初三英語(yǔ)(人教版)《期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4 寫作能力的提升》【教案匹配版】 課件

期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4-寫作能力的提升年級(jí)：九年級(jí)學(xué)科：英語(yǔ)（人教版）主講人：學(xué)校：期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4-寫作能力的提升年級(jí)：九年級(jí)1學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)本課結(jié)束時(shí)，你將能夠:1.正確審題理清寫作思路；2.運(yùn)用豐富的詞匯和句型豐富書面表達(dá)。學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)本課結(jié)束時(shí)，你將能夠:2書面表達(dá)題型中考書面表達(dá)是一種應(yīng)試作文，要求學(xué)生在給定時(shí)間內(nèi)根據(jù)提示或所給要點(diǎn)寫出要點(diǎn)齊全、表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、行文連貫的文章。不僅要求學(xué)生熟練掌握詞匯、句型語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，而且還應(yīng)具備一定的審題能力、想象能力與表達(dá)能力。書面表達(dá)題型中考書面表達(dá)是一種應(yīng)試作文，要求學(xué)生3書面表達(dá)的寫作步驟審題選材列提綱寫全文檢查修改審清主題,人稱時(shí)態(tài),要點(diǎn)信息。服務(wù)主題,去粗取精,詳略得當(dāng)。

緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。一鼓作氣,內(nèi)容完整,要點(diǎn)齊全。主旨突出，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。書面表達(dá)的寫作步驟審題選材列提綱寫全文檢查修改審清主題,人4書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐(2020北京題目2)“不積跬步,無(wú)以至千里?！狈e累,有助于我們達(dá)成目標(biāo),實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“積累”為主題的征文活動(dòng),假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勀阍诜e累知識(shí)方面做過(guò)什么,有什么收獲。提示詞語(yǔ)：accumulate(積累),read,keep,makeprogress提示問(wèn)題：Whatdidyoudotoaccumulateknowledge?Whathaveyoulearnedfromdoingso?書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐(2020北京題目2)“不積跬步,5審題主題：積累知識(shí)人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去時(shí)為主,穿插使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或完成時(shí)。要點(diǎn)信息：做過(guò)什么,有何收獲。審題主題：積累知識(shí)6書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐Withoutaccumulati7選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。1.積累知識(shí)accumulateknowledge2.重要important,ofgreatimportance,playanimportantrole…3.有助于help,begoodfor,contributeto…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。1.積累知識(shí)8選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。4.從基礎(chǔ)做起startfromdoingbasicthings5.養(yǎng)成習(xí)慣formthehabitof,developthehabitof…6.努力tryone’sbest,makegreatefforts…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。4.從基礎(chǔ)做起9選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。7.提高書面表達(dá)能力increasewritingability,improvewritingskills…8.開闊視野broadenmyhorizons,getawiderperspectiveof…9.實(shí)現(xiàn)理想realizemydream,makemydreamcometrue…10.使人受益beneficial,

