(浙江專版)2017高考英語二輪復習專題限時集訓4概要寫作訓練2

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訓練2A閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Peterlovedtoshopusedarticles.Almostamonthago，heboughtapopularwordgamethatusedlittlepiecesofwoodwithdifferentlettersonthem.Ashewaspurchasingit，thesalesgirlsaid，“Oh，look，thegameboxhasn'tevenbeenopenedyet.Thatmightbeworthsomemoney.”Peterexaminedtheboxand，sureenough，itwascompletelycoveredinfactorysealedplastic.Andhesawadateof1973onthebackofthebox.“Youshouldputthatupforauction（扌白賣）ontheInternet,andseewhathappens,”thesalesgirlsaid.“Yes,you'reright.Peoplelikesomethingrare,”Peteragreed.“Ican'timaginetherebeingverymanyunopenedboxesofthisgamestillaround40yearslater.”“Don'tforgettotellmeifyousellit,”thesalesgirlsmiled.“Noproblem,”Petersaid.Afterhegothome,Peterwentonlinetoseveralauctionwebsiteslookingforhisgame.Buthecouldn'tfindit.Thenhetypedinthenameofthewordgameandhitsearch.Thesearchresultwas543websitescontaininginformationaboutthechangesofthegame.Overtheyears,thegamehadbeenproducedusinglettersindifferentsizesandgameboardsindifferentcolors.Healsofoundsomelistsofgamefanslookingforvariousversionsofthegame.Peteremailedsomeofth,emtellingthemwhathehad.Twoweekslater,Peterwentbacktotheshop.“Hello.Doyoustillremembertheunopenedwordgame？”Thesalesgirllookedathimforasecond,thenrecognizedhimandsaid,“Oh,hi！”“I'vegotsomethingforyou,”Petersaid.“Isoldthegameandmade$1,000.Thankyouforyoursuggestion.”Hehandedherthree$100bills.“Wow！”thesalesgirlcriedout.“Thankyou.Ineverexpectedit.”【寫作指導】通讀所給文章可知，本文屬于記敘文。首先要點一應表明主人公Peter一個月前買到了一款稀有的文字游戲；要點二要交代在售貨員的建議下，Peter將此款文字游戲掛到網上拍賣；要點三講的是故事的結果：文字游戲賣了1000美元，Peter拿出300美元給售貨員作為答謝。由于本篇短文為記敘文，只需按照故事的情節(jié)發(fā)展進行寫作即可。寫作時要把握好要點，全面準確地呈現短文內容，并注意語法結構和詞匯的準確性。【參考范文】Onemonthago，Peterboughtawordgameandfounditwasmadeabout40yearsagoandhadn'tbeenopenedyet,whichmeansitwasrareandvaluable.要點1）Hefollowedthesalesgirl'ssuggestionandputitforauctionontheInternet.要點2）Thewordgamewassoldat$1，000andPetergavethesalesgirl$300inreturn.（要點3）【導學號：85602029】B（2016?寧波市鎮(zhèn)海中學質檢）閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Whydoparentshavesuchadifficulttimetocommunicateopenlyandhonestlywiththeirteens?Forthis，therearemanyreasonsbutmostofthemstemfromnotbeingabletoproperlyunderstandtheirteens.Itisadangerousgapbecauseparentswillhavetocommunicatewiththeirteensaboutawidevarietyofissuesduringthemostimportantyearsoftheirlives.Thus，parentsmustknowhowtocommunicateopenlyandhonestlywiththeirteens.Hereareafewtipstomakecommunicationeasierbetweenparentsandteenagers.Asparents，youshouldlistentowhatchildrensaidcarefullyandpaymuchattentiontoit.Makethemfeelasiftheirviewsreallymatter，whichnotonlyhelpsyourdiscussionswithyourteenbutbringsyouclosertohim.Meanwhile，trytoremembersomeofthenegativefeelingsyouexperiencedasateenagerandapplyittoyourteen'ssituation.Nevermakenegativeremarkstoyourteenaboutwhatshehassaidordone.Rememberhowmuchcourageitwouldhavetakenforyourteentocomeandtalktoyouabouthispersonalissues.Solistenrespectfully.Ifyourteenisunusuallyangry，itmaybetimetospendabitofqualitytimewithyourteentodeterminewhatiswrongandwhereitiscomingfrom.Itis，therefore，necessaryforparentstostrivetokeeplinesofcommunicationopenatalltimeswiththeirteens.Trytorememberwhatitwasliketobeateenagerandhowvulnerable^脆弱的）youfelt.Thenyouwillbewellonyourwaytohelpingyourteencommunicatemoreopenlyandhonestly.【寫作指導】本文首先提出問題：很多家長不會和孩子公開、誠實地溝通。接著就該問題提出幾點建議：認真傾聽孩子的心聲；學會聯系自己兒時的經歷和孩子換位思考；學會尊重地傾聽。最后總結：學會傾聽，和孩子好好交流。【參考范文】Therearevariousreasonsforadifficultcommunicationbetweenparentsandtheirteens.要點l）HerearesometipsTrynottotalkdowntoyourteens.Imaginewhatitwouldbeliketobeateen.Listenrespectfullytoyourteens.Don'tignoreyourteens'feelings.