專題6 過強(qiáng)化-寫作訓(xùn)練

1、PAGE7專題6書面表達(dá)過強(qiáng)化Writing1體裁：應(yīng)用文類型：道歉信主題：為不能赴約而道歉建議用時(shí)：25分鐘2022全國(guó)卷假定你是李華,與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店,因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.表示歉意;2.說明原因;3.另約時(shí)間。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_Writing2體裁：應(yīng)用文類型：建議信主題：給英國(guó)筆友提出學(xué)習(xí)漢語建議建議用時(shí)：25分鐘名師原創(chuàng)假如你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Jack給你發(fā)電子郵件詢問一些如何學(xué)漢語的建議。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封郵件,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.保持自信；2.進(jìn)行大量閱讀,擴(kuò)大詞匯量;3.多同他人用漢語交流。注意:

2、1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。_參考答案Writing1【寫作思路】這是一封道歉信。通常是在因自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺的情況下,向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢鈺r(shí)寫的信。道歉應(yīng)禮貌,語氣要誠(chéng)懇,要寫清楚給對(duì)方造成不便的原因,并真誠(chéng)道歉。必要時(shí)可以提出補(bǔ)救辦法。道歉信通常包括以下三個(gè)部分：1.向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢?說明道歉的原因,并對(duì)失誤或錯(cuò)誤進(jìn)行解釋；2.提出彌補(bǔ)措施,請(qǐng)求原諒?！痉段馁p讀】DearBob,ImsorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIh

3、avetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangcwillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwellhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifitsconvenientforyou,letsmeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafte

4、rschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua表達(dá)方式一：IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.表達(dá)方式二：IoweyouanapologyforthefactthatIcannotgolothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.表達(dá)方式一：ThereasonwhyweshouldsetoutearlyisthatIhopetohavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.表達(dá)方式二：Tohavemoretimetor

5、eadandselectbooks,Isuggestthatwesetoutearly.表達(dá)方式一：Iamwonderingifwecouldmeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.表達(dá)方式二：Willitbefinewithyouifwemeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate?Writing2【寫作思路】本題要求給英國(guó)筆友Jack寫一封郵件,給他提出學(xué)習(xí)漢語的一些建議。話題貼近考生的日常生活，給了考生自由發(fā)揮的空間。寫作的基本時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該為一史現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱應(yīng)以第一人稱為主。【范文賞讀】DearJack,Ivereceivedyoure-mailandI

6、mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnChinese.Firstofall,youshouldbeconfident.Aswevefound,successfullanguagelearnerssharequiteafewcharacteristics:self-confidence,curiosityandwillingnesstoexperimentwithdifferentwaysoflearning.Besides,doingalotofreadingisnecessary,andyoucanenlargeyourvocabularyatthesame

7、time.Mostimportantofall,dontmisseveryopportunitytocommunicatewithothersinChinese,anddontbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouuseit,thebetteryoullmasterit!GoodluckwithyourChinesestudy!Yours,LiHua范文要點(diǎn)齊全,層次分明,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,時(shí)態(tài)正確,用詞精準(zhǔn),語言流暢,發(fā)揮適當(dāng),出色地完成了寫作任務(wù)。值得一提的是,范文靈活地使用了較多的亮點(diǎn)詞匯和高級(jí)句式，增強(qiáng)了范文的可讀性。過渡詞：firstofall,besides,mostimportantofall等；亮點(diǎn)詞匯:givesomeadviceon,confident,experimentwith,enlarge,master等；高級(jí)句式