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somebody…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。7.提高書面表達(dá)能力10列提綱緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)明積累知識(shí)的重要性2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊4.有何感想：受益、有收獲列提綱緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。11寫全文1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)名積累知識(shí)的重要性Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantrole.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Ithelpsusachieveourgoals.Itcanimproveourabilities.Itcanbroadenourhorizons.寫全文1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)名積累知識(shí)的重要性12寫全文2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)Itrymybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Imakegreateffortstoaccumulateknowledge.Ilistentotheteacherandtakenotescarefully.IdevelopthehabitofpracticingwhatIhavelearnt.Istartfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.IreadalotofEnglishmagazines.IlistentoEnglishradioeveryday.寫全文2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)13寫全文3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊Readingbroadensourhorizons.Practiceimprovesourabilities.ListeningtoEnglishradiohelpsuslearnEnglishwell.Accumulatingknowledgehelpsusunderstandtheworldbetter.Accumulatingknowledgeisausefulwaytorealizeourdreams.寫全文3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊14寫全文4.有何感想：受益、有收獲Accumulatingisbeneficialtous.Accumulatingbenefitsusgreatly.Ithinkit’snecessarytoaccumulateknowledgeeveryday.Igainalotbyaccumulatingknowledgedaybyday.Ibecomemoreself-confidentasIaccumulateknowledge.寫全文4.有何感想：受益、有收獲15第一版Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadensmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitsmealot.第一版Withoutaccumulating,weca16書面表達(dá)中的常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題1.中心不切題2.結(jié)構(gòu)不合理3.主次不分明4.語(yǔ)言不準(zhǔn)確5.銜接不順暢6.無(wú)好詞好句注重語(yǔ)言積累,提高應(yīng)用能力。書面表達(dá)中的常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題1.中心不切題注重語(yǔ)言積累,提高應(yīng)用17檢查修改語(yǔ)法正確,用詞得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言地道,表達(dá)豐富。1.檢查語(yǔ)法是否準(zhǔn)確；2.使用高級(jí)詞匯和高效句型等；3.添加必要的相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)信息；4.梳理邏輯；5.添加主題句。檢查修改語(yǔ)法正確,用詞得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言地道,表達(dá)豐富。18檢查語(yǔ)法Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeareofgreatimportance.Ithelpusrealizeourdreams.Itriedourbesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadandwrite.主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為is。主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為helps或helped。代詞混淆。應(yīng)改為my。動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為動(dòng)名詞reading和writing。檢查語(yǔ)法Withoutaccumulating,wec19檢查語(yǔ)法Readingbroadensmyhorizon.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhavelearnt.Whichincreasedmywritingability.Ibenefitedaccumulatingknowledgealot.結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。Horizon表示“眼界”時(shí)為horizons。時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為hadlearnt。連接詞誤用。應(yīng)改為It。檢查語(yǔ)法Readingbroadensmyhorizo20第二版Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.第二版Withoutaccumulating,weca21簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句句型結(jié)構(gòu)句子類型定主謂同位補(bǔ)狀賓插入主從賓從表從同從定從狀從倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句句型結(jié)構(gòu)句子類型定主謂同位補(bǔ)狀賓插入主從賓22升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinhelpingusrealizeourdreams.替換高級(jí)詞匯或結(jié)構(gòu)升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Withoutaccumulat23升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Inordertoaccumulateknowledge,Itriedmybesttodevelophabitsofreadingandwriting.增減細(xì)節(jié),提高表達(dá)效率升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Itriedmybestt24調(diào)整邏輯Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.ImadegreateffortstowritedownandpracticewhatIhadlearnt,whichbenefitedmealot.Readingalotbroadenedmyhorizons,whilepracticingwritingimprovedmywritingability.

調(diào)整語(yǔ)序或使用連接詞突出邏輯關(guān)系調(diào)整邏輯Readingbroadenedmyh25第三版

Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinhelpingusrealizeourdreams.Inordertoaccumulateknowledge,Itriedmybesttodevelophabitsofreadingandwriting.ImadegreateffortstowritedownandpracticewhatIhadlearnt,whichbenefitedmealot.Readingalotbroadenedmyhorizons,whilepracticingwritingimprovedmywritingability.第三版Withoutaccumulating,w26增加主題句

Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinhelpingusrealizeourdreams,whichnotonlybroadenedmyhorizons,butalsoimprovedmyabilities.增加主題句，引起下文中的做法和收獲。增加主題句Withoutaccumulating,27增加主題句Inordertoaccumulateknowledge,Itriedmybesttodevelophabitsofreadingandwriting.ImadegreateffortstowritedownandpracticewhatIhadlearnt,whichbenefitedmealot.Readingalotbroadenedmyhorizons,whilepracticingwritingimprovedmywritingability.

Ibecamemoreself-confidentasIaccumulatedknowledge.增加主題句，首尾呼應(yīng)突出主題。增加主題句Inordertoaccumulat28結(jié)合本節(jié)課所學(xué),完成下面的書面表達(dá)題目。自律,即自我約束,是自我提升的一種途徑,有助于我們成長(zhǎng),促使我們不斷前行。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識(shí),你做過(guò)什么,以及這樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。提示詞語(yǔ)：self-disciplined(自律的),

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improve提示問(wèn)題：Whatdidyoudotobeself-disciplined?Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromdoingso?Homework結(jié)合本節(jié)課所學(xué),完成下面的書面表達(dá)題目。Homework29初三英語(yǔ)(人教版)《期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4寫作能力的提升》【教案匹配版】課件30期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4-寫作能力的提升年級(jí)：九年級(jí)學(xué)科：英語(yǔ)（人教版）主講人：學(xué)校：期末復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)4-寫作能力的提升年級(jí)：九年級(jí)31學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)本課結(jié)束時(shí)，你將能夠:1.正確審題理清寫作思路；2.運(yùn)用豐富的詞匯和句型豐富書面表達(dá)。學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)本課結(jié)束時(shí)，你將能夠:32書面表達(dá)題型中考書面表達(dá)是一種應(yīng)試作文，要求學(xué)生在給定時(shí)間內(nèi)根據(jù)提示或所給要點(diǎn)寫出要點(diǎn)齊全、表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、行文連貫的文章。不僅要求學(xué)生熟練掌握詞匯、句型語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，而且還應(yīng)具備一定的審題能力、想象能力與表達(dá)能力。書面表達(dá)題型中考書面表達(dá)是一種應(yīng)試作文，要求學(xué)生33書面表達(dá)的寫作步驟審題選材列提綱寫全文檢查修改審清主題,人稱時(shí)態(tài),要點(diǎn)信息。服務(wù)主題,去粗取精,詳略得當(dāng)。

緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。一鼓作氣,內(nèi)容完整,要點(diǎn)齊全。主旨突出，內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。書面表達(dá)的寫作步驟審題選材列提綱寫全文檢查修改審清主題,人34書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐(2020北京題目2)“不積跬步,無(wú)以至千里。”積累,有助于我們達(dá)成目標(biāo),實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“積累”為主題的征文活動(dòng),假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勀阍诜e累知識(shí)方面做過(guò)什么,有什么收獲。提示詞語(yǔ)：accumulate(積累),read,keep,makeprogress提示問(wèn)題：Whatdidyoudotoaccumulateknowledge?Whathaveyoulearnedfromdoingso?書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐(2020北京題目2)“不積跬步,35審題主題：積累知識(shí)人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去時(shí)為主,穿插使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或完成時(shí)。要點(diǎn)信息：做過(guò)什么,有何收獲。審題主題：積累知識(shí)36書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.書面表達(dá)寫作實(shí)踐Withoutaccumulati37選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。1.積累知識(shí)accumulateknowledge2.重要important,ofgreatimportance,playanimportantrole…3.有助于help,begoodfor,contributeto…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。1.積累知識(shí)38選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。4.從基礎(chǔ)做起startfromdoingbasicthings5.養(yǎng)成習(xí)慣formthehabitof,developthehabitof…6.努力tryone’sbest,makegreatefforts…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。4.從基礎(chǔ)做起39選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。7.提高書面表達(dá)能力increasewritingability,improvewritingskills…8.開闊視野broadenmyhorizons,getawiderperspectiveof…9.實(shí)現(xiàn)理想realizemydream,makemydreamcometrue…10.使人受益beneficial,

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somebody…選材本主題相關(guān)的詞匯和句型。7.提高書面表達(dá)能力40列提綱緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)明積累知識(shí)的重要性2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊4.有何感想：受益、有收獲列提綱緊扣主題,結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,銜接順暢。41寫全文1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)名積累知識(shí)的重要性Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantrole.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Ithelpsusachieveourgoals.Itcanimproveourabilities.Itcanbroadenourhorizons.寫全文1.承接首句，進(jìn)一步點(diǎn)名積累知識(shí)的重要性42寫全文2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)Itrymybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Imakegreateffortstoaccumulateknowledge.Ilistentotheteacherandtakenotescarefully.IdevelopthehabitofpracticingwhatIhavelearnt.Istartfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.IreadalotofEnglishmagazines.IlistentoEnglishradioeveryday.寫全文2.做了什么：通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)、讀書、實(shí)踐等積累知識(shí)43寫全文3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊Readingbroadensourhorizons.Practiceimprovesourabilities.ListeningtoEnglishradiohelpsuslearnEnglishwell.Accumulatingknowledgehelpsusunderstandtheworldbetter.Accumulatingknowledgeisausefulwaytorealizeourdreams.寫全文3.收獲如何：知識(shí)增加、能力提高、眼界開闊44寫全文4.有何感想：受益、有收獲Accumulatingisbeneficialtous.Accumulatingbenefitsusgreatly.Ithinkit’snecessarytoaccumulateknowledgeeveryday.Igainalotbyaccumulatingknowledgedaybyday.Ibecomemoreself-confidentasIaccumulateknowledge.寫全文4.有何感想：受益、有收獲45第一版Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadensmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitsmealot.第一版Withoutaccumulating,weca46書面表達(dá)中的常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題1.中心不切題2.結(jié)構(gòu)不合理3.主次不分明4.語(yǔ)言不準(zhǔn)確5.銜接不順暢6.無(wú)好詞好句注重語(yǔ)言積累,提高應(yīng)用能力。書面表達(dá)中的常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題1.中心不切題注重語(yǔ)言積累,提高應(yīng)用47檢查修改語(yǔ)法正確,用詞得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言地道,表達(dá)豐富。1.檢查語(yǔ)法是否準(zhǔn)確；2.使用高級(jí)詞匯和高效句型等；3.添加必要的相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)信息；4.梳理邏輯；5.添加主題句。檢查修改語(yǔ)法正確,用詞得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言地道,表達(dá)豐富。48檢查語(yǔ)法Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeareofgreatimportance.Ithelpusrealizeourdreams.Itriedourbesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadandwrite.主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為is。主謂不一致。應(yīng)改為helps或helped。代詞混淆。應(yīng)改為my。動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為動(dòng)名詞reading和writing。檢查語(yǔ)法Withoutaccumulating,wec49檢查語(yǔ)法Readingbroadensmyhorizon.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhavelearnt.Whichincreasedmywritingability.Ibenefitedaccumulatingknowledgealot.結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。Horizon表示“眼界”時(shí)為horizons。時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。應(yīng)改為hadlearnt。連接詞誤用。應(yīng)改為It。檢查語(yǔ)法Readingbroadensmyhorizo50第二版Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.第二版Withoutaccumulating,weca51簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句句型結(jié)構(gòu)句子類型定主謂同位補(bǔ)狀賓插入主從賓從表從同從定從狀從倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句句型結(jié)構(gòu)句子類型定主謂同位補(bǔ)狀賓插入主從賓52升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Withoutaccumulating,wecanhardlyachieveanything.Accumulatingknowledgeisofgreatimportance.Ithelpsusrealizeourdreams.Accumulatingknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinhelpingusrealizeourdreams.替換高級(jí)詞匯或結(jié)構(gòu)升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Withoutaccumulat53升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Itriedmybesttoaccumulateknowledge.Istartedfromdoingbasicthings,suchasreadingandwriting.Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Inordertoaccumulateknowledge,Itriedmybesttodevelophabitsofreadingandwriting.增減細(xì)節(jié),提高表達(dá)效率升級(jí)表達(dá)和增減細(xì)節(jié)Itriedmybestt54調(diào)整邏輯Readingbroadenedmyhorizons.IdevelopedthehabitofwritingdownandpracticingwhatIhadlearnt.Itincreasedmywritingability.Accumulatingknowledgebenefitedmealot.ImadegreateffortstowritedownandpracticewhatIhadlearnt,whichbenefitedmealot.Readingalotbroadenedmyhorizons,whilepracticingwritingimprovedmywritingability.

調(diào)整語(yǔ)序或使用連接詞突出邏輯關(guān)系調(diào)整邏輯Readingbroaden