（要點2）Aslongasyoukeeplinesofcommunicationopenandrememberwhatitwasliketobeateenager，youwillbewellonthewaytocommunicatingwithyourteens.（要點3）C閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Duringallkindsofholidays，millionsofpeoplewillbuygiftsforlovedones.Whichisgreat—exceptthattonsofthosepeoplewillmakethesameglaringmistake，andbuythewronggift.What'sgoingon?Giftbuyinghasbecomeadeceivinglyselfishpursuit.Wedon'tactuallylookforthingspeoplewanttoreceive.Instead，andtomanyofourgifts'detriments，wetendtolookforthingsthatwewanttogive.It'sasubtle，butprettysignificantproblem.Researchhasshownthatgiverstendtovaluethegiftstheybuyconsiderablymorethanrecipients.Giftsarevaluedroughly10to33percentlessbyrecipientsthanwhatgiverspaidforthem，JoelWaldfogelnotedinScroogenomics：WhyYouShouldn'tBuyPresentsfortheHolidays，his2009bookongiftgiving.Thediscrepancyseemstocomefromasimplemisplacedbeliefthatthoughtfulpresentsarethebestpresents.Theyarenot.Infac，ttheymightjustbetheworstpresents.Themorethoughtyouputintoapresen，tthemorelikelyyouaretostrayfrombuyingwhatthepersonyou'rebuyingthepresentforactuallywants.Inotherwords，peoplelettheirgiftgivingegosgetinthewayofgreatpresents.Especiallywhentherecipientissomeonetheywanttoshowtheyknowreallywell.Fortunately，theanswertoourcollectiveinsistenceonguessingwhatpeoplewantissimple：stopit.Ifthat'stoocallous，orimpersonal，there'sanotherhelpfulruleofthumb.Insteadofbuyingrestrictivegifts，likegiftcardsforspecificstores，buygiftsthatallowforflexibility，likegiftcardsthatcanbeusedmorebroadly（or，betteryet，cash）．Peopletendtoprefergiftcardstoactualgifts，andcashtoboth，Steffelexplained.Steffel'slatestresearch，whichfocusesongiftcardgiving，pointstoexactlythispoint—thatversatilityisthekeytobettergiftgiving.【寫作指導】通讀全文可知，本文是一篇議論文，按照提出問題、分析問題、解決問題的順序來組織文章。文章第一段提出問題：許多人會買錯禮物；第二至四段分析問題：購買禮物者往往只會考慮自己的感受而忽視接受禮物的人的感受，考慮得越多則越容易買錯禮物；最后一段提出解決問題的方法：禮物的靈活性和多用途性是解決問題的關鍵。寫作時，學生應當全面呈現這些要點，確保不遺漏?！緟⒖挤段摹緼lthoughmanypeoplewillbuygiftsduringholiday，ssomeofthemmaybuythewronggifts.（要點1）Theybuywhattheywanttogive,insteadofwhattherecipientsrequires；（要點2）theytendtovaluethegiftstheybuyconsiderablymorethanrecipientsdo.（要點3）Thethoughtfulpresentsmightbetheworstpresents,andweshouldstopit.要點4）Insteadofbuyingrestrictivegiftswearesupposedtobuyflexibleones—versatilityisthekeytobettergiftgiving.（要點5）【導學號：85602030】D閱讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Isthereawaytoturnbacktheclockonyourage?Anewstudysaysyes.Exercisecanmakeyouyounger.Atleastitcanloweryourfitnessag—ethatisthemeasureofhowwellyourbodyworks.AstudyofathletesintheNationalSeniorGamesfoundthattheirfitnessagewasmorethan20yearsyoungerthantheirchronologicalage.ThegamestookplaceintheMidwesternstateofMinnesota.TonyDiamondtookpartinthegames.Everymorninghewenttoalocalparkandwalkedfastforanhour.Then，theretirednavycaptainranforanhour.Twoorthreetimesaweek，hewenttoagymformuscletraining.Mr.Diamondwonthreemedalsatthe2015NationalSeniorGames.“Mycurrentageis86yearsol，dandmyfitnessageis44.IthinkIhavesuchagoodnumberbecauseIdoalotofexerciseduringmylife.IhavebeenexercisingsinceIwasalittleboy.”HelenWhiteisabasketballplayer.Shealsoteachesthesporttoseniorgroups.Andsheplayspickleball.Shewonaslivermedalinpickleballatthe2013NationalSeniorGames.“I'm62yearsoldandmyfitnessresultsshowedthatIwas32years.”MsWhiteandMr.Diamondaresomeofthe5，000SeniorGamesparticipantswhotookpartinthefitnessagestudy.PamelaPeekewasanassistantprofessorofmedicineattheUniversityofMaryland.SheworkedonthestudywithUlrikWisloffattheNorwegianUniversityofScienceandTechnology.Mr.Wisloffdevelopedafitnesscalcu