初中英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)課課件

Compositionwriting

寫作復(fù)習(xí)課Compositionwriting寫作復(fù)習(xí)課隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠?；相信同學(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物了，比淘寶網(wǎng)，京東商城等。

請(qǐng)以“ShoppingontheInternet”為題寫一篇80詞的短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)利與弊的看法。隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)advantages?disadvantages?Ideas(觀點(diǎn))advantages?disadvantages?Idaheadatailabodybeginningendmainbody主體Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）aheadatailabodybeginninge

1.Theworldislarge.Andmanypeoplewanttobuysomethingfromothercountries.Buttheycan’t.Howtobegin2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

1.TheworldislTopicsentence（

主題句）Atopicsentenceexpressesthemainideaofaparagraphandhelpsyouunderstand

apassage.

Atopicsentenceisusuallythefirstsentenceofaparagraph.Topicsentence（主題句）AtopicseTherearemanythingsontheInternet.

OntheInternet,peoplecanbuyfoods,clothes,booksandsoon.What’smore,manythingsarecheaperandnicer,andpeoplehavemoretimetochoose.Alsopeoplecandosomeshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhouses.Reviseatopicsentence修改主題句TherearemanythingsontheISupportingsentences(推展句)Supportingsentencessupportyourideaandgivesomedetailsaboutyouridea.Supportingsentences(推展句)S①Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.②First,shoppingonlineismoreconvenientthangoingtotheshop.③Second,thegoodsarecheaperthanthoseinthestores.④Manypeoplewhocan’tfindajobusuallychoosetorunashopon

line.

①Shoppingonlinehasmany

restateyouridea(重申觀點(diǎn))Shoppingonlinehelpsusalot,butweshoulddoitcarefully.

givesomeadvice(提出建議)Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoimprovethesafetyofshoppingonline.Howtoendrestateyouridea(重申觀點(diǎn))HowWordsandSentences

遣詞造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?A:Byusinglinkingwords

（連接詞）WordsandSentencesQ:Howtoforexample,suchas,like,forinstanceBrainstorm

what’smore,what’sworse,besides,alsohowever,but,whilebecauseof,becauseso,so…that,asaresult

inorderto,inorderthat,sothatinshort,intotal,inaword舉例遞進(jìn)轉(zhuǎn)折原因結(jié)果目的總結(jié)forexample,suchas,like,fAsweknow,shoppingontheInternethasmanyadvantages.___________,wecannotonlysavelotsoftimebutalsobuycheaperthings.__________,

wecanshopatanytime.__________,

italsohasdisadvantages.Wecanonlyseethepictures,_____wedon’tknowaboutthequality._________,

it’snotsafetopayontheNet.____________,

weshouldshopontheNetcarefullysothatitcanserveusbetter.Forexample

What’smoreHoweversoWhat’sworseInshortForexampleWhat’smoreWordsandSentences遣詞造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?B:Byusinggoodsentencepatterns句式WordsandSentences遣詞造句Q:HowE.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.It’simportant.It’simportantforus

tokeephealthy.E.g.2:It’sbeautifulmusic.Whatbeautifulmusic(itis)!

Howbeautifulthemusicis!

E.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.Goodsentencepatterns1.Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.2.notonly…butalso…3.the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)4.從句(狀語、賓語、定語從句等)Goodsentencepa1.Wecansavealotoftime.

WecanbuycheaperthingsontheNet.

WecannotonlysavealotoftimebutalsobuycheaperthingsontheNet.Wordsandsentences1.Wecansavealotoftime.

2.Ifwecanbemorecareful,we’llbesafer.Themorecarefulweare,thesaferwe’llbe.Wordsandsentences2.Ifwecanbemorecareful,3.Therearemanykindsofclothes.Theylookverybeautiful.Therearemanykindsofclotheswhich\thatlookverybeautiful.Wordsandsentences3.Therearemanykindsofclo

ideasstructurewordsandsentences

ModelDisplay范文展示1.

Whatdoyouthinkoftheideas?2.Isthereabeginning,amainbody,andanend?3.Whichwordsorsentencesdoyoulike?

ideasModelDisplaEvaluatingEvaluating1.Readthetitlecarefully（仔細(xì)讀題，弄清題意）2.Choosetherightwords,tenseandsentencepatterns

（確定時(shí)態(tài)，選用詞句）3.Writecarefullyandneatly（認(rèn)真書寫，工整清楚）4.Readagainandmakesureyoumakefewmistakes（通篇閱讀，檢查錯(cuò)誤）

Summary1.Readthetitlecarefully（仔細(xì)讀Homework:RewriteyourcompositionHomework:Compositionwriting

寫作復(fù)習(xí)課Compositionwriting寫作復(fù)習(xí)課隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠?；相信同學(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物了，比淘寶網(wǎng)，京東商城等。

請(qǐng)以“ShoppingontheInternet”為題寫一篇80詞的短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)利與弊的看法。隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)advantages?disadvantages?Ideas(觀點(diǎn))advantages?disadvantages?Idaheadatailabodybeginningendmainbody主體Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）aheadatailabodybeginninge

1.Theworldislarge.Andmanypeoplewanttobuysomethingfromothercountries.Buttheycan’t.Howtobegin2.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingontheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.

1.TheworldislTopicsentence（

主題句）Atopicsentenceexpressesthemainideaofaparagraphandhelpsyouunderstand

apassage.

Atopicsentenceisusuallythefirstsentenceofaparagraph.Topicsentence（主題句）AtopicseTherearemanythingsontheInternet.

OntheInternet,peoplecanbuyfoods,clothes,booksandsoon.What’smore,manythingsarecheaperandnicer,andpeoplehavemoretimetochoose.Alsopeoplecandosomeshoppingwithoutleavingtheirhouses.Reviseatopicsentence修改主題句TherearemanythingsontheISupportingsentences(推展句)Supportingsentencessupportyourideaandgivesomedetailsaboutyouridea.Supportingsentences(推展句)S①Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.②First,shoppingonlineismoreconvenientthangoingtotheshop.③Second,thegoodsarecheaperthanthoseinthestores.④Manypeoplewhocan’tfindajobusuallychoosetorunashopon

line.

①Shoppingonlinehasmany

restateyouridea(重申觀點(diǎn))Shoppingonlinehelpsusalot,butweshoulddoitcarefully.

givesomeadvice(提出建議)Thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoimprovethesafetyofshoppingonline.Howtoendrestateyouridea(重申觀點(diǎn))HowWordsandSentences

遣詞造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?A:Byusinglinkingwords

（連接詞）WordsandSentencesQ:Howtoforexample,suchas,like,forinstanceBrainstorm

what’smore,what’sworse,besides,alsohowever,but,whilebecauseof,becauseso,so…that,asaresult

inorderto,inorderthat,sothatinshort,intotal,inaword舉例遞進(jìn)轉(zhuǎn)折原因結(jié)果目的總結(jié)forexample,suchas,like,fAsweknow,shoppingontheInternethasmanyadvantages.___________,wecannotonlysavelotsoftimebutalsobuycheaperthings.__________,

wecanshopatanytime.__________,

italsohasdisadvantages.Wecanonlyseethepictures,_____wedon’tknowaboutthequality._________,

it’snotsafetopayontheNet.____________,

weshouldshopontheNetcarefullysothatitcanserveusbetter.Forexample

What’smoreHoweversoWhat’sworseInshortForexampleWhat’smoreWordsandSentences遣詞造句Q:Howtobeautify

wordsandsentences?B:Byusinggoodsentencepatterns句式WordsandSentences遣詞造句Q:HowE.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.It’simportant.It’simportantforus

tokeephealthy.E.g.2:It’sbeautifulmusic.Whatbeautifulmusic(itis)!

Howbeautifulthemusicis!

E.g.1:Weshouldkeephealthy.Goodsentencepatterns1.Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.2.notonly…butalso…3.the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)4.從句(狀語、賓語、定語從句等)Goodsentencepa1.Wecansavealotoftime.

WecanbuycheaperthingsontheNet.

WecannotonlysavealotoftimebutalsobuycheaperthingsontheNet.Wordsandsentences1.Wecansavealotoftime.

2.Ifwecanbemorecar