand in math. Soon, I found a way of learning math by correcting mistakes and getting experience. At the end of the term, I made great progress in math. I was so proud of myself!正方：反方： When I en

16、tered middle school in Grade 7, I found math difficult to learn and nearly lost heart. I asked one of my classmates who was good at math for help. She told me some good ways to learn math. She also helped me with my homework. And whenever I wanted to give up, she encouraged me a lot. Thanks to her h

17、elp, I became interested in math and got good grades. We also became really good friends.反方：第三部分：結(jié)尾（總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)）in a word in short all in all .正方： All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true kn

18、owledge about the world. 反方： In a word, dealing problems with others is very good. Cooperation is really necessary and you can be successful more easily with other peoples help.第三部分：結(jié)尾（總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)）in a word Write your own article！ 在生活中遇到問題時(shí)，我們常常有兩種解決方式：自己獨(dú)立解決、與他人合作解決。當(dāng)你遇到生活中的問題時(shí)，怎樣解決更好呢？針對(duì)這一話題，九年級(jí)二班同學(xué)

19、們展開了辯論。 假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員，請(qǐng)圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，說出2至3條理由來說服同學(xué)們（只選擇一方觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)即可）。 要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞； 2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。Write your own article！ 第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）Everyone may have problems. So do I . When I meet problems, I often deal with them by myself. .Different people deal with their problems in different ways.

20、 As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. .第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）Everyone 第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）God helps those who helps themselves.During the process of solving problems, I can improve myself a lot and gain much progress.I should depend on myself instead of others.I ca

21、n learn a lot when I deal with problems by myself.正方反方It is good for me to learn something from others.It can help me get along well with others.Its easier for me to get out of the trouble.第一部分：觀點(diǎn)及理由（開門見山，點(diǎn)明主題）God helps第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I go

22、t poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by myself. I looked over my mistakes and found out what I didnt understand in math. Soon, I found a way of learning math by correcting mistakes and getting experience. At the end of the term, I made great p

23、rogress in math. I was so proud of myself!第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）正方第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）反方： When I entered middle school in Grade 7, I found math difficult to learn and nearly lost heart. I asked one of my classmates who was good at math for help. She told me some good ways to learn math

24、. She also helped me with my homework. And whenever I wanted to give up, she encouraged me a lot. Thanks to her help, I became interested in math and got good grades. We also became really good friends.第二部分：自己的親身經(jīng)歷（用一般過去時(shí)記敘一件過去的事）反方正方： All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems

25、by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world. 第三部分：結(jié)尾（總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)）反方： In a word, dealing problems with others is very good. Cooperation is really necessary and you can be successful more easily with other peoples help.正方：第三部分：結(jié)尾（總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)）反方：Show yourself!Show yourself!Homework 初三學(xué)生中考前的學(xué)習(xí)非常緊張，同學(xué)們之間的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)也很激烈。班會(huì)課上，班長(zhǎng)建議大家抽